1、高考英語求助信公開課課件How to write a letter for help?高考英語求助信公開課課件Lead-inWhat did Harry Potter say when he asked for help?高考英語求助信公開課課件Before writing: 假定你是李華。請你給筆友假定你是李華。請你給筆友Peter寫封信，告訴他你寫封信，告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會，詢問他是否可以接叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會，詢問他是否可以接機。信中需涉及如下內容：機。信中需涉及如下內容：1.航班號：航班號：CA9852.到達：到達：8月月6日上午日上午11:30 3.李明的外貌特征

2、李明的外貌特征 4.李華托李明帶了一副李華托李明帶了一副Peter想要的中國畫給他想要的中國畫給他注意：注意：1. 詞數詞數100左右；左右；2.可以適當增加細節，以使可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫行文連貫;3.開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。開頭語和結束語已為你寫好。Dear Peter,How are you doing? _Looking forward to your reply. Yours Li Hua高考英語求助信公開課課件 1.我是李華。我是李華。 2.我寫信告訴你我寫信告訴你 3.我叔叔李明將去你的城市我叔叔李明將去你的城市開會開會。 4. 你能否去你能否去接機接機? 5.航班號航

3、班號是是CA985(flight number) 6.他他8月月6日上午日上午11：30到。到。 7.李明的外貌特征李明的外貌特征 8.我已經讓叔叔帶了你想要的我已經讓叔叔帶了你想要的中國畫中國畫給你給你 。(Chinese painting)attend a meetingpick sb up at the airport高考英語求助信公開課課件 I am Li Hua.I am Li Hua. Im writing to tell you thatIm writing to tell you that My uncle Li Ming My uncle Li Ming is going t

4、o/will is going to/will go go to your city to attend a conference.to your city to attend a conference. Can you go to meet my uncle at the Can you go to meet my uncle at the airport? airport? He He will arrivewill arrive at 11:30am August 6. at 11:30am August 6. The flight number is CA985.The flight

5、number is CA985.8.I 8.I have asked have asked my uncle to bring you my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting (that/which) you the Chinese painting (that/which) you want.want.請注意時態及人稱和數的統一請注意時態及人稱和數的統一高考英語求助信公開課課件While writing Para 1：Purpose: asking for help Para 2：Body: situation Para 3：Conclusion

6、: express your hope and appreciation1.Paragraph：2. Linking words or sentences:3. Politeness:并列并列:besides, in addition, whats more轉折轉折:However, On the contrary, but順序順序:First of all, First/Second/Finally高考英語求助信公開課課件Politeness:1. Send me the book.2. Could you please send me the book? 3. I hope you can

7、 send me the book as soon as possible. 4. I would appreciate it if you could send me the book.5. You should send me the book .7. I wonder if you could send me the book.8.Would you do me a favor to send me the book?高考英語求助信公開課課件 (I am Li Hua.) Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to/w

8、ill go to your city to attend a conference. Would you do me a favor to pick up my uncle at the airport? He will arrive at 11:30am August 6 and his flight number is CA985. He is tall and he has long hair. By the way, I have asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting (that/which) you want. I wou

9、ld appreciate it if you could help me.高考英語求助信公開課課件polish the passage plex plex sentences(attributive clause, sentences(attributive clause, adverbial clause, nonfinite adverbial clause, nonfinite verb and so on)verb and so on) e.g. I have asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting (that/which)

10、you want. 2.advanced vocabulary2.advanced vocabulary e.g.: want be fond ofe.g.: want be fond of高考英語求助信公開課課件 3.invent some 3.invent some realistic and realistic and reasonablereasonable information: ask information: ask yourself some questions according yourself some questions according to the passag

11、eto the passage e.g. How to make Peter find my uncle easily?uI will send you the picture of my uncle.uMy uncle will wear a red hat that day.AttentionAttention: Its unnecessary to write too much. If you cant make it reasonable and realistic, dont write it down.高考英語求助信公開課課件Check your passage: 檢查檢查單詞拼寫

12、、時態語態、名詞單詞拼寫、時態語態、名詞單復數、標點符號單復數、標點符號等。等。 檢查檢查要點要點是否遺漏。是否遺漏。 檢查檢查句子結構句子結構是否正確。是否正確。 估計估計字數字數是否符合要求。是否符合要求。 Post-writing高考英語求助信公開課課件 How to write a good letter for help?Summary高考英語求助信公開課課件四個步驟四個步驟Step 1 Identify overall requirements and list the key points（審題審題列要點）列要點）Step 2 Form a passageStep3. Polis

13、h the passage（成文（成文潤潤色）色）Conclusion:Step4. Check the passage高考英語求助信公開課課件三段法模式三段法模式 第一段：第一段：Purpose: Asking for help 第二段：第二段：Body: Situation 第三段：第三段：Conclusion: Express your appreciation and hope高考英語求助信公開課課件常用句型：常用句型：1.寫作目的：寫作目的：Im writing to tell you that2. 求助的句型：求助的句型：I wonder if you could If it is

14、 convenient to you, would you please?Would you do me a favor to ?3.表達期待或謝意。表達期待或謝意。Looking forward to (receiving) your early reply. I would appreciate it if you could help me.高考英語求助信公開課課件 (I am Li Hua.) Im writing to tell you that my uncle Li Ming is going to/will go to your city to attend a conference. Would you do me a favor to pick up my uncle at the airport? He will arrive at 11:30am August 6 and his flight number is CA985. He is tall and he has long hair. By the way, I have asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting (that/which) yo