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高考英語讀后續寫語篇練習《“尋物高手”:與伙伴尋找媽媽丟失的鉆石戒指》1題目分析讀后續寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續寫原文I'mFranklinG.Takata,betterknownas“Find-ItFrankie”duetomyexceptionaltrackingabilities.Iwillsaythatthere'snothingoutthereIcan'tfind.Iamfortunatetohavealoyalandskilledpartner,Munchy,bymyside.Hewasselectedespeciallyformefromananimalshelterbymyparentsontheoccasionofmyfifthbirthday.OneThursdayafternoon,MunchyandIwereplayinginthegardenwhenMomrevealedthathercherisheddiamondringhaddisappeared,entrustinguswiththetaskoflocatingit.HadIknownhowtrickythecasewouldbe,Imighthavethoughttwice.ButIsaidthenasI'dsaytoday,“Iassureyouthatthere'snothingwecan'tlocate!"4續寫原文Wheneveranitemdisappears,myinitialinquirytoMomis,“Doyourecallthelastplaceyousawit?"“Iwasoccupiedmakingcookiesinthekitchen,”Momreplied,“whenIremovedmyringandsetitonthecounter.However,aftertakingacallfromyouraunt,Ireturnedtodiscovertheringmissing!"“Hmm.Well,itcouldn'thavedisappearedallbyitself,"Isaid.“Munchy,let'sgotakeacloserlook."Munchyledthewaytothekitchen.Thecounterborenoindicationofthering'swhereabouts(下落);however,theflourbetrayedfaintpawprints,whichpointedtowardthecriminal'sidentity.“Thecat”Isaid.“Mr.Jinglesmusthavebeenplayingwiththering,causingittodroptotheground!”Crawlingonthefloor,Isearchedhighandlowforthering.Myeffortswereinvain.5段首句Paragraph1:“Munchy,you'reup!GofindMr.Jingles.”__Paragraph2:IwasabouttogiveupwhenItookabiteofthewarmcookieMomhandedme.6Part2題目分析7續寫原文分析8富蘭克林?G?高田因出色的追蹤能力被稱為“尋物高手弗蘭基”,他有個忠誠又能干的伙伴芒奇。一個周四下午,他和芒奇在花園玩耍時,媽媽說她心愛的鉆石戒指不見了,便委托他們尋找。弗蘭基自信滿滿地答應下來。他詢問媽媽最后一次看到戒指的地方,媽媽說在廚房做餅干時把戒指放在了柜臺上,接了個電話回來就發現戒指不見了。弗蘭基和芒奇來到廚房,柜臺上沒有戒指的蹤跡,但面粉上有淡淡的爪印,指向了“嫌疑人”——貓金格斯先生。弗蘭基認為金格斯先生可能在玩耍時把戒指弄到了地上,于是他在地板上四處尋找,卻一無所獲。點1:位于續寫第一段段首,流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語;點2:位于續寫第一段段尾,流暢銜接第二段段首句;點3:位于續寫第二段段首,續寫銜接第二段段首語;點4:文章結尾升華,給予讀者正能量,揭示和強調主題。情節構建的重點9續寫思路分析Paragraph1:“Munchy,you'reup!GofindMr.Jingles.”“芒奇,該你上場了!去找金格斯先生。”芒奇立刻豎起耳朵,鼻子在空中嗅來嗅去,順著貓的氣味迅速行動起來。它帶著我在屋子里四處搜尋,不放過任何一個角落。我們先來到了客廳,芒奇在沙發下仔細聞了聞,沒有發現金格斯先生的蹤跡。接著,我們又去了臥室,它在床底、衣柜旁認真尋找,依舊一無所獲。最后,芒奇把我帶到了地下室的門口,它用爪子不停地撓門,發出急切的叫聲。我打開門,和它一起小心翼翼地走下去。地下室光線昏暗,彌漫著一股陳舊的味道。芒奇在地下室里轉了一圈,突然停在一個舊箱子前,興奮地叫了起來。我打開箱子,發現金格斯先生正蜷縮在里面,可戒指卻不在它身邊。我有些失望,心想難道我們找錯方向了?但我還是沒有放棄,我仔細觀察著金格斯先生,發現它的爪子上好像沾了一些面粉。我靈機一動,說不定戒指還在廚房里,只是我們剛才沒有找對地方。于是,我帶著芒奇又回到了廚房。10續寫思路分析Paragraph2:IwasabouttogiveupwhenItookabiteofthewarmcookieMomhandedme.我正要放棄的時候,媽媽遞給我一塊熱乎乎的餅干,我咬了一口。突然,我感覺嘴里有個硬邦邦的東西,吐出來一看,竟然是媽媽的鉆石戒指!我驚訝地看著媽媽,媽媽也一臉詫異。原來,金格斯先生把戒指帶到了廚房,在媽媽做餅干的時候,戒指不小心掉進了面粉里,然后隨著面粉一起被做成了餅干。我笑著對媽媽說:“雖然過程曲折,但我們終究還是找到了戒指。”媽媽欣慰地笑了,她抱起芒奇,夸獎它是個了不起的小助手。我也對芒奇豎起了大拇指,感謝它在這次尋找戒指的過程中發揮了重要作用。通過這次經歷,我更加堅信只要不放棄,就一定能找到解決問題的辦法。而芒奇也用它的行動證明了自己是我最可靠的伙伴。從那以后,每當家里再有東西丟失,我和芒奇都會毫不猶豫地接受任務,開始我們的尋物之旅。11Part3范文呈現12范文呈現“Munchy,you'reup!GofindMr.Jingles.”Munchyimmediatelyperkeduphisearsandsniffedtheair,followingthescentofthecatandmovingquickly.Heledmearoundthehouse,searchingeverynookandcranny.First,wewenttothelivingroom.Munchycarefullysniffedunderthesofa,buttherewasnosignofMr.Jingles.Then,wemovedontothebedroom.Hesearchedunderthebedandaroundthewardrobe,yetstillfoundnothing.Finally,Munchyledmetothedoorofthebasement.Hescratchedthedoorwithhispawsandbarkedeagerly.Iopenedthedoorandwewalkeddowncarefullytogether.Thebasementwasdimlylitandfilledwithamustysmell.Munchycircledaroundthebasement.Suddenly,hestoppedinfrontofanoldboxandbarkedexcitedly.IopenedtheboxandfoundMr.Jinglescurledupinside,buttheringwasnotwithhim.Iwasabitdisappointed.Ithoughtmaybewewereonthewrongtrack.However,Ididn'tgiveup.IobservedMr.Jinglescarefullyandnoticedthatthereseemedtobesomeflouronhispaws.Abrilliantideaflashedthroughmymind.Maybetheringwasstillinthekitchen,butwejustdidn'tlookintherightplacebefore.So,ItookMunchybacktothekitchen.13范文呈現IwasabouttogiveupwhenItookabiteofthewarmcookieMomhandedme.Suddenly,Ifeltsomethinghardinmymouth.Ispatitoutandtomysurprise,itwasMom'sdiamondring!IlookedatMominastonishment,andshehadalookofsurpriseonherfacetoo.ItturnedoutthatMr.Jingleshadbroughttheringtothekitchen.WhileMomwasmakingcookies,theringaccidentallyfellintotheflourandthenwasmadeintoacookiealongwiththeflour.IsmiledandsaidtoMom,"Althoughitwasalongandwindingprocess,wefinallyfoundthering."Momsmiledwithrelief.ShepickedupMunchyandpraisedhimforbeingawonderfullittlehelper.IalsogaveMunchyathumbs-upandthankedhimforplayinganimportantroleinthisring-findingprocess.Throughthisexperience,Ibecameevenmoreconvincedthataslongaswedon'tgiveup,wewilldefinitelyfindawaytosolvetheproblem.AndMunchyprovedwithhisactionsthatheismymostreliablepartner.Sincethen,wheneversomethingislostathome,MunchyandIwillnothesitatetotakeonthetaskandstartourtreasure-huntingjourney.14升級版范文呈現“Munchy,you'reup!GofindMr.Jingles.”Atmycommand,Munchyinstantlyprickeduphisears,hisnosetwitchingashecaughtthefaintscentofthecat.Withgreatdetermination,hesetoff,leadingmeonathoroughsearchthroughoutthehouse.Wefirstmadeourwaytothelivingroom.Munchycroucheddown,hisnoseclosetothegroundashesniffedintentlyunderthesofa,buttherewasnotraceofMr.Jingles.Undeterred,wethenmovedtothebedroom.Heexploredeveryinchunderthebedandaroundthewardrobe,yethiseffortsyieldednoresults.Finally,Munchy'snoseguidedustothedoorofthebasement.Hepawedatthedoorrelentlessly,barkingexcitedly.Iopenedthedoor,andtogether,wedescendedintothedimly-lit,mustybasement.Munchycircledaroundthespace,andthen,abruptly,hestoppedinfrontofanoldbox,barkingwithenthusiasm.IopenedtheboxandfoundMr.Jinglescurledupinside,butthepreciousringwasnowheretobeseen.Disappointmentwashedoverme,andIbegantodoubtourapproach.However,Irefusedtogiveup.AsIexaminedMr.Jinglesclosely,Inoticedtracesofflouronhispaws.Asparkofinspirationhitme.Perhapstheringwasstillinthekitchen;wejusthadn'tsearchedintherightspot.So,IturnedaroundandledMunchybacktothekitchen.15升級版范文呈現IwasabouttogiveupwhenItookabiteofthewarmcookieMomhandedme.Allofasudden,Ifeltahardobjectinmymouth.Ispatitout,andtomyutteramazement,itwasMom'sdiamondring!IstaredatMomindisbelief,andherfacemirroredmyshock.ItdawnedonusthatMr.Jingleshadcarriedtheringintothekitchen,andduringMom'scookie-makingprocess,theringhadinadvertentlyfalleninto

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