Chapter5：WritingtheDiscussionSection報告人：孫巖2018.6.81最新版整理pptPurposesTheDiscussionsectioncanstandaloneorcanbepartofacombinedResultsandDiscussion(R&D)section.Ineithercase,itservesthesamemajorpurpose:tointerprettheresultsofthestudy.OrganizeaDiscussionsectionfollowingthemajormoves:Interpretyourresults(butavoidoverinterpretation)DescribethegreaterimportanceofyourfindingsFollowappropriatewritingconventions2最新版整理pptInthediscussionsection:interprettheirdataaddresswhyandhowquestions(e.g.,Whywasthereactionfaster?Howdidthemechanismproceed?)extendtheirfindingstoalargercontext(e.g.,Whatvaluewillthesefindingshavetothescientificcommunity?)完整的討論部分應該是首先展示實驗數據說明的問題以及得到的結論，對觀察到的現象的原因進行解釋說明或者提出假設，最后進一步深化我們的基礎發現，提出啟示或者應用。Note:Becarefulnottooverinterpretyourdata,misinterpretyourresults,overstateyourassumptions,orstraytoofarfromscientificevidence.3最新版整理pptSuchwordsasfact,truth,andprovearerarelyusedinaDiscussionsection.Hedgingwords,suchastheoryandevidence,aremuchmorecommon,asaresuchverbsasappear,indicate,seem,andsuggest.Byhedging,writersacknowledgethattheirknowledgeislimitedandwillbesubjectedtoscientificscrutinyovertime.4最新版整理ppt5最新版整理pptAnalyzingOrganizationNote:Theorderinwhichyoupresentfindings(inResults)andinterpretfindings(inDiscussion)shouldbeparallel.6最新版整理pptNoteTwoadditionalsubmoves,associatedwithmove2,thatarelesscommontodaythaninthepast:(1)indicatelimitationsofthework(2)suggestideasforfutureworkThus,asyouprepareyourpaper,checktoseeifthesesubmovesareexpectedinDiscussionsectionsinyourtargetedjournal.7最新版整理pptMove1Discussspecificresults8最新版整理pptMove2Concludethepaper9最新版整理ppt直接Move210最新版整理pptRemindreadersoftheresultsSuggestoverallimplicationsSummarizetheworkInterpretresults11最新版整理ppt12最新版整理ppt×1.HedgingwordsWordsshouldbeusedtoclarify,notconvince.Chemistssoftentheirinterpretationsandclaimsto“truth”byusinghedgingwords.13最新版整理pptNotes:

InterpretationsandmechanismsinDiscussionsectionareoftenpresenttenseactivevoice.2.TenseandvoiceTheworkwasdoneinthepast,butknowledgeexistsinthepresent.ExamplesThreeCr3+compoundswereexamined.(workdoneinthepast)HydroxylradicalisaknownmediatorofDNAdamage.(knowledgethatexistsinthepresent)14最新版整理ppt15最新版整理ppt3.Useof”We”Thewordwe(usedtorefertotheauthorsofthework)iscommonlyusedtoachievethefollowingpurposesintheDiscussionsection:ToindicateadecisionorcourseofactionTocompare