寫作話題《健康與安全》【話題解讀】有關健康的話題主要涉及健康問題、飲食習慣、食品安全和心理健康等方面。疫情后使得此類作文更是將保持健康作為熱點話題之一，讓中學生深刻意識到保持健康的重要性和必要性。安全問題也是當今社會的熱門問題和頭等大事。安全問題包括方方面面，如交通安全、食品安全、校園安全等。安全問題越來越受到人們的關注，自然也成為寫作的高頻話題?！久}探索】結合近5年全國各地中考真題書面表達未可知，對“健康與安全”這一話題進行考查。此話題屬于高頻話題，通常有以下命題角度：①健康/安全的重要性；②如何保證自身安全；③如何保持健康?！窘滩暮镁浞e累】角度1如何保證自身安全1.Becarefulwithfireandheatduringcooking.[冀教九(全)Unit3P40]2.Ourparentsdon'tallowustogooutatnightalone,becauseitisnotsafeforus.3.Keepawayfrombuildingswhenanearthquakehappens.4.Ourparentsrefuseustotakepartinanysportsactivitiestomakesureoursafety.角度2健康的重要性5.Exerciseishealthyforthemindandthebody.[人教八(上)Unit2P13]6.Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplerealizetheimportanceofkeepinghealthy.7.Healthisthefirstwealth.角度3如何保持健康8.Thebestwaytorelaxisthroughexercise.[人教八(上)Unit2P13]9.Idon'tlikehamburgersfordinner.Theyarenothealthy.[人教七(上)Unit6P35]10.Janehasalotofgoodhabits.Sheoftendrinksjuiceandneverstaysuplate.[人教八(上)Unit2P15]11.IthinkyoushouldseeadoctorandgetanX-ray.[人教八(下)Unit1P8]12.Teenagersneedtogetenoughsleeptokeephealthy.[魯教九(全)Unit9P68]13.Lifeliesinmovement.14.Readingistothemindwhileexercisetothebody.15.Payattentiontothetimewhenyoureadorwritesomething.Relaxeveryfortyminutes.16.Themoreyouexercise,thehealthieryouwillbe.角度4如何保護視力17.Remembertokeepyourbookaboutafootawayfromyoureyes.【加分句】角度1如何保證自身安全1.Idon'tthinksixteen-year-oldsshouldbeallowedtodrive.I'mworriedaboutyoursafety.[人教九(全)Unit7P49]①使用被動語態：beallowedtodosth.被允許做某事②使用固定搭配：beworriedabout擔憂2.Ifwepaymoreattentiontothesuggestionsabove,someaccidentscouldbeprevented.①使用從句：if引導的條件狀語從句②使用固定搭配：payattentionto注意角度2健康的重要性3.Itisveryimportantforustoeathealthily.Wemustn'teatfoodwhichisrichinsugarandfattoomuch.①使用高級句式：Itis＋adj.＋forsb.todosth.對于某人來說，做某事怎么樣②使用從句：which引導的定語從句角度3如何保持健康4.Weshouldmastersomesaferulessothatwecannotonlykeepoursafetywhenwedosports,butalsoexerciseourbody.①使用從句：sothat引導的目的狀語從句②使用高級表達：notonly...butalso...不但……而且……5.Exercisesuchasplayingsportsisfun,andyoucanspendtimewithyourfriendsandfamilyasyouplaytogether.[人教八(上)Unit2P13]①使用短語：suchas例如②使用從句：as引導的時間狀語從句③使用固定搭配：spendtimewithsb.和某人一起度過時光6.Idrinkmilkeverydaybecauseit'sgoodformyhealth.[人教八(上)Unit2P12]使用從句：because引導的原因狀語從句角度4如何保護視力7.Itishelpfultolookfarawayfromtimetotimeafterstudyingforanhourorso.使用特殊句式：Itis＋adj.＋todosth.對于某人來說，做某事怎么樣【開頭句】1．Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplehaveknownabouttheimportanceofkeepinghealthy.2．Weshoulddevelopgoodhabitsandcorrectbadonesinourlife.3．Asisknowntousall,itisveryimportanttokeephealthy.4．AsfarasIamconcerned,healthisthemostpreciousgiftthatamancaneverhave.5．Tokeepahealthylifestyle,weshouldstayawayfromjunkfood.6．Ilikedoingsports,whichmakesmehealthy,strongandfullofenergy.7．Friendscanmakeourlifecolorful,butwemustbecarefultomakefriends,especiallyonline.8．Self-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskills,especiallyforteenagers.【中間句】1．Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.2．It'snecessarytoplaydifferentkindsofsportsbecausewecankeepfitbyexercising.3．Weneedtofocusonsleepinghabitsbecausetheymayhaveabiginfluenceonourstudy.4．It'sdangeroustoswimintheriveralone,sodon'tgototheriverbyyourself.5．Remembertoturnoffthelightsbeforeleavinghome.6．Whenmakingfriendsonline,youshouldbecarefultokeepyourselfsafe.7．Besides,you'dbetternotridesidebyside,oryoumaybeindanger.8．Whetherwewalkortakeabustoschool,wemustbecarefulofthetraffic.9．Whenweareindanger,weshouldcallthepoliceoraskteachersforhelpintimesothatwecankeepourselvessafe.【結尾句】1．Inshort,healthmustcomefirst.2．Aslongasyoupayenoughattention,youcanprotectyourselfwell.3．Inaword,abalanceddietcanhelpmakeusstrongerandhealthier.4．Inshort,weshoulddevelopagoodhabitofeatinghealthyfood.【諺語習語】1．Healthisthefirstwealth.健康是人生的第一財富。2．Hewhohashealthhashope.留得青山在，不怕沒柴燒。3．Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.一天一蘋果，醫生遠離我。4．Alightheartliveslong.豁達者長壽。【寫作精講優練】健康對每個人都很重要，人們越來越關注自己的健康，比如，健康飲食和健康的生活方式。假如你是李華，你校英語社團正在開展線上論壇。本期論壇主題是“MyHealthyHabits”，請你用英文寫一篇短文，談談你有哪些健康習慣，你是如何保持健康的。提示：Whatgoodhabitsdoyouhave?Howcanyoukeephealthy?注意：短文須包括提示中的兩個要點，可適當發揮；文中不得出現真實的地名、校名和人名；詞數80個左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數）?！緦忣}指導】通過審題可知，本文是一篇話題作文，人稱采用第一人稱，時態采用一般現在時。寫作時可以采用三段式作文形式：第一段講述健康的重要性；第二段針對題干中的問題進行回復；第三段進行總結，并呼吁大家采取行動保持健康。注意在寫作的過程中采用恰當的連接詞，可以使文章層次清晰、內容連貫?！舅季S提綱】成篇賞析MyHealthyHabitsItisknowntoallthatnowadaysmoreandmorepeoplepayattentiontotheirhealth.①Soknowinghowtokeephealthyisveryimportantforus.Firstofall,it’snecessarytokeepabalanceddiet.Weshouldeatlessjunkfoodandeatmorevegetablesandfruitswhichcontainlotsofvitamins.What’smore,keepingagoodstateofmoodisalsogoodforourhealth.Weshouldalwayshaveanactiveattitudetowardslife.②Lastbutnotleast,weneedtotakeregularexerciseeveryday.Runningorwalking,simpleasitis,hasapositiveeffectonourhealth.Inaword,thereisalotwecandotokeephealthy.Let’stakeactiontobehealthier.【寫作練習】安全對于我們每個人都很重要。為進一步增強學生的安全意識，提高學生的自我保護能力，你校正在開展以“HowtoKeepSafeinOurLife”為主題的英語演講比賽，現面向同學們征稿。請根據以下提示內容，寫一份英文演講稿。內容要點：1.校園安全：不在走廊奔跑，不打架……2.交通安全：遵守交通規則，騎自行車時不聽音樂……3.食品安全：吃健康食品，不吃垃圾食品……4.其他……（至少補充一點）。注意：1.詞數80—100，已經給出的部分不計入總詞數；2.演講稿必須包括所有要點，可以適當發揮，使其連貫、通順；3.文中不得出現真實人名、校名和地名等相關信息?！痉段摹緿earteachersandstudents,Today,I’mgladtogiveaspeechabouthowtokeepsafeinourlife.Asfarasweknow,safetyisthemostimportantthinginourlife.First,whenweareatschool,wecan’truninthehallwaysandmustn’tfightwithothers.Weshouldwalkslowlyontherightsideinsteadofrushingwhenwegoupanddownthestairs.Second,onourwayhome,weshouldfollowthetrafficrules.Don’tcrossthe