六級(jí)作文

各段寫作技巧

與常見(jiàn)嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤一、5個(gè)原則1、30-35分鐘時(shí)間；2、不打草稿；3、寫中文提綱；4、三步驟：審題→中文提綱→漢譯英；5、寫成三段。二、審題：分清文體1、記敘文、描寫文：注意順序和用詞生動(dòng)2、說(shuō)明文：注意順序和邏輯關(guān)系；3、議論文：注意論點(diǎn)、分論點(diǎn)；4、應(yīng)用文：注意格式三、審題：分解題目1、分解題目，確定寫作的大方面，使層次清楚、內(nèi)容切題；TheComputer’sImpactonHumanBeingsMakingFullUseofYourTimeMyViewOnHighTechnology2、對(duì)待抽象題目用舉例法將其具體化。四、開頭段1、手法：名人名言、下定義、諺語(yǔ)、設(shè)問(wèn)句（Ishonestygoingoutofstyleinthepresentage?）；2、現(xiàn)象/背景：提出現(xiàn)象或介紹相關(guān)背景；3、引出好/壞的討論。五、第二段的理想模式1、第1句：明確提出觀點(diǎn)；2、第2句：寫共有三個(gè)分論點(diǎn)（subpoints）；3、第3-5/3-8句：分別寫分論點(diǎn)，可用舉例等追加展開；4、第6/9句：回應(yīng)第1句或總結(jié)分論點(diǎn)，結(jié)束全段。五、第二段的理想模式5、常用手法：舉例、分類、因果推理、引用、定義、時(shí)空順序、類推、比較、對(duì)比；6、檢查：刪與第1句無(wú)關(guān)/關(guān)系不大的句子；7、檢查：長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，短句改長(zhǎng)；8、檢查：用強(qiáng)調(diào)、倒裝等句式；五、第二段的理想模式9、段/句的過(guò)渡連接詞/詞組：(1)時(shí)空：therehasbeen,atthesametime,eventually;nextto,

inthedistance;(2)階段：stage,point,step,period;(3)次序：inthefirstplace,thethirdandmostimportantpointofall,first(ly),aboveall;五、第二段的理想模式(4)意見(jiàn)：inmypointofview,havedifferentideason,inmyopinion;(5)比較：equallyimportant,onthecontrary,atthesametime,similarly,;(6)讓步：Itistruethat…,but…;Iadmitthat…,but…;eventhough五、第二段的理想模式(7)強(qiáng)調(diào)：obviously,ofcourse,thereisnodoubt,withoutdoubt,asamatteroffact,inparticular;(8)添加：morethanthat,inaddition;(9)因果：dueto,asaresult,consequently;(10)結(jié)論：tosumup,

inbrief,inconclusion,toconclude,inotherwords,insummary,toendup,inshort.六、第三段的理想模式1、第1句：回應(yīng)第1、2段，簡(jiǎn)述中心思想，但是不要提出新觀點(diǎn)；2、第2句：評(píng)價(jià)好/壞，表達(dá)自己意見(jiàn)；3、第3(-5)句：措施/號(hào)召/展望:提醒注意，提出措施，作出號(hào)召，展望未來(lái)；六、第三段的理想模式4、關(guān)鍵句式：(1)Inaword,ifeveryonecansticktowhatismentionedabove,onecanalwayskeepfitandpursueone’scareereffectively.(2)Inmyopinion,generationgapcanbebridgedaslongasbothparentsandchildrenarewillingtomake(evengreater)efforts.六、第三段的理想模式(3)Itishightimethatseriousconsiderationwasgiventonoisepollution.Moreover,effective/activemeasuresshouldbetakenimmediately

toprotectpeopleagainstnoise.(4)Inconclusion,mypointofviewisthatweshouldtryto…andatthesametimewehaveto…六、第三段的理想模式(5)…h(huán)asitsadvantagesanddisadvantages,butonthewholeitisagoodthinginthat…(6)Withthepassageoftime,theSpringFestivalcelebrationshavechangedalot.However,onethingremainsthesame.Itisstillafestivaloffamilyreunionanditstillrepresentstheage-oldChinesecivilization.七、圖表、曲線作文的寫作1、首段：（1）定義現(xiàn)象或說(shuō)明現(xiàn)象的背景；引用2-3個(gè)關(guān)鍵數(shù)字得出結(jié)論；引發(fā)討論；（2）常用句型：Ascanbeseenfromthetable(figure圖；chart/graph曲線圖)；Asisshownin…;Accordingtothetable,…七、圖表、曲線作文的寫作2.中段抓住主要的變化和趨勢(shì)，分析原因：最好寫出三個(gè)原因,用舉例等；不再引用數(shù)字；Foronething,….Foranother,…:一個(gè)方面內(nèi)部的不同原因;Ononehand,…Ontheotherhand,…:說(shuō)明兩個(gè)不同方面。七、圖表、曲線作文的寫作3、末段：總結(jié)重復(fù)首段；評(píng)價(jià)好壞；展望趨勢(shì)。第一段寫作模式（1）名人名言/2-3個(gè)問(wèn)題；（2）引出話題；（3）引出標(biāo)題；（4）下定義；（5）引發(fā)討論。第二段寫作模式（1）亮出觀點(diǎn)；（2）原因有三個(gè)或可分三類；（3）舉例分別說(shuō)明三個(gè)原因，可用舉例法、反正法。第三段寫作模式（1）總結(jié)（summary）;（2）態(tài)度/評(píng)價(jià)(attitude/comments);（3）預(yù)測(cè)(prediction).備考之一：圖表作文1、分析圖表：抓住與主題有關(guān)的信息，發(fā)現(xiàn)數(shù)據(jù)呈現(xiàn)的規(guī)律；2、充分利用圖表中的圖形、數(shù)據(jù)等去說(shuō)明主題；3、不要過(guò)多地引用數(shù)據(jù)，以免造成濫用數(shù)據(jù)的后果。圖表作文常用表達(dá)①Ascanbeseenfromthetable(graph/form)，...②Fromtheabovetableitcanbeseen(concluded)that...③Acarefulstudyofthetableshowsthat...圖表作文常用表達(dá)④

Thenumber(percentage)is3timesasmuchas(ascomparedwith,asagainst)

thatin2000.⑤

In2001,itincreased(wentup,rose)to15percentofthetotal.(增加到15%)；

increased(wentup,rose)by15percent（增加了15%）備考之二：社會(huì)實(shí)踐SocialPractice:1.學(xué)生往往對(duì)社會(huì)現(xiàn)實(shí)缺乏認(rèn)識(shí)。2.社會(huì)實(shí)踐是學(xué)校教育的一個(gè)重要組成部分。3.參加社會(huì)實(shí)踐的好處。SocialPractice:Para.1Itisacommonweakpointamongtoday'scollegestudentsthatthemajorityofthemhavelittleknowledgeofsocialreality.Socialpracticeisabridgebetweentheirtheoryandreality.Timelyparticipationinsocialpracticewillbenefitthemallthroughtheirlife.SocialPractice:Para.2Socialpracticemustbecomeanorganiccomponentofthenation'shighereducationbecauseitcanbenefitthestudentsinquiteafewaspecst.HereIamgoingtolistthreeofthem.Firstofall,inthesocialpractice,studentsaresuretolearnmorethantheirtextbooks.(tobecontinued)SocialPractice:Para.2Thesecondbenefitisthattheirclosecontactwiththeworkingpeoplemighthelpthemtoapplytheirknowledgetothesolutiontothepracticalproblem.Thethirdandmostimportantbenefitisthatnationalconditionsandknowledgeofsocietytheylearninsocialpracticemightstrengthentheirsenseofsocialresponsibility.SocialPractice:Para.3Inrecentyears,manycollegestudentshavebeensenttosuchplacesasfactories,farmsandcompaniestokeepincontactwiththesociety.Theprocesshasprovedeffectiveinenrichingtheirknowledgeofreality.(tobecontinued)SocialPractice:Para.3Inthecoming

years,morestudentswillsurelyget

morebenefitsfromsocialparacticeand

makemoreandbettercontributionsto

thesocietyandthepeople.六級(jí)寫作常見(jiàn)嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤SeriousMistakesCommoninCET-6一、修飾方面

I.Modification1.Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinourcountry,people’slivingstandardhasgreatlyimproved.一、修飾方面

I.Modification1.Havingcarriedouteconomicreformsinourcountry,people’slivingstandard

hasgreatlyimproved.Sinceeconomicreformshavebeencarriedoutinourcountry,people’slivingstandardhasbeengreatlyimproved.一、修飾方面

I.Modification2.Toimproveone’swritingskill,regularpracticeisessential.一、修飾方面

I.Modification2.Toimproveone’swritingskill,regularpracticeisessential.Toimproveone’swritingskill,onemustmakearegularpractice.二、一致方面

II.Coherence1.Whetheroneenjoysorresentsadvertisements,weareactuallybombardedwithiteveryhouroftheday.Whetherweenjoyorresent,…二、一致方面

II.Coherence2.TheeatinghabitofChinesepeople

havechangeddramaticallyinthepastdecade.Have:has二、一致方面

II.Coherence3.Oneseriousproblemhumanbeingsarefacedwitharehowtouseournaturalresourceseconomically.Are:is二、一致方面

II.Coherence4.Studyhardnowsothatwecancopewiththechangesandchallengesofthetwenty-firstcentury.We:you三、平行

III.Parallelism1.Whilewereducethenumberofvehicles,thespeedoftrafficcanbeincreased.Whilethenumberofvehiclesisreduces三、平行

III.Parallelism2.Thepriceofmilkisn’thigherthangrain.Thangrain:thanthatofgrain四、語(yǔ)法

IV.Grammar1.Thepaceofourmodernlifeisgettingmorefasterandfaster.2.Greentreescanprotectourairfrompolluting(beingpolluted).3.Comparing(Compared)withothercountries,China…四、語(yǔ)法

IV.Grammar4.Theamount(number)ofbicycleswilldeclineindozensofyears.5.In1990theconsumptionofgrainhasdecreased(decreased)by20%.6.Bycomparison,nuclearpowerhassomedistinctadvantages.Suchas

(Forexample,)itiscleanandcheap.五、連詞

V.Conjunction1.OneshouldimprovehisEnglish