1、四級寫作造句應避免的七大問題 HYPERLINK 大家學習網 HYPERLINK 詞性不分詞性不分是英語造句中的忌諱。英語注重形態，詞性和用法是相對應的，例如名詞是絕對不可以充當謂語的，而充當謂語的絕對不允許由形容詞單獨承擔。所以如果詞性錯了就意味著其用法也可能出錯，這樣的句子一定對文章的準確表達有所影響。造句過程中我們要特別注意以下幾點：第一，動詞要分清及物與否，不及物動詞不直接跟賓語，不用于被動語態。第二，分清楚形容詞和動詞，形容詞不能做謂語，動詞的謂語形式不能做表語。第三，動詞的謂語形式 (有時、體、態、氣的形態表示) 和動詞的非謂語形式 (動名詞、不定式、分詞) 要區別開來。第四，要分

2、清現在分詞和過去分詞的使用場合。第五，意義相同但詞性不同的詞要特別注意。第六，拼寫相同但意義不同、詞性不同的詞也要特別注意。鞏固練習：改正句子。1. China has occurred the great changes in recent years.2. He very excellent in many aspects.3. I can sure that you will see a better film.4. In this chaotic society, we are more likely to become depress.5. Human being is a kind

3、 of animal fulling of different feelings.6. Nowadays it is surprised that many students care their appearance and clothes but rare pay great attention to their study.7. If you are easily to get frustrated, you will give up.8. Since you have been keeping a good mood, your teachers would be more like

4、you.解析：1. occur是不及物動詞，它的主語應該是事物或結果，原句應改寫為:Great changes have occurred in recent years in China.2. excellent是形容詞，不能充當謂語，它應該與be動詞搭配，構成系表結構，原句可以改寫為：He is very excellent in many aspects.3. sure是形容詞，應該和be動詞搭配，構成系表結構，原句可以改為：I am sure that you will see a better film.4. depress是動詞，不能與become等連系動詞搭配構成系表結構，原句可

5、以改為：In this chaotic society, we are more likely to become depressed.5. full是形容詞，不能構成分詞形式，原句可以改為：Human being is a kind of animal full of different feelings.6. surprised為過去分詞演變的形容詞，不能修飾物，只能修飾人，原句可以改為：Nowadays it is surprising that many students care their appearance and clothes but rarely pay great at

6、tention to their study.7. easily是副詞，一般不能與系動詞連用，應該用形容詞與系動詞搭配，構成系表結構，原句可以改為：If you are easy to get frustrated, you will give up.8. like既是動詞又是介詞，但是含義不同，like (v.喜歡) 不能與be動詞搭配，more作為副詞，修飾動詞的位置最好放在動詞后面，原句可以改為：Since you have been keeping a good mood, your teachers would like you better.人稱不一致人稱一致不僅指在一句話中主語應

7、該保持一致，而且在一篇文章中，前后的稱謂也應當保持一致，不能出現混亂的情況。 鞏固練習：改正句子。 1. They have the right of discussing with her husband.2. One serious problem that influence a childs healthy development is that they do not have enough psychological space.3. Admittedly, there are merit to both arguments. But I do believe that game

8、do good to children.4. I often buy clothes on sale because we can save a lot of money that way.5. Students often focus on vocabulary, but you need to realize that vocabulary is only one part of a language.6. The committee debated whether to allow its families to attend the dinner.7. The question tha

9、t interest us is how we should protect environment from being polluted further.8. In other words, ones actions are decided by their mood indirectly.9. If people have a good mood, he will face everything happened calmly. 正確句子：1. They have the right of discussing with their husbands.2. One serious pro

10、blem that influences a childs healthy development is that they do not have enough psychological space.3. Admittedly, there are merits to both arguments. But I do believe that game do good to children.4. I often buy clothes on sale because I can save a lot of money that way.5. Students often focus on

11、 vocabulary, but they need to realize that vocabulary is only one part of a language.6. The committee debated whether to allow their families to attend the dinner.7. The question that interests us is how we should protect environment from being polluted further.8. In other words, ones actions are de

12、cided by his mood indirectly.9. If people have a good mood, they will face everything happened calmly.主謂不一致在四、六級寫作中，考生經常出現主謂不一致問題。所謂主謂一致指的是英語句子的主語和謂語在人稱和數上應保持一致。它可分為三種情況: (1)語法一致，即主語為單數形式，謂語動詞也采取單數形式；主語為復數形式，謂語動詞亦采用復數形式。 (2)意念一致，即從意義著眼處理主謂一致問題。有時，主語形式為單數，但意義為復數，謂語動詞依據意義而定，也采取復數形式。 (3)比鄰一致，即就近原則也就是說謂

13、語動詞的人稱和數往往應與其最近的主語保持一致。 鞏固練習：改正句子。 1.Some women are not secretary in the office, instead, they become manager of the company.2. Misconceptions about apes has turned a relatively peaceful animal into a terrifying monster.3. The rising cost of necessities like food and shelter force many elderly peopl

14、e to live in poverty.4. In the distance are a billow of black smoke.5. Heres the books you want.6. Neither the union leaders nor the negotiator want the strike to continue.7. In eighteenth-century France, makeup and high heels was worn by men.8. Each of the childs thirty-four stuffed animals have a

15、name and an entire life history. 解析：1. Some women are not secretaries in the office; instead, they become managers of the company.2. Misconceptions about the ape have turned a relatively peaceful animal into a terrifying monster.3. The rising cost of necessities like food and shelter forces many eld

16、erly people to live in poverty.4. In the distance is a billow of black smoke.5. Herere the books you want.6. Neither the union leaders nor the negotiator wants the strike to continue.7. In eighteenth-century France, makeup and high heels were worn by men.8. Each of the childs thirty-four stuffed ani

17、mals has a name and an entire life history.時態不一致在造句時要注意時態也應該保持一致。 鞏固練習：改正句子。 1. The motorbike was red, and there are two persons on the motorbike.2. He told me he will be a good tennis player the next year when we met on a train.3. If I failed to achieve my desire, I will think it comes from a fate

18、beyond my power.4. However, if the goals are obtained, my endless efforts bring them to me.5. No one could deny that computers have made our life convenient and make our work efficient.6. Depending on computer, many problems can be easily solved, which is not possible 20 years ago. 解析：1. The motorbi

19、ke was red, and there were two persons on the motorbike.2. He told me he would be a good tennis player the next year when we met on a train.3. If I failed to achieve my desire, I would think it comes from a fate beyond my power.4. However, if the goals are obtained, my endless efforts will bring the

20、m to me.5. No one could deny that computers have made our life convenient and made our work efficient.6. Depending on computer, many problems can be easily solved, which was not possible 20 years ago.指代不清在使用代詞如 it, he, she, this, that, which, one 等的時候，前面的句子中應該出現明確的先行詞。如果指代不清，就會造成意思上的混亂。 鞏固練習：改正句子。 1

21、. The worlds energy demand still continues to rise. How will that ever be possible for us to get through?2. Peter told Alan that his wife was unhappy.3. Marsha attributed her success to her husbands support, which was generous.4. Susans mother wondered if she was tall enough to be a model. 解析：1. The

22、 worlds energy demand still continues to rise. How will the situation ever be possible for us to get through?2. Peter told Alan, Your wife is unhappy.3. Marsha attributed her success to her husbands generous support.4. Susans mother wondered if Susan was tall enough to be a model.斷句錯誤英語的句子要求主從句直接要由恰

23、當的銜接詞連接，并列句也要求用銜接詞或分號連接。由于漢語中沒有這些要求，句子之間可以用逗號連接，因此，在四、六級作文中，很多同學的英語句子用逗號連接兩個各自完整的句子；或將兩個句子連接，但是沒有使用標點符號或銜接詞，以致于造成病句。 鞏固練習：改正句子。 1. They read different books just to meet their different needs. Because different people have different needs to read the different kinds of books.2. Students and teacher

24、heard Liming went to hospital, all of them went to visit him. 解析：1. They read different books just to meet their different needs, because different people have different needs.2. When students and teacher heard Liming went to hospital, all of them went to visit him.成分殘缺英語的句子雖然結構多樣，但都是由基本的句子結構演化擴展而來。

25、如果句子不符合基本的句子結構要求，缺少必要成分或者將從句或短語誤當作句子，就不能表達一個完整的意思。由于英語和漢語的表達方法和習慣不同，成分殘缺是中國學生在英文寫作中容易出現的問題。 鞏固練習：改正句子。 1. Is honesty out of date? many people asked. In my opinion, the answer should be no. Because honesty is not a simple social phenomenon, but a kind of humanity which is rooted in our mind.2. And th

26、en there is no need to worry whether youll be lost in a strange place, if you have a cellphone. Especially, in some urgent situations.3. There are other functions about cellphone. For example, time-schedule.4. First, as we all know that cosmetics always contain complex chemical elements. Which many

27、people will be allergic.5. First of all, cellphone serves as a convenient way of communication. Since it allows you to chat with others on the phone whenever you like.6. First, people deal with wastes carelessly. They pay little attention to the result of the wastes. Second, the development of indus

28、tries.7. In my opinion, honesty becomes more and more important in recent society. Though the society competition becomes more and more fierce.8. We can do a lot of things to entertain ourselves in spare time. Like reading, and listening to music.9. Personally speaking, friendship is an in-depth rel

29、ationship combining trust, support, communication, understanding, empathy, and intimacy. Aspects of life that all of us crave.10. Thus, could I make a piece of advice to you that reducing the price of food? 解析：1. Is honesty out of date? many people asked. In my opinion, the answer should beno becaus

30、e honesty is not a simple social phenomenon, but a kind of humanity which is rooted in our mind.2. And then there is no need to worry whether youll be lost in a strange place, if you have a cellphone, especially, in some urgent situations.3. There are other functions about cellphone, for example, ti

31、me-schedule.4. First, we all know that cosmetics always contain complex chemical elements to which many people will be allergic.5. First of all, cellphone serves as a convenient way of communication, since it allows you to chat with others on the phone whenever you like.6. First, people deal with wa

32、stes carelessly. They pay little attention to the result of the wastes. Second, it is due to the development of industries.7. In my opinion, honesty becomes more and more important in recent society. At the same time the society competition becomes more and more fierce.8. We can do a lot of things t

33、o entertain ourselves in spare time, like reading, and listening to music.9. Personally speaking, friendship is an in-depth relationship combining trust, support, communication, understanding, empathy, and intimacy, including aspects of life that all of us crave.10. Thus, could I make a piece of adv

34、ice to you that the price of food be reduced?英語的句子雖然結構多樣，但都是由基本的句子結構演化擴展而來。如果句子不符合基本的句子結構要求，缺少必要成分或者將從句或短語誤當作句子，就不能表達一個完整的意思。由于英語和漢語的表達方法和習慣不同，成分殘缺是中國學生在英文寫作中容易出現的問題。 鞏固練習：改正句子。 11. It will please the eyes and mind of others so that produce an excellent impression.12. There is still something that n

35、ot so satisfactory.13. The wicked always panicky, while the good always faces the reality with a smile.14. Always, I dream about the childhood which including happiness and sadness.15. I drove slowly past the old brick house. The place where I grew up.16. Before I turn on the microwave oven. I have to turn off the overhead light in the kitchen. Otherwise the fuse blows.17. My mother likes watching daytime television shows. Especially old movies and soap operas.18. I wonder now why I have to learn certain subjects. Such as