讀后續寫2020.6山東（新高考）:爆米花救助窮人11分鐘確立中立+情節2萬能情境表達公式34核對與糾正目錄CONTENTS1分鐘快速閱讀2020山東試題再現歷年高考英語讀后續寫真題分析1.TheMeredithfamilylivedinasmallcommunity．Astheeconomywasindecline，somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs．Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet．Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges．2.Mrs.Meredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman．Shespentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor．Sheknewtheyhadproblems，andtheyneededallkindsofhelp．Whenshehadtime，shewouldbringfoodandmedicinetothem．3.Onemorningshetoldherchildrenaboutafamilyshehadvisitedthedaybefore．Therewasamansickinbed，hiswife，whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork，andtheirlittleboy．Thelittleboy﹣hisnamewasBernard﹣hadinterestedherverymuch．4."Iwishyoucouldseehim，"shesaidtoherownchildren，John，Harry，andClara．"Heissuchahelptohismother．Hewantsverymuchtoearnsomemoney，butIdon'tseewhathecando．"5.Aftertheirmotherlefttheroom，thechildrensatthinkingaboutBernard．"Iwishwecouldhelphimtoearnmoney，"saidClara．"Hisfamilyissufferingsomuch．"6."SodoI，"saidHarry．"Wereallyshoulddosomethingtoassistthem．"7.Forsomemoments，Johnsaidnothing，but，suddenly，hesprangtohisfeetandcried，"Ihaveagreatidea!Ihaveasolutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish（完成）．"8.Theotherchildrenalsojumpedupallattention．WhenJohnhadanidea，itwassuretobeagoodone．"Itellyouwhatwecando，"saidJohn．"YouknowthatbigboxofcornUncleJohnsentus？Well，wecanmakepopcorn（爆米花），andputitintopaperbags，andBernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsellit．"

WhenMrs．MeredithheardofJohn'sidea，shethoughtitwasagoodone，too._____________________

Witheverythingready，Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.__________________________________11分鐘快讀閱讀忽略無效細節230秒定中心：個人成長關系幫助救助困難330秒7詞定情節大綱：轉折式直線發展式1分鐘快讀讀的快讀得準歷年英語讀后續寫精講01Para.1:

WhenMrs．MeredithheardofJohn'sidea，shethoughtitwasagoodone，too.當Meredith太太聽到了John的主意，她也覺得非常棒。Para.2:Witheverythingready，Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.一切準備就緒，Bernard開始了自己的新生意。獲知：John想出主意，得到Meredith太太的支持，幫助Bernard開始生意。疑問：Bernard有什么困難？新生意是什么？人物關系？（如何幫助？生意進展如何？）

段首句分析1.TheMeredithfamilylivedinasmallcommunity．Astheeconomywasindecline，somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs．Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet．Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges．2.Mrs.Meredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman．Shespentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor．Sheknewtheyhadproblems，andtheyneededallkindsofhelp．Whenshehadtime，shewouldbringfoodandmedicinetothem．3.Onemorningshetoldherchildrenaboutafamilyshehadvisitedthedaybefore．Therewasamansickinbed，hiswife，whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork，andtheirlittleboy．Thelittleboy﹣hisnamewasBernard﹣hadinterestedherverymuch．4."Iwishyoucouldseehim，"shesaidtoherownchildren，John，Harry，andClara．"Heissuchahelptohismother．Hewantsverymuchtoearnsomemoney，butIdon'tseewhathecando．"5.Aftertheirmotherlefttheroom，thechildrensatthinkingaboutBernard．"Iwishwecouldhelphimtoearnmoney，"saidClara．"Hisfamilyissufferingsomuch．"6."SodoI，"saidHarry．"Wereallyshoulddosomethingtoassistthem．"7.Forsomemoments，Johnsaidnothing，but，suddenly，hesprangtohisfeetandcried，"Ihaveagreatidea!Ihaveasolutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish（完成）．"8.Theotherchildrenalsojumpedupallattention．WhenJohnhadanidea，itwassuretobeagoodone．"Itellyouwhatwecando，"saidJohn．"YouknowthatbigboxofcornUncleJohnsentus？Well，wecanmakepopcorn（爆米花），andputitintopaperbags，andBernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsellit．"

WhenMrs．MeredithheardofJohn'sidea，shethoughtitwasagoodone，too._____________________

Witheverythingready，Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.__________________________________1段主題句：段尾句鄰里互助友愛。1段主題句：段首句Meredith太太樂于助人34主題句：Meredith太太講述窮人孩子Bernard的故事5678主題句：

共同想辦法幫助1分鐘快讀忽略無效細節的關鍵心中有中心，目標明確，心無旁騖！！！好主意是什么？新生意是什么？人物關系1分鐘確立中心7詞定情節大綱歷年英語讀后續寫0230秒確定中心個人成長/人與人的關系/幫助/解決困難雙主題合并：幫助孩子的成長故事類型歷年高考英語讀后續寫真題分析矛盾轉折式3個詞：矛盾

轉變誘因

轉變直線上升式

4個詞：行動

進展

結果

升華

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第一段順利發展WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn'sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.

當meredith太太聽說john的主意，她也覺得這是個很棒的主意。行動：準備Theywenttothesupermarkettobuymaterials.

進展：制作爆米花Theybegantomakepopcorn.結果：成功Theymadealotofpopcorn.（銜接）TheytookthepopcorntoBernard’s.Paragraph2Paragraph2：

第二段順利發展Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.一切準備就緒，bernard開始了自己的新生意行動：開始賣爆米花Hewentdoortodoortosellpopcorn.進展：生意狀況Hesoldallthepopcorn.結果：表達感激中心：bernard學會獨立表達感激鄰里和諧愛

John長大懂事歷年高考英語讀后續寫真題分析易跑題陷阱：如何做爆米花？如何賣爆米花？歷年高考英語讀后續寫真題分析03萬能模版拓細節經過了四套真題的講解，相信大家已經對常用模版比較熟悉了，這里復習一下：1情緒心理模版2語言對話模版承接語言模版3動作模版：兩動作連用三動作連用（后面動詞改成非謂語）4簡單敘事模版5混合元素模版：二混合三混合（語言動作心理情緒）6中心模版：強調模版轉折模版7常用銜接模塊8皇冠情緒模塊9短句子的拓展（本句話內）10單一句子變成復合句式經驗總結：1中心>情節>句型>短語>單詞

（中心吻合情節合理通順句子流暢=17分）

（中心吻合情節合理通順句子句式充分=19–21）2中心不模糊3情節不跑題情節大綱簡單通順

（簡單的大綱能幫助我們不跑題更容易套用模版補充細節）4無句型不寫作句型的變化（不熟悉的時候可以把情節大綱和常用句型模版寫到稿紙上）5想著情節配句型邊寫邊考慮句子的長度和飽滿度）從這次課開始，我們正式進入情節的構思指導環節。先解決情節問題，再幫助進行句型模版的套用。句型模版是英文的基礎和水平。情節構思是中文記敘文的寫作水平。因為我們的續寫只有150詞，10–12句，且文章情節簡單，重復性強，因此寫好續寫不是難題。好，馬上開動歷年高考英語讀后續寫真題分析一陌生情境如何構思（直播精講）陌生無思路情境1:怎么為做爆米花做準備？思路舉例：陌生復雜情境日常化，概述化繁為簡怎么準備？去超市購置需要的東西Sotheyheadedto

thelocalsupermarket

togethertomakeprepareationsforthecookingpopcorn，and/wheretheyboughtabagofcornand

somespecialbagsforpopcorn.（動作模版：雙動詞或者三動詞）陌生無思路情境2：怎么做爆米花？在某人幫助下/克服重重困難，終于做成怎么做成：很不容易做成，做完裝袋WiththehelpofMrMeredith,Johneventuallysucceededinmakingdecilicouspopcornandputthemintospecialbags.在meredith太太的幫助下，John終于做好了美味的爆米花，并且裝進了特別的袋子里敘事模版：succeedin/failin/manageto/makegreateffortsto/makegreatprogress等等withthehelpof歷年高考英語讀后續寫真題分析二時間空間內容跨度大的情節如何處理？如何避免流水賬？（去鄰居家—告訴對方，對方反應）情境：跨越距離，跨越時間，推動故事快速發展模版：串聯情節模版到了那里告知了一切gotoBernard’shome,tellhimeverythingWiththepopcorn,theywenttoBernard’shomeandtoldeverythingtohim.高手表達升級：英語中超高頻的with結構withsth“帶著東西”“帶著表情”with復合結構witheverythingready/withhisheadlowed/withhiseyesfixedonsthwentandtold可以轉換成went,tellingdoing可以做伴隨或者結果狀語因此很好用歷年高考英語讀后續寫真題分析幫助情節如何使用句型？感激感動幫助后的感激感動模版(常用：擁抱givesbahug;感謝expressgratitudetosb;tearswelledupinhereyes感動surprisedandmoved,witha…lookonhisface)Surprisedandmoved,Bernardandhisparentsexpressedtheirgratitudetothetimelyhelpofferedbytheirthoughtfulneighbors.驚訝又感動，Bernard和他的父母表達了對熱心鄰居的深深感激。短句子本身的延長：定語從句或者后置定語豐富名詞歷年高考英語讀后續寫真題分析陌生情節？陌生情節：賣爆米花的過程情節思路一：取起始點和結束點。He

tookthepopcornaround

totheneighbourhoodandknockedatthedoorsoftheneighbours.Tohisastonishment,hispopcornwasquicklysoldoutinonlytwohours.他帶著爆米花去到每一家，敲開了鄰居的門。讓他驚訝的是，他的爆米花竟然僅僅兩個小時就賣光了。情節思路二：聚焦寫對話交流+交流結果（缺的情節用簡單句+and處理）Heknockedattheneighbors’doors,explainingthathewouldliketosellpopcornsandmakesomemoneyforhisfamily.Tohisastonishment,allhisneighborssupportedhimandhispopcornwasquicklysoldoutinonlytwohours.他敲開了鄰居的門，解釋說自