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讀后續(xù)寫閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Thehomemadebookbagwasplacedacrossmybed.Itappearedtohavetakenovertheentireroom.Iknewthatmymomhadspentalldayhappilysewingasshepicturedmeproudlywalkingfromclasstoclasswithitovermyshoulder.ThenextdayIwastostartseventhgradeatanewschool,inanewstate,inthemiddleoftheschoolyear.Iwasnervousandexcited.ThatfirstdayatschoolIheardthewhispers.“Haveyouseenthenewgirl?She’sfromCalifornia.Didyouseethatbigbag?”Thenthereweregiggles(咯咯笑).BecauseIstartedschoolinthemiddleoftheyear,allofthelockershadbeenassignedtootherkids.Therewasnoextralockeravailableforme,soIwasforcedtocarryallmystuffaroundintheoversizedbag.WildstoriesflewbackandforthaboutwhatIkeptinthebagthatneverleftmyside.Drugs?Somekidswondered.Clothes?Isshehomeless?Therewasnothinginterestinginthatbag,justmycoatduringcoldweather,schoolbooks,papersandpens.Eventually,moststudentsprettymuchignoredme,butsomeofthekidsmadefunofmybag.Peoplegrabbedatit,pretendedtotreatitlikeadogandtriedtodroplitterintoit.Myteachersdidn’tseemtonotice,probablybecauseIdidn’teverplainoraskforhelp.Astheyearprogressed,Istartedtohatethatbag.Iblamedallmyproblemsonit.Ifelthelpless,aloneandhomesickforCaliforniaandmyoldfriends.Onedaytowardtheendoftheschoolyear,mymathteacherassignedeachstudentapartnertoworkwithonwordproblems.IwastoldtoworkwithDebbie,apopulargirlwhowasinseveralofmyclasses.Shesmiledandwavedmeovertowardherdesk,soIgrabbedmybagandquietlymovedtowardher.AsIsatdown,IrealizedthatIhadneverspokentoherbefore.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。“So,what’sinthebag?"Debbieaskedloudlywithasmile.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ThenDebbiestartedtolaugh,notatme,butatthesituation.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________書包的故事續(xù)寫續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)第一段:重點(diǎn)描寫“我”回答黛比問(wèn)題后的反應(yīng)以及黛比的后續(xù)表現(xiàn)。可以寫黛比在聽到回答后,沒有嘲笑“我”,而是流露出理解和友善的神情,可能還會(huì)和“我”分享她對(duì)書包的看法或自己類似的經(jīng)歷,讓“我”感到意外和溫暖。第二段:主要寫黛比的笑聲對(duì)周圍氛圍的影響以及“我”的內(nèi)心變化。比如她的笑聲吸引了周圍同學(xué)的注意,同學(xué)們圍過(guò)來(lái),在黛比的帶動(dòng)下,大家對(duì)“我”和書包的態(tài)度發(fā)生轉(zhuǎn)變,“我”也不再那么自卑和抵觸書包,開始以平和的心態(tài)面對(duì)。情感線從一開始“我”因書包被嘲笑而產(chǎn)生的自卑、無(wú)助和對(duì)書包的厭惡,到黛比詢問(wèn)時(shí)“我”的緊張、戒備,再到黛比展現(xiàn)出友善和理解后“我”的意外與感動(dòng),最后在黛比的笑聲和同學(xué)們態(tài)度轉(zhuǎn)變的氛圍下,“我”變得釋然、輕松,感受到了溫暖和接納,情感由消極轉(zhuǎn)為積極。故事線新學(xué)校新環(huán)境,“我”因獨(dú)特書包被同學(xué)嘲笑,產(chǎn)生負(fù)面情緒。數(shù)學(xué)老師安排“我”與黛比合作,這是故事的轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)。黛比主動(dòng)詢問(wèn)書包內(nèi)容,打破了“我”與同學(xué)之間的隔閡。黛比沒有嘲笑“我”,而是理解“我”,并分享自己的經(jīng)歷,讓“我”感到溫暖。黛比的笑聲吸引了周圍同學(xué),大家圍過(guò)來(lái),氣氛變得融洽。在大家的友好氛圍中,“我”不再討厭書包,心態(tài)發(fā)生轉(zhuǎn)變,與同學(xué)們的關(guān)系也得到改善。主旨升華句Fromthisexperience,Ilearnedthatasimpleactofkindnesscanbreakdownbarriersandbringwarmthtoothers.(從這次經(jīng)歷中,我明白了一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的善舉可以打破隔閡,給他人帶來(lái)溫暖。)Thepoweroffriendshipissogreatthatitcanturnadifficultsituationintoabeautifulmemory.(友誼的力量是如此強(qiáng)大,它能將困境變成美好的回憶。)Don'tjudgeothersbytheirappearanceorpossessions,foryouneverknowwhat'sintheirhearts.(不要以貌取人或根據(jù)別人的財(cái)物來(lái)評(píng)判他人,因?yàn)槟阌肋h(yuǎn)不知道他們的內(nèi)心是怎樣的。)Sometimes,asinceresmileandafriendlywordareenoughtolightupsomeoneelse'sworld.(有時(shí)候,一個(gè)真誠(chéng)的微笑和一句友好的話就足以照亮他人的世界。)Thisincidenttaughtmethatweshouldbebraveenoughtofaceourfearsandinsecurities,andthatunderstandingandacceptancefromotherscangiveusthestrengthtodoso.(這件事教會(huì)了我,我們應(yīng)該勇敢地面對(duì)自己的恐懼和不安,而他人的理解和接納能給我們這樣做的力量。)寫作示范示范一“So,what’sinthebag?"Debbieaskedloudlywithasmile.Iblushed,hesitatedforamomentandthenrepliedinalowvoice,“Justsomeordinarythings,nothingspecial.”Debbielookedatmeandsaid,“Ithoughttheremightbesomecoolstuff.Youknow,Iusedtohaveabagthatwasabitstrangetoo.Everyonemadefunofit,butIjustignoredthem.”Herwordsmademefeelalittlemorerelaxed.ThenDebbiestartedtolaugh,notatme,butatthesituation.“Haha,wewereallsosillytocaresomuchaboutthesethings,”shesaid.Herlaughterwassoinfectiousthatsomeclassmatesnearbyalsocameover.Debbietoldthemaboutourconversation,andtheyallsmiledatme.Suddenly,Ididn'tfeelsoembarrassedanymore.IrealizedthatmaybeIhadbeentoosensitive.Fromthatdayon,Ibecamemoreconfidentandmademanynewfriends.ThebagthatIusedtohatedidn'tseemsoannoyinganymore.示范二“So,what’sinthebag?"Debbieaskedloudlywithasmile.Iwasstillabitnervousandrepliedquickly,“Justschoolthingsandmycoat.”Debbienoddedandsaid,“Oh,Isee.Ithoughtitwassomethingreallyinteresting.Youknow,wewereallcuriousaboutyourbag.”Shethenbegantotalkabouthoweveryoneintheclasshadtheirownuniquethings,andthat'swhatmadeusallspecial.Herwordswerelikearayofsunshine,shiningintomygloomyheart.ThenDebbiestartedtolaugh,notatme,butatthesituation.“Weshouldhavetalkedaboutthisearlierinsteadofmakingwildguesses,”shesaid,stilllaughing.Herlaughtermadetheatmosphereintheclassroommuchmorerelaxed.Otherstudentsjoinedinandstartedtosharetheirownstoriesaboutstrangethingsintheirbags.Ifoundmyselflaughingalongwiththem,andforthefirsttime,IfeltlikeIwasreallyapartoftheclass.Thebag,whichhadbeenasourceoftroubleforme,nowbecameasymbolofmynewbeginninginthisschool.參考答案"So,whatisinthebag?"Debbieaskedloudlywithasmile.Herquestionwasthelaststrawtobreakmedown.Faceblushingred,Idumpedthebagonthetableandgrumbledinachokingvoice,"Nothin
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