基礎寫作四重奏:

1.信息劃分:確定哪些相關的信息可用一句話表達,確保5個句子表達完所有的信息.建議可在題目上用鉛筆做①,②,③,④,⑤的標志(完整性)2.列出關鍵詞組和句型(準確性)3.串聯句子:用正確的語法結構寫出準確的句子,并形成篇章

(連貫性)4.檢查(準確性)句子的分類簡單句:

只包含一個主謂結構的句子.并列句:

主謂結構+連詞(and,but,so,or……)+主謂結構(或更多的主謂結構)復合句:引導詞+主謂結構,主謂結構(從句)(主句)

寫一個完整的句子這幾句是正確的句子嗎?如果你認為有誤,該怎么改?1.Themeetingwilluntil3:00.2.Workhard,youwillsucceed.

3.Ihaveabrother,whoisadoctor.4.Thereareonly4studentstakepartintheclass.lastand^^^whotaking/totake五種基本的簡單句主語+不及物動詞2.主語+及物動詞+賓語Birdsfly.Busesrunfromdawntillmidnight.Wearestudyinghard.Wehavereadmanybooks.Theydoshoppingattheweekend.WearelearningEnglish.

3.主語+系動詞+表語4.主語+及物動詞+間接賓語+直接賓語5.主語+及物動詞+賓語+賓語補足語

Wearestudents.Hebecameascientist.Thatsoundsgood.HegaveTom

apresent.Heofferedmeajob.

Wemadehim

ourmonitor.Themanagerthinkstheplan

practical.

Hewillhavehisbike

repaired.Iwon’thaveyou

speakingtoyourmotherlikethat.并列句1.用連詞/副詞(and,but,so,for,or,notonly…butalso,either…or,neither…nor,while,both…and,however,therefore…)1)LiMingis18yearsoldandheisastudentinNo.1MiddleSchool.2)Hurryuporyou’llbelateforschool.3)Imustgonow,formysisteriswaitingforme.2.用“;”3.用“;+adv”1)Wefishedallday;wedidn’tcatchanything.Wefishedallday;however,wedidn’tcatchanything.2)Thecarwasalmostnew;besides,itwasinexcellentcondition.

,butwe,soall…2)Lilydoeswellinstudy;alltheteachersthinkhighlyofher.

復合句復合句里包含兩個或更多的主謂結構,其中有一個主謂結構為句子的主體稱為主句，另一個／些主謂結構為從句，他（們）只能充當句子的某一（些）成分，,如:主語,賓語,表語,同位語,定語,狀語等.根據他們在句子中的功能分別稱為主語從句,賓語從句,表語從句,同位語從句,定語從句,狀語從句等.

判斷下面句子屬于哪種復合句1)Whenweshallhaveoursportsmeetingisstillaquestion.2)ThelettersaysthattheyareleavingonFriday.3)That’swhattheyshoulddo.4)WeexpressedthehopethattheywouldcomeandvisitChinaagain.5)ThisistheverydictionarythatIamlookingfor.6)Astimewenton,Einstein’stheoryprovedtobecorrect.

主語從句賓語從句表語從句同位語從句定語從句狀語從句連貫性的要求是：句子前后之間要有照應，有銜接，思想的表達應該有序，清楚．句子與句子之間的過渡要符合邏輯，不能造成歧義或矛盾．Timeorder:First,…Firstofall,…Second,…Third,…Next,…Afterthat,…Then…Finally,…SpaceorderOntheright,…Ontheleft,…Inthecenter,…Inthemiddle,…Nexttothe…,…Besidethe…,…Oppositethe______,…Nearthe______,…Underthe______,…Abovethe______,…Ononesideofthe______,…Ontheothersideofthe______,…Transitionsignals1、遞進：besides,inaddition,what’smore2、轉折和對比：but,however,ontheotherhand,3、總結：inshort,inbrief,forthesereasons4、因果和結論：asaresult,dueto,becauseof,thus,therefore5、強調：really,indeed,surely6、其它插入語：worsestill/what’sworse,afterall,ifpossible,培養英語思維---詞的搭配大雨大橋大樓大錯大寫大病大地震heavyrainlongbridgehighrise/largebuildingbig/terrible/seriousmistakecapitalletterseriousillnessmajorearthquake句的表達注意漢英差異：一、狀語e.g.她一周有三個下午在一家百貨公司做兼職。 Sheworksparttimeinadepartmentstorethreeafternoonsaweek. 在我十歲那年我和家人經歷了一次奇妙的旅行。ItookafantastictripwithmyfamilywhenIwastenyearsold.二、謂語動詞漢語：無動詞或多動詞 英語：單動詞e.g.我媽媽很漂亮。Mymotherispretty.我們又唱又跳。Wesanganddanced.我們邀請他們到上海來玩。WeinvitedthemtocometoShanghaiforavisit.你上課常常缺席所以我想要提醒你。YouareoftenabsentfromclasssoIwanttoremindyou.

三、主語e.g.活到老，學到老。Oneisnevertoooldtolearn.很難說誰對誰錯。It’shardtotellwhoisrightandwhoiswrong.昨天找到了丟失的鋼筆。Thelostpenwasfoundyesterday.上飯店吃飯很貴。 It’sexpensivetoeatout.乘飛機旅行更舒適、便捷。Travellingbyplaneisfasterandmoreconvenient.四、定語漢：常常是前置定語英：前置和后置定語e.g.我們學校的所有學生allthestudentsinourschool左邊數第五個男孩thefifthboyfromtheleft英國人的日常生活everydaylivesoftheBritish在中國騎車的人數thenumberofcyclistsinChina幾種氣體的混合物amixtureofseveralgases

介詞短語作后置定語三到六歲的孩子Childrenfrom3to6yearsofage隔壁的音像店themusicstorenextdoor用英語寫的信theletter(s)inEnglish晚上最晚一班返回的公交車thelastbusbackintheevening城市生活的嘈雜、臟亂thenoiseanddirtofcitylife玩/放松的時間timetoplay/relax當一個音樂家的計劃planstobeamusician出國學習的機會thechancetostudyabroad供人坐著休息的安靜場所aquietplaceforpeopletositin/rest找到任何一個可以詢問的人findanyonetoask動詞不定式作后置定語城市用水waterusedbycities不亂扔垃圾的習慣thehabitofnotthrowingawayrubbish我曾經生活的村莊thevillagewhereIstayed/lived我昨晚吃的某樣東西somethingIatelastnight到月球去的宇航員astronautswhotraveledtothemoon孩子們喜歡吃的食物food(which)childrenlike分詞、定語從句等作后置定語檢

查1.時態2.主謂一致3.名詞單復數4.單詞拼寫5.動詞的過去式,過去分詞6.句子是否完整Writingtips:時態一致必須注意所用時態符合上下文。如果用過去時敘述一個故事，就要保證通篇都用過去時，不要在作文中間變成現在時。同樣，如果是在談論普遍問題、現狀或日常習慣，就要用現在時，而不要用過去時。e.g.YesterdayIdidmyhomework.Ittakesmethreehours.Hisfatherthoughtheisgoodatmath.Shestartedhernewjoblastweek.Shelikedit.Wedidn’tgototheparty.Wearen’tinvited.tookwaslikesweren’tWritingtips:2.主語一致應該保持全文人稱一致，這樣讀者才能跟隨一個邏輯思維順序。否則讀者會感到困惑。e.g.Althoughyoumayfailtheexam,hecanstillbeusefultothecountry.

Itnotonlyprovidesyouwithlotsofknowledgebutalsodevelopshisinterests.youyourWritingtips:4.詞序/語序它能夠幫助準確表達作者本意并并避免意義含糊不清。注意要讓句子盡量保持英語的表達習慣。e.g.Ialreadyhavehadlunch.ShewithhermumtraveledtoItaly.

Ialwaysbethewinnerofthepianocontest.InChina,heknewtherewerebigfloods.IjustwonderwhatdoesmyfuturelikeandwhatshouldIdo.havealreadyShetraveledtoItalywithhermum.amalwaysHeknewtherewerebigfloodsinChina.IjustwonderwhatmyfatherlikesandwhatIshoulddo.Writingtips:5.并列句用并列句能使文章更生動流暢，它包含兩個獨立分句和一個連詞，如：and,but,or,so等。e.g.Theyknowwhatisbetterandtheyarealwaysright.Itwascrowded.Wewereabletoseehim.Itwascrowdedbutwewereabletoseehim.Sheisatopstudent.Sheisatalentedmusician.Sheisatopstudentandatalentedmusician.Thoughhedoesn’thavemuchmoney,buthisheartisfulloflove.

兩個分句不要重復同一個單詞。每個分句都必須有一個動詞；每兩個分句組成的句子只能使用一個連詞。Writingtips:6.復合句。它包含一個主句和一個從句，由when,after,if等連詞或who,which等關系代詞引導。e.g.She

was

very

old.

She

couldn't

stand

on

the

bus

easily.

Shewassooldthatshecouldn’tstandonthebuseasily.Theresultwasnotthemostimportantthingforme.Theresultwouldbeknownawholemonthlater.Theresult,whichwouldbeknownawholemonthlater,wasnotthemostimportantthingforme.Writingtips:7.避免詞的重復。e.g.Allinall,wehadawonderfultrip.WetravelledacrossSydney,CanberraandMelbourne.WesawthebeautifulcoastofQueensland.WetouredallofPerth.WehadagreatvisitwithDan.Perhapswewillgoagainnextwinter.Writingtips:3.主謂一致/人稱一致確保語法正確。e.g.ThingsIhatetodoisdoinghomework.WhatIhatetodois…EverypeoplestarttolearnEnglish.EverypersonstartstolearnEnglish.Theactivitiescanrelaxourselves.Theactivitiescanhelpusrelaxourselves./Wecanrelaxourselvesbytakingpartintheactivities.看圖作文LookAndwrite看圖作文難度稍大，在寫作時它要根據圖畫呈現的內容與所給的中英文提示相結合來表達其內在涵義，描述圖畫內容，使短文達意、正確、連貫?？磮D作文可采用以下幾個步驟：1、理解圖意，確立情景2、注意所給的中英文提示3、明確時態，理順思路4、連詞成句，然后再連句成文5、反復審核，修改錯誤假設下面五幅圖畫描述的是你在5月3日(星期五)的一段親身經歷。請你根據畫面內容，寫一篇80字左右的日記。

英文日記的格式英文日記通常由書端和正文兩個部分組成。中、英文的日記格式大致一樣。英語日記的書端是寫日記的日期、星期和天氣的。左上角是日期（年、月、日）、星期。右上角寫上當天的天氣情況，如：Sunny，Fine，Rainy，Windy，Snowy等。日記的正文是日記的主要部分，寫在星期和日期的正下方，可以頂格寫，也可以內縮3至5個字母的空間。

今天下午我去看電影.gotoamoviegotothecinemaseeafilmIt’safinedaytoday.thisafternoonIwenttoamoviehappilythisafternoon.在路上,我看到一個手提箱從一輛自行車上掉了下來.Ontheway,Ifound/sawacasefalldownfrom/offaman’sbike.onthewayfalldownfrom/falloffsee/find+復合賓語我撿起箱子,并向騎車人大聲喊叫,但他卻沒聽見,走遠了.Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedtotheman,buthedidn’thearmeandrodeaway.pickupshouttorideaway于是,我攔了一輛出租車去追趕失主.Istoppedataxitotocatchupwiththeman.stopataxicatchupwith我終于追上了失主,并把箱子還給他.失主非常的感動,他拿出一些錢來感謝我,但被我拒絕了.Icaughtupwithhimatlastandgavethecasebacktohim.Themantookoutsomemoneytothankme,butIrefused.giveback/returnrefuseMay3rd,FridayFine

Thisafternoon,Iwenttoseeafilm.Ontheway,Isawacasefalloffaman'sbike.Ipickedupthecaseandshoutedtothemantostop.Buthedidn'thearmeandrodeaway.Istoppedataxiandgotintoitwiththecase.Andwecaughtupwiththeman.Igavethecasebacktohim.Themanthankedmeverymuchandwantedtogivemesomemoney.ButIrefused.

Usefulsentences:Sayingsandproverbs:Onself-help:Pridegoesbeforeafall驕者必敗.Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好的開端是成功的一半。Confidenceinyourselfisthefirststepontheroadtosuccess.自信是走向成功的第一步。Custommakesallthingseasy.有個好習慣，事事皆不難。Greathopesmakegreatman.偉大的抱負造就偉大的人物。Usefulsentences:Honestyisthebestpolicy.做人誠信為本。Hopeforthebest,butpreparefortheworst.抱最好的愿望，做最壞的打算。Nothingisdifficulttothemanwhowilltry.世上無難事，只要肯登攀。Ifathingisworthdoing,it’sworthdoingwell.值得做的是就值得做好。Wherethereislife,thereishope.生活充滿了希望。/留得青山在，不怕沒柴燒Usefulsentences:Onhealth: Aclosemouthcatchesnoflies.病從口入。 Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.一天一蘋果，不用請醫生。 Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.早睡早起身體好。Onmotherhood: Amother'sloveneverchanges.母愛永恒。Usefulsentences:Onfriendship: Afriendiseasierlost