1、2022-3-211 2022-3-212l1. 考生應在30分鐘內，根據題目要求及寫作提綱或規定情節，圖表等寫出120字以上，語言比較規范的短文。l2. 要求“內容切題，包括提綱的全部要點，表達清楚，文字連貫。句式有變化，句子結構和用詞正確。”2022-3-213l作文滿分為15分，閱卷標準共分為五等：2分，5分，8分，11分及14分。閱卷人員根據閱卷標準，對照樣卷評分，若認為與某一分數（8分）相似，即定為該分（8分）；若認為稍優或稍劣于該分，則可以加一分，即為9分，或減一分，即為7分，但不得加或減半分。具體標準如下：l2分條理不清，思路混亂，語言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯誤，且多為嚴重錯誤

2、。l5分基本切題。表達思想不清楚，連貫性差，有較多嚴重的語言錯誤。2022-3-214l8分基本切題。有些地方表達思想不夠清楚，文字勉強連貫，語言錯誤相當多，其中有一些是嚴重錯誤。l11分切題。表達思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語言錯誤。l14分切題。表達思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好?；旧蠠o語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯，文字運用較好。2022-3-215n注：n 白卷、作文與題目毫不相干，或只有幾個孤立 的詞而無法表達思想，則給零分。n n 字數不夠應酌情扣分。如題目中給出主題句、起始句、結束句均不得計入所寫字數。n n 只寫一段者，0-4分；兩段者，0-9分（指規定三段的作文）。2022-3-2

3、16l 通過對歷年英語短文寫作考生答卷的分析，考生寫作時已具有較大的主動性和創造性。絕大多數考生都有一定的英語基礎，也已經基本上掌握了表達自己觀點和想法的詞匯和語法知識。但從整體得分來看，多數考生短文寫作成績卻不盡人意。分數主要集中在5-9分。2022-3-217l考生普遍存在著普遍的問題是思維單調，例證堆切，簡單羅例數據，片面描繪畫面，缺乏主題提升等方面的通病。究其原因，一方面存在著教學過程中忽略了對學生書面表達能力的培養，學生缺乏適量的作文訓練；另一方面，還有些考生對英語短文寫作的考試要求不十分明確，靠背幾篇范文，壓幾道題，抱著碰運氣的態度，就倉促上陣。2022-3-218l1. 大小寫，

4、標點符號，拼寫錯誤;l2. 卷面不潔，字跡潦草，用鉛筆寫作；l3. 語法和結構錯誤，造成文章結構松散，脫節；l4. 代詞，連接詞或邏輯順序詞錯用，而造成文章的邏輯混亂；l5. 用中文思維加英文翻譯所造成的語句生硬，錯誤；2022-3-219l5. 文不對題，部分跑題或主題不突出所造成 的文章不切題現象。l6. 詞匯量匱乏，文章中難見高分詞匯； l7. 語法不通，復合句使用錯誤多且表達不清；l8. 句型單一、句子無變化，表達方式單調;l9. 不會正確使用常用套語，文章缺少層次感；l10. 作文普遍缺乏文采，打動人的杰作奇缺。2022-3-2110l1. 短文寫作大致分為五種類型：lA. 記敘文

5、(Narration)lB. 描寫文（Description）lC. 說明文（Exposition）lD. 論說文（Argumentation）lE. 應用文（Practical Writing）2022-3-2111l2. 命題形式（主要有三種形式） 包括命題提綱式，命題提綱式附首段起始句，命題式附各段主題句等分支。 包括情景式給定標題的論說文和情景式給定標題的記敘文等。 包括無題提綱式圖表類作文，無題提綱式漫畫或圖片類作文；命題提綱式圖表類作文和命題提綱式漫畫或圖片類作文。 2022-3-2112 l 句子構建是寫作的關鍵。字詞組合看似簡單其實奧妙無窮。不同文化、不同風格的作者肯定會寫出不

6、同的句子結構。句子有簡單句、并列句、復合句之分。僅僅簡單句可分為主謂結構、主謂賓結構、主謂賓+賓結構、主謂補結構、主謂賓補結構、主（系）動表結構等等。而復合句有不同的組合關系如條件關系、因果關系、讓步關系、對比關系、遞進關系。條件句又細分真實條件和非真實條件（虛擬）。2022-3-2113l根據句子語態，句子有主動語態和被動語態之分。根據排列順序，句子可分為正常語序句和倒裝句。l 一般說來，好的文章包含復合句、非真實條件句、被動語態、倒裝句更多，因為它們是受教育程度高低的主要衡量指標。它們的語法規則嚴格而復雜，受教育少的人是無法正確駕馭這種句子的構建。同時它們也是正式語體和書面語體的集中表現。

7、l 2022-3-2114l 外語習得者要消滅寫句子時的錯誤通常是不可能的，但是朝少犯錯誤、不犯嚴重錯誤的方向而努力奮斗，這應該是受到鼓勵和勞有所報的過程。l正確無誤的句子的標準如下：2022-3-2115l 1. 保持句子結構完整。 2. 首字母要大寫。 3. 結尾要有句號或問號或感嘆號或省略號。 4. 句子應表達一個完整的意思。 5. 句子前后要符合邏輯推理。l 6. 主語為代詞時要指代明晰。 7.句子時態要正確，主要指前后一致或符合 上下文場景。2022-3-2116l1.1.From Shanghai, he at last became a From Shanghai, he at

8、last became a high official in Beijing.high official in Beijing.llNote: This sentence is correct in Note: This sentence is correct in grammar but not effective or logical grammar but not effective or logical in meaning, because his birthplace or in meaning, because his birthplace or former worksite

9、does not ensure his former worksite does not ensure his promotion in Beijing. So this sentence promotion in Beijing. So this sentence lacks unity.lacks unity.l2022-3-2117l2. Mr. Bush said to his brother that he had done a good job.llNote:Note: The reader is not sure whom “he” should be referred to.

10、So this sentence lacks coherence.2022-3-2118l1. In the month of May people of different professions from all circles in each city hold voting meeting to elect their representatives, and these representatives will go to Beijing, the Chinese capital, in the month of October to attend a notional congre

11、ss of model workers from all corners of China.l 2022-3-2119lNote: There are too many repetitions and unnecessary words in the sentence, such as “in the month of May”, “in the month of October”, “different professions from all circles”, “voting m e e t i n g t o e l e c t ” , “ t h e i r r e p r e s

12、e n t a t i v e s , a n d t h e s e representatives”, “Beijing, the Chinese capital”, “nationalfrom all corners of China”. So this is a wordy sentence.2022-3-2120l1. What is common to all heroes is that they do not fear death, danger and hardships.l lNote: They emphasize the last meaning or thing wh

13、enever there are several additional words and phrases in the English culture. We stress the first word or phrase while there is parallelism in Chinese culture. Now that we are writing in English, we have to follow their suit.l 2022-3-2121l1. Xiao Li was born in a small village. The village was not p

14、rinted on any map. His father was a teacher in the village school. He never left the village. Later he graduated from that school and entered a junior middle school in a town. On weekdays he had to live at school. Without parents there, he learned to look after himselfbuying food and washing clothes

15、.l lNote: This is a childish composition, just as a diary from a pupil. As an adult, we are advised upon more sophisticated writing at least not that monotonic. So to be various in style is to be encouraged if a good essay tends to turn up.2022-3-2122l1）There are three reasons for this.l2）The reason

16、s for this are as follows.l3）The reason for this is obvious.l4）The reason for this is not far to seek.l5）The reason for this is that.l6）We have good reason to believe that.2022-3-2123l例如：There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life. Firstly，peoples living standard has be

17、en greatly improved. Secondly，most people are well paid， and they can afford what they need or like. Last but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.2022-3-2124l1） It has the following advantages.l2） It does us a lot of good.l3） It benefits us quite a lot.l4） It is beneficial to

18、us.l5） It is of great benefit to us.2022-3-2125l例如：l Books are like friends. They can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and widen our horizons. Therefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us.2022-3-2126l1） It has more disadvantages than advantages.l2） It does us much

19、 harm.l3） It is harmful to us. 2022-3-2127例如： However，everything divides into two. Television can also be harmful to us. It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television.2022-3-2128l1）It is important（necessary，difficult， convenient， possible）for sb. to do s

20、th.l2）We think it necessary to do sth.l3）It plays an important role in our life.2022-3-2129l例如：lComputers are now being used everywhere，whether in the government，in schools or in business. Soon， computers will be found in every home，too. We have good reason to say that computers are playing an incre

21、asingly important role in our life and we have stepped into the Computer Age.2022-3-2130l1）We should take some effective measures.l2）We should try our best to overcome（conquer）the difficulties.l3）We should do our utmost in doing sth.l4）We should solve the problems that we are confronted（faced）with.2

22、022-3-2131l例如：lThe housing problem that we are confronted with is becoming more and more serious.Therefore，we must take some effective measures to solve it.2022-3-2132l1）Some changes have taken place in the past five years.l2）A great change will certainly be produced in the worlds communications.l3）

23、The computer has brought about many changes in education.2022-3-2133l例如：Some changes have taken place in peoples diet in the past five years. The major reasons for these changes are not far to seek. Nowadays，more and more people are switching from grain to meat for protein，and from fruit and vegetab

24、le to milk for vitamins.2022-3-2134l1）We cannot ignore the fact that.l2）No one can deny the fact that.l3）There is no denying the fact that.l4）This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in.l5）However，thats not the case.2022-3-2135l例如：lWe cannot ignore the fact that industrialization brings

25、with it the problems of pollution.To solve these problems， we can start by educating the public about the hazards of pollution.The government on its part should also design stricter laws to promote a cleaner environment.2022-3-2136l1）ComparedwithA，B.l2)AandBhasseveralpointsincommon.3)ItistruethatA.,

26、butthechieffaultB(obviousdefects)are.l4)AandBdifferinseveralways.l5)TheadvantagesofAaremuchgreaterthanthoseofB.l6）IprefertoreadratherthanwatchTV.l7）Thereisastrikingcontrastbetweenthem.2022-3-2137l例如：lCompared with cars，bicycles have several advantages besides being affordable. Firstly，they do not co

27、nsume natural resources of petroleum. Secondly，they do not cause the pollution problem. Last but not least，they contribute to peoples health by giving them due physical exercise.2022-3-2138l 1)Agoodcaseinpointis.l2)Asanillustration,wemaytake.l3)Suchexamplesmightbegiveneasily.l4).isoftencitedasanexam

28、ple.2022-3-2139l1）It has increased（decreased）from.to.l2）The population in this city has now increased （decreased）to 800，000.l3）The output of July in this factory increased by 15 compared with that of January.l 2022-3-2140l例如：lWith the improvement of the living standard，the proportion of peoples inco

29、me spent on food has decreased while that spent on education has increased.l再如：lFrom the graph listed above，it can be seen that student use of computers has increased from an average of less than two hours per week in 1990 to 20 hours in 20002022-3-2141l1）People have（take，adopt，assume）different atti

30、tudes towards sth.l2）People have different opinions on this problem.l3）People take different views of（on）the question.l4）Some people believe that.Others argue that.2022-3-2142l例如：People have different attitudes towards failure. Some believe that failure leads to success.lEvery failure they experienc

31、e translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavor. However， others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers.l再如：Do “lucky numbers really bring good luck？Different people have different views on it.2022-3-2143l1）In short，it can be said th

32、at .l2）It may be briefly summed up as follows.l3）From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that .l2022-3-2144l例如：lFrom what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that examination is necessary，however， its method should be improved.2022-3-2145l1）Its well known

33、to us that .l2）As is known to us，.l3）This is a topic that is being widely talked about.l4）From the graph（table，chart）listed above，it can be seen that .l5）As a proverb says，“Where there is a will，there is a way.2022-3-2146l例如：lAs is well known to us，it is important for the students to know the world

34、outside campus.l The reason for this is obvious. Nowadays，the society is changing and developing rapidly，and the campus is no longer an “ivory tower. As college students，we must get in touch with the world outside the campus. Only in this way can we adapt ourselves to the society quickly after we gr

35、aduate.2022-3-2147l再如：lDoes it pay to be honest？This is a topic that is being widely talked about and different people have different opinions on it.2022-3-2148l1.組織素材：l要想盡快，高效地收集，羅列素材，可分兩個步驟走：l第一步，圍繞文章的主題展開風暴式思考（Brainstorming),盡可能多地 調集腦海中已有觀點和詞匯，可無序排列，但必須剔除不熟悉和不會拼寫的部分；l第二步，按素材的重要性，邏輯歸屬等標準，對素材加以篩選，歸

36、類和排列，整理，以備后用。2022-3-2149l要求：l 1. Present situation for fast food.l 2. Possible reasons for its popularity.l 3. Prospects of fast food in China.l 文章構思根據主題句將內容分為幾個要點，再給出若干細節具體說明，如圖所示：2022-3-2150l Reasons for the popularity of Fast Food RestaurantA variety of fast foodSatisfy peoples needsReasonsrelaxT

37、aste foodWashing dishesTraditional Chinese foodPizzaReasonable priceListen to musicFrench frieshamburgerDo more important thingnutritiousBenefit people a lotSave time and troublecookingconvenientdeliciousshoppingCleaning up tables2022-3-2151l l Nowadays, fast food is popular in China. Fast food rest

38、aurants have mushroomed everywhere and many working couples and school children now enjoy having their breakfast and lunch there.l 2022-3-2152l Fast food restaurants are rapidly gaining popularity in China for quite a few reasons. Firstly, there are a variety of fast food available. If you are busy

39、or tired of cooking, you may have American hamburgers, French fries, an Italian pizza or numerous traditional Chinese food cooked quickly by modern techniques for a change. The food often looks so nice and smells 2022-3-2153lSo good that you cannot help trying it yourself. Secondly, fast food satisf

40、ies peoples needs. It is convenient, nutritious and delicious; the price is also reasonable so that everybody can afford it. Finally, with fast food, you can save time and a world trouble, such as shopping, cooking, cleaning up tables and washing greasy dishes. Consequently, it benefits people a lot

41、. You may taste all kinds of food, listen to soft music, relax, and have time to do more important things.2022-3-2154l Fast food has already changed our ways of living. With the rapid development of science and technology, fast food will give us better service and possibly will become indispensable

42、to our modern life.2022-3-21551.合理布局篇章結構 引言Introduction交代背景Background )點明主題Thesis概括性介紹文章的發展，內容和作者的觀點 正文 Body主題句 Topic S .拓展句 Supporting S.總結句 Conclusion S.詳細具體地展開（敘述，論述，說明）文章的話題和作者的態度 結論Conclusion小結 Summary概括大意，重復要點，得出結論，提出建議2022-3-2156l2. 寫好引言，主體部分和結尾段落l3.遵循科學的寫作步驟lA. 審題lB. 組織素材lC. 撰寫提綱lD. 行文lE. 修改

43、與修訂l2022-3-2157l段落可以概括地定義為圍繞一個主題而展開的一組相關的句子。這組句子是密切關聯的信息組合，也是文字表達的一個基本單位。段落的中心思想通常有主題句概括，而主題句中提出的問題和論點要在段落中通過擴展句進行討論與回答。l段落常常有三部分構成：l1. 主題句（topic sentence)l2. 擴展句（supporting sentences)l3. 結尾句（concluding sentence)2022-3-2158l1. 開頭段：開頭段：概括陳述主題，提出觀點或論點，點明寫作目的。吸引讀者的興趣與好奇心。l2. 中間段：中間段：是一篇文章的正文，其作用是對文章主題進

44、行解釋和證明。l3. 結尾段：結尾段：是簡要地呼應前面段落的內容進行總結，點明主題，使文章的意思更明確，從而得出合乎邏輯的結論。2022-3-2159 general introductory remarksIntroductionnarrow controlling ideaBody Topic sentence _ supporting details ( examples, reasons or arguments) _ concluding remarksconclusion restatement of controlling ideafinal statement2022-3-21

45、60lOutline:l 1. Personal experience;l 2. Advantages over buses;l 3. Summary and my comments.2022-3-2161l I well remember the days when my mother sent me to kindergarten by bus every morning. We had to wait for hours until we finally got on board a bus. Being squeezed out of breath like satin in an o

46、vercrowded bus, we felt lucky when we saw women with children waiting helplessly at bus stops in heavy rain or bitter cold. Now we have taxi as an alternative, and people like its comfort, convenience and reasonable price.2022-3-2162l Taxi is gaining popularity for several reasons. First, traveling

47、in an air conditioned taxi cab is comfortable. Wherever you go, the driver takes care of everything; what you do is just sitting in cozy seats, enjoying yourself in all kinds of weather at any time. Besides, it can save you time and a world of trouble of driving. Second, taxi is convenient, especial

48、ly in an emergency or on special occasions. 2022-3-2163lFor example, if you are suddenly very sick deep at night with nobody to turn for help in an unfamiliar place, taxi is always available to help you to a hospital. Finally, taxi fare is affordable.Even you have a car, you have to pay the bills of

49、 gas, insurance and car maintenance. What is more, the many advantages of a taxi are recognized by more people.2022-3-2164l With the rapid improvement of living standards, taxi has become an important means of transportation in China because of its reasonable price, its availability and the comfort

50、it offers. In fact, many people depend on taxi to go to work and almost everyone has the experience of taking a taxi on special occasions. I am happy for not having buses as the only choice anymore.2022-3-2165l 英語短文寫作既然是一種語言創作，就不可能像數學有嚴格的公式可套用，但卻可以找出一定的思路來遵循。l第一段：引言句擴展句限制主題句l第二段：主題句擴展句擴展句擴展句擴展句段落小結；

51、l第三段：連接詞+全文概括總結句擴展句。l當然這只是構成短文的基本思路，其中各段擴展句的數量在不同的文章可適當增減，以達到內容清晰，主題突出的目的。2022-3-2166l (1)主題句I find academic life endlessly fascinating. (2) 擴展句 I find the class stimulating, most of the professors interesting, the reading and studying satisfying, and the student delightful. l(3)擴展句 I consider a big

52、 assignment a lively challenge. (4) 擴展句 But I like the leisure activities best of all. Every student may have his or her choice of activity: athletics, music, theater, lectures, discussions and student politics. (5) 結尾句 I believe the variety unequaled anywhere else and I may go to school for a long

53、time. 2022-3-2167l1. Science and technology constitute the primary productive force.l2. Money is a good servant but a bad master.l3. Without Internet it is difficult to image modern life.l4. Nowadays college graduates have many job options.l5. A successful interview depends on three factors: job req

54、uirements, the qualification and manners of the applicant.2022-3-2168l 首尾段的寫作方式首尾段的寫作方式 首段開篇的方式常見的有：1） 諺語法由于諺語一般已經被大家所接受，用諺語提出自己的觀點也容易被讀者所接受。lAs the saying goes, Money makes the mare go, but there are many things we cant buy with money, such as time and true love. 2022-3-2169l2） 定義法定義法是通過對文章中的關鍵詞做一些

55、簡單或正面或反面的解釋，限定其范圍，這樣比較有利于引出主題。lPractice makes perfect is an old saying. It tells us that it does not matter if we are clumsy at doing something. As long as we keep on trying and practicing, we will do a good job in the end.2022-3-2170l3） 提問法通過提問一個或一連串的問題，可以激發讀者的興趣，從而引出主題。la. Do you have many friends

56、? Are they similar to you or different from you? Which kind of friends do you prefer?lb. What is a good student? Different people may have different answers to this question.2022-3-2171l4） 概括法概括法指先總結文章內容所涉及的現狀，然后引出主題。lIn recent years, with the development of science and technology, the Internet has

57、come into more and more homes and is playing a more and more important role in our work and daily life. It has become a must to us, but at the same time, Internet has also brought with it a lot of problems.2022-3-2172l5） 故事法故事法指用簡單有趣的故事激發讀者的興趣，從而提出自己的觀點。 l6） 引語法Just as eating without liking harms th

58、e health, learning without interest harms the memory and cant be retained. From Vincis words we can see how important it is to motivate the students in language learning.2022-3-2173l7） 調查法為了得到讀者的認可，文章的開始可以引出調查數據等，借以提出主題。 l8） 假設法假設法是指通過假設提出一種選擇，交代文章要涉及的問題，從而提出文章的主題。Suppose you were offered two jobs,

59、one is highly-paid but rather demanding, the other is less demanding, but poorly-paid, which would you prefer? 9） 綜合法具體寫作時，同學們沒有必要拘泥于一種方式，可以將上述方法總和起來。 2022-3-2174 (1) With the（rapidly）growing popularity of （computers,/private cars/,our lives has been considerably changed ） in China，the quality of （2

60、）With the（rapid）growth of（our economy/ population)，many problems such as （water shortages / waste of energy/lack of professionals and chaotic management）are begging to surface2022-3-2175l（3） With the development of （science and technology/market economy），more and more/ an increasing number of people