1、Unit 11 Sad movies make me cry.Students can use this method to write a good narration fluently.學(xué)生能用這種方法流利地寫(xiě)學(xué)生能用這種方法流利地寫(xiě)出一篇好的記敘文。出一篇好的記敘文。Students can have a positive attitude to face the unhappy things in their lives.學(xué)生在面對(duì)生活中不開(kāi)心的學(xué)生在面對(duì)生活中不開(kāi)心的事情時(shí)能有一個(gè)積極樂(lè)觀的事情時(shí)能有一個(gè)積極樂(lè)觀的態(tài)度。態(tài)度。0102Positive Negativenervous

2、happy happynervous relaxedcomfortable unhappy worried awful angry uneasy saduncomfortable Pre-writingTask 1: ReviewFree talkgetting good/bad gradeswinning/losing a competitionyour first trip outside your hometownperforming something well/badlyWhat makes you happy or sad ?Task 2: BrainstormPre-writin

3、g Helen had an unhappy experience on _. Because she _ with her friend at _. On that day, They planned to meet there, but her friend _ 40 minutes. And she was so _ that she didnt want to listen to her. Finally, they went home unhappily. She felt uncomfortable and worried. At night, they sent a messag

4、e each other. So they became good friends again. From this thing, she learns that she should _ things and need to _. whenMarch, 19thgot into a fightRenmin Parkwas late for where what how why gainangrylearn to deal withunderstand othersTask 1: ListeningWhile-writingDescribe a thingwherewhathowwhengai

5、nwhyFrame(結(jié)構(gòu)結(jié)構(gòu))Monday, March 19th I had an unhappy experience on March 19th. I got into a fight with my best friend at Renmin Park. That day, we decided to go to the park in the afternoon. She was late for about 40 minutes. She explained that the traffic was very heavy. I was still so angry that I d

6、idnt want to listen to her words. At first, we went home unhappily. I felt uncomfortable and worried. After talking with my parents at night. I regretted shouting to her. I sent a message to her, she sent a message to say sorry, too. We became good friends again. From this thing, I learn that we sho

7、uld learn to deal with things, and we also need to understand others, or we will lose the most important things in our life. Look at Helens diary. Beginning BodyEnding The happy or sad thingThe happy or sad thingBeginningBeginningBodyBodyEnding Ending improvementresultprocesscausewhygainwhohowwhatwh

8、erewhenhowwherewhenwhowhatcauseprocessresulthowwhygainhowimprovementTask 2: GroupworkWhile-writingWatch a video Task 3: PracticeWhile-writingMonday, March 19th I had an unhappy experience on March 19th. I got into a fight with my best friend at Renmin Park. That day, we decided to go to the park in

9、the afternoon. She was late for about 40 minutes. She explained that the traffic was very heavy. I was still so angry that I didnt want to listen to her words. At first, we went home unhappily. I felt uncomfortable and worried. After talking with my parents at night. I regretted shouting to her. I s

10、ent a message to her, she sent it to say sorry, too. We became good friends again. From this thing, I learn that we should learn to deal with things, and we also need to understand others, or we will lose the most important things in our life. Beginning BodyEnding Task 4: SummaryFrame and content (結(jié)

11、構(gòu)與內(nèi)容結(jié)構(gòu)與內(nèi)容)Rich language(語(yǔ)言語(yǔ)言)While-writingMonday, March 19th I had an unhappy experience on March 19th. I got into a fight with my best friend at Renmin Park. That day, we decide to go to the park in the afternoon. She was late for about 40 minutes. She explained that the traffic was very heavy. I w

12、as still so angry that I didnt want to listen to her words. At first, we went home unhappily. I felt uncomfortable and worried. After talking with my parents at night. I regretted shouting to her. I sent a massage to her, she sent a message to say sorry, too. We became good friends again. From this

13、thing, I learn that we should learn to deal with things, and we also need to understand others, or we will lose the most important things in our life. Frame and content (結(jié)構(gòu)與內(nèi)容結(jié)構(gòu)與內(nèi)容)Correct grammar(語(yǔ)法語(yǔ)法)Rich language(語(yǔ)言語(yǔ)言)Handwriting(書(shū)寫(xiě)書(shū)寫(xiě))時(shí)態(tài)時(shí)態(tài)拼寫(xiě)拼寫(xiě)1234Frame andcontent(結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容)clear frame（結(jié)構(gòu)清晰）complete c

14、ontent（內(nèi)容完整）Rich language（語(yǔ)言）good adjectives(好的形容詞)good phrases（好的詞組）use clauses（使用從句）use linking words（使用連接詞）Correct grammar（語(yǔ)法）correct tense (時(shí)態(tài))spelling words（單詞拼寫(xiě)）punctuations（標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)）Good handwriting（書(shū)寫(xiě)）clean and neat (干凈整潔)Keys for your writing1. What makes you happy or sad?2. When did it happen?

15、 3. Where did it happen? 4. Whom did youwith?5. What did it happen at first?6. What did it happen next?7. What did it happen at last?8. How did it make you feel? Why?9. What will you do from now on?10. TopicTopicendingendingcontentcontenttensetenseimprovementimprovementhowhowtensetensebeginningbegin

16、ningcontentcontentwhenwhenwherewherewhowhohowhowcausecausebodybodycontentcontenttensetensewhatwhathowhowwhywhyprocessprocessresultresultTask 5: ListingWhile-writingTopicTopicendingendingcontentcontenttensetenseimprovementimprovementhowhowtensetensebeginningbeginningcontentcontentwhenwhenwherewherewh

17、owhohowhowcausecausebodybodycontentcontenttensetensewhatwhathowhowwhywhyprocessprocessresultresult the first tripwith my familyin August last yearGuangzhouwith my parents excitedmaking a plansights, food and shopping some friendspleasedbeing with parents simple past tensesimple past tenseunforgettab

18、lestaying with parents more simple present tensePlay23187654 Write a composition using your notes in 3a. 3b Content and frameContent and frame( (內(nèi)容和結(jié)構(gòu)內(nèi)容和結(jié)構(gòu)) )when:when:wherewhere:whatwhat:how:how:why:why:gain:gain:Good words, sentences,Good words, sentences, phrases, phrases, ( (好詞，好句，好詞組好詞，好句，好詞組) )Missing wo