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高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)《“尋物高手”:與伙伴尋找媽媽丟失的鉆石戒指》1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文I'mFranklinG.Takata,betterknownas“Find-ItFrankie”duetomyexceptionaltrackingabilities.Iwillsaythatthere'snothingoutthereIcan'tfind.Iamfortunatetohavealoyalandskilledpartner,Munchy,bymyside.Hewasselectedespeciallyformefromananimalshelterbymyparentsontheoccasionofmyfifthbirthday.OneThursdayafternoon,MunchyandIwereplayinginthegardenwhenMomrevealedthathercherisheddiamondringhaddisappeared,entrustinguswiththetaskoflocatingit.HadIknownhowtrickythecasewouldbe,Imighthavethoughttwice.ButIsaidthenasI'dsaytoday,“Iassureyouthatthere'snothingwecan'tlocate!"4續(xù)寫原文Wheneveranitemdisappears,myinitialinquirytoMomis,“Doyourecallthelastplaceyousawit?"“Iwasoccupiedmakingcookiesinthekitchen,”Momreplied,“whenIremovedmyringandsetitonthecounter.However,aftertakingacallfromyouraunt,Ireturnedtodiscovertheringmissing!"“Hmm.Well,itcouldn'thavedisappearedallbyitself,"Isaid.“Munchy,let'sgotakeacloserlook."Munchyledthewaytothekitchen.Thecounterborenoindicationofthering'swhereabouts(下落);however,theflourbetrayedfaintpawprints,whichpointedtowardthecriminal'sidentity.“Thecat”Isaid.“Mr.Jinglesmusthavebeenplayingwiththering,causingittodroptotheground!”Crawlingonthefloor,Isearchedhighandlowforthering.Myeffortswereinvain.5段首句Paragraph1:“Munchy,you'reup!GofindMr.Jingles.”__Paragraph2:IwasabouttogiveupwhenItookabiteofthewarmcookieMomhandedme.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8富蘭克林?G?高田因出色的追蹤能力被稱為“尋物高手弗蘭基”,他有個(gè)忠誠(chéng)又能干的伙伴芒奇。一個(gè)周四下午,他和芒奇在花園玩耍時(shí),媽媽說她心愛的鉆石戒指不見了,便委托他們尋找。弗蘭基自信滿滿地答應(yīng)下來。他詢問媽媽最后一次看到戒指的地方,媽媽說在廚房做餅干時(shí)把戒指放在了柜臺(tái)上,接了個(gè)電話回來就發(fā)現(xiàn)戒指不見了。弗蘭基和芒奇來到廚房,柜臺(tái)上沒有戒指的蹤跡,但面粉上有淡淡的爪印,指向了“嫌疑人”——貓金格斯先生。弗蘭基認(rèn)為金格斯先生可能在玩耍時(shí)把戒指弄到了地上,于是他在地板上四處尋找,卻一無所獲。點(diǎn)1:位于續(xù)寫第一段段首,流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語;點(diǎn)2:位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾,流暢銜接第二段段首句;點(diǎn)3:位于續(xù)寫第二段段首,續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語;點(diǎn)4:文章結(jié)尾升華,給予讀者正能量,揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph1:“Munchy,you'reup!GofindMr.Jingles.”“芒奇,該你上場(chǎng)了!去找金格斯先生。”芒奇立刻豎起耳朵,鼻子在空中嗅來嗅去,順著貓的氣味迅速行動(dòng)起來。它帶著我在屋子里四處搜尋,不放過任何一個(gè)角落。我們先來到了客廳,芒奇在沙發(fā)下仔細(xì)聞了聞,沒有發(fā)現(xiàn)金格斯先生的蹤跡。接著,我們又去了臥室,它在床底、衣柜旁認(rèn)真尋找,依舊一無所獲。最后,芒奇把我?guī)У搅说叵率业拈T口,它用爪子不停地?fù)祥T,發(fā)出急切的叫聲。我打開門,和它一起小心翼翼地走下去。地下室光線昏暗,彌漫著一股陳舊的味道。芒奇在地下室里轉(zhuǎn)了一圈,突然停在一個(gè)舊箱子前,興奮地叫了起來。我打開箱子,發(fā)現(xiàn)金格斯先生正蜷縮在里面,可戒指卻不在它身邊。我有些失望,心想難道我們找錯(cuò)方向了?但我還是沒有放棄,我仔細(xì)觀察著金格斯先生,發(fā)現(xiàn)它的爪子上好像沾了一些面粉。我靈機(jī)一動(dòng),說不定戒指還在廚房里,只是我們剛才沒有找對(duì)地方。于是,我?guī)е⑵嬗只氐搅藦N房。10續(xù)寫思路分析Paragraph2:IwasabouttogiveupwhenItookabiteofthewarmcookieMomhandedme.我正要放棄的時(shí)候,媽媽遞給我一塊熱乎乎的餅干,我咬了一口。突然,我感覺嘴里有個(gè)硬邦邦的東西,吐出來一看,竟然是媽媽的鉆石戒指!我驚訝地看著媽媽,媽媽也一臉詫異。原來,金格斯先生把戒指帶到了廚房,在媽媽做餅干的時(shí)候,戒指不小心掉進(jìn)了面粉里,然后隨著面粉一起被做成了餅干。我笑著對(duì)媽媽說:“雖然過程曲折,但我們終究還是找到了戒指。”媽媽欣慰地笑了,她抱起芒奇,夸獎(jiǎng)它是個(gè)了不起的小助手。我也對(duì)芒奇豎起了大拇指,感謝它在這次尋找戒指的過程中發(fā)揮了重要作用。通過這次經(jīng)歷,我更加堅(jiān)信只要不放棄,就一定能找到解決問題的辦法。而芒奇也用它的行動(dòng)證明了自己是我最可靠的伙伴。從那以后,每當(dāng)家里再有東西丟失,我和芒奇都會(huì)毫不猶豫地接受任務(wù),開始我們的尋物之旅。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)“Munchy,you'reup!GofindMr.Jingles.”Munchyimmediatelyperkeduphisearsandsniffedtheair,followingthescentofthecatandmovingquickly.Heledmearoundthehouse,searchingeverynookandcranny.First,wewenttothelivingroom.Munchycarefullysniffedunderthesofa,buttherewasnosignofMr.Jingles.Then,wemovedontothebedroom.Hesearchedunderthebedandaroundthewardrobe,yetstillfoundnothing.Finally,Munchyledmetothedoorofthebasement.Hescratchedthedoorwithhispawsandbarkedeagerly.Iopenedthedoorandwewalkeddowncarefullytogether.Thebasementwasdimlylitandfilledwithamustysmell.Munchycircledaroundthebasement.Suddenly,hestoppedinfrontofanoldboxandbarkedexcitedly.IopenedtheboxandfoundMr.Jinglescurledupinside,buttheringwasnotwithhim.Iwasabitdisappointed.Ithoughtmaybewewereonthewrongtrack.However,Ididn'tgiveup.IobservedMr.Jinglescarefullyandnoticedthatthereseemedtobesomeflouronhispaws.Abrilliantideaflashedthroughmymind.Maybetheringwasstillinthekitchen,butwejustdidn'tlookintherightplacebefore.So,ItookMunchybacktothekitchen.13范文呈現(xiàn)IwasabouttogiveupwhenItookabiteofthewarmcookieMomhandedme.Suddenly,Ifeltsomethinghardinmymouth.Ispatitoutandtomysurprise,itwasMom'sdiamondring!IlookedatMominastonishment,andshehadalookofsurpriseonherfacetoo.ItturnedoutthatMr.Jingleshadbroughttheringtothekitchen.WhileMomwasmakingcookies,theringaccidentallyfellintotheflourandthenwasmadeintoacookiealongwiththeflour.IsmiledandsaidtoMom,"Althoughitwasalongandwindingprocess,wefinallyfoundthering."Momsmiledwithrelief.ShepickedupMunchyandpraisedhimforbeingawonderfullittlehelper.IalsogaveMunchyathumbs-upandthankedhimforplayinganimportantroleinthisring-findingprocess.Throughthisexperience,Ibecameevenmoreconvincedthataslongaswedon'tgiveup,wewilldefinitelyfindawaytosolvetheproblem.AndMunchyprovedwithhisactionsthatheismymostreliablepartner.Sincethen,wheneversomethingislostathome,MunchyandIwillnothesitatetotakeonthetaskandstartourtreasure-huntingjourney.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)“Munchy,you'reup!GofindMr.Jingles.”Atmycommand,Munchyinstantlyprickeduphisears,hisnosetwitchingashecaughtthefaintscentofthecat.Withgreatdetermination,hesetoff,leadingmeonathoroughsearchthroughoutthehouse.Wefirstmadeourwaytothelivingroom.Munchycroucheddown,hisnoseclosetothegroundashesniffedintentlyunderthesofa,buttherewasnotraceofMr.Jingles.Undeterred,wethenmovedtothebedroom.Heexploredeveryinchunderthebedandaroundthewardrobe,yethiseffortsyieldednoresults.Finally,Munchy'snoseguidedustothedoorofthebasement.Hepawedatthedoorrelentlessly,barkingexcitedly.Iopenedthedoor,andtogether,wedescendedintothedimly-lit,mustybasement.Munchycircledaroundthespace,andthen,abruptly,hestoppedinfrontofanoldbox,barkingwithenthusiasm.IopenedtheboxandfoundMr.Jinglescurledupinside,butthepreciousringwasnowheretobeseen.Disappointmentwashedoverme,andIbegantodoubtourapproach.However,Irefusedtogiveup.AsIexaminedMr.Jinglesclosely,Inoticedtracesofflouronhispaws.Asparkofinspirationhitme.Perhapstheringwasstillinthekitchen;wejusthadn'tsearchedintherightspot.So,IturnedaroundandledMunchybacktothekitchen.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)IwasabouttogiveupwhenItookabiteofthewarmcookieMomhandedme.Allofasudden,Ifeltahardobjectinmymouth.Ispatitout,andtomyutteramazement,itwasMom'sdiamondring!IstaredatMomindisbelief,andherfacemirroredmyshock.ItdawnedonusthatMr.Jingleshadcarriedtheringintothekitchen,andduringMom'scookie-makingprocess,theringhadinadvertentlyfalleninto
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