讀后續寫閱讀下面材料，根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。續寫的詞數應為150左右。MyparentscametotheUSfromIndiainthe1960s,alongwithotherimmigrantsfromIndia.Backthen,therewerefewIndiansanywherearoundtheUS.MyfathercametoKansas,wherehewouldgethisPh.D.Sixmonthslater,mymothercamewiththethreeofuskids—mysister,mybrother,andme.Wewerejustsix,fiveandthreeyearsoldthen.ItwastheveryfirstwinterwhenwewereinKansas.Itwassocold,butwedidn’thaveheavycoatsorwarmclothes.Wedidn’thaveaconceptofhowcolditreallycouldbeintheMidwest,andtherewasanewsurpriseeveryday.Wedidn’thaveacaroranythinglikethat,andmydaddidn’thaveaUSdriver’slicense.Butanyway,myfatherwasstudyingforhisPh.D.,andhewouldwalkupanddownabighilltoandfromthecampusonaregularbasis.SinceIwasthreeyearsold,Ididn’tgotoschool,butmysisterandbrotherwereinschool.Myfatherhadtowalkdownthebighilltotakethemtoschooleverydayandthenwalkbackupthehilltogotouniversity.Afteraboutthreeweeksoflivinglikethis,awomancalledValerie,whosesonJohnwasinthesameclassasmybrother,startednoticingthem.Onaverycoldsnowymorning,whentheywenttoschoolasusual,Valeriepassedby.Shepulledupandsaid,“Iseeyouonthewayeveryday.Don’tyoufeelcoldwithoutcoats?”Myfatherresponded,“Wedidn’texpecttheweatherwouldbesocoldinKansas.”Valeriesaid,“MaybeIcantakeyourdaughterandsontoschool.Wouldyoulikearide?”Hearingthat,mydadnoddedwithgreatjoy._________________________________________________________________Later,Valerieandherfamilybecamesodeartomyfamily._________________________________________________________________移民家庭受助故事續寫續寫分析（兩段）?第一段：此段承接上文Valerie提出送孩子上學，“Hearingthat,mydadnoddedwithgreatjoy.”表現出父親對Valerie幫助的欣喜與感激，為后續情節發展奠定溫馨基調。“Fromthenon,Valeriepickedupmysisterandbrothereverymorning.Shewouldwaitpatientlyatthefootofthehill,awarmsmileonherface.”通過描述Valerie每日接送孩子的行為及神態，展現其善良與耐心。“Onsomedays,sheevenbroughtushotchocolate,whichwasararetreatforus.”這一細節進一步體現Valerie對“我們”生活上的關懷，熱巧克力不僅帶來溫暖，更讓“我們”感受到善意。“Astimewentby,shenotonlytookcareofmysiblings'transportationbutalsohelpedmymomwithsimplehouseholdchores.ShetaughtmymomhowtomakesomeAmerican-stylemeals,andtheychattedandlaughedtogether,sharingstoriesabouttheirrespectivecultures.”從接送孩子延伸到幫助母親做家務、分享文化，全面展現Valerie對“我們”家庭多方面的幫助，促進了兩家人的交流，推動故事從單純的幫助行為向文化交流與情感增進方向發展，為下一段兩家人親密關系的描述做鋪墊。?第二段：“Later,Valerieandherfamilybecamesodeartomyfamily.”直接點明兩家人關系的深化。“Wecelebratedfestivalstogether.DuringThanksgiving,wejoinedthemforabigturkeydinner,learningaboutthetraditionsoftheholiday.Inreturn,weintroducedthemtoIndianfestivals,likeDiwali,sharingthejoyoflightinglampsandburstingcrackers.”詳細描述兩家人共同慶祝節日的場景，感恩節體驗美國傳統，排燈節分享印度文化，通過節日互動，生動展現文化的交流與融合，使兩家人的關系更加緊密。“Ourparentsbecamegoodfriends,andwekidsplayedtogetherallthetime.”從父母和孩子兩個層面再次強調兩家人關系的親密。“Valerie'sactofkindnesshadnotonlymadeourlifeinKansasmorebearablebutalsocreatedalastingbondbetweenourtwofamilies.Itwasafriendshipthattranscendedculturaldifferencesandwouldbecherishedforalifetime.”最后總結Valerie善舉的意義，升華主題，突出友善打破文化差異，建立起永恒友誼的核心思想，使故事在情感和主題上達到高潮。?故事線?20世紀60年代，“我”的父母從印度移民到美國，來到堪薩斯，父親攻讀博士學位，母親帶著三個年幼的孩子隨后抵達。初到堪薩斯的冬天異常寒冷，“我們”沒有合適的御寒衣物，父親沒有駕照，只能步行送孩子上學后再去學校。?大約三周后，兒子John與“我”哥哥同班的Valerie注意到父親每天步行送孩子上學的情景。在一個寒冷的雪天，Valerie主動提出送“我”的姐姐和哥哥上學，父親欣然同意。?此后，Valerie每天早上耐心地在山腳下等待，接送孩子，有時還帶來熱巧克力。她不僅解決了孩子的交通問題，還幫助母親做家務，教母親做美式餐食，兩家人開始分享各自的文化。?后來，兩家人關系愈發親密，共同慶祝感恩節、排燈節等各自的節日，父母成為好友，孩子們也常一起玩耍。Valerie的善舉讓“我們”在堪薩斯的生活更易承受，還在兩個家庭間建立起跨越文化差異、值得一生珍視的深厚友誼。?短語?pickup接送?waitpatiently耐心等待?awarmsmile溫暖的微笑?araretreat難得的享受?takecareof照顧，處理?householdchores家務雜事?American-stylemeals美式餐食?celebratefestivals慶祝節日?turkeydinner火雞晚餐?Diwali排燈節（印度節日）?lightlamps點燈?burstcrackers放鞭炮?transcendculturaldifferences跨越文化差異?主旨升華句?ThisheartwarmingnarrativeoftheimmigrantfamilyandValerienotonlyshowcasesthepowerofasimpleactofkindnesstotransformlivesbutalsoservesasapoignantreminderthatinaworldofdiversecultures,alittlecompassioncanbridgethegapsandcreatelastingconnections.?這個關于移民家庭和Valerie的溫馨故事，不僅展示了一個簡單善舉改變生活的力量，還深刻地提醒我們，在一個文化多元的世界里，一點同情心就能彌合差距，建立起持久的聯系。?Throughtheimmigrantfamily'sjourneyfromstrugglinginanewlandtoformingadeep-rootedfriendshipwithValerie'sfamily,wearevividlyshownthebeautyofculturalexchangeandtheresilienceofhumanspiritinthefaceofadversity.Theirstoryimpartsthevaluablelessonthatkindnessknowsnoboundariesandcanturnstrangersintofamily.?通過移民家庭從在新土地上掙扎到與Valerie家庭建立深厚友誼的歷程，我們生動地看到了文化交流的美好以及人類精神在逆境中的堅韌。他們的故事傳達了一個寶貴的教訓，即善良沒有界限，能把陌生人變成家人。?Thestoryofthesetwofamiliesisnotmerelyataleofahelpinghand;itisaprofoundexplorationofthehumancapacitytoreachoutinkindness,toembracedifferences,andtobuildacommunitybasedonmutualrespectandunderstanding.?這兩個家庭的故事不僅僅是一個援手相助的故事，它是對人類伸出善良之手、接納差異以及在相互尊重和理解基礎上建立社區的能力的深刻探索。?Inasocietyoftendividedbyculturalandsocialdifferences,thebondbetweentheimmigrantfamilyandValerie'sfamilystandsasapowerfulstatement,illuminatingthepathtowardsamoreinclusiveandharmoniousworld.Itremindsusthateveryactofkindness,nomatterhowsmall,hasthepotentialtocreatearippleeffectofloveandunity.?在一個常常因文化和社會差異而分裂的社會中，移民家庭和Valerie家庭之間的紐帶是一個有力的聲明，照亮了通往一個更包容、更和諧世界的道路。它提醒我們，每一個善良的行為，無論多么微小，都有可能產生愛與團結的連鎖反應。FromtheinitialencounteronacoldKansasmorningtothesharedcelebrationsoffestivalsandthedeep-seatedfriendshipthatensued,thestoryencapsulatestheessenceofhope,themagicofhumanconnection,andtheunwaveringbeliefthatkindnessandculturalexchangecanovercomeanyobstacleandcreateaworldfilledwithloveandacceptance.?從堪薩斯寒冷早晨的初次相遇，到共同慶祝節日以及隨后建立的深厚友誼，這個故事體現了希望的本質、人與人之間聯系的魔力，以及堅定的信念，即善良和文化交流能夠克服任何障礙，創造一個充滿愛與接納的世界。?寫作示范?示范一?Hearingthat,mydadnoddedwithgreatjoy.Fromthatmomenton,Valeriebecamearegularpresenceinourlives.Shewouldnotonlydrivemysisterandbrothertoschoolbutalsotakethemtothelocallibraryonweekends.Sheintroducedthemtovariouschildren'sbooks,openingupanewworldofknowledge.Asthemonthspassed,shehelpedmymomfindapart-timejobatanearbystore,whichbroughtinsomeextraincomeforourfamily.Theywouldoftengoshoppingtogether,chattingabouttheirfamiliesanddreams.Valerie'skindnesswaslikeawarmrayofsunshineinourotherwisecoldandchallenginglifeinKansas.?Later,Valerieandherfamilybecamesodeartomyfamily.DuringChristmas,wedecoratedtheirhousewiththem,learningaboutthesignificanceofeachornament.Insummer,wehadbarbecuesintheirbackyard,sharingourfavoriteIndianspicesandrecipes.Ourparentswouldsitaround,playingcardsandsharingstories.Wekidswouldrunaround,playinghide-and-seek.Valerie'ssimpleactofkindnesshadblossomedintoabeautifulfriendshipthatweallcherisheddeeply.?示范二?Hearingthat,mydadnoddedwithgreatjoy.Everymorning,Valeriewouldarrivepunctually,hercarfilledwiththesmelloffreshlybakedcookies,whichshewouldsharewithus.ShealsohelpedmydadimprovehisEnglishpronunciation,makinghisstudiesabiteasier.Astimewentby,sheorganizedacommunityeventwhereourfamilygottoshowcaseIndianculture.MymomdemonstratedtraditionalIndiandancing,andmydadsharedstoriesaboutourhomeland.Itwasahugesuccess,andmanyneighborsgottoknowmoreaboutus.?Later,Valerieandherfamilybecamesodeartomyfamily.ForHalloween,wedresseduptogether,withValerie'skidswearingIndian-inspiredcostumes.Wewenttrick-or-treatingintheneighborhood,spreadingjoy.Onspecialoccasions,wewouldexchangehandmadegifts,symbolizingourdeepbond.Valerie'skindnesshadnotonlymadeourlifemorecomfortablebuthadalsomadeusfeeltrulyathomeinthisforeignland.Ourfriendshipwasabeautifulblendoftwocultures,fullofloveandrespect.?【答案】Hearingthat,mydadnoddedwithgreatjoy.Hesaid,