高考英語讀后續寫語篇練習車站失散：焦急尋找弟弟的簡妮絲1題目分析讀后續寫題目再現范文呈現努力方向2Part1題目呈現3續寫原文“Whereisit?We’regoingtobelate!”Janicesearchedthehousecrazilyforherwallet.“Josh!Didyouhidemywallet?WehavetobeatGrandpa’sforhisbirthdayparty!”Josh,Janice’sfour-year-oldyoungerbrother,smiledinnocentlyather,buthiscunning(狡黠的)eyesgavehimselfaway.Shetriedherbestnottoshout.Grinning(咧嘴笑)likeacat,Joshreachedunderthesofa,pulledoutherwalletandhelditoverhishead.Janicegrabbedit.Tenminuteslater,theyhurriedtothetrainstation.Red-facedandsweating,JaniceletgoofJosh’swristandremovedthesweatfromherforehead.Thetrainarrived.Hersmilefrozewhensherealizedthatthetrainwaspackedwithpassengers.GrabbingJosh’shand,Janiceboardedthetrain.Shecommanded,“Thetrain’sreallycrowded,Josh.Behaveyourself,stickclosetome,andnomonkeybusiness!”Joshnodded,holdingtightlytoarail.Janicesmiled.4續寫原文Whenitwastimetogetoffthetrain,Janicequicklypushedherwaythroughthecrowdtogetontotheplatform.“Wemadeit!”Janicesaid,turningaround.Joshwasnowheretobeseen.Thecrowdwasfloodingout,butJoshwasnotamongthem.“Thetraindoorsareclosing,”thencametheelectronicvoice.Soon,thecrowdontheplatformdieddown.ThelastthingJanicesawwasJosh’slittleanxiousfaceatthetrainwindow:JustasJanicewasabouttocalloutJosh’sname,thetraindisappearedfromview.“Josh!”Janicescreamed.5續寫原文Janice’smindwastransportedbacktowhenshewaslostatthezoo.Shecouldstillvividlyrememberthetoweringfiguressurroundingherandnoneofthemwere’familiar.“Idon’twantJoshtogothroughthatsamebitterexperience,”Janiceletoutasigh.Janicetookouthermobilephone,readytocallhermother.However,midway,shedecidedagainstit.Hermother,whowasfarawayinFranceonbusiness,coulddonothingbutgetrestless.Janicepacedupanddowntheplatformanxiously.6段首句Paragraph1：Justthen,Janicereceivedacallfromanunknownnumber.Paragraph2：Havingwavedgoodbyetothelady,theyheadedfortheirdestination.7Part2題目分析8續寫原文分析9簡妮絲為參加爺爺生日派對匆忙找錢包，調皮的弟弟喬什藏起錢包后與她前往車站。車站人多擁擠，上火車時簡妮絲叮囑喬什跟緊。下車時簡妮絲擠出人群卻發現喬什不見，只看到火車窗口喬什焦急的臉后火車駛離。簡妮絲回憶起自己曾在動物園走失的經歷，為不讓喬什重蹈覆轍，她決定不告知在法國出差的母親，獨自在站臺焦急踱步，內心充滿擔憂與不安，不知如何找回弟弟。點1：位于續寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續寫第二段段首，續寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節構建的重點10續寫思路分析Para1：Justthen,Janicereceivedacallfromanunknownnumber.就在這時，簡妮絲接到了一個陌生號碼來電。她的心猛地一緊，心想會不會是和喬什有關。她急忙接起電話：“喂？”電話那頭傳來一個溫柔的女性聲音：“你好，請問是簡妮絲嗎？我在火車站發現了一個小男孩。他好像迷路了，一直在找他的姐姐。我覺得可能是你的弟弟?！焙喣萁z如釋重負，眼眶瞬間濕潤了?！芭?，天哪，是的！你在哪里？他怎么樣？”電話里的女士回答道：“我們在車站的服務臺。他有點害怕，但沒有受傷。”簡妮絲立刻以最快的速度沖向服務臺，腦海里不斷浮現出和喬什重逢的畫面。11續寫思路分析Para2：Havingwavedgoodbyetothelady,theyheadedfortheirdestination.向那位女士揮手道別后，他們朝著目的地出發。簡妮絲緊緊地握住喬什的手，一刻也不想松開。她輕聲責備道：“你可把我嚇壞了，喬什。別再這樣亂跑了?！眴淌蔡痤^，用那雙充滿懊悔的大眼睛看著她，點了點頭。他們加快腳步，彌補之前耽誤的時間。一路上，簡妮絲不停地查看喬什是否還在自己身邊。當他們終于趕到爺爺的生日派對時，大家都對他們的遲到感到驚訝。簡妮絲迅速解釋了事情的經過，一家人圍攏過來，紛紛給予喬什關愛與擁抱。簡妮絲看著這一幕，心中滿是感激，慶幸這場風波終于過去，一家人又團聚在一起了。12Part3范文呈現13范文呈現Justthen,Janicereceivedacallfromanunknownnumber.Herheartskippedabeat,hopingitwasrelatedtoJosh.Shequicklyanswered,"Hello?"Akindfemalevoicecamethrough,"Hi,isthisJanice?Ifoundalittleboyatthetrainstation.Heseemstobelostandkeepsaskingforhissister.Ithinkitmightbeyourbrother."Janice'seyesfilledwithtearsofrelief."Ohmygod,yes!Whereareyou?Isheokay?"Theladyonthephonereplied,"We'reatthestation'sinformationdesk.He'sabitscaredbutunharmed."Janicerushedtowardstheinformationdeskasfastasshecould,hermindracingwiththoughtsoffinallybeingreunitedwithJosh.14范文呈現Havingwavedgoodbyetothelady,theyheadedfortheirdestination.JaniceheldJosh'shandtightly,notwantingtoletgoeveragain.Shescoldedhimgently,"Youscaredmesomuch,Josh.Don'trunofflikethatagain."Joshlookedupatherwithbig,remorsefuleyesandnodded.Theywalkedbriskly,makingupforthelosttime.Alongtheway,JanicekeptcheckingonJosh,makingsurehewasstillbyherside.WhentheyfinallyarrivedatGrandpa'sbirthdayparty,everyonewassurprisedbytheirlatearrival.Janicequicklyexplainedwhathadhappened,andthefamilygatheredaroundJosh,showeringhimwithloveandhugs.Janicewatched,gratefulthattheordealwasoverandthattheywerealltogetheragain.15升級版范文呈現Justthen,Janicereceivedacallfromanunknownnumber,herheartpoundingwithanticipation,forshehopeditwasrelatedtoJosh.Swiftlyanswering,"Hello?"cameakindfemalevoice,"Hi,isthisJanice?Ifoundalittleboyatthetrainstation,whoseemslostandkeepsaskingforhissister.Isuspectitmightbeyourbrother."Janice'seyes,filledwithtearsofrelief,exclaimed,"Ohmygod,yes!Whereareyou?Isheokay?"Theladyonthephonereplied,"We'reatthestation'sinformationdesk.He'sabitscaredbutunharmed."Janicerushedtowardstheinformationdeskasfastasherlegscouldcarryher,hermindracingwiththoughtsoffinallyreunitingwithJosh.16升級版范文呈現Havingwavedgoodbyetothelady,theysetofffortheirdestination.JanicegraspedJosh'shandtightly,vowingnevertoletgoagain.Gentlyscoldinghim,shesaid,"Youscaredmesomuch,Josh.Neverrunofflikethatagain."Josh,withbig,