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閱讀下面材料,根據其內容和所給段落開頭語續寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Whenwearelittlekids,birthdaypartiesaremomentousoccasions.Theyareourtimetoshine,andweloveeverythingaboutthem:theballoons,thegames,thecake,thegifts,andsoon.當我們還是小孩子的時候,生日聚會是重要的場合。它們是我們發光的時刻,我們喜歡它們的一切:氣球、游戲、蛋糕、禮物等等。Afterreadingcoolstoriesaboutpoliceofficerssolvingmysteries,AllenMillerthoughtthepolicewereawesome,hopingtobecomeoneofthem!So,whenhehadtochooseathemeforhisseventhbirthdayparty—hewentwithhisfavorite:thepolice!Andallhewantedforhisbirthdaypartywasamodelpolicecar.Heexcitedlyinvitedsomeofhisfriendsandanxiouslyawaitedtheday.Unfortunately,noneofthemcouldmakeittothepartyduetovariousreasons.在閱讀了關于警察解謎的酷故事后,艾倫·米勒認為警察太棒了,希望能成為其中之一!所以,當他不得不為自己的七歲生日派對選擇一個主題時——他選擇了他最喜歡的:警察!他想要的生日派對只有一輛警車模型。他興奮地邀請了一些朋友,焦急地等待著這一天的到來。不幸的是,由于各種原因,他們都沒能參加聚會。Allen’smomRachelwrestledwiththechallengingdecision:shouldshecancelthepartyandsaveAllentheembarrassmentofanemptypartyroom?Hehadbeenlookingforwardtothepartyandtalkingaboutitdaily,soitwouldbreakhishearttocancelit.艾倫的媽媽Rachel艱難地做出了一個具有挑戰性的決定:她應該取消派對,讓艾倫免于派對室空無一人的尷尬嗎?他一直期待著聚會,每天都在談論,所以取消聚會會讓他心碎。OfficerFrankSmith,whohadalreadyplannedwithRachelandagreedtoshowupattheparty,heardfromRachelthatitmightbecanceledduetolowattendance.That’swhenhedecidedtosavetheday—heisapoliceofficerafterall!Hisdutyistoserveandprotect,andhedecidedtoprotectAllenfromhavingabadday,andservehimthemostamazingseventhbirthdayparty!OfficerSmithgotthewholelocalpolicetojoinin.“Weliketobeinvolvedinourcommunity.It’snotjustaboutenforcing(執行)thelaw.Weliketobethereinthegoodtimesaswell,”heexplainedtoRachel.弗蘭克·史密斯警官已經和瑞秋計劃好了,并同意參加派對,他從瑞秋那里聽說,由于出席人數少,派對可能會取消。就在那時,他決定化險為夷——畢竟他是一名警察!他的職責是服務和保護,他決定保護艾倫免受糟糕的一天,并為他舉辦最令人驚嘆的七歲生日派對!史密斯警官讓當地的警察都加入進來。“我們喜歡參與我們的社區。這不僅僅是執法(執行)法律。我們也喜歡在好的時候去那里,”他向瑞秋解釋道。OnthedayofAllen’sparty,OfficerSmithpickedupRachelandAlleninhispolicecar.Theboydidn’tknowwheretheyweregoing,butwasexcited.TheystoppedatTownHall,andofficerSmithledthemintothemeetingroomwhereagroupofpolicemenwerewaitingtowishAllenahappybirthday.在艾倫聚會的那天,史密斯警官用他的警車接走了瑞秋和艾倫。男孩不知道他們要去哪里,但很興奮。他們在市政廳停了下來,史密斯警官領他們進入會議室,一群警察正在那里等著祝艾倫生日快樂。注意;1.續寫詞數應為150個左右:2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。There,apartywaswaitingforhim.Aftertheyenjoyedthecake,OfficerSmithtookoutagiftbag.Mainidea:ThisshortarticletellsthestoryofalittleboynamedAllenMiller'sexpectationsforapolicethemedbirthdayparty,aswellastheproblemhefaces-invitedfriendscannotcometohisbirthdayparty.Allen'smother,Rachel,andapoliceofficernamedFrankSmithplannedaspecialbirthdayparty,butasnofriendscouldcome,shewasconsideringcancelingtheparty.Afterlearningaboutthissituation,OfficerSmithdecidedtotakeactionandhavetheentirelocalpolicestationjoinintoholdanunforgettablebirthdaypartyforAllen.Intheend,Allenwastakentotheconferenceroomofthecityhall,whereagroupofpoliceofficerswerewaitingtocelebratehisbirthday.續寫情節發展:續寫第一段:艾倫走進去會議室里---響起了“生日快樂”的合唱---被許多拿著氣球的警察包圍了---把他介紹給所有的警官---艾倫非常激動---在媽媽的幫助下切蛋糕----爆發出歡呼和笑聲續寫第二段:包裝精美的包裹遞給艾倫---被這個驚喜驚呆了--一輛警車模型---艾倫擁抱了史密斯警官---再次感謝--主旨升華過生日語言素材積累:1.房間里布滿了裝飾,藍色和白色的氣球在空中飄浮,一條懸掛著的橫幅上寫著“Allen7歲生日快樂”。Theroomwas

filledwithdecorations,blueandwhiteballoons

floating

intheair,andabannerthatread“Happy7thBirthdayAllen”

hungonthewall.2.

警察們都面帶微笑,當Allen進入時鼓掌,讓他感覺像那天的英雄。Thepolicemen,allsmiles,

clappedasAllenentered,makinghimfeelliketheherooftheday.

當他切蛋糕時,房間里爆發出一陣掌聲,將這一刻被定格為他生命中最幸福的瞬間之一。Ashecutthecake,theroom

eruptedinapplause,

sealingthismoment

asoneofthehappiestinhisyounglife.當Allen吹滅蠟燭時,他的眼睛因喜悅而閃光,他夢寐以求的生日派對以最不同尋常的方式展開。AsAllenblewoutthecandles,

hiseyessparkledwithjoy,hisdreambirthdayparty

unfolding

inthemostextraordinaryway.5.

Allen的心不僅僅因為生日禮物而充滿了滿足,更因為房間里每個人給予他的愛和接納而感到極為溫暖。Allen’sheartwasfull,notjustfromthebirthdaygift,butfrom

theoverwhelmingsenseofloveandacceptance

hefeltfromeveryoneintheroom.官方范文There,apartywaswaitingforhim.

ThemomentAllensteppedinside,achorusof“HappyBirthday”filledthemeetingroom,andhefoundhimselfsurroundedbylotsofpoliceofficersholdingballoons.OfficerSmithintroducedhimtoalltheofficers,whogavehimhighfives.Allenwasthrilled,andhiseyessparkledwithexcitementashelookedatthegrandpolice-themedcake.AsAllencutintothecakewiththehelpofhismom,theroomeruptedintocheersandlaughter,addingtothejoyfulatmosphere.(80words)Aftertheyenjoyedthecake,officerSmithtookoutagiftbag.

“It’sforyou.”HepresentedthedelicatelywrappedparceltoAllen,whowasstunnedbythesurprise.“Wow,amodelpolicecar!Itlooksexactlyliketheonewecameherein!Thankyou!”OfficerSmithsmiled,“Anytime,Allen.”

AllenhuggedOfficerSmithandthankedhimagainformakingtheotherwisecrushingdisappointmenthistimetoshine.Itwasthelocalheroeswhohelpedbybeingpartofthecommunityandinspiringtheyoungsoulinsmallbuteffectiveways.(80words)參考范文一,There,apartywaswaitingforhim.

TheinstantAllenopenedthedoor,withaloudpop,ashowerofcolorfulconfettienvelopedhim.Thencameawaveofloudhornsandsomecheering,“HappyBirthday!”Allencouldn’tbelievehiseyes,andallhecouldreactwastostandstill,smilingsillyandshyly.Whatsurprisedhimmorewasthathisnamewasspelledoutinballoons.“Happybirthdaytoyou!”Thepolicemenbegantosingthesong,clappingandhandinghimabirthdaycake.Takingadeepbreath,Allenblewoutthecandle,echoedwithanotherroundofapplause.ThenAllencutupthecakeandeveryonebegantoenjoythecake.

Aftertheyenjoyedthecake,OfficerSmithtookoutagiftbag.

Shyly,Allentookthegiftandopenedit,onlytofindthatitwasamodelpolicecarhehaddreamedof.Anotherbigsurprise!Allenfeltlikesittingoncloudnine.Todaywaslikeadreamforhim.Allenhuggedthetoyinhischestandcouldn’tstandasecondofseparation.Rachelstoodthere,withtearsofgratitudewellingupinhereyes.Shehadbeenworriedthattodaycouldbeamiserableday,whichnowturnedtoablessedandhappyday.ShethankedOfficerSmithforhisgenerosityandkindness.Thepolicenotonlyfoughtagainstcrimes,butalsobroughthappinessandsolidityfortheircommunity.Whatablesstoliveinsuchanaffectionatecommunity.

參考范文二,There,apartywaswaitingforhim.

Balloonsadornedtheroom,andatablewasfilledwithsnacksanddrinks.Allen'seyeswidenedinsurpriseanddelightasherealizedwhatOfficerSmithhaddoneforhim.Thepoliceofficersgreetedhimwarmly,sharingstoriesandjokesthatmadeAllenfeellikethecenterofattention.Amidstthelaughterandchatter,abirthdaycakewaswheeledin.Alleneagerlygrabbedaknifeandcutintothebirthdaycake,andthenshar

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