1、第一頁，共27頁。課型課型:寫作課寫作課教學目標教學目標:通過這節的講授通過這節的講授,讓學生掌握如何用英讓學生掌握如何用英語介紹人物語介紹人物.重點重點:講授描寫人物的常用句型和步驟講授描寫人物的常用句型和步驟.難點難點:靈活運用所學詞匯及句型寫一篇短文靈活運用所學詞匯及句型寫一篇短文.教學方法教學方法: 順序法，歸納演繹法順序法，歸納演繹法授課時間授課時間: 星期一星期一 (1課時課時)授課教師授課教師(jiosh)：廖夏露：廖夏露授課班級授課班級:高三（高三（8）班）班第二頁，共27頁。Basic Writing-Character introduction (人物人物(rnw)介紹）介

2、紹）- 常用句子結構常用句子結構第三頁，共27頁。人物簡介的一般人物簡介的一般(ybn)步驟步驟 the right order(1)概況概況age, sex, birth-place, background(2)外貌性格外貌性格appearance ,character(3)教育教育education (4)生平生平(shngpng)big events in his or her life ( in the order of time )(5)評價評價evaluation第四頁，共27頁。【Useful words and expressions】年齡、出生年齡、出生(chshng)1）二

3、十歲的時候）二十歲的時候_2）于）于1987年年5月生在北京月生在北京 _at the age of 20be born in Beijing in May 1987第五頁，共27頁。【Useful words and expressions】2. 外貌、性格特征：外貌、性格特征：1）漂亮）漂亮(pio ling)_2）1.80米高米高_3）勤奮的）勤奮的_beautiful/pretty/handsome/good-looking1.80 meters tall/ in heightdiligent/ hardworkingambitious, competent, confident, c

4、onsiderate, creative, outspoken, devoted, energetic, humorous, independent第六頁，共27頁。3. 教育：教育：1）努力學習）努力學習_2）獲得）獲得(hud)碩士學位碩士學位_3）畢業）畢業_work hard at his studiesreceive/get a masters degreegraduate from第七頁，共27頁。4. 經歷經歷(jngl)：1）致力于）致力于_2）有）有天賦天賦_devote oneself tohave a gift/ talent for5. 評價評價(pngji)：做出了做

5、出了貢獻貢獻_ 對對的評價的評價(pngji)很高很高_make great contributions tospeak/think highly of 第八頁，共27頁。 Lets do a fast reading: Just guess the person who is described by the following sentences.第九頁，共27頁。u 1.Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in Taiwan, he was brought up by his mother and was shy and quiet during his

6、childhood. u 2. Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3. u 3. When his first album(唱片唱片(chngpin) lbm ） was released in 2000, he got the worlds attention.u 4. He becomes very popular with the young, and has received many awards for his songs. u 5. His own unique

7、 Chinese R&B style is unparalleled （無法匹敵的）（無法匹敵的） by others and he continues to make breakthroughs as he takes a chance on trying new things.第十頁，共27頁。Jay Chou(周杰倫周杰倫)第十一頁，共27頁。How to translate the sentence lets analyze the sentences in the passage.第十二頁，共27頁。 Born on the 18th of January, 1979 in

8、Taiwan, Jay Chou, a famous singer, was brought up by his mother and was shy and quiet during his childhood. 分詞分詞(fn c)結構結構 同位語同位語身份身份(shn fen)與與概況概況盡量用分詞短語、同位語結構，使文章盡量用分詞短語、同位語結構，使文章(wnzhng)簡潔，簡潔，通順通順第十三頁，共27頁。 Showing interest in music, he began learning to play the piano at the age of 3. When Jays

9、 first album(唱片(chngpin)） was released（發行） in 2000, he got the worlds attention. He becomes very popular with the young, which allowed him to received many awards for his songs. 經歷經歷(jngl)分詞分詞(fn c)結構結構狀語從句狀語從句定語從句定語從句注意盡量用非謂語動詞注意盡量用非謂語動詞, 使文章精煉使文章精煉盡量用復合句盡量用復合句,如定語從句等，潤色文章如定語從句等，潤色文章第十四頁，共27頁。 His

10、own unique His own unique（獨特的）（獨特的） Chinese Chinese R&B style is unparalleledR&B style is unparalleled（無法匹敵（無法匹敵的）的） by others and he continues to by others and he continues to make breakthroughs make breakthroughs （突破（突破(tp)(tp)）as as he takes a chancehe takes a chance（冒險）（冒險）on on tryingin

11、g new things.tryinging new things.評價評價(pngji)evaluation注意注意(zh y)運用一些動詞、形容詞等短語、詞運用一些動詞、形容詞等短語、詞組組第十五頁，共27頁。A.A.巧用同位語結構巧用同位語結構, , 使文章簡潔，通順使文章簡潔，通順1)1)鐘南山鐘南山19411941年出生年出生(chshng)(chshng)在廣州，他是中在廣州，他是中國最偉大的醫生之一。國最偉大的醫生之一。Zhong Zhong NanshaNanshan, n, , was born in Guangzhou in 1941., was born in Guang

12、zhou in 1941.2 2）為人自信樂觀的男孩劉翔）為人自信樂觀的男孩劉翔, , 出生出生(chshng)(chshng)在在19831983年的上海年的上海. .Liu Xiang, _ , was Liu Xiang, _ , was born in Shanghai in 1983.born in Shanghai in 1983.* 語法語法(yf)，句法高分，句法高分tipsone of the greatest doctors in Chinaa confident and optimistic boy第十六頁，共27頁。B.B.巧用分詞結構，使文章精煉巧用分詞結構，使文章精

13、煉eg.3eg.3歲時，對音樂表現歲時，對音樂表現(bioxin)(bioxin)出濃厚興趣，周出濃厚興趣，周杰倫開始學習彈鋼琴。杰倫開始學習彈鋼琴。Jay Chou showed great interest in music at the Jay Chou showed great interest in music at the age of 3. He began learning to play the piano.age of 3. He began learning to play the piano.1 1）獲得中山大學碩士學位后，她出國升造。）獲得中山大學碩士學位后，她出國升

14、造。_ from _ from Zhongshan University, she went abroad to Zhongshan University, she went abroad to further her study. further her study. 2 2）姚明）姚明19801980年出生于上海，是世界著名籃球運動員。年出生于上海，是世界著名籃球運動員。Yao Ming, _, is a world Yao Ming, _, is a world famous basketball player. (famous basketball player. (定語定語) )Ha

15、ving received a masters degreeborn in Shanghai in 1980Showing great interest in music, Jay Chou began learning to play the piano at the age of 3.第十七頁，共27頁。C 巧用巧用with結構，作定語結構，作定語(dngy)/狀語狀語 with + n.1)歷史老師是個漂亮女人，長著兩只大眼睛歷史老師是個漂亮女人，長著兩只大眼睛(yn jing)，留長發，留長發.My history teacher is a beautiful woman _ . 2)

16、他高鼻子，大嘴巴，看起來像個外國人。他高鼻子，大嘴巴，看起來像個外國人。_, he looks like a foreigner.3) 他帶了一個大包，上車很困難。他帶了一個大包，上車很困難。He had difficulty getting on the bus _. with +O +Oc (非謂語非謂語/介短介短)1）他看到一個抱著嬰兒的女人站在那里。）他看到一個抱著嬰兒的女人站在那里。He saw a woman _ standing there.2）他雙手反綁，被帶了進來。）他雙手反綁，被帶了進來。He was brought in, _.With a big nose and a

17、big mouthwith two big eyes and long hairwith a baby in her armswith his hands tied behindwith a big bag第十八頁，共27頁。D D 恰當使用定語從句、狀語從句等復合句，潤色文恰當使用定語從句、狀語從句等復合句，潤色文章章(wnzhng)(wnzhng)1 1）葉詩文獲得兩枚奧運金牌，這使她聞名于世界。）葉詩文獲得兩枚奧運金牌，這使她聞名于世界。Ye Shiwen won two gold medals in London Ye Shiwen won two gold medals in Lon

18、don Olympic Games , _.Olympic Games , _.2) 20022) 2002年，他去了上海，在那里他賺了一大筆錢。年，他去了上海，在那里他賺了一大筆錢。In 2002, he went to Shanghai, In 2002, he went to Shanghai, _._.3 3）她決心成為一名歌手，無論遇到什么困難。）她決心成為一名歌手，無論遇到什么困難。 She decided to be a singer She decided to be a singer _she might come across. _she might come across

19、. which made her world-famouswhere he madea lot of moneyno matter what difficulty/whatever difficulty第十九頁，共27頁。 你是李華， 今年畢業要申請到國外留學，對方要求你用英語寫一篇短文介紹自己的 基本情況， 請你根據以下情況作自我介紹。只能使用5個句子表達(biod)全部內容。內容包括：牛刀小試牛刀小試(ni do xio sh): Now its your turn!第二十頁，共27頁。姓名姓名李華李華出生年月出生年月1993年年5月月出生地出生地廣東海豐廣東海豐學歷學歷2000-2006

20、 海城小學海城小學 2006-2012 彭湃中學彭湃中學所學課程所學課程語文、數學、英語、物理、化學、電腦語文、數學、英語、物理、化學、電腦特長特長英語、電腦（去年在全校電腦競賽中獲得英語、電腦（去年在全校電腦競賽中獲得第一名）第一名）業余愛好業余愛好游泳、打籃球游泳、打籃球個人個人(grn)概括概括第二十一頁，共27頁。 1. 1993年年5月，李華出生于廣東省海豐縣月，李華出生于廣東省海豐縣 2. 她于她于2000-2006年就讀于海城小學，之年就讀于海城小學，之后后2006-2012年就讀于彭湃中學。年就讀于彭湃中學。 3. 主要所學課程有語文，數學、英語、物主要所學課程有語文，數學、英

21、語、物理理(wl)、化學和電腦。、化學和電腦。 4. 李華擅長英語和電腦，而且去年在全校李華擅長英語和電腦，而且去年在全校電腦競賽中獲得第一名。電腦競賽中獲得第一名。 5. 在業余時間，喜歡打籃球和游泳。在業余時間，喜歡打籃球和游泳。第二十二頁，共27頁。 Person Person （人稱（人稱(rnchng)(rnchng)） Tense Tense （時態）（時態）Attention第二十三頁，共27頁。Your turn! Finish the composition with the help of the writing tips above.第二十四頁，共27頁。生詞生詞(shngc)大掃蕩大掃蕩 小學小學 primary school 科目科目 subject 化學化學 chemistry 物理物理(wl) physics 競賽競賽 competition 一等獎一等獎 the first prise第二十五頁，共27頁。Sample writing Born in May 1993, I am Li Hua , a student from Haifeng, Guangdong Province. I studied in Haicheng Primary School from 2000 to 2006 and aft