1、2019-2020 年高考英語二輪復習短文改錯精煉（3）【由陜西省xx五校聯考改編】短文改錯。假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（A）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線（）,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1 .每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。Manager,IamanexchangestudentfromChina.Yesterday,Iwenttoyour

2、cinematoseeafilm.Thefilmwasverywell,butIdidnotenjoyitbecausethereweresomeprobleminthecinema.First,thefilmwasdelayedasthereweresomuchadvertisementsatthebeginning.Itwasratherannoyed.Second,thesoundofthefilmwastooloudthatIcouldhardlybear.TheEXITsignscouldnotbeseenclearly,whichpresentedpotentialsafetypr

3、oblems.Ifsomethingterriblyshouldhappen,itwillbedifficultforpeopletogetoutquickly.Asavisitortoyourcity,Imdisappointedwithmyexperienceinyourcinema.Iamwritingaletterinthehopethatyoucanconsiderontheseproblemsandmakesomeimprovements.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua【參考答案】短文改錯1 .blem-problems3.much-many

4、4.annoyedannoying5.tooso6.bear后加it7.terribly-terribleTheProblemwithTelevisionNowIcantwatchmuchtelevisionbutafewyears1.agoIwasusedtowatchiteverynight.Iwasoften2.alittletiredafteradaysworkandwatchTV3.demandsverylittleeffort.Unfortunate,thereare4.toomanypeopleamongmyfamily.Somewanted5.toseetheprogramme

5、whileotherspreferred6.another.Iamhappywithanyprogrammebut7.theothersspentalottimearguingandthere8.wasnowayofsettlingthematterexceptby9.sellingtheTVset.Nowsomeoneathomereadsinstead.10.答案及解析1.刪去muchoIcantwatchmuchtelevision意為我不能看許多電視“，上下文邏輯不通。much屬于多余。2.刪去was。由上文句意可知“我現在不看電視，而過去每晚都看電視”，因此應用usedtodo。3.

6、watch改為watching。作句子主語需用動名詞。4.Unfortunate改為Unfortunately。此處應用副詞作狀語。5.among改為in。“inmyfamily”為習慣搭配，意為在我家中”。6.the改為one。由下文的another可知，上文用one。7.am改為was。綜觀全文時態可知。8.alot后加of。8. will-would9. athe10.去掉consider后面的on9.此行無錯。10. someone改為everyone或everybody。someone意為某個人；everyone/everybody意為“每個人”。根據上下文邏輯可知。【由陜西省西安市

7、長安一中xx第二次模擬改編】短文改錯。假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（A）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線（）,并在該詞下面寫出修改的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。WewereassignedapositionbutIwasingoodmoodforituntilthismorning.ItisSundaytoday,soIhadagood

8、sleep.WhenIgetup,Ihadastrongdesiredosomething.SoIsetaboutdoingthetoughestthing-writingaposition.Ihadanextremequickheadandagoodideauponotherrushedintomymind.BeforelongItypedabout500words.Iskimmedthroughmyworkandwasquitesatisfying.Itshouldbeanothermodelposition.Istretchedmyself,intendtopolishitafterar

9、est,sosomethingunexpectedhadhappened:thepowerfailedsuddenly.AndIforgottosavethefile!【參考答案】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1.5分，滿分15分）WewereassignedapositionbutIwasingoodmoodforituntilthismorning.noItisSundaytoday,soIhadagoodsleep.WhenIgetup,IhadastrongdesireAgottodosomething.SoIsetaboutdoingthetoughestthing-writingap

10、osition._theIhadanextremequickheadandagoodideauponotherrushedintomymind.extremelyanotherBeforelongItypedabout500words.Iskimmedthroughmyworkandwasquitesatisfying.Itshouldbeanothermodelposition.Istretchedmyself,intendsatisfiedintendingtopolishitafterarest,sosomethingunexpectedhadhappened:thepowerfaile

11、dbutsuddenly.AndIforgottosavethefile!【由陜西省西北工業大學附屬中學xx第六次模擬改編】短文改錯。假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文，文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（），并在該句下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線（），并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計分。DearLucy,Iamveryexcitedtolearnthatyourein

12、gtoXianfortravel.Bothmyparentmissyoualot.Soisourfriend,Ruby.AprilisbesttimeoftheyeartovisitXian.Thereisonlyafewrainandtheweatherisneithertoohotortoocold.TherearesomanyplacesIwantedtotakeyoutoafterIfinishmyworklikeavolunteerinthelocalcharity.Whenyoue,youcanstaywithourselves.Myhouseisaboutthreekilomet

13、ersfarawayfromXianMoslemStreetwhereisfulloflocalfoods.Bestregards,Janet【參考答案】短文改錯DearLucy,IamveryexcitedtolearnthatyoureingtoXianfortravel.Bothmyparentmissyoualot.parentsSoisourfriend,Ruby.AprilisAbesttimeoftheyeartovisitXian.Thereisonlyafewrainanddoesthelittletheweatherisneithertoohot竺toocold.There

14、aresomanyplacesIwantedtotakeyoutoafterInorwantfinishmyworklikeavolunteerinthelocalcharity.Whenyoue,youcanstaywithoursekes.asusMyhouseisaboutthreekilometersfarawayfromXianMoslemStreetwhereisfulloflocalwhichfoods.Bestregards,Janet【由陜西省西工大附中xx第七次適應性訓練改編】短文改錯。Iamangryaboutthebehaviorofdishonestinexams.I

15、mnotsayingthatImagoodstudentandthatIvenevercheated.Ioncewritetheanswersonmyhandforahistorytestbut,unluckily,caughtbymyteacher.Becauseshewasoneofmymostfavorites,therewerenowordstodescribehowsorryIfeltatonce.IthoughtcheatwouldhelpmekeepmystraightAs.LittleIknowthatIwashurtingnotonlyherselfbutalsomyteac

16、her.FromthislessonIknowourteacherswanttheirstudentstosucceedbylearningwiththeirownanddothebesttheycan,notbycheating.短文改錯write-wrote4.caught-wascaught5.Dropmost6.cheatwould-cheatingwould7.Little-Littledid8.herself-myself9.withtheirown-ontheirown10.dothebest-doingthebest【由四川省成都七中xx三診考試改編】短文改錯。下面短文中共有1

17、0處語言錯誤，請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改。每句最多有兩處錯誤。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（A）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分。Deardiary,HereIaminthemiddleofacity,350milesfarawayfromourfarmhouse.Doyouwanttoknowwhywemovelastweek?Dadlosthisjob,andasmomexplained,hewasluckytofind

18、otherone.HisnewjobmeantIhadtosaygoodbyetomyclassmate,myschoolorjusteverythingelseintheworld.Tomakemattersbad,nowIhavetosharearoomwithmyyoungersister,Maggie.Tomorrowisfirstdayofschool.Iamawfullytiring,butIknowIllneverfallsleep.Goodnightandremember,you,mydeardiary,ismyonlysouvenirfrommypastlifeandmyon

19、lyfriend.短文改錯：far去掉；move改成moved;other改成another;classmate改成classmates;or改成and;bad改成worse;first前力口the或my;tiring改成tired;sleep改成asleep;is改成are1.dishonest-dishonesty/beingdishonest2.andthat-orthat3.2019-2020 年高考英語二輪復習短文改錯精煉（4）【由四川省資陽市xx模擬改編】短文改錯。請你改正下面短文中的錯誤。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在

20、缺詞處加一個漏字符號（A）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1 .每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2 .只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。Onceakingaskedanartisttopaintapicturebywanttoanyshadowsinpicture,justsunshine.Whenthekingsawthefinishpicture,hewasdisappointed.Withoutshadows,everythinginthepicturelookedflatorunreal.Th

21、epointofthestorywasthatweneedbothshadowsandsunshinetohaveapletelypicture,justasweneedbothrainandsuntohavealivingworld.People,too,needsbothsadnessandhappiness.Weoftenlearnimportantlessonduringsadtimes.Sowhenwefeelsad,weshouldtrytothinkaboutthatwemightlearnfromtheexperience.【參考答案】一、參考答案Onceakingaskeda

22、nartisttopaintapicturebywanttoforanyshadowsinApicture,justsunshine.Whenthekingsawthefinishpicture,hewasthefinisheddisappointed.Withoutshadows,everythinginthepicturelookedflatorunreal.The_pointoftheandstorywasthatweneedbothshadowsandsunshinetohaveapletelypicture,justaswehim.Hetoldtheartisthedidnhim.H

23、etoldtheartisthedidnispleteneedbothrainandsuntohavealivingworld.People,too,needsbothsadnessandhappiness.needWeoftenlearnimportantlessonduringsadtimes.Sowhenwefeelsad,weshouldtrytothinklessonsaboutthatwemightlearnfromtheexperience.what二、評分意見1 .未標注符號或符號標注不規范一律不給分。2 .答題位置（需修改的詞下方或需添加位置的下方）不對（如答在上方或相距甚遠

24、的位置）一律不給分。短文改錯DearPeter,Thanksverymuchoninvitingmetoyourbirthday1.partyonSunday.Idlikeverymuchebut2.hadanexaminationonMondaymorning.Itis3.averyimportantexambutIcantaffordto4.failit.Illspendallthewholeweekendreading5.andprepareforit.SoImreallysorrythatI6.wontbeabletoeinthistime.Hopeyou7.canunderstand

25、.Illtakethischancetowish8.youwonderfultimeonyourbirthday.Happy9.birthday,Peter,andmanyhappyreturnoftheday!10.Yours,LiMing答案及解析1. on改為for。動詞thank與名詞thanks通常與介詞for搭配。2. much后加to。Idliketodosomething為固定結構。3. had改為have。綜觀全文時態可知。4. but改為so。根據上下文邏輯，此處應為因果關系。5.刪去all。all與thewhole重復，只能保留一處，由于在此題型中，只有多一個單詞的可能，

26、故此處只能刪去all。6. prepare改為preparing。與上文的reading形成平行結構，以滿足spendsometimeonsth./indoingsth.這一句型的需要。7.刪去in。含有this,that,last,next等的時間狀語前不加任何介詞。8.此行無錯。9. wonderful前加a。10. return改為returns。return止匕處為名詞，manyhappyreturnsoftheday竟為“祝你健康長壽”。【由浙江省xx高考英語模擬沖刺卷改編】短文改錯。下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（

27、A）,并在該漏字符號下寫上該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該橫線下寫上修改后的詞。注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。例如：ItwasverynicetogetyourinvitationtospendAweekendwithyou.LuckilyIwasthep.m.in_Fridayevening.onLastweekourclassvotedwhattodoforourclassouting:visittheSingaporeZooorgototheNightSafari（夜間動物園）.Ourgi

28、rlswantedtogotothezoo,andsincewewereintheminority,welosetotheboys,whoallwantedtothesafari.Wegottheadmissionrateforstudents,whichwasgreatlysinceIstillhadenoughmoneytobuyabrochureabouttheparkaswellasanythingatthesouvenirshops.Thesafariwasscarybutareallyfun.Aswetooktheridethroughtheparksdarkjungle,weco

29、uldseetheeyeofmanycreatureslookedoutatus.Mostoftheanimalstheresleepwhenthereissunlightandwakedupatnight.【參考答案】短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）LastweekourclassvotedAwhattodoforourclassouting:visittheSingaporeZooorgotoontheNightSafari（夜間動物園）.Ourgirlswantedtogotothezoo,andsincewewereintheWebutminority,welosetot

30、heboys,whoallwantedtothesafari.Wegottheadmissionrateforstudents,lostampletelyfreethen,soIXtosay“yes.IllarriveinBristolataround8whichwasgreatlysinceIstillhadenoughmoneytobuyabrochureabouttheparkaswellasgreatanythingatthesouvenirshops.Thesafariwasscarybutareallyfun.Aswetooktheridethroughsomethingthepa

31、rksdarkjungle,wecouldseetheeyeofmanycreatureslookedoutatus.Mostoftheeyeslookinganimalstheresleepwhenthereissunlightandwakedupatnight.wakexx屆高考英語二輪專題復習提升精選：短文改錯短文改錯。IfirstmetLiMengatafriendbirthdaypartyoverinfiveyearsago.ThenIinvitedLiMengmyplace.WelistentomyCDstogetherandsoonbecamegoodfriends.Threey

32、earsago,LiMengsparentsinvitedItospendacoupleofwonderfulweekinQingdaowiththemduringthesummerholiday.LiMengandIlovedwalkingalongthebeautifullybeachesthere.LastyearIwasillbuthadtostayinhospitalforaweek.LiMengcameseemeeveryday.Then,herfatherhaschangedjobsandtheymovedtoanothercity.Sincethenwehaventseeeachothermuch,butwevekeptwritingtoeachother.【參考答案】1.friend=friendsin=tolisten=listenedLiMengsparentsinvitedItospend=LiMengsparentsinvitedmetospendweek=weeksbeautifully=beautifulbut=andLiMengcameseeme=LiMengcametoseemeherfatherhaschanged=herfatherchangedwehaventseeeachothermuch=wehavenseeneacho