高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)從低谷到逆襲：賽場(chǎng)的信心之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文MyheartbeatfastasIwalkedontothefieldforthestatecupfinals.Theairpoppedwithamixofexcitementandnervousness-afeelingIknewwell.Butthistimewasdifferent.Theaudiencewereeverywhereandthisaddedalayerofpressure,twistingmystomachintoaknot.Withawhistlethatbrokethetensesilence,thegamebegan.Theballcamestraighttome.Idroveforward,slippedaroundadefender,andlostit.Ontheverynextplay,Igaveitstraightawayagain.Myconfidence,onceasteadyflame,begantoweaken.Determinednottorepeatthemistake,Iplayeditsafenexttimeandpasseditback.Barelyevenontarget,Iwaslosingit.Icouldfeelothers’eyesburningintothebackofmyhead.4續(xù)寫原文Byhalftime,thescorewasafrustrating0-0.Exhaustedanddiscouraged,Ijustwantedthefinalwhistletoblow.Thesecondhalfkickedoff,offeringachancetoturnthingsaround.Butmystrugglescontinued.AsIranupthefield,theballfoundmyfootagain.Yet,insteadofacleanpass,Imishititstraighttoadefender.Defeatfloodedme.Ionlymadesafepasses,desperatenottomakeanothermistake.Then,threesharpblows.Overtime(加時(shí)賽).Myheartsank.HowcouldIpossiblyfaceanothertoughperiod,withthisself-doubtweighingmedown?Onmywaytothelockerroom(更衣室),mylegsfeltheavylikeleadweights.TheusualenthusiasmIhadwhenplayingwasreplacedbyself-doubt.5段首句Paragraph1：AsIwalkedintothelockerroom,mycoachcameuptome.Paragraph2：Thewhistleblewforovertime,andIraceddownthefield,hopeinmychest.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8“我”帶著緊張與興奮踏上州杯決賽賽場(chǎng)，觀眾的存在讓壓力倍增。比賽開始后，“我”接連失誤，信心受挫。上半場(chǎng)0:0結(jié)束，下半場(chǎng)“我”依舊表現(xiàn)不佳，頻繁犯錯(cuò)。進(jìn)入加時(shí)賽，“我”滿心沮喪，對(duì)自己充滿懷疑。就在這時(shí)，轉(zhuǎn)機(jī)出現(xiàn)。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：AsIwalkedintothelockerroom,mycoachcameuptome.當(dāng)我走進(jìn)更衣室，教練徑直向我走來。他目光堅(jiān)定地看著我，有力的手重重地搭在我的肩膀上，說道：“孩子，別讓這幾個(gè)失誤就把你打倒。你要知道自己是多么優(yōu)秀的球員，平時(shí)訓(xùn)練付出的汗水可不能白費(fèi)。現(xiàn)在正是你證明自己的時(shí)候，大膽去踢，相信自己的實(shí)力！”教練的話如同一劑強(qiáng)心針，讓我原本消沉的心漸漸燃起希望。我開始回想平日里刻苦訓(xùn)練的場(chǎng)景，那些無數(shù)次的跌倒又爬起，不就是為了今天嗎？我在心里暗暗發(fā)誓，一定要振作起來。我抬起頭，目光堅(jiān)定地看著教練，用力地點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Thewhistleblewforovertime,andIraceddownthefield,hopeinmychest.加時(shí)賽的哨聲響起，我?guī)е鴿M腔的希望沖向球場(chǎng)。這一次，我不再畏手畏腳。當(dāng)球來到我腳下，我迅速觀察場(chǎng)上局勢(shì)，果斷起腳傳球，精準(zhǔn)地找到了隊(duì)友。隨后，我積極跑位，參與每一次進(jìn)攻與防守。在一次激烈的拼搶中，我成功斷球，一路帶球突破，面對(duì)對(duì)方防守隊(duì)員，我巧妙地晃過對(duì)手，起腳射門。球在空中劃過一道漂亮的弧線，直入網(wǎng)窩。隊(duì)友們歡呼著向我跑來，那一刻，我找回了曾經(jīng)的自信與榮耀。這場(chǎng)比賽不僅是一場(chǎng)競(jìng)技的較量，更是我戰(zhàn)勝自我的征程。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)AsIwalkedintothelockerroom,mycoachcameuptome.Hefixedhiseyesonmefirmlyandplacedhisstronghandonmyshoulder."Don'tletthesefewmistakesdefeatyou,"hesaid."Youareanexcellentplayer.Allthehardworkyou'vedoneintrainingshouldn'tbeinvain.Thisisthetimeforyoutoproveyourself.Playbravelyandtrustyourcapabilities!"Hiswordswerelikeapowerfulboosttomydiscouragedheart.Istartedtorecallthescenesofmyhardtrainingdays,thosecountlesstimesoffallingandgettingup,allforthismoment.IsworetomyselfthatImustcheerup.Ilookedupatmycoachwithdeterminationandnoddedvigorously.13范文呈現(xiàn)Thewhistleblewforovertime,andIraceddownthefield,hopeinmychest.Thistime,Iwasnolongerhesitant.Whentheballcametomyfeet,Iquicklyobservedthesituationonthefieldandpassedtheballdecisively,accuratelyfindingmyteammate.Then,Iactivelymovedaround,participatingineveryattackanddefense.Inafiercescramble,Isuccessfullyinterceptedtheballanddribbledpasttheopponents.Facingthedefenders,Iskillfullyfakedthemoutandshot.Theballflewthroughtheairinabeautifularcandwentstraightintothenet.Myteammatescheeredandrushedtowardsme.Atthatmoment,Iregainedmyformerconfidenceandglory.Thisgamewasnotonlyacompetitionbutalsoajourneyofmeovercomingmyself.14升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Steppingintothelockerroom,Iwasmetbymycoach,whostrodedirectlytowardsme.Hisgazefixedintentlyonmine,hefirmlyplantedhishandonmyshoulder."Don'tlettheseminorsetbacksdefineyou,"heasserted."You'reanoutstandingplayer.Thecountlesshoursoftoilintrainingweren'tfornaught.Nowisyourmomenttoshine.Playwithcourageandunwaveringbeliefinyourabilities!"Hiswordsresonateddeeply,injectingnewfoundstrengthintomydisheartenedspirit.Memoriesofmyarduoustrainingsessionsfloodedback-thenumeroustimesI'dstumbledonlytoriseagain,allleadinguptothiscrucialmoment.Resolvesteeledwithinme,Ilookedupatmycoach,eyesablazewithdetermination,andnoddedresolutely.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Withtheresoundingblastoftheovertimewhistle,Ichargedontothefield,hopecoursingthroughmyveins.Gonewasthehesitationofbefore.Themomenttheballnestledatmyfeet,Iswiftlyscannedthefield,makingasplit-seconddecisiontopasswithprecision,connectingflawlesslywithmyteammate.Energized,Idartedacrossthepitch,fullyengagedineveryoffensiveanddefensiveplay.Amidafiercetusslefortheball,Imanagedtointerceptitcleanlyand,withaburstofspeed,dribbledpasttheopposition.Closinginonthegoal,Iexecutedadeftfeint,leavingthedefendersinmywake,andunleashedapowerfulshot.Theballsoaredthroughtheairinagracefularc,findingthebackofthenetwithasatisfyingthud.Inaninstant,myteammatesconvergedaroundme,theircheersechoingacrossthestadium.Inthatgloriousmoment,Ireclaimedmy