專題01投稿正文

Passage1

假定你是李華，你校外教David正在策劃一場英語辯論賽，現向同學們征集辯題。請你給他

寫一封郵件，內容包括：

1.提供辯論題目；

2.說明選題理由。

注意：

1.詞數80左右；

2.可適當增加細節，使內容充實，行文連貫。

DearDavid,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearDavid,

Hopingthisemailfindsyouwell.Itwouldbedelightfulifmysuggestionsforthedebate

competitioncouldhelp.

Ipropose"SocialMedia-ProsorCons"asthetopic.Giventhesignificanceofsocialmedia,

thistopicwillsparkinsightfuldiscussionsonitsimpactandconsequences,encouragingexploration

ofvariousperspectives.Apartfromregularargumentspresentinganddebatingrounds,Isuggest

introducingan"AudienceQuestions"sessiontocreateaninteractiveatmosphere.

Thetopicandnovelsessionwillhopefullymaketheeventeducationalandengaging.Best

wishesfororganizingit!

Yours,

LiHua

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生對于你校外教David正在策劃一場英語辯論賽,

現向同學們征集辯題這一情況，給他寫一封郵件。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

令人愉快的：delightful—*enjoyable

建議：suggestion—>advice

各種各樣的：various-allkindsof

除了，止匕夕卜：Apartfrom—*Inadditionto

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Giventhesignificanceofsocialmedia,thistopicwillsparkinsightfuldiscussionsonits

impactandconsequences,encouragingexplorationofvariousperspectives.

拓展句：Giventhesignificanceofsocialmedia,thistopicwillsparkinsightfuldiscussionsonits

impactandconsequences,whichcanencourageexplorationofvariousperspectives.

【點睛】【高分句型1】Itwouldbedelightfulifmysuggestionsforthedebatecompetitioncould

help.（運用了if引導的條件狀語從句。）

【高分句型2jGiventhesignificanceofsocialmedia,thistopicwillsparkinsightfuldiscussionson

itsimpactandconsequences,encouragingexplorationofvariousperspectives.（非謂語動詞中的現

在分詞作狀語。）

Passage2

同普通話一樣，地方方言也是我們中華文化的重要組成部分。請你以“ProtectAndPassOnOur

Dialects”為題寫一篇短文向你校英語報文化專欄投稿，內容包括：

1.地方方言的發展現狀；

2.地方方言的重要作用；

3.呼吁大家保護地方方言。

注意：

1.寫作詞數應為80左右；

2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

參考詞匯：普通話mandarin

ProtectAndPassOnOurDialects

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【答案】

ProtectAndPassOnOurDialects

Recentyearshavewitnessedthatfewerandfeweryoungpeoplearecapableofspeakingtheir

dialects.Dialectsarefacingchallengesandlosinggroundgradually.

WhilemandariniscrucialformostChinesepeople,thesignificanceoflocaldialectsis

undeniable.Actually,notonlyaredialectscommunicationtools,buttheyalsoplayaveryimportant

roleinculturalheritage,representingourrootsandhistory.Furthermore,itisdialectsthatcontribute

tothediversityofculturesindifferentregions.

Therefore,itishightimethatdialectsshouldbepreservedsothattheycanbeheardbythenext

generations.Lefsembraceandcelebratethediversityofourdialects,ensuringtheirsurvivalfor

generationstocome.

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生以“ProtectAndPassOnOurDialects”為題寫一篇

短文向你校英語報文化專欄投稿。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

重要的：crucial—vital

無可爭辯的：undeniable—>incontestable

慶祝：celebrate—>observe

確保：ensure一makesure

2.句式拓展

合并簡單句

原句：Recentyearshavewitnessedthatfewerandfeweryoungpeoplearecapableofspeakingtheir

dialects.Dialectsarefacingchallengesandlosinggroundgradually.

拓展句：Dialectsarefacingchallengesandlosinggroundgraduallybecauserecentyearshave

witnessedthatfewerandfeweryoungpeoplearecapableofspeakingtheirdialects.

【點睛】「高分句型1]WhilemandariniscrucialformostChinesepeople,thesignificanceoflocal

dialectsisundeniable.（運用了while引導讓步狀語從句）

[高分句型2]Let'sembraceandcelebratethediversityofourdialects,ensuringtheirsurvivalfor

generationstocome.（運用了現在分詞作狀語）

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你校英文報社正在組織以“感恩(Gratitude)、獨立(Independence)、青春(Youth)”為關鍵詞的征稿

活動，請你結合自己經歷，選擇至少一個關鍵詞投稿表達自己對高中生活的感悟。

注意：

1.將題目補充完整：

2.詞數100詞左右。

:thekeyword(s)ofmyhighschoollife

【答案】Sample1:

Gratitudeandyouth:thekeyword(s)ofmyhighschoollife

Myhighschoollifeissofascinatingthatitisbeyondthedescription.Nothingcanrepresentit

betterthan"gratitude"and"youth”.

Thefirstdayofmyhighschoolisstillfreshinmymind.Withyouthandignorance,Iwas

completelyatalossandhadnothingtoexpect.Icannotimaginehowlongthisphenomenawould

last,whichupsetmeseriously.Itwastheteachers9andclassmates9concernthatledmeoutofthe

initialconfusion.Gradually,Ideeplyrealizethatmyhighschoollifeisfullofbrilliantsunshine.

Thejourneyfromconfusiontogettingthedirectiontopersistinhastaughtmealot.Thatis,youth

livesfordiligenceandweshouldalwaysbegrateful!

Thereisnoyouthwithoutdiligence,andgratitudemakesmyschoollifefullofsunshine.

Sample2:

Whenitcomestomyhighschoollife,nothingcanbebetterthan"youth"and"gratitude”to

describeit.

Thefirstdayofmyhighschoolisstillfreshinmymind.Withpassionanddream,Ienteredthe

promisingcampus,seeingfacesfullofyouthandenergy.Hopefully,myheartwasfullofstrengthof

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strivingformydreams.However,youthcanalsohaveconfusion.IrememberonceIfailedtheexam

andfeltsodisappointedthatIevencouldn'tcheerupforlong.Itwastheteachers9andclassmates9

helpandconcernthatpulledmeoutofthedilemma.Withencouragementandgratitude,Fvebeen

workinghardtomakeprogress.

Cherishingyouthandlearninggratitude,IbelieveIwillachievemydream.

Sample3:

Independence:thekeyword(s)ofmyhighschoollife

Beforehighschool,Ilivedashelteredlife,withmyparentstakingcareofmostthings.

However,asIenteredhighschool,aboardingone,Ihadtoadapttoanewenvironmentandwayof

life,whichforcedmetobecomeself-reliant.

Withlesssupervision,Ihadtolearntomanagemytimeeffectively.Creatingastudyschedule

andstickingtoithelpedmekeeporganized.Besides,learningtomakedecisionswasanother

challenge:Whichsubjecttochoose?Whethertojoinaclub?Ihadtoconsidermypreferencesand

interests.MakingthesechoicesallowedmetodiscoverwhoIwasandwhatIwaspassionateabout,

whichfurtheredmypersonalgrowth.

Asaconclusion,highschoolisatransformativeperiodwhenIdevelopedasenseof

independence.ItteachesmeinvaluableskillsthatIwillcarrythroughtomyfuturelife.

【導語】本文是一篇報社征稿。要求考生表達對自己高中生活的感悟。考生需要扣題，把“感

恩(Gratitude)、獨立(Independence)、青春(Youth)”三個關鍵詞囊括在文中，還需要添加適合細

節使文章真實自然。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累：

受保護的：sheltered-protected/guarded

監督：supervision—oversight/monitoring

困境：dilemma—predicament/puzzle

感激：appreciation一gratitude/acknowledgment

2.句式拓展：

簡單句變復合句

原句：Withpassionanddream,Ienteredthepromisingcampus,seeingfacesfullofyouthand

energy.

拓展句：WhenIenteredthepromisingcampuswithpassionanddream,Isawfacesfullofyouth

andenergy.

【點睛】【高分句型1]Itwastheteachers9andclassmates9concernthatledmeoutoftheinitial

confusion,（itwas...that引導的強調句型）

[高分句型2]Cherishingyouthandlearninggratitude,IbelieveIwillachievemydream.（現在

分詞作伴隨狀語）

【高分句型3]MakingthesechoicesallowedmetodiscoverwhoIwasandwhatIwaspassionate

about,whichfurtheredmypersonalgrowth,（who和what引導的賓語從句，which引導的定語

從句）

你校正在組織以旅游為主題的英語作文比賽。請你以“一次旅游經歷”為題，寫一篇短文參賽,

內容包括：

1.敘述旅游經歷；

2.表達感受。

注意：

1.寫作詞數應為80左右；

2.短文題目已為你寫好。

Amemorabletrip

【答案】

Amemorabletrip

IhadalwayswantedtovisittheGreatWall,andIwasfinallyabletomakemydreamcometrue

lastsummer.

ItookabusfrommyhometowntoBadaling,whichisthemostpopulartouristdestination.The

GreatWallissohugeandsowell-preserved.Iwasreallyimpressed.Ialsoenjoyedthehikingon

theGreatWall.Theviewsfromthewallwasbreathtaking.Icouldseeformilesineverydirection.

IhadagreattimeonmytriptotheGreatWall.ItwasanunforgettableexperiencethatIwill

cherishforever.

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【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生以“一次旅游經歷”為題，寫一篇短文參加學校

組織的以旅游為主題的英語作文比賽。內容包括：

L敘述旅游經歷；

2.表達感受。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

實現，成真：cometrue—?comeintoreality

珍惜：cherish一treasure

參觀：visit一payavisitto

景點：touristdestination—>touristattraction/placeofinterest

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Icouldseeformilesineverydirection.

拓展句：ItisamazingthatIcouldseeformilesineverydirection.

【點睛】【高分句型1]ItookabusfrommyhometowntoBadaling,whichisthemostpopular

touristdestination.（運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句）

【高分句型2]ItwasanunforgettableexperiencethatIwillcherishforever.（運用了that弓I導的

定語從句）

你校英文報將以“志愿同行，點亮青春”為主題，舉辦英語征文比賽，請你寫一篇短文投稿，介

紹自己曾參加過的一項志愿活動，內容包括：

1.志愿活動簡介；

2.意義和啟示。

注意：1.詞數80左右；2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

Mymainresponsibilitywastointroducethehistoryofeachexhibit,usingclearandengaging

languagetovividlyconveytheintendedallusions.Whentellingthestoriesforeachexhibit,Ipaid

specialattentiontoculturaldifferencestofosterabetterunderstandingforvisitorsfromvarious

countries.

Thistourguiderolenotonlyenrichedmyknowledgeofnationalhistory,butalsohelpedshape

mypassionsandvalues.Inadditiontopersonalgrowth,volunteeringshowsthatevensmallefforts

canhaveasignificantimpactonmanypeople.Theworldcanbetransformedthroughourchoices,

actsofkindnessandengagementinvolunteeractivities.

【導語】

本篇書面表達屬于記敘文。要求考生以“志愿同行，點亮青春”為主題，寫一篇短文投稿，介紹

自己曾參加過的一項志愿活動，參加英語征文比賽。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

假期：vacation一holiday

不同的：various—?different

幫助：help—assist

影響：impact一influence

2.句式拓展

同義句替換

原句：Whentellingthestoriesforeachexhibit,Ipaidspecialattentiontoculturaldifferencesto

fosterabetterunderstandingforvisitorsfromvariouscountries.

拓展句：WhenItoldthestoriesforeachexhibit,Ipaidspecialattentiontoculturaldifferencesto

fosterabetterunderstandingforvisitorsfromvariouscountries.

【點睛】【高分句型11Whentellingthestoriesforeachexhibit,Ipaidspecialattentiontocultural

differencestofosterabetterunderstandingforvisitorsfromvariouscountries.（運用了狀語從句中

的省略）

[高分句型2]Thistourguiderolenotonlyenrichedmyknowledgeofnationalhistory,butalso

helpedshapemypassionsandvalues.（運用了notonly...butalso連接謂語）

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Teens正在就我國社會老齡化越來越嚴重的問題舉辦征文活動。請你寫一篇短文投稿，內容包

括：1.關愛老人的原因；2.關愛老人的方式；3?倡議大家共同關愛老人。

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注意：字數100左右。

【答案】Astheagingpopulationinoursocietygrows,ifscrucialtoshowloveandrespecttoour

elders.Theyhavecontributedsignificantlytooursocietyanddeserveourcare.

Therearevariouswaystoshowloveandcarefortheelderly.Firstly,wecanvisitthem

regularly,listentotheirstories,andspendtimewiththem.Secondly,wecanprovidepracticalhelp,

suchasassistingwithdailytasks,providingtransportation,orofferingmedicalsupport.

Additionally,wecanalsosupportpoliciesandprogramsthatbenefittheelderly,suchaspensions

andhealthcare.

Iurgeeveryonetojoinhandsinshowingloveandcareforourelderly.Bydoingso,wecan

createawarmerandmoreharmonioussociety.

【導語】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一篇短文投稿，陳述關愛老人的原因、關愛老人的方

式，并倡議大家共同關愛老人。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

增力口：grow—>increase

重要的：crucial-^important/essential/vital

各種各樣的：various—avarietyof^allkindsof

提供：provide—>ofler

止匕夕卜：additionally—inaddition

2.句式拓展

簡單句改為倒裝句

原句：Bydoingso,wecancreateawarmerandmoreharmonioussociety.

拓展句：Onlybydoingsocanwecreateawarmerandmoreharmonioussociety.

【點睛】【高分句型1]Astheagingpopulationinoursocietygrows,it'scrucialtoshowloveand

respecttoourelders.（使用了As引導時間狀語從句、itis+M/.+todo…句型）

［高分句型21Additionally,wecanalsosupportpoliciesandprogramsthatbenefittheelderly,such

aspensionsandhealthcare.（使用了that弓|導定語從句）

Passage7

你校正舉辦主題為“ACoolTry!”的英語征文活動。請你以自身經歷寫一篇短文投稿，內容包

括：

1.簡述嘗試的過程；

2.收獲或感想。

注意：

1.詞數100左右;

2.可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

ACoolTry!

【答案】

ACoolTry!

Lastsummervacation,togaindifferentlifeexperience,Iwasaccompaniedbymyparentsto

giveBungeeJumpingafirsttry.

Beforethejump,professionalinstructorsprovidedadetailedsafetybriefing,explainingthe

equipment,thejumpprocedures,andwhattoexpectduringthefallandrebound.ThenIwasfitted

withaharness,whichwasattachedtotherubbercord.Asthemomentoftrutharrived,Istoodon

theedgeofthejumpingplatform,heartpoundingandlegstrembling.Eyesclosed,Itooktheleap,

withamixedsensationofexcitement,terrorandweightlessness.

Thewholeexperiencewasoverinamatterofseconds,butthememoryofthethrillandthe

senseofachievementlastalifetime,givingmeconfidencetofacenewchallengesandembrace

adventure.

【導語】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文。題目要求學生以自身經歷參與主題為“ACoolTry!”的英語征文活

動，需涵蓋嘗試的過程和收獲或感想。

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【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

獲得：gain—acquire

提供：provide—>ofler

裝備：fit一equip

來臨：arrive一come

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Thewholeexperiencewasoverinamatterofseconds,butthememoryofthethrillandthe

senseofachievementlastalifetime,givingmeconfidencetofacenewchallengesandembrace

adventure.

拓展句：Thewholeexperiencewasoverinamatterofseconds,butthememoryofthethrillandthe

senseofachievementlastalifetime,whichgavemeconfidencetofacenewchallengesandembrace

adventure.

【點睛】

[高分句型1]Beforethejump,professionalinstructorsprovidedadetailedsafetybriefing,

explainingtheequipment,thejumpprocedures,andwhattoexpectduringthefallandrebound.（運

用了現在分詞作狀語、“特殊疑問詞+不定式”作賓語）

[高分句型2]Eyesclosed,Itooktheleap,withamixedsensationofexcitement,terrorand

weightlessness.（運用了獨立主格結構）

Passage8

你校英文報正舉辦以“ThePowerofSmile”為題的征文比賽，請結合自身經歷寫一篇短文投稿，

內容包括：

1.自身經歷；

2.你的感悟。

注意：

1.詞數100左右；

2.題目已為你寫好。

ThePowerofSmile

【答案】ThePowerofSmile

Asmilehasthepowertotransformnotonlyourownmood,butalsotheatmospherearoundus.

IrememberatimewhenIwasfeelingdown,butasimplesmilefromafriendbrightenedupmyday.

Itmademerealizethateveninthetoughestmoments,asmilecanbringaglimmerofhope.

Smilingislikeauniversallanguagethatconnectsuswithothers.Itshowskindness,empathy,

andpositiveenergy.Ithastheabilitytoupliftspirits,fosterconnections,andcreateamorepleasant

andharmoniousworld.

So,lefsembracethepowerofsmile.Letitbeaconstantremindertoseethegoodinlifeand

shareitwiththosearoundus.Asmileisasmallactthatcanhaveabigimpact.

【導語】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文寫作中的稿件。要求考生結合自身經歷寫一篇短文，參加校英文報

正舉辦的以“ThePowerofSmile”為題的征文比賽。

【詳解】

1.詞匯積累

艱難：tough—>hard/difflcult

培養：foster—>develop

擁抱：embrace—>hug

影響：impact一eflect/influence

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Letitbeaconstantremindertoseethegoodinlifeandshareitwiththosearoundus.

拓展句：Letitbeaconstantremindertoseethegoodinlifeandshareitwiththosewhoarearound

us.

【點睛】

【高分句型11IrememberatimewhenIwasfeelingdown,butasimplesmilefromafriend

brightenedupmyday.（運用了when引導的定語從句）

[高分句型2].Itmademerealizethateveninthetoughestmoments,asmilecanbringaglimmer

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ofhope.（運用了that引導的賓語從句）

Passage9

你校英語報近期將推出一個主題為“高中生如何養成良好的心理狀態”的專欄。你與美國教育

專家Dr.Smith進行了交流后寫一篇英語文章投稿，主要內容如下：1.交流的主要內容：2.交

流后的收獲。

注意：1.寫作詞數應為100左右；2.請按如下格式在答題紙的相應位置作答。

【答案］Recently,IhadtheopportunitytointerviewDr.Smith,arenownedAmericaneducation

expert,onthetopicoffosteringapositivemindsetamonghighschoolstudents.

Dr.Smithemphasizedtheimportanceofmaintainingabalancebetweenacademicpressure

andpersonalwell-being.Hehighlightedthesignificanceofself-carepracticessuchasregular

exercise,adequatesleep,andmindfulnesstechniques.AccordingtoDr.Smith,cultivatinghobbies

andspendingqualitytimewithfriendsandfamilycanalsogreatlycontributetoahealthymental

state.

Icametorealizethatachievingacademicsuccessinhighschoolshouldn'tcomeatthe

expenseofmentalhealth.Dr.Smith'sinsightsserveasareminderforstudentstoprioritizetheir

well-beingwhilestrivingforexcellence.

【導語】本書面表達屬于應用文寫作。要求就“高中生如何養成良好的心理狀態”的問題與教

育專家進行交流后，寫篇交流心得投稿。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

著名的：renowned—>prestigious

培養：fbster—cultivate

強調：emphasize—■underline

壓力：pressure—stress

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Recently,IhadtheopportunitytointerviewDr.Smith,arenownedAmericaneducation

expert,onthetopicoffosteringapositivemindsetamonghighschoolstudents.

拓展句：Recently,IhadtheopportunitytointerviewDr.Smith,whoisarenownedAmerican

educationexpert,onthetopicoffosteringapositivemindsetamonghighschoolstudents.

【點睛】【高分句型11AccordingtoDr.Smith,cultivatinghobbiesandspendingqualitytimewith

friendsandfamilycanalsogreatlycontributetoahealthymentalstate.（運用了動名詞作主語）

【高分句型2]Icametorealizethatachievingacademicsuccessinhighschoolshouldn'tcomeat

theexpenseofmentalhealth.（運用了that引導的賓語從句）

Passage10

假定你是李華，你校英文雜志社要舉辦以“與科學家跨時空對話（TalktoaScientistacrossTime

andSpace）”為主題的書信征文活動，請你寫…封信給你最崇敬的一位科學家。內容包括：

1.表達對他（她）的崇敬之情；

2.解釋你崇敬他（她）的原因。

注意：1.詞數80左右2可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

DearSir/Madam,

Yours,

LiHua

【答案】DearGrandpaYuanLongping,

Iamwritingtoexpressmyadmirationforyou.Youdevoteyourselftotheresearchtohybrid

ricewithwillingnesstoservethecountry.

Youliveaverysimplelife,butyoucontributionsareinvaluabletothefieldofscienceand

agriculture.Withoutyouandyourteam,therewouldstillbemillionsofpeoplehavingtofacethe

threatofhunger.

Itwasyourhard-workingspiritandperseverancethatworthusstudying.Youaremyrole

modelandhasbeeninspiringmetostudyhardandinsistonmydreamofmakingcontributionsto

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mycountry.

Iamreallyproudthatwehavesuchagreatscientistlikeyou.

Yourssincerely

LiHua

【導語】本文是一篇應用文。要求考生代替李華以“與科學家跨時空對話（TalktoaScientist

acrossTimeandSpace）”為主題寫信給你最崇敬的一位科學家，參加書信征文活動。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

致力于：devoteoneselfto—commitoneselfto

簡單的：simple—+plain

不，懈努力：perseverance—determination

堅持：insiston—persistin

2.句式拓展

同義句轉換

原句：Youliveaverysimplelife,butyoucontributionsareinvaluabletothefieldofscienceand

agriculture.

拓展句：Thoughyouliveaverysimplelife,youcontributionsareinvaluabletothefieldofscience

andagriculture.

【點睛】【高分句型1]

Withoutyouandyourteam,therewouldstillbemillionsofpeoplehavingtofacethethreatof

hunger.（運用了虛擬語氣）

【高分句型2]Itwasyourhard-workingspiritandperseverancethatworthusstudying.（運用了

強調句型）

Passage11

上周你參加了學校組織的主題為“以勞動感恩父母”的活動。請你給校英文報寫一篇稿件，分

享你的經歷，內容包括：

（1）勞動過程；

（2）你的感受。

注意：

（1）寫作詞數應為80左右；

（2）請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

ShowGratitudetoParentsthroughLabor

【答案】ShowGratitudetoParentsthroughLabor

Inordertoarouseourawarenessofbeinggratefultoourparents,ourschoolheldanactivity

lastweekend.

Toshowmythanks,Idecidedtodosomethingformyparents.Gettingupearlierthanusuallast

Saturday,IspentmuchtimepreparingtheirbreakfastandthenIbegantohelpdocleaninginour

house,whichmademetiredandexhausted.WhenIsawmyparents9satisfiedsmiles,Ifeltthatmy

laborwasworthwhile.

Throughthisactivity,Fvelearntthatitisnoteasyformyparentstoworkandtakecareofusat

thesametime.ItistheirselflessandunconditionallovethatIshouldappreciate.

【導語】本文是應用文。要求考生給校英文報寫一篇稿件，分享你的通過勞動感恩父母的經

歷。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

舉辦：hold—>host

感恩：thanks一appreciation/gratitude

照顧：takecareof^lookafter

感激：appreciate一begratefulfor

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Inordertoarouseourawarenessofbeinggratefultoourparents,ourschoolheldanactivity

lastweekend.

拓展句：Ourschoolheldanactivitylastweekend,whichwasaimedatarousingourawarenessof

beinggratefultoourparents.

【點睛】【高分句型1JGettingupearlierthanusuallastSaturday,Ispentmuchtimepreparingtheir

breakfastandthenIbegantohelpdocleaninginourhouse,whichmademetiredandexhausted.（運

用了which引導的非限制性定語從句）

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[高分句型2]WhenIsawmyparents9satisfiedsmiles,Ifeltthatmylaborwasworthwhile.（運用

了when引導的時間狀語從句）

[高分句型3]ItistheirselflessandunconditionallovethatIshouldappreciate.（運用了強調句）

Passage12

你校英語報正在舉行主題為“SuccessComesfromHardWork”的征文比賽。請你寫一篇短文投

稿，內容包括：

1.闡述勤奮的意義；

2.舉一個勤奮促使你成功的事例；

3.描述成功后的感受。

注意：

1.詞數100左右;

2.題目已為你寫好。

【答案】SuccessComesfromHardWork

Hardworkisthekeytosuccess.Itisthecommitmenttoworkinghardthatallowsustoachieve

greatnessintherelentlesspursuitofourgoals.

OneexampleofhowhardworkledtomysuccesswaswhenIpreparedfortheseniorhigh

schoolentranceexamination.Besidesattendingclasses,Ispentcountlesshoursstudying,reviewing

andpracticing.Isoughthelpwhenfacedwithchallenges.Asaresult,Ipassedtheexaminationwith

flyingcolors.

Thefeelingofsuccessthatfollowsdiligenceisindescribable.I'vegainedasenseofconfidence

andaccomplishment.Iknowthatnogoalisoutofreachaslongaswearewillingtoputinthe

necessaryeffort.

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生以“SuccessComesfromHardWork”為主題給校

英文報投稿。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

實現：achieve一accomplish

無數：countless一numerous

幫助：help一assist

獲得：gained—^obtained

2.句式拓展

同義句替換

原句：Besidesattendingclasses,Ispentcountlesshoursstudying,reviewingandpracticing.

同義句：Inadditiontoattendingclasses,Idedicatednumeroushourstostudying,reviewing,and

honingmyskills.

【點睛】【高分句型1]Iknowthatnogoalisoutofreachaslongaswearewillingtoputinthe

necessaryeffort.（運用了that引導的賓語從句和aslongas引導的條件狀語從句）

[高分句型2]OneexampleofhowhardworkledtomysuccesswaswhenIpreparedforthe

seniorhighschoolentranceexamination.（運用了how引導的賓語從句和when引導的時間狀語

從句）

Passage13

你校正舉辦英語征文比賽。請以AnUnforgettableActivity為題寫一篇短文投稿，內容包括：

1.活動簡介；

2.你的感受。

注意：

1.詞數100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

AnUnforgettableActivity

【答案】AnUnforgettableActivity

AmongalltheactivitiesthatIparticipatedin,workingasavolunteeratanursinghomeisthe

mostunforgettable.

Itwasasunnyday.Onarrivalatthenursinghome,myclassmatesandIvisitedtheelderlyin

groupsandgavepresentstothemtoshowourrespectandloveforthem.Afterthat,weorganized

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variousactivities,someplayingchesswiththeoldandsomeperformingtraditionalChinesemusic

anddance.Atlast,wemadedumplingsfortheelderly.Theywerepleasedwithwhatwedidand

sharedmanywonderfulstorieswithus.

Overall,theactivitywasofgreatsignificance.Itnotonlytaughtmehowtocareforpeoplein

need,butletmeexperiencethepleasureofhelpingothers.

【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。學校正舉辦英語征文比賽。請考生以AnUnforgettable

Activity為題寫一篇短文投稿。

【詳解】1.詞匯積累

參與：participatein—>takepartin

給：give—>offer

各種各樣的：various^diverse

最后：atlast-finally

2.句式拓展

簡單句變復合句

原句：Overall,theactivitywasofgreatsignificance.

拓展句：Overall,theactivitywasofgreatsignificance,whichwasalsogreatlymeaningful.

【點睛】【高分句型1]AmongalltheactivitiesthatIparticipatedin,workingasavolunteerata

nursinghomeisthemostunforgettable.（運用了that引導的限制性定語從句）

[高分句型2]Theywerepleasedwithwhatwedidandsharedmanywonderfulstorieswithus.（is

用了what引導賓語從句）

Passage14

你校將以“我們的勞動實踐課（Ourlaborpracticecourse）”為主題，舉辦英語征文比賽。請你寫

一篇英語短文投稿，內容包括：

1.學校開展勞動實踐課程的目的；

2.你遇到的挑戰和從中受到的啟發。

要求：1.詞數100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。

【答案】OurLaborPracticeCourse

Withtheaimofeducatingstudentstofeelfreertoengageinbroaderexploration,experimenting

andquestioning,ourschoolhascarriedoutaseriesofagriculturalpractices.

Whileworkinginthefield,I,asaweeder,pulledoutarowofyoungplantsbymistake,which

causedmygroupmemberstoscream.Tomakeupformymistake,Iboughtseedsandreplanted

theminthefield,usingupmyen