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Inthespringsun,myauntandIheadedforherflowershop.NormallyIwouldbedelightedtohelpinhershop,butnotrecentlybecauseofRosa.Rosawasmysister,justonemonthold,whowassettledinmyoldbedroom.Fortenyears,thesmallroomwasfullofmytoysandbooks.Butnowitwastransformedintoherbabyroom,decoratedlikeagardenwithpinksandyellows.Myspace,myoldlife,wasgone.“Hereweare!”
Wearrivedattheshop,awaveofcolourandsweetsmellwashingoverme.MyauntsaidIcouldpicksomeflowersforMumandDad.Iusedtolovethis,buttodayIwassoovercomewithtirednessandenvy.WhybothertobringthemflowerswhentheywereenjoyingRosaathomewithoutme?
SilentlyIhelpedmyauntarrangeflowers.
“Yourmumtoldmetherehasn’tbeenmuchshuteyerecentlyforanyofyou.”“Notmuch,sinceRosathealarmclockwas
installed(安裝),”I
complainedwithahugeyawn(哈欠).“Irememberhaving
to
creep(躡手躡腳地走)
aroundlikeaworn-outmousewhenyourmumwasababy.Ispentthefirstmonthshatinghersomuch.”“ButyouandMumseemsoclose,”
Isaid,guiltilyhidingawaymyenvyofRosa.“Nowweare.Butittookmeyearstogrowintotheroleofbigsister.Fewflowersblossom(綻放)overnight,youknow.”
Shepulledmeinforasidehug,glancingupattheclock,andsuggestedItakeawalkoutside.
Behindhershopwasafielddottedwithspringflowers.Steppingintothefield,Ibegantopicklittleflowers.Itwaslikegatheringmychildhoodmemories.IrememberedhowI’dsitwithDad,makingflowerchains,crowning(授予)
eachotherwiththesilliesttitles:QueenofJunkFoodandKingofMess.Mysmilegrewwider.TheshiningyellowflowersremindedmeofthecolorinRosa’sbabyroom.Wassheawake?Iwondered.注意:1.
續寫詞數應為150左右;2.
請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Para1:SuddenlyIsawtwofamiliarfigureswalkingtowardsme.Para2:Rosawaswideawakeinherbabybasketbesidethepicnicblanket.試題分析:本文是一篇記敘文,主題是人與自我,話題為家庭溫情類。過去“我”有-一個幸福的童年,但是現在,家里添了--個小妹妹,的臥室被改成我”妹妹的嬰兒房我”自認為受到冷落,失去了生活空間和父母的愛。-一個春日,我”在姨媽家的花田里采花時的阿姨提到了她自己作為姐姐的經我歷,并解釋了親密關系的建立需要時間。該故事告訴我們:家庭幸福離不開個人角色的承擔。續寫文章體現了要承擔責任和關愛家人的道德觀與價值觀,適合高中生寫作續寫情節發展:-爸爸媽媽來到我身邊,還有Rosa.回想阿姨的話,我想我需要時間來接納我的小妹妹,成為一名合格的姐姐。我小心翼翼地插花,為爸爸媽媽還有我那可愛的妹妹。-妹妹醒了。她那可愛的神態將我的心融化了。我溫柔地將她抱起,感受她地溫暖和香氣,當我看向她的眼睛,我感覺她比這世上的一切都珍貴。官方范文,
SuddenlyIsawtwofamiliarfigureswalkingtowardsme.
“Lookwho'shere!”mydadexclaimedwithasmile,holdingRosawithababybasket.TheyellowflowersinmyhandseemedtoglowevenbrighterasIgazedatthebeautifullittlegirl,Icouldn'thelprecallingwhatmyaunttoldme.Iknewthatitwouldtaketimeformetoadjusttosharingmyparents’attentionandmyoldroom,butIwasdeterminedtobethebestbigsisterIcouldbe.ThenIcarefullyarrangedtheyellowflowersintoasmallbouquetandhandedittomymomwithasmile.“TheseareforyouandDad,andalsoforRosa,"Isaid,feelingawarmthinmychestthathadbeenmissingearlier.
Rosawaswideawakeinherbabybasketbesidethepicnicblanket.
Herbigblueeyeswereopen,takingintheworldaroundher.AsIwatchedmylittlesister,Icouldn'thelpbutfeelasenseofwonderandamazementathowperfectshewas.Igentlypickedherupandheldherclose,feelingherwarmthandbreathinginthesweetscentofherhair.Iknewthatfromnowon,mylifewouldneverbethesame.Iwouldnolongerbethecenterofattention,andIwouldhavetosharemyparentswiththisbeautifullittlecreature.ButasIlookedintoRosa'seyes,Iknewthatitwasallworthit.Shewasmyfamily,andIlovedhermorethananythingintheworld.參考范文一,
SuddenlyIsawtwofamiliarfigureswalkingtowardsme.
ItturnedouttobeMomandDad,withabigbasketandotherbulkybagshangingontheirarms.“Theydidn’tevenaskmetobehere,”Ithoughtbitterly,feelinglikeanabandonedchild.Outofangerandfrustration,Ihidbehindabigtree,determinedtoseehowcoldtheywouldbe.Momanddadsoonstoppedatagrassyfield,putdowntheirbaggages,tookoutablanket,andproducedmorefruitsandsnacksonebyone.Theytalkedandlaughed,whichmadememorejealous.Suddenly,aloudcrycamefromthebasket.
Rosawaswideawakeinherbabybasketbesidethepicnicblanket.
Momhurriedlystoppedwhatshewasdoing,huggedhergentlyandhummedasongtocomforther,whiledadmadefaces,tryingtomakehersmileagain.ButRosakeptcryingsointenselythatIbegantoworryabouther.BeforeIknewit,Icamefrombehindthetreeandcomforted,“Rosa,I’mhere.”Asifinmagic,Rosastoppedcryingandgiggledatme,whichmadeallofussignwithrelief.ItwasatthatmomentthatIfeltthebondbetweensheandmeandthelovebegantotakerootinme.Itmighttakemealongtime
toacceptherandsharemylifewithherbutIknewIwasontheway.
參考范文二,
SuddenlyIsawtwofamiliarfigureswalkingtowardsme.
Itwasmomanddad,onepushingthestrollerandtheothercarryingalotofpicnicstuff.Onseeingme,theywavedatmehappilyandshoutedwarmly,“Whatasurprise!”Surprisingly,myangerandenvywereimmediatelyputout.IjoggedforwardandpresentedthemproudlytheflowersIhadjustpickedup.“Howbeautifultheyare!Thankyou!”Momsniffedandstrokedmyhairgently.ThenwefoundaplacetosetthepicnicblanketandIwaseagertocheckRosa.
Rosawaswideawakeinherbabybasketbesidethepicnicblanket.
MumhandedmeRosa,andIcouldn’thelpbutmarvelathertinyfingersandcuriouseyes.Thenmomsharedstoriesofmyearlydays,highlightingthechallengestheyfacedandthejoystheyexperienced.Dadadded,withlaughtersburstingfromtimetotime.Immersedinthestories,Ifelthappinessands
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