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應用文寫作假如你是李華,你的加拿大筆友Harry上周寫信詢問你的體育愛好。請根據以下要點給他回信,內容包括:1.你喜歡的運動項目及原因;2.何時喜歡上這項運動,現在參加該運動的情況如何;3.詢問對方的體育愛好。字數:100詞左右,語句通順,邏輯連貫。(高考要求80詞左右,其實可寫到120-130詞)Step1:審題

假如你是李華,你的加拿大筆友Harry上周寫信詢問你的體育愛好。請根據以下要點給他回信,內容包括:1.你喜歡的運動項目及原因;2.何時喜歡上這項運動,現在參加該運動的情況如何;3.詢問對方的體育愛好。字數:100詞左右,語句通順,邏輯連貫。Step1:審題1.確定文體:回復信2.主體時態:一般現在時(介紹運動項目及喜歡原因)3.主體人稱:第三人稱(介紹運動項目及喜歡原因)Step2:謀篇布局

Para1:Para2:Para3:1)寒暄2)說明寫作目的(回復Harry提問)3)引入話題(

你喜歡的運動項目)1)何時喜歡上這項運動,現在參加該運動的情況如何2)展開說明你喜歡該運動項目的具體原因(2-3個分點)1)詢問對方的體育愛好。2)盼回復。Step2:謀篇布局

Para1:Para2:Para3:1)寒暄2)說明寫作目的(回復Harry提問)3)引入話題(

你喜歡的運動項目)1)何時喜歡上這項運動,現在參加該運動的情況如何2)展開說明你喜歡該運動項目的具體原因(2-3個分點)1)詢問對方的體育愛好。2)盼回復。中段可充分利用積累,寫BOOK2U3Sports相關話題(如足球,跑步,或太極拳...)Step3:遣詞造句

Para1:1)寒暄2)說明寫作目的(回復Harry提問)3)引入話題(

你喜歡的運動項目)1)How’severythinggoing?Learningthatyou’recuriousaboutmyfavoritesport,I’mwritingtosharewithyoumyenthusiasmforfootball/running/taichi.1)Howareyoudoing?Ifeelsodelightedtoknowthatyoutakeinterestinmyfavoritesport.Ican’twaitanylongertosharewithyoumypassionforfootball/running/taichi.Step3:遣詞造句

Para2:1)何時喜歡上這項運動,現在參加該運動的情況如何IfellinlovewithitwhenIwasinjuniorhighschoolundertheinfluenceofmyteacher/father/friend(whoisdeeplyfascinatedbythissport).Ikeepthehabitof

playingfootball/goingrunning/doingtaichi

twiceaweekandamgraduallyimproving.1)何時喜歡上這項運動,現在參加該運動的情況如何2)展開說明你喜歡該運動項目的具體原因(2-3個分點)Step3:遣詞造句

Para2:GeneralVersion:(通用版本)ThereasonswhyI’mdeeplyattractedareasfollows.Firstly,itbenefitedmealot,bothmentallyandphysically.Notonlycanitbuildupmystrength,butalsohelpmereleasestressfromwork.Secondly,itcanboostbothmyconfidenceandimmunesystem(免疫系統),contributingtoahealthierlifeandbetterphysicalfitness.Lastbutnotleast,duringtheprocessIhavemadenumerousnewfriendsandpromotedmyinterpersonalskills.2)展開說明你喜歡該運動項目的具體原因(2-3個分點)Step3:遣詞造句

Para2:FootballVersion:(足球話題:遷移版)ThereasonswhyI’mdeeplyattractedareasfollows.Firstly,footballissuchasimpleandcheapgametoplaythatIcanplaytomyheart’scontent,evenwithaballmadeofplasticbags.It’sreallyavailableandaffordable.Secondly,thecreativityandexcitementonthefieldissofunthatI’malwaysamazedbyprofessionalplayers'topass,scoreanddefend.SoIsparenoefforttoimitatethem.Lastbutnotleast,footballisthebestwaytocommunicate,whichbreaksdownwallsandbringspeopletogetheronandoffthefield.Ideeplylovethespirititbringsme.2)展開說明你喜歡該運動項目的具體原因(2-3個分點)Step3:遣詞造句

Para2:RunningVersion:(跑步話題:遷移版)ThereasonswhyI’mdeeplyattractedareasfollows.Firstly,runningcanhelpmepromotemyphysicalfitnessandboostmyconfidence.Secondly,somerunningappscanlistmyperformanceagainstotherrunnersinmysocialnetwork.SoImakeeffortstoruntoseemynameinthetopfive.Lastbutnotleast,runningisaperfectwaytoreleasepressure.Mynervousenergypushesmethroughmileone.Bymiletwo,mytensionhasmovedfrommymindtomylegs.2)展開說明你喜歡該運動項目的具體原因(2-3個分點)Step3:遣詞造句

Para2:TaiChiVersion:(太極拳話題:遷移版)ThereasonswhyI’mdeeplyattractedareasfollows.Firstly,taichiteachesmetostaycalmduringlife’supsanddownsandembracetheworldwithandopenmind.Bydoingtaichiwithitscircularandrelaxedmovements,Icanreducestressfromwork.

Secondly,ithelpsmecultivatearighteousandneutralmindbyteachingmetopeacefullyworkinharmonywithbreathregulation.Lastbutnotleast,asaregularpractitioner,Imustbeuprightandactfromtheperspectiveofothers,whichdeepensmyunderstandingofConfucianism’semphasisonself-cultivationandbenevolence.2)展開說明你喜歡該運動項目的具體原因(2-3個分點)Step3:遣詞造句

Para3:1)詢問對方的體育愛好。2)盼回復。Obviously,noonecandenythebenefitsofdoingsport.Bytheway,I’mreallycuriousaboutyourfavoritesportaswell.Couldyousharewithme?Lookingforwardtoyourearliestreply.Step4:組合成篇

GeneralVersion:(通用版本)Howareyoudoing?Ifeelsodelightedtoknowthatyoutakeinterestinmyfavoritesport.Ican’twaitanylongertosharewithyoumypassionforfootball/running/taichi.ThereasonswhyI’mdeeplyattractedareasfollows.Firstly,itbenefitedmealot,bothmentallyandphysically.Notonlycanitbuildupmystrength,butalsohelpmereleasestressfromwork.Secondly,itcanboostbothmyconfidenceandimmunesystem(免疫系統),contributingtoahealthierlifeandbetterphysicalfitness.Lastbutnotleast,duringtheprocessIhavemadenumerousnewfriendsandpromotedmyinterpersonalskills.Obviously,noonecandenythebenefitsofdoingsport.Bytheway,I’mreallycuriousaboutyourfavoritesportaswell.Couldyousharewithme?Lookingforwardtoyourearliestreply.Step4:組合成篇

FootballVersion:(足球話題:遷移版)Howareyoudoing?Ifeelsodelightedtoknowthatyoutakeinterestinmyfavoritesport.Ican’twaitanylongertosharewithyoumypassionforfootball.ThereasonswhyI’mdeeplyattractedareasfollows.Firstly,footballissuchasimpleandcheapgametoplaythatIcanplaytomyheart’scontent,evenwithaballmadeofplasticbags.It’sreallyavailableandaffordable.Secondly,thecreativityandexcitementonthefieldissofunthatI’malwaysamazedbyprofessionalplayers'skillstopass,scoreanddefend.SoIsparenoefforttoimitatethem.Lastbutnotleast,footballisthebestwaytocommunicate,whichbreaksdownwallsandbringspeopletogetheronandoffthefield.Ideeplylovethespirititbringsme.Obviously,noonecandenythebenefitsofdoingsport.Bytheway,I’mreallycuriousaboutyourfavoritesportaswell.Couldyousharewithme?Lookingforwardtoyourearliestreply.Step4:組合成篇

RunningVersion:(跑步話題:遷移版)How’severythinggoing?Learningthatyou’recuriousaboutmyfavoritesport,I’mwritingtosharewithyoumyenthusiasmforrunning.ThereasonswhyI’mdeeplyattractedareasfollows.Firstly,runningcanhelpmepromotemyphysicalfitnessandboostmyconfidence.Secondly,somerunningappscanlistmyperformanceagainstotherrunnersinmysocialnetwork.SoImakeeffortstoruntoseemynameinthetopfive.Lastbutnotleast,runningisaperfectwaytoreleasepressure.Mynervousenergypushesmethroughmileone.Bymiletwo,mytensionhasmovedfrommymindtomylegs.Obviously,noonecandenythebenefitsofdoingsport.Bytheway,I’mreallycuriousaboutyourfavoritesportaswell.Couldyousharewithme?Lookingforwardtoyourearliestreply.Step4:組合成篇

TaiChiVersion:(太極拳話題:遷移版)How’severythinggoing?Learningthatyou’recuriousaboutmyfavoritesport,I’mwritingtosharewithyoumyenthusiasmfortaic

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