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讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Ihadalwayswantedadogsinceyoung.Myparentswereagainsttheidea,sayingthattakingcareofadogwasalifetimecommitment.Onmytenthbirthday,Fathersteppedintothehouseandannounced,“Nancy,youhaveanewpuppy!”IshoutedindelightandrantowardsFather,onlytofinditwasatoypuppy.Myfacefell.Iturnedaway.Fatherexplained,“Thisisa‘Think-It-Over’puppy.Youshouldtrytakingcareofitbeforedecidingaboutarealdog.”Thepuppydidlooklikearealdogfromadistanceanditevenhadadogsmell.Insideitsbodywasacomputerprogrammedtomakebarkingsounds.Fatherhandedmeakey,whichcouldbestuckintoitsbacktostopitsbarking.Iacceptedthepuppy,whichInamedFridaysinceitwasFridaythatday.Thatevening,myfriendsandIdecidedtotakeFridaytoadogcafé.Itwasfreezingcold,soIwrappeditinablanketasifitwerearealdog.Thecomputerinsidecouldtellifsomeonetreateditbadly,likeshakingornotcaringforit,andIdidnotwantthatrecorded.Havingwaitedinline,wefinallygotatable.Thewaiter,notknowingIwascarryingafalsepuppy,askedattentivelyifIwouldneedabasketwithcushion.Itoldhim,“Oh,it’snotarealpuppy,but...”BeforeIcouldfinishmysentence,hegavemeanunpleasantlook,turnedandservedotherdinerswhowererighttheretoplaywiththecafé’sdogs.Imighthaveseemedunusualtohim.Duringourmeal,myfriendsandIreceivedstrangelooksfromtheotherdogownersinthecafé.Weignoredthemandcontinuedwithourownconversation.Afterdinner,wewenttoanearbyshoppingmall,wherecustomerswereselectingtheirfavorites.Myfriendswerelookingatclothes,butIcouldn’t.ThepuppyIwascarryingwasbecomingincreasinglyheavy.ExtremelytiredofFriday,Iputitdowninacornerandjustwanderedaround,seekingclothesIcouldtryon.注意:(1)續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右;(2)請按如下格式在答題卡相應(yīng)位置作答。Suddenly,F(xiàn)ridaystartedtobarklikearealdog.ThemomentIgothome,IhandedFridaytoFather,tearsineyes.南希與小狗故事續(xù)寫續(xù)寫要點(兩段)?第一段:?場景渲染:細(xì)致描繪周五突然吠叫后商場內(nèi)的混亂景象,如周圍店鋪的店員探出頭張望,廣播聲因吠叫戛然而止,背景音樂也被掩蓋。“Suddenly,Friday'sbarkingshatteredthenormalatmosphereofthemall.Shopassistantspokedtheirheadsoutfromthestores,andthemall'ssoft-spokenannouncementscametoanabrupthalt.Thebackgroundmusicwasdrownedoutbythecontinuousbarking,whichechoedthroughthevastspace,makingthewholeplaceseemchaotic.”?他人反應(yīng):進一步刻畫周圍顧客的反應(yīng),除了驚訝的目光,有的匆忙護住自己的寵物,有的開始小聲議論,猜測這突如其來吠叫的緣由。“Customerswiththeirownpetsquicklypulledthemcloser,lookingaroundnervously.Othersbegantowhisperamongthemselves,speculatingaboutwherethebarkingwascomingfromandwhythistoydogwasmakingsucharacket.”?自身行動:深入描述“我”在慌亂中尋找鑰匙關(guān)閉吠叫的過程,包括內(nèi)心的焦急,腦海中不斷閃過糟糕的念頭,以及雙手因緊張而不聽使喚,連口袋的拉鏈都難以拉開。“Myheartpoundedinmychestlikeadrum.Thoughtsofhowembarrassingthissituationwasracedthroughmymind.MyhandstrembledsoviolentlythatIcouldbarelyunzipmybag.Ifumbledaround,pushingasidevariousitems,myeyesdartingbetweenthebagandthebarkingFriday,prayingtofindthekeysoon.”?朋友互動:生動展現(xiàn)“我”關(guān)閉吠叫后朋友的不同反應(yīng),有的笑得前仰后合,眼淚都快出來了,有的則趕緊過來詢問“我”是否沒事,幫忙整理弄亂的物品。“Oncethebarkingceased,myfriends'reactionswereablendofamusementandconcern.Onefrienddoubledoverwithlaughter,tearsstreamingdowntheirface,whileanotherrushedtomyside,asking,‘Areyouokay,Nancy?Here,letmehelpyoutidyup.’”?第二段:?歸家狀態(tài):具體描述“我”回家時的狀態(tài),腳步沉重,像拖著千斤重?fù)?dān),身體微微顫抖,臉上還殘留著未干的淚痕。“ThemomentIsteppedthroughthefrontdoor,mystepswereheavy,asifIwerecarryingahugeburden.Mybodytrembledslightly,andthedried-uptearstainsonmyfacewerestillvisible.Ishuffledtowardsthelivingroom,whereFatherwassitting,feelinglikeIwaswalkingtomydoom.”?父子對話:詳細(xì)闡述父親安慰“我”時的表情、語氣和具體動作,父親放下手中的報紙,起身迎向“我”,臉上帶著溫和的笑容,眼神中滿是理解與包容,然后輕輕將“我”擁入懷中。“Fatherputdownthenewspaperhewasreadingandstoodupassoonashesawme.Hewalkedtowardsmewithagentlesmileonhisface,hiseyesfilledwithunderstanding.Hewrappedmeinawarmhugandsaidsoftly,‘Nancy,don'tbesohardonyourself.Takingcareofalivingbeing,evenatoyone,isnotaseasyasitseems.’”?內(nèi)心轉(zhuǎn)變:深入描寫“我”聽了父親的話后的內(nèi)心變化,從最初的自我否定,覺得自己一無是處,到逐漸被父親的話語打動,開始反思自己的不足,同時也對未來養(yǎng)真狗有了更清晰的認(rèn)識和期待。“Atfirst,Iwasstilllostinself-blame,thinkingthatIwascompletelyincompetent.ButasFathercontinuedtospeak,hiswordsslowlysankin.IstartedtoreflectonmyactionsandrealizedthatIhadbeentoohasty.Aglimmerofhopeemergedinmyheart,andIlookedforwardtotheideaoflearningtotakecareofarealdogwithFather'sguidance.”?情感線(150字)?周五吠叫前,“我”在商場輕松自在,對帶著玩具狗出行感到新奇有趣。吠叫瞬間,尷尬與慌亂如潮水般將“我”淹沒,在眾人目光下,緊張與不安達到頂點。關(guān)閉吠叫后,面對朋友的反應(yīng),羞愧感讓“我”無地自容。回家面對父親時,沮喪和自責(zé)占據(jù)內(nèi)心,認(rèn)為自己辜負(fù)了父親的期望。而父親溫暖的安慰與鼓勵,如同一束光,驅(qū)散了“我”內(nèi)心的陰霾,讓“我”重新燃起對養(yǎng)真狗的希望,從消沉走向積極。?故事線(6條)?“我”自幼渴望養(yǎng)狗,父母因養(yǎng)狗責(zé)任重大而反對,十歲生日時父親帶來名為周五的玩具狗,讓“我”通過照顧它來決定是否養(yǎng)真狗。?當(dāng)晚,“我”和朋友帶著周五去狗咖啡館,因周五是玩具狗,遭受服務(wù)員異樣對待以及其他狗主人奇怪目光。?晚飯后前往商場,“我”因嫌周五沉重將其放在角落,自己去挑選衣服。?周五在商場突然吠叫,引發(fā)商場內(nèi)混亂,眾人投來目光,“我”在慌亂中關(guān)閉吠叫,尷尬不已,朋友反應(yīng)不一。?“我”心情低落回家,哭著將周五交給父親,傾訴自己無法照顧好它的愧疚。?父親安慰“我”,告知養(yǎng)狗需耐心和責(zé)任,若“我”仍想養(yǎng)真狗,可從小事學(xué)起,“我”在父親鼓勵下重拾信心,期待未來養(yǎng)真狗。?主旨升華句5句英文?Thisincidentservesasavividillustrationthatthepursuitofourdreamsisoftenaccompaniedbyunexpectedhurdles,andonlybysummoningupthecouragetofacethemhead-oncanwefullyappreciatethesignificanceofouraspirations.?這次事件生動地表明,我們對夢想的追求往往伴隨著意想不到的障礙,只有鼓起勇氣直面它們,我們才能充分體會到自己愿望的重要性。?ThroughNancy'sexperiencewiththetoydog,itbecomesevidentthatresponsibilityisaweightymatterthatdemandsourfullattention,andeverylearningprocess,regardlessofsuccessorfailure,isanessentialbuildingblockinourgrowthjourney.?通過南希與玩具狗的經(jīng)歷,很明顯責(zé)任是一件需要我們?nèi)褙炞Υ闹匾虑椋恳粋€學(xué)習(xí)過程,無論成敗,都是我們成長道路上的重要基石。?ThesuddenbarkingofthetoydogandNancy'ssubsequentself-awarenessvividlyhighlightthesignificanceofperseveranceandself-reflectioninthefaceofdifficulties,astheyarethefundamentalelementsforpersonalgrowthandself-improvement.?玩具狗的突然吠叫以及南希隨后的自我認(rèn)知,生動地凸顯了在困難面前堅持和自我反思的重要性,因為它們是個人成長和自我提升的基本要素。?Thisnarrativeactsasapowerfulreminderthatourinitialpreconceivednotionsaboutthingsfrequentlydeviatefromreality,anditisthroughreal-worldexperiencesthatwecangainamoreprofoundunderstandingofourselvesandtheworldsurroundingus.?這個故事有力地提醒我們,我們對事物最初的先入之見常常與現(xiàn)實不符,正是通過現(xiàn)實世界的經(jīng)歷,我們才能更深刻地理解自己和周圍的世界。?FromNancy'sinitialdisappointmenttoherrekindledhope,itisclearthatsetbacksaretransient,andwiththesupportofthoseclosetous,wepossessthestrengthtosurmountobstaclesandprogresstowardsourdreams.?從南希最初的失望到重新燃起希望,很明顯挫折是短暫的,在身邊人的支持下,我們有力量克服障礙,朝著夢想前進。?寫作示范一?Suddenly,Fridaystartedtobarklikearealdog.Theshrillsoundpiercedthroughthemall'scalmness,instantlydrawingalleyes.Shoppersfrozeintheirtracks,somewiththeirhandsstillreachingforitemsontheshelves.Agroupofchildrennearbyshriekedinexcitement,thinkingitwasarealpuppy.Ifeltarushofbloodtomyface,myhandsshakinguncontrollablyasIdugthroughmybagforthekey.MyheartwaspoundingsohardthatIcouldhearitinmyears.Finally,afterwhatseemedlikeaneternity,IfoundthekeyandmanagedtosilenceFriday.Myfriends,whowereinitiallyshocked,nowhadamixofamusementandconcernontheirfaces.Oneofthemjoked,“Well,thatsureliveneduptheplace,Nancy!”ButIwastoomortifiedtolaugh.?ThemomentIgothome,IhandedFridaytoFather,tearsstreamingdownmyface.“I'macompletefailure,Dad.Icouldn'tevenhandleatoydogwithoutmakingamessofthings,”Isobbed.FathergentlytookFridayfrommeandplaceditaside.Hethenwrappedmeinawarmhug.“Nancy,it'snotaboutfailure.Takingcareofalivingbeing,evenapretendone,isabigresponsibility.Fridaywasmeanttoteachyouthat.Butifyoustillhaveyourheartsetonarealdog,wecanstartsmallandlearntogether.Thisisjustasmallstepontheway.”Ilookedupathim,aglimmerofhopeinmytear-filledeyes.Irealizedthatthisexperiencewasavaluablelesson,andwithFather'ssupport,Icouldstillpursuemydreamofhavingadog.?寫作示范二?Suddenly,Fridaystartedtobarklikearealdog.Thebarkingechoedthroughthemall,causingastir.Peoplestoppedtheirconversationsandturnedtolook.Somerushedtowardsthesourceofthenoise,thinkingitwasalostpuppy.Iwasinastateofpanic,myhandstremblingasIsearchedforthekey.Idroppedmybagintheprocess,spillingitscontentsalloverthefloor.Myfriendswerelookingatme,someinshock,sometryingtohelp.Afterseveraltensemoments,Ifinallyfoundthekeyandturnedoffthebarking.IwassoembarrassedthatIwantedtodisappear.?ThemomentIgothome,IhandedFridaytoFather,myshouldersslumped.“I'msorry,Dad.IthoughtIcoulddoit,butImessedup.Ican'teventakecareofatoydogproperly,”Isaid,myvoicechokedwithemotion.Fathersatmedownandlookedatmekindly.“Nancy,it'sokay.Takingcareofadogisahugecommitment.That'swhywegotFriday.It'snotaboutwhathappenedtoday.It'saboutlearningfromit.Ifyou'restilldetermined,wecantryagain.We'lltakeitonestepatatime.”Inodded,feelingasenseofrelief.IknewthatwithFather'sguidance,Icouldovercomethechallengesoftakingcareofarealdoginthefuture.?參考答案Suddenly,Fridaystartedtobarklikearealdog.Itbarkedsoloudlyasifprotestingagainstmypr

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