1、2021/3/27English writing2021/3/27 五級寫作目標五級寫作目標:能根據寫作要求能根據寫作要求,收集收集,準備素材準備素材能獨立起草短文能獨立起草短文,短信等，并在教師指導下進行修改短信等，并在教師指導下進行修改能使用常見的連接詞表示順序和邏輯關系能使用常見的連接詞表示順序和邏輯關系能簡單描述人物或事件能簡單描述人物或事件能根據所給圖示或表格寫出簡單的段落或操作說明能根據所給圖示或表格寫出簡單的段落或操作說明 7-97-9年級分別完成三、四、五級目標年級分別完成三、四、五級目標2021/3/27一、一、介紹人和事件介紹人和事件 （自己、家庭、朋友、老師、個人變化、個

2、人感受等）（自己、家庭、朋友、老師、個人變化、個人感受等）二、介紹地點（旅游等）二、介紹地點（旅游等）三、校園生活（春游、校規、科目、學習困難等）三、校園生活（春游、校規、科目、學習困難等）四、課外生活（家庭生活、家務勞動、電影、個人愛好等）四、課外生活（家庭生活、家務勞動、電影、個人愛好等）五、假期安排（計劃、過去經歷等）五、假期安排（計劃、過去經歷等）六、節假日活動（志愿者活動、過去經歷）六、節假日活動（志愿者活動、過去經歷）七、環境、健康（環保、疾病、食品健康等）七、環境、健康（環保、疾病、食品健康等）八、個人觀點建議（提建議、勸告等）八、個人觀點建議（提建議、勸告等）2021/3/27

3、 Dear Dr. Know, I m pleased to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First,some of us arent interested in English. We thinkstudying English is such a boring thing. And then its sodifficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us d

4、ont have enough confidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion.And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. Whats moreWhats more, there are so many new words we havent , there are so many new words we havent meet before in the passage. I dont kno

5、w what to do.meet before in the passage. I dont know what to do.Sometimes we cant understand the main idea, Sometimes we cant understand the main idea, let alonelet alone( (更不更不用說用說) )answer the questions about them. But the most answer the questions about them. But the most difficult thing is to wr

6、ite. We often use wrong words and difficult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Pleasegive us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Please give us some useful

7、 advice. Thank you very much. Please write soon. write soon. Mary(the beginning)(the ending)the body（正文）（正文）2021/3/272021/3/27健康很重要。在學習和健康很重要。在學習和工作的壓力日趨增大的工作的壓力日趨增大的今天今天, ,會休息的人才會會休息的人才會有健康的身體。人們是有健康的身體。人們是如何度過假期的呢如何度過假期的呢? ?國國際健康組織對此作了一際健康組織對此作了一次調查次調查, ,右圖是他們此右圖是他們此次的調查結果。根據你次的調查結果。根據你所得的信息所得的信息,

8、 ,請為國際請為國際健康組織寫一篇完整的健康組織寫一篇完整的調查報告調查報告, ,并提倡大家并提倡大家進行假日休閑。進行假日休閑。審審(search)travelstay at homevisit friends or parentswork2021/3/27 如何度假如何度假 調查報告調查報告 倡議假日休閑倡議假日休閑stay at homeworkvisit friends or parentstravel列列(list)根據以下關鍵詞及圖表用根據以下關鍵詞及圖表用簡單的句子列出文章的要點。簡單的句子列出文章的要點。2021/3/27 A lot of people travel. Som

9、e people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.列列(list)2021/3/27 How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. （the beginning） A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the interne

10、t. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）加加(add) 加首尾加首尾,使結構完整。 可以采取總分總總分總結構,開頭或結尾的句子應注意簡潔、漂亮。2021/3/27 How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. According to it, a l

11、ot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.連連(connect)2021/3/27方法一方法一: :善用詞匯善用詞匯 甚至善用甚至善用高級詞匯高級詞匯2021/3/27Which is be

12、tter?A They listened to the music on the beach.B They enjoyed the music on the beach.2021/3/27Which is better? 我希望你能幫助我。我希望你能幫助我。A I wish you can help me. B Im looking forward to your help.2021/3/27Which is better? 他們很早就到了。他們很早就到了。A They arrived early.B They arrived as early as they could.2021/3/27W

13、hich is better? 最后最后, ,他的狗得救了他的狗得救了, ,他感到很驚訝。他感到很驚訝。A His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised.B To his surprise, his dog was saved at last.2021/3/27A I think learning English is interesting.B I find it really fun to learn English . A We should protect the environment.B Its our duty to prote

14、ct the environment.2021/3/27方法二方法二: :活用多種句型活用多種句型2021/3/272021/3/27方法三方法三: :妙用關聯詞妙用關聯詞2021/3/271.表示并列或遞進表示并列或遞進: and, as well as, bothand, whats more not onlybut also, neithernor2.表示選擇表示選擇: or, eitheror3.表示轉折表示轉折: but,however,althoughthough,after all,anyway4.表示因果表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,fo

15、r,as a result5.表示條件表示條件: if , unless6.表示對比表示對比: instead, notbut, while, in the same way, on the one handon the other hand7.表示解釋表示解釋: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth8.表示順序表示順序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since

16、then, from then on, finally, in the end9.表示強調表示強調: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact10.表示結論表示結論: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in short2021/3/27 _ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _. We like doing kinds of

17、sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled.ThoughAlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinallyAt last2021/3/27 How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay a

18、t home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.連連(connect)美美(beautify)2021/3/27 We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. A

19、ccording to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjo

20、y your vacation. People who relax well work well.美美(beautify)2021/3/27 According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. However, a few people have to work

21、. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makesJack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. Peoplewho relax well work well.美美(beautify) And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. Proverb（諺語）（諺語）/saying2021/3/27鍛煉對學生有好處鍛煉對學生有好處 It is good for us students to take exerciseAs the sayi

22、ng goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is good for us students to take exercise.2021/3/27集中注意力于學習集中注意力于學習We should concentrate on our studies.As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies.加諺語加諺語(Proverb/saying)可用于開頭和結尾可用于開頭和結尾,多是結尾。多是結尾。2021/3/27加入

23、英語俱樂部是學習英語的好方法加入英語俱樂部是學習英語的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.加諺語加諺語(Proverb/saying)可用于開頭和結尾可用于開頭和結尾,多是結尾。多是結尾。2021/3/27Enjoy some proverbs1.Practice makes perfect.2.Think

24、 twice before you do. 4.Do as the Romans do. 三思而后行。三思而后行。熟能生巧。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。有志者事竟成。失敗是成功之母。失敗是成功之母。6.Failure is the mother of success.2021/3/27Enjoy some proverbs 7.It is no use crying over spilt milk.8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 9.All roads lead to Rome.10.Never too old to learn. 2021/3/27

25、方法四方法四: :妙用引文和例子妙用引文和例子（多用于（多用于“the bodythe body”）2021/3/27青少年應盡我們所能保護環境拯救地球。青少年應盡我們所能保護環境拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and en

26、ergy.加例子加例子2021/3/27加例子加例子在家里在家里,我經常幫助父母親干家務活。我經常幫助父母親干家務活。I often help my parents do housework, such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on.2021/3/272021/3/27Lets Do it now ! / Dont do it again!As students, we should start from ourselves. Dont wait. Join us now!Start

27、 to join us now!Dont put it off! Become a volunteer today!How amazing! I cant wait!Save animals! Save Ourselves! Save our planet!Dont hesitate(猶豫猶豫). It will be great fun!2021/3/27書面表達寫作技巧書面表達寫作技巧列列加加連連美美2021/3/272021/3/27 First,some of us arent interested in English. We think studying English is su

28、ch a boring thing.And then its so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study. And And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. we are always afraid to join the group discussion. Whats more Whats more, there ar

29、e so many new words we , there are so many new words we havent met before in the passage. I dont know havent met before in the passage. I dont know what to do. what to do. SometimesSometimes we cant understand the we cant understand the main idea,main idea, let alonelet alone( (更不用說更不用說) )answer the

30、 questionsanswer the questions about them. about them. ButBut the most difficult thing is to the most difficult thing is to write. write. We often use wrong words and sentences. We often use wrong words and sentences. Lets go for it!1 12 23 34 46 65 52021/3/27 Dear Mary, I heard you didnt do well in

31、 English. Here is some advice for you. Yours _, I think reading English every day and listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._, you can join the English club to practice English. You know, “Practice makes perfect.” _, it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio

32、 every morning. It can improve your listening skill. _, English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you.Your turn to go for it!（試填一填）（試填一填）2021/3/27 Dear Mary, I heard you didnt do well in English. Here is some advice for you. Yours _, I think reading English every d

33、ay and listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._, you can join the English club to practice English. You know, “Practice makes perfect.” _, it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio every morning. It can improve your listening skill._, English is not difficult

34、 to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you.To begin withOf courseIn factThenThenYour turn to go for it!（check）1 12 23 32021/3/27 The Life as a Grade 9 Student How time flies! Now Im in Grade Nine. Actually I feel the life is quite different from it used to be. Now Im as busy as a bee.

35、Theres a lot of homework and exams. The only feeling I have is : The life as a Grade Nine student is very busy and challenging ! ! Theres an old saying: He who fails to plan plans to fail. I dont want to fail, so I create a plan for the following days.Since nothing is difficult if I put my heart int

36、o it, I will change my attitude towards maths and physics which I am poor at now. Ill spend the rest time efficiently. As theres no elevator to success, Ill try my best to do everything step by step! I believe that I can do it! Its your turn! （ 請分析以下的文章請分析以下的文章）2021/3/27Your turn to go for it! Good

37、words:Good sentences:Connection words:2021/3/27 隨著人口的增多隨著人口的增多, ,人類不僅需要越來越多的地方人類不僅需要越來越多的地方居住居住, ,而且需要越來越多的食物。人類把森林變而且需要越來越多的食物。人類把森林變成了耕地成了耕地; ;新的城市和道路占據了動物的棲息地新的城市和道路占據了動物的棲息地; ;許多動物遭到獵殺許多動物遭到獵殺所有這些都導致所有這些都導致了越來越多的動物瀕臨滅絕。然而動物是我們人了越來越多的動物瀕臨滅絕。然而動物是我們人類的朋友類的朋友, ,我們有責任去保護他們，而不是傷害我們有責任去保護他們，而不是傷害或獵殺它們

38、。或獵殺它們。 請根據上述內容寫一篇不少于請根據上述內容寫一篇不少于8080詞的英語短文。詞的英語短文。 要求要求: : 1.1.語言規范、意思連貫、表達完整語言規范、意思連貫、表達完整; ; 2.2.提示的內容要全部用上。提示的內容要全部用上。Its your turn! (練練筆練練筆)2021/3/27 Lets Help Our Friends With the increasing population, human needs more places to live in and more food to eat. As a result, we change the forest

39、s into farmland. I feel pity for the animals. More and more new cities and roads are built on animals habitat. A lot of animals are killed because of their tasty meat or beautiful fur. There used to be lots of animals, but now more and more animals become endangered because of our crazy and silly be

40、havior. For example, there are only 2500 manatees in the USA now. Do you want to see these gentle and shy animals disappear? Do you want our children only to see model animals in the future? Dont you think animals are our lovely friends? I know your answer is “No”. So its our duty to protect them in

41、stead of hurting or killing them. Dont put it off!Lets try our best to help our friends today!2021/3/27Your turn to go for it!Good words:Good sentences:Connection words:2021/3/27模板作文模板作文開頭公式一開頭公式一:名人名言名人名言 1. A proberb says/As an old saying goes,“ You are only young once.”2. As everyone knows/As is

42、known to us, no one can deny that 開頭公式二開頭公式二:數字統計數字統計 1. According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation. 2. A recent statistics shows that 附附2021/3/27 結尾公式一結尾公式一:結論結論1. Obviously, we can draw the conclusion that good manners ari

43、se from politeness and respect for others. 2. to sum up/ in conclusion/ in brief/ on account of this/ thus結尾公式二結尾公式二:建議建議1. Accordingly, I recommend that some measures be taken. 2. Consequently, to solve the problem, some measures should be taken. 2021/3/27寫作的寫作的“五項基本原則五項基本原則” 一、一、 長短句原則長短句原則 As a c

44、reature, I eat; as a man, I read. Although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectualneed of mind, they are in a way quite similar. 二、二、 主題句原則主題句原則 To begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主題句）. Without sufficient preparation, you can