UNIT10CONNECTIONSWRITINGWORKSHOP—READINGCLUB2

ANEWSREPORTPairWork

Youaregoingtowriteanewsreportonaschoolorcommunityevent.Discusswithyourpartner.1

Whateventwouldyouliketowriteabout?2

Whataspectsareyougoingtoinclude?3

Howisanewsreportnormallyorganised?

Activity1GETREADYFORWRITINGReadthenewsreport.Answerthequestions.

Activity2StreetFestivalBuildsCommunitySpirit

On21September，thefirstCommunityStreetFestivalinourcitywasheldonRedwoodStreet.Thefestivalwashighlysuccessful，attractingover10，000peoplefromover20communities.Theweatherwasgood，althoughitrainedheavilyinthemorning.Theperformerswererathergoodandwellreceivedbythepublic.

READFORWRITING1

Whateventisthereportabout?2

Whenandwheredidtheeventhappen?3

Whoattendedtheeventandwhatdidtheydo?4

Whatdidtheeventbringtothecommunity?

Peopleattendingtheeventweremainlyfamilies.Therewerepeopleofallages.Mostofthemcamefromsevennearbycommunities.Therewereawidevarietyofacts，mostofwhichweresinginganddancing.Theactsappealingtochildrenwereparticularlypopular.Thehighlightofthefestivalwasthemusicanddancebyagroupofchildren.

Thefestivalwaswellorganised.Almostalloftheperformersstartedandfinishedtheiractsontime.Theaudienceenjoyedtheperformances.Therewerealsomanyoutletsservingfoodanddrink.

Thefestivalgavegreatpleasuretoalargenumberofpeopleanditbroughttogetherthedifferentcommunitieswithinourcity.Somepeoplesaid，“Weareeagertoparticipateinnextyear’sfestival.”

1

Whateventisthereportabout?2

Whenandwheredidtheeventhappen?3

Whoattendedtheeventandwhatdidtheydo?4

Whatdidtheeventbringtothecommunity?

1ThefirstCommunityStreetFestival.2Itwasheldon21SeptemberonRedwoodStreet.3Over10，000peoplefromover20communitiesattendedthefestival.Therewereawidevarietyofacts.4Thefestivalgavegreatpleasuretoalargenumberofpeopleanditbroughttogetherthedifferentcommunitieswithinthecity. 附：課文結構圖解Thenewsreporthasfourparagraphs.Labeleachparagraphwithafunction.Activity3FOCUSONSTRUCTUREANDLANGUAGELead

Body

Round-upPara.1

Para.2________

Para.3

Para.4

LeadBodyBodyRound-upUnderlinealltheexpressionsthatconveythefactthattheeventwasasuccess. Activity4Activity5Write2-3sentencesabouttheeventyouaregoingtoreport.UsetheSentenceBuildertohelpyou. AdverbsofDegreehighlyThefestivalwashighlysuccessful...ratherTheperformerswererathergood...

SentenceBuildermainlyPeopleattendingtheeventweremainlyfamilies.particularlyTheactsappealingtochildrenwereparticularlypopular.OutliningCompletetheoutlineofyournewsreportbasedonActivity3. Activity6COMPOSEYOURWRITINGDrafting

UseyouroutlineandtheWritingHelptowriteyourfirstdraft.

Activity7WritingaNewsReportIt’simportantto：·haveanattractivetitleandabrieflead；·includethewho，when，where，what，whyandhowoftheevent；

·useformalandclearlanguage.

WritingHelpEditing

Edityourreportinpairs.Thensharewhatyouhavewritteninclass.Activity8Languagepoints核心詞匯教材原句p.18Theactsappealingtochildrenwereparticularlypopular.吸引兒童的表演特別受歡迎。題組練·領悟方法1appeal（1）vi.&vt.呼吁；懇求；上訴vi.有吸引力；有感染力搭配

appealto對……有吸引力，使……感興趣；呼吁；上訴；要求 appealtosbforsth向某人呼吁某事 appealtosbtodosth懇求/呼吁某人做某事Theideaofadoptingachildreallyappealstoher.收養一個孩子的想法對她很有吸引力。［詞匯復現］Sheappealedtoahighercourt.她向上一級法院上訴。Thenewgovernmentappealedtothepeopleforsupport.新政府呼吁人們給予支持。Thepolicehaveappealedtoanyonewithinformationtoexposethedetailsoftheattack.警方呼吁知情人揭露襲擊細節。

（2）n.呼吁；懇求；吸引力；上訴搭配

makeanappealfor請求/呼吁…… makeanappealtosb向某人呼吁Theymadeanemotionalappealforhelp.他們情緒激動地懇求救助。Thepolicehaveissuedanappealforwitnesses.警方發出了尋找目擊證人的呼吁?！驹~語積累】appealingadj.有吸引力的；懇求的 完成句子（1）Tobehonest，Nick’sperformancedidn’t

（對……有吸引力）memuch.（2）Wetendtohaveabettermemoryforthingsthatexciteoursensesor

（對……有吸引力）ouremotionsthanforstraightfacts.單句語法填空（3）Thegovernmentisappealingtopeople

（contribute）moneytotheflood-hitarea.（4）Theideaofnothavingtogetupearlyeverymorningisrather

（appeal）tome.（5）［詞匯復現］Ithinkwhatappeals

meaboutthepaintingdisplayedinthegalleryisthecoloursthepainteruses.（6）Hemadeanappeal

otherleaderstodonate.（7）Itcreatesanatmospherewhichvisitorsfindso

（appeal）.appealtoappealto句意：相對于直白的事實，我們往往對于激發自己感覺或喚起自己情感的事物記憶更加深刻。tocontributeappealingtotoappealing教材原句p.21 Theysupportedeachotherwhenhelpwasneededandsharedthejoyandsorrowofeverydaylife...他們在需要幫助的時候互相支持，分享日常生活中的喜悅和悲傷……2sorrown.悲傷，悲痛；不幸→sorrowfuladj.悲傷的，傷心的

搭配

toone’ssorrow令某人傷心的是

insorrow悲傷地

thejoysandsorrowsoflife人生的歡樂和悲傷

shareone’sjoysandsorrows同甘共苦

expressone’ssorrow表達某人的悲傷Friendshipreducessorrowintimesofpainandaddsjoyinhappytimes.憂愁時，朋友為我們寬解；高興時，朋友使歡樂倍增。Thevictimsappealedforaidasarelieftotheirsorrow.Weoughttoshowoursympathyforthem.受害者們呼吁援助以緩解他們的悲傷。我們應該向他們表示同情。［詞匯復現］Heexpressedhissorrowatwhatthebossofthegroceryhaddonetotheoldlady.他對雜貨店老板對老太太所做的事表示遺憾。［詞匯復現］

單句語法填空（１）Much

hissorrow，hissondiedinaterribleaccident.（２）Atlast，thefamouswriterdied

sorrowleavinghisworksunfinished.（３）Heidilookeddelightedatthegrandmother’sface，whichhadchangedfromanold，__________

（sorrow）expressiontoajoyousone.完成句子（4）［詞匯復現］

（令我非常傷心的是），hedidn’tevenattempttoapologisetome.（5）She

（表達她對……的悲傷）whatherdirectorhaddonetoher.

toinsorrowfulMuchtomysorrowexpressedhersorrowat教材原句p.22 Tohellwithforgiveness!讓寬恕見鬼去吧！3forgivenessn.原諒，寬恕Hebeggedforgivenessforwhathehaddone.他乞求饒恕他的所作所為。Itwasanincredibledisplayofmotherlyloveandforgiveness.那是慈母般關愛與寬容的一次令人難以置信的體現?！驹~語積累】forgivev.寬恕，原諒 forgivesbfor（doing）sth原諒某人（做了）某事Heapologisedtohiswifebutshedidn’tforgivehimforhisalwaysbeingdrunk.他向妻子道歉，但她并沒有原諒他總是喝醉。［詞匯復現］

單句語法填空（1）Atlast，heforgavehisfather

hismistakeandthewholefamilylivedtogetherhappily.（2）I’mwritingthislettertobegyouforyour

（forgive）.（3）Expectingto

（forgive）islikeaskingsomeonetosaythankyouforthegift.完成句子（4）［詞匯復現］Heapologisedtoherandhopedshecould

（原諒他的無禮）.

for

forgivenessbeforgivenforgivehimforbeingrude教材原句p.22 Itistruethatthedebthasnotbeenpaid，andlawfullyyoucanaskforapoundoffleshfromnearAntonio’sheart.的確，債務還沒有還清，合法地，你可以從安東尼奧的心臟附近要一磅肉。4debtn.債務，欠款搭配 indebt欠債

outofdebt不負債

beinone’sdebt欠某人的人情債，受某人的恩惠

get/run/fall/sinkintodebt負債，陷入債務之中

getoutofdebt不再負債，還清債務

payoffone’sdebts還清某人的債務Hedidnotlookforwardtobeingindebtbecausehisrestaurantwasnolongerpopular.他不希望由于他的餐館不再受歡迎而負債。Gettingoutofdebtmustbeplacedbeforebuyinganythingnew.必須先還清債務然后再置辦新物品。 單句語法填空（1）Itiseasiertoget

debtthantogetoutofitagain.（2）Hehasbeen

debtandhastoworkhardtopayitoff.完成句子（3）［詞匯復現］Atlast，he

（還清了他所有的欠款）byrunningabakery.（4）Sincetheyboughtthehouse，theSmithshavebeen

（欠債）theseyears.（5）Hehas

（不再欠債）andcanliveaneasylife.intoinpaidoffallhisdebtsindebtgotoutofdebt教材原句p.22 holdingupherhandtointerrupt舉起她的手打斷5interruptvi.&vt.打斷（某人的）講話，中斷（某人的）行動，打擾Sorrytointerrupt，butIhavetoaskyouafavouroncemore.對不起打擾了，但是我得再請你幫我一個忙。Astrangerwasshownin，sotheconversationwasinterrupted.一個陌生人被帶了進來，所以談話被打斷了?！驹~語積累】interruptionn.打斷；干擾；中斷之事Thebirthofhersonwasaminorinterruptiontohercareer.她兒子的出生給她的事業造成一個小小的中斷。【詞語辨析】interrupt與botherinterrupt多指由于某種外界因素而停下來。bother指擾亂某人心緒而使之不安。Don’tinterruptthespeaker，andaskyourquestionsafterwards.不要打斷人家的發言，有問題過后再問。Don’tbotherher.Sheispreparingforthefinalexamination.不要打擾她。她正在準備期末考試。 單句語法填空（1）Imanagedtoworkfortwohourswithout

（interrupt）.（2）Productionatthefactory

（interrupt）fortwohoursbecausetherewasnoelectricity.（3）Itisnotpolite

（interrupt）whensomeoneistalking.選詞填空（interrupt/bother）（4）Thematchtooknearlythreehoursand

attimesbyrain.（5）—CouldyouturntheTVdownalittlebit?—I’msorry.Doesit

you?interruptionwasinterruptedtointerruptwasinterruptedbother教材原句p.18 Thefestivalwashighlysuccessful，attractingover10，000peoplefromover20communities.這個節日非常成功，吸引了來自20多個社區的10000多人。【句式分析】此句為簡單句，attractingover10，000peoplefromover20communities為現在分詞短語作結果狀語，表示一種自然而然的結果。1現在分詞短語作結果狀語現在分詞短語作結果狀語，表示必然的結果。它常常位于句末，可與前面的句子一起轉換成一個含有并列謂語的簡單句。Itrainedheavily，causingseverefloodinginthatcountry.

=Itrainedheavilyandcausedseverefloodinginthatcountry.大雨滂沱，在那個國家引發了嚴重的水災。 重點句式Wehurriedtothebakery，onlytobetoldthatthebreadhadalreadybeensoldout.我們匆忙趕到面包房，結果被告知面包早已賣光。（出乎意料的結果）［詞匯復現］Theglassfelltotheground，breakingintopieces.玻璃杯掉在地上，摔成了碎片。（自然而然的結果） 單句語法填空（1）［2017·天津卷］Thehospitalhasrecentlyobtainednewmedicalequipment，

_________

（allow）morepatientstobetreated.（2）Themotherdied，

（leave）alotofmoneyforherchildren.（3）Europeanfootballisplayedin80countries，

（make）itthemostpopularsportintheworld.（4）Irushedallthewaytoschool，

（find）thatitwasSaturdaythatday.（5）［詞匯復現］Thedishesinthecanteennearourdormitoryarecheapandtasty，_________

（attract）alotofstudents.

allowing句意：醫院最近獲得了新的醫療設備，使更多的病人得到治療。此處用現在分詞短語作結果狀語。

leavingmakingtofindattracting教材原句p.21 Theywerethenabletoplaceguardsattheentrancesofthevarioushutongs，whichmadeiteasiertokeepaneyeonpeople’smovements.然后，他們可以在各個胡同的入口處布置警衛，這樣就更容易監視人們的動向?！揪涫椒治觥勘揪涫且粋€復合句，which引導定語從句，修飾整個主句。定語從句中it作形式賓語，真正的賓語是后面的動詞不定式短語tokeepaneyeonpeople’smovements。2it作形式賓語（1）find/feel/think/consider/make/believe+it