高考英語讀后續寫語篇練習《“尋物高手”：與伙伴尋找媽媽丟失的鉆石戒指》1題目分析讀后續寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續寫原文I'mFranklinG.Takata,betterknownas“Find-ItFrankie”duetomyexceptionaltrackingabilities.Iwillsaythatthere'snothingoutthereIcan'tfind.Iamfortunatetohavealoyalandskilledpartner,Munchy,bymyside.Hewasselectedespeciallyformefromananimalshelterbymyparentsontheoccasionofmyfifthbirthday.OneThursdayafternoon,MunchyandIwereplayinginthegardenwhenMomrevealedthathercherisheddiamondringhaddisappeared,entrustinguswiththetaskoflocatingit.HadIknownhowtrickythecasewouldbe,Imighthavethoughttwice.ButIsaidthenasI'dsaytoday,“Iassureyouthatthere'snothingwecan'tlocate!"4續寫原文Wheneveranitemdisappears,myinitialinquirytoMomis,“Doyourecallthelastplaceyousawit?"“Iwasoccupiedmakingcookiesinthekitchen,”Momreplied,“whenIremovedmyringandsetitonthecounter.However,aftertakingacallfromyouraunt,Ireturnedtodiscovertheringmissing!"“Hmm.Well,itcouldn'thavedisappearedallbyitself,"Isaid.“Munchy,let'sgotakeacloserlook."Munchyledthewaytothekitchen.Thecounterborenoindicationofthering'swhereabouts(下落);however,theflourbetrayedfaintpawprints,whichpointedtowardthecriminal'sidentity.“Thecat”Isaid.“Mr.Jinglesmusthavebeenplayingwiththering,causingittodroptotheground!”Crawlingonthefloor,Isearchedhighandlowforthering.Myeffortswereinvain.5段首句Paragraph1:“Munchy,you'reup!GofindMr.Jingles.”__Paragraph2:IwasabouttogiveupwhenItookabiteofthewarmcookieMomhandedme.6Part2題目分析7續寫原文分析8富蘭克林?G?高田因出色的追蹤能力被稱為“尋物高手弗蘭基”，他有個忠誠又能干的伙伴芒奇。一個周四下午，他和芒奇在花園玩耍時，媽媽說她心愛的鉆石戒指不見了，便委托他們尋找。弗蘭基自信滿滿地答應下來。他詢問媽媽最后一次看到戒指的地方，媽媽說在廚房做餅干時把戒指放在了柜臺上，接了個電話回來就發現戒指不見了。弗蘭基和芒奇來到廚房，柜臺上沒有戒指的蹤跡，但面粉上有淡淡的爪印，指向了“嫌疑人”——貓金格斯先生。弗蘭基認為金格斯先生可能在玩耍時把戒指弄到了地上，于是他在地板上四處尋找，卻一無所獲。點1：位于續寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續寫第二段段首，續寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節構建的重點9續寫思路分析Paragraph1:“Munchy,you'reup!GofindMr.Jingles.”“芒奇，該你上場了！去找金格斯先生。”芒奇立刻豎起耳朵，鼻子在空中嗅來嗅去，順著貓的氣味迅速行動起來。它帶著我在屋子里四處搜尋，不放過任何一個角落。我們先來到了客廳，芒奇在沙發下仔細聞了聞，沒有發現金格斯先生的蹤跡。接著，我們又去了臥室，它在床底、衣柜旁認真尋找，依舊一無所獲。最后，芒奇把我帶到了地下室的門口，它用爪子不停地撓門，發出急切的叫聲。我打開門，和它一起小心翼翼地走下去。地下室光線昏暗，彌漫著一股陳舊的味道。芒奇在地下室里轉了一圈，突然停在一個舊箱子前，興奮地叫了起來。我打開箱子，發現金格斯先生正蜷縮在里面，可戒指卻不在它身邊。我有些失望，心想難道我們找錯方向了？但我還是沒有放棄，我仔細觀察著金格斯先生，發現它的爪子上好像沾了一些面粉。我靈機一動，說不定戒指還在廚房里，只是我們剛才沒有找對地方。于是，我帶著芒奇又回到了廚房。10續寫思路分析Paragraph2:IwasabouttogiveupwhenItookabiteofthewarmcookieMomhandedme.我正要放棄的時候，媽媽遞給我一塊熱乎乎的餅干，我咬了一口。突然，我感覺嘴里有個硬邦邦的東西，吐出來一看，竟然是媽媽的鉆石戒指！我驚訝地看著媽媽，媽媽也一臉詫異。原來，金格斯先生把戒指帶到了廚房，在媽媽做餅干的時候，戒指不小心掉進了面粉里，然后隨著面粉一起被做成了餅干。我笑著對媽媽說：“雖然過程曲折，但我們終究還是找到了戒指。”媽媽欣慰地笑了，她抱起芒奇，夸獎它是個了不起的小助手。我也對芒奇豎起了大拇指，感謝它在這次尋找戒指的過程中發揮了重要作用。通過這次經歷，我更加堅信只要不放棄，就一定能找到解決問題的辦法。而芒奇也用它的行動證明了自己是我最可靠的伙伴。從那以后，每當家里再有東西丟失，我和芒奇都會毫不猶豫地接受任務，開始我們的尋物之旅。11Part3范文呈現12范文呈現“Munchy,you'reup!GofindMr.Jingles.”Munchyimmediatelyperkeduphisearsandsniffedtheair,followingthescentofthecatandmovingquickly.Heledmearoundthehouse,searchingeverynookandcranny.First,wewenttothelivingroom.Munchycarefullysniffedunderthesofa,buttherewasnosignofMr.Jingles.Then,wemovedontothebedroom.Hesearchedunderthebedandaroundthewardrobe,yetstillfoundnothing.Finally,Munchyledmetothedoorofthebasement.Hescratchedthedoorwithhispawsandbarkedeagerly.Iopenedthedoorandwewalkeddowncarefullytogether.Thebasementwasdimlylitandfilledwithamustysmell.Munchycircledaroundthebasement.Suddenly,hestoppedinfrontofanoldboxandbarkedexcitedly.IopenedtheboxandfoundMr.Jinglescurledupinside,buttheringwasnotwithhim.Iwasabitdisappointed.Ithoughtmaybewewereonthewrongtrack.However,Ididn'tgiveup.IobservedMr.Jinglescarefullyandnoticedthatthereseemedtobesomeflouronhispaws.Abrilliantideaflashedthroughmymind.Maybetheringwasstillinthekitchen,butwejustdidn'tlookintherightplacebefore.So,ItookMunchybacktothekitchen.13范文呈現IwasabouttogiveupwhenItookabiteofthewarmcookieMomhandedme.Suddenly,Ifeltsomethinghardinmymouth.Ispatitoutandtomysurprise,itwasMom'sdiamondring!IlookedatMominastonishment,andshehadalookofsurpriseonherfacetoo.ItturnedoutthatMr.Jingleshadbroughttheringtothekitchen.WhileMomwasmakingcookies,theringaccidentallyfellintotheflourandthenwasmadeintoacookiealongwiththeflour.IsmiledandsaidtoMom,"Althoughitwasalongandwindingprocess,wefinallyfoundthering."Momsmiledwithrelief.ShepickedupMunchyandpraisedhimforbeingawonderfullittlehelper.IalsogaveMunchyathumbs-upandthankedhimforplayinganimportantroleinthisring-findingprocess.Throughthisexperience,Ibecameevenmoreconvincedthataslongaswedon'tgiveup,wewilldefinitelyfindawaytosolvetheproblem.AndMunchyprovedwithhisactionsthatheismymostreliablepartner.Sincethen,wheneversomethingislostathome,MunchyandIwillnothesitatetotakeonthetaskandstartourtreasure-huntingjourney.14升級版范文呈現“Munchy,you'reup!GofindMr.Jingles.”Atmycommand,Munchyinstantlyprickeduphisears,hisnosetwitchingashecaughtthefaintscentofthecat.Withgreatdetermination,hesetoff,leadingmeonathoroughsearchthroughoutthehouse.Wefirstmadeourwaytothelivingroom.Munchycroucheddown,hisnoseclosetothegroundashesniffedintentlyunderthesofa,buttherewasnotraceofMr.Jingles.Undeterred,wethenmovedtothebedroom.Heexploredeveryinchunderthebedandaroundthewardrobe,yethiseffortsyieldednoresults.Finally,Munchy'snoseguidedustothedoorofthebasement.Hepawedatthedoorrelentlessly,barkingexcitedly.Iopenedthedoor,andtogether,wedescendedintothedimly-lit,mustybasement.Munchycircledaroundthespace,andthen,abruptly,hestoppedinfrontofanoldbox,barkingwithenthusiasm.IopenedtheboxandfoundMr.Jinglescurledupinside,butthepreciousringwasnowheretobeseen.Disappointmentwashedoverme,andIbegantodoubtourapproach.However,Irefusedtogiveup.AsIexaminedMr.Jinglesclosely,Inoticedtracesofflouronhispaws.Asparkofinspirationhitme.Perhapstheringwasstillinthekitchen;wejusthadn'tsearchedintherightspot.So,IturnedaroundandledMunchybacktothekitchen.15升級版范文呈現IwasabouttogiveupwhenItookabiteofthewarmcookieMomhandedme.Allofasudden,Ifeltahardobjectinmymouth.Ispatitout,andtomyutteramazement,itwasMom'sdiamondring!IstaredatMomindisbelief,andherfacemirroredmyshock.ItdawnedonusthatMr.Jingleshadcarriedtheringintothekitchen,andduringMom'scookie-makingprocess,theringhadinadvertentlyfalleninto