寫作話題《人際溝通》【考情分析】考查角度及考查頻率?與他人交往的經歷及個人感受?人際交往中的困難及建議【素材積累】一、詞匯積累動詞communicate：交流；溝通例句：Weshouldcommunicatemorewithourparentstounderstandeachotherbetter.我們應該多和父母溝通，以便更好地相互理解。share：分享，常與想法、經歷、感受等搭配Shelikestosharehertravelexperienceswithherfriends.她喜歡和朋友們分享她的旅行經歷。cooperate：合作，與他人合作完成任務，是人際溝通的常見場景Weneedtocooperatewitheachothertofinishthisproject.我們需要相互合作來完成這個項目。名詞communication：交流；溝通；通信Goodcommunicationcansolvemanyproblems.良好的溝通可以解決許多問題。friendship：友誼Truefriendshipismorevaluablethanmoney.真正的友誼比金錢更珍貴。conflict：沖突；矛盾Conflictsareinevitableinrelationships,butweshouldlearntoresolvethem.在人際關系中沖突不可避免，但我們應該學會解決它們。empathy：同理心；共情Havingempathyhelpsusbuildbetterrelationships.有同理心有助于我們建立更好的人際關系。形容詞friendly：友好的Heisalwaysfriendlytoeveryonearoundhim.他對周圍的每個人都很友好。honest：誠實的Honestpeoplearemorelikelytobetrusted.誠實的人更容易被信任。patient：有耐心的Apatientlistenercanmakeothersfeelcomfortable.有耐心的傾聽者能讓他人感到舒適。open-minded：思想開放的Anopen-mindedpersoncancommunicatewellwithpeoplefromdifferentbackgrounds.思想開放的人能和不同背景的人很好地溝通。二、短語積累相處geton/alongwith和……有親密的關系haveacloserelationshipwith和朋友閑聊chatwithfriends和……逛街hangoutwithsb和某人吵架argue/fightwithsb真的關心我trulycareaboutme對某人友好/善良befriendly/kind/niceto總是在那里去幫助我bealwaystheretohelpme善于和……打交道begoodwithsb和……分享喜悅sharejoywith花時間和某人一起spendtimewith對……有耐心的bepatientwithsb互相尊重respecteachother伸出援手reachforyourhand觸動你的心靈touchyourheart和……不同bedifferentfrom使我表現出最好的一面bringoutthebestinme鼓勵某人做某事encouragesbtodo和某人保持聯系keepintouchwithsb擔心做某事worryaboutdoing在學習中遇到困難meetdifficultiesinstudy做某事有困難havedifficulty(in)doing在……方面有問題haveproblemswith感到孤獨和緊張feellonelyandnervous拒絕做某事refusetodo英語考試不及格failtheEnglishtest在很多壓力之下undermuchpressure談論你的感受talkaboutyourfeelings忽略我的感受ignoremyfeelings和……溝通communicatewith缺乏交流lackcommunication為了合適的溝通forpropercommunication一條建議apieceofadvice建議(某人)做某事advisesbtodo/suggestdoing需要更多私人空間needmorepersonalspace減輕壓力lowerstress更好的理解你understandyoubetter提供幫助offertohelp保持好心情keepagoodmood向……尋求幫助asksbforhelp和某人面對面談話talkwithsbfacetoface三、句子積累表達溝通的重要性Effectivecommunicationisthekeytobuildingstrongrelationships.有效的溝通是建立牢固關系的關鍵。Goodcommunicationskillscannotonlyhelpusexpressourselvesclearlybutalsoenableustounderstandothersbetter.良好的溝通技巧不僅能幫助我們清晰地表達自己，還能讓我們更好地理解他人。描述溝通困難Sometimes,misunderstandingsoccurbecauseofthelackofeffectivecommunication.有時，由于缺乏有效的溝通，會產生誤解。Ifindithardtocommunicatewithhimaswehavedifferentopinionsonalmosteverything.我發現很難和他溝通，因為我們幾乎在所有事情上都有不同的意見。解決溝通問題Whenconflictsarise,weshouldcommunicateopenlyandhonestlytofindasolution.當沖突出現時，我們應該開誠布公地溝通以找到解決方案。Toimprovecommunication,weneedtolistenactivelyandshowrespectforothers'opinions.為了改善溝通，我們需要積極傾聽并尊重他人的意見。Goodwordsarewarminwinter;badwordshurtinJune.良言一句三冬暖,惡語傷人六月寒。Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患難見真情。【寫作指導】假如你是李華，近日你的英國筆友Amy發來郵件，向你訴說她最近的困擾：自己體型微胖，想通過節食減肥，以更美的面貌進入新的學校學習。請你根據郵件內容用英語給她回封郵件，談一談你對該問題的見解。100詞左右。DearLiHua,IhavebeenabitlargerthanothergirlssinceIwaslittle.Foralongtime,thisreallytroubledme.IfeelmoreworriedbecauseIwillstartmyseniorhighschoollifesoon!IamafraidthatthestudentsinthenewschoolwilllaughatmebecauseIam“big”.Idecidetolookmorebeautiful,soIwanttoloseweightbydieting.Whatdoyouthinkofmyplan?Canyougivemesomeadvice?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,Amy注意事項：1.必須包含所有提示信息，可適當發揮，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數；2.意思清楚，表達通順，行文連貫，書寫規范；3.請勿在文中使用真實的姓名、校名和地名。五步寫作法——審列擴連查第一步細審題定要點（五審法：審主題、審人稱、審文體、審時態、審要點）1）審人稱：以第二人稱為主2）審時態：以一般現在時為主3）審主題：介紹你對減肥的見解4）審文體：應用文5）定要點1：提出沒有必要擔心并說出理由6）定要點2：提出減肥的方式第二步分段落列要點首段(Beginning)：引出問題（需要減肥）。中間段(Body)：與減肥相關的建議。結尾(Ending)：提出希望。結尾段提出希望，與首段相互呼應。第三步擴句子精加工首段：引出問題，表明有建議可提供[一般句]Asyoumentionedintheletter,Ihavesomeadviceforyou.[高分句]Iwouldliketosharewithyousomeusefuladviceaccordingtoyourproblems.(wouldliketodosth.)中間段：具體闡述與減肥相關的建議【建議一】[一般句]Don’tworryaboutittoomuch.Beconfidentandpositive.[高分句]Thereisnoneedtocareaboutwhatothersthinkofyou.Themostimportantthingistobeconfidentandpositive.(Thereisnoneedtodosth.)【建議二】[一般句]Don’teathigh-fatfoodandeatmorefruitandvegetables.[高分句]Eatmorenutritiousfoodsuchasfruitandvegetablesinsteadofhigh-fatfood.(suchas,insteadof)【建議三】[一般句]You’dbettergetupearlyinthemorninganddosomesportsregularly.高分句1.?????????????????????(agoodideatodosth.)2.?????????????????????（the+比較級,the+比較級）結尾：提出希望[一般句]Ihopemyadvicewillbehelpfultoyou.[高分句]Idohopemyearnestsuggestionscangiveyoualeg-up.第四步連句子成短文????DearAmy,Ihavereceivedandreadyourletter,inwhichyousaidyouwantedtoloseweightbydieting.Iwouldliketosharewithyousomeusefuladviceaccordingtoyourproblems.Firstly,thereisnoneedtocareaboutwhatothersthinkofyou.Themostimportantthingistobeconfidentandpositive.Innerbeautyismoreimportantthanappearance.Secondly,keepahealthydiet.Eatmorenutritiousfoodsuchasfruitandvegetablesinsteadofhigh-fatfood.Abalanceddietisveryimportantforlosingweight.Thirdly,doingproperexerciseisnecessary.You’dbettergetupearlyinthemorninganddosomesportsregularly.Themoreregularlyyouexercise,thehealthierandhappieryouwillbe.Idohopemyearnestsuggestionscangiveyoualeg-up.Yours,LiHua第五步查全文得高分首先依次檢查人稱、時態是否正確，要點是否齊全；然后檢查句型、單詞拼寫、標點是否正確。【實戰演練一】友誼總是彌足珍貴。假定你是李華，你因為未能遵守約定幫助你的好朋友Sandy進行英語學習從而使得你們之間產生隔閡，你通過留字條的方式和她溝通和好。現你校英文報正在開展以“AnUnforgettableThingaboutCommunication”為題的征文活動，請你用英文投稿，講述你的經歷。要求：詞數80左右，且不得出現真實姓名與校名。提示詞：Englishlearning,beangrywith,giveahopeforforgiveness(希望得到原諒),communicate,sincerely,getonwellwith優秀范文AnUnforgettableThingaboutCommunicationAmisunderstandingbetweenmyfriendandIleftadeepimpressiononme.OneSundayevening,Ipromisedtohelpmybestfriend,Sandy,withherEnglishlearning.ButIdidn’tshowupbecauseofsomethingimportant.What’sworse,Iforgottotellhersothatshewaitedformeforalongtimeandshewasangrywithme.Nextmorning,Iwalkeduptoherandgaveheranotehopingforforgiveness.Afterreadingmynote,Sandyfinallysmiledatme.ThenItoldherthatIfeltreallysorry.Fromthenon,Ibelievedthatcommunicatingsincerelyisoneofthebestwaystogetonwellwithothers.[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文；②時態：時態主要為“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，要注意不要遺漏題干中的要求，并適當增加細節。[寫作步驟]①第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“一段難忘的交流經歷”來引出下文中對該經歷的介紹；②第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。從“為何產生隔閡、怎么溝通、事件結果”三方面入手，重點介紹此次難忘的交流經歷；③第三步，書寫結語。表達真誠交流的重要。[亮點詞匯]①promisetodosth承諾做某事②helpsbwithsth幫助某人做某事③showup出現④becauseof因為⑤what’sworse更糟糕的是⑥waitfor等待⑦fromthenon從那時起⑧getonwellwithsb與某人相處融洽[高分句型]①ThenItoldherthatIfeltreallysorry.（that引導的賓語從句）②Fromthenon,Ibelievedthatcommunicatingsincerelyisoneofthebestwaystogetonwellwithothers.（that引導的賓語從句）【實戰演練二】生活中，有很多無形卻珍貴的東西，比如時間、青春、信念、品質、親情、友情等。請以“WhatIValueMost”為題，結合你的生活實際，寫一篇文章并談一談你珍惜它的理由。要求：1.文中不得出現真實校名及姓名；2.不少于80詞。優秀范文WhatIValueMostWhenitcomestowhatIvaluemost,nothingcancomparethefriendshipbetweenTonyandme.Threeyearsago,Icametothisschool.Atfirst,IfeltquitelonelybecauseIwasshyanddidn’tmakeanyfriends.Oneday,Icouldn’tfindmymathbook.IwasveryworriedbecauseIthoughttheteacherwouldblamemeforthat.Seeingmyuneasiness,Tony,whowasmydeskmate,sharedhisbookwithme.Iwasverygratefultohim.Sincethen,wehavebeengoodfriends.Inthefollowingyears,notonlydidwebothoftenstudyanddosportstogether,butalsowehelpedeachotherwhenwewereintrouble.Ibecamemoreconfidentandimprovedalotinbothmylessonsandsports.IhavebenefitedalotfrombeingfriendswithTony.Thoughwemaygotodifferentseniorschoolsinthefuture,IwillalwaysrememberTonyandcherishthefriendshipwithhim.[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時態：時態主要為“一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏信息提示，適當添加細節，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。引出作者與同學托尼的友情；第二步，分享自己與好朋友之間的一次經歷來談談珍惜它的理由；第三步，書寫結語。[亮點詞匯]①feellonely感到孤獨②makefriends交朋友③beintrouble陷入麻煩之中④benefitfrom從中受益[高分句型]①Seeingmyuneasiness,Tony,whowasmydeskmate,sharedhisbookwithme.(定語從句)；②Inthefollowingyears,notonlydidwebothoftenstudyanddosportstogether,butalsowehelpedeachotherwhenwewereintrouble.(倒裝句)③Thoughwemaygotodifferentseniorschoolsinthefuture,IwillalwaysrememberTonyandcherishthefriendshipwithhim.(though引導讓步狀語從句)【實戰演練三】某英語論壇發起主題為“Howtogetonwellwithclassmates”的討論，呼吁大家關注同學關系，友好相處，建設和諧校園。假如你是李華，請你就這一主題發表自己的看法。提示：1）Doyouthinkitisimportanttogetonwellwithclassmates?Whyorwhynot?2）Givesomeadviceongettingonwellwithclassmates.（Atleast3pieces）要求：1）短文須包括所有提示內容，可適當發揮；2）文中不得出現真實的地名、校名和人名；3）詞數80個左右。優秀范文MynameisLiHua,a15-yea