應(yīng)用文——求助信謀篇布局第一段：自我介紹+寫作背景+寫信目的自我介紹我是李華，來自紅星中學(xué)的一名學(xué)生。version1:I’mLiHua.I’mastudentfromHongxingSchool.version2:I’mLiHua,astudentcurrentlystudyinginHongxingSchool.采用了同位語、非謂語做狀語的高級(jí)語法句式。寫信背景我進(jìn)入高中已經(jīng)兩個(gè)月了，但仍然很難適應(yīng)這里的新學(xué)校生活。version1:Ihavebeeninhighschoolfortwomonths,butitisstillhardformetogetusedtothenewschoollifehere.version2:IthasbeentwomonthssinceIenteredhighschool.Nevertheless,Istillfinditdifficulttoadaptmyselftothenewschoollifehere.采用了Ithasbeen+一段時(shí)間+since從句的句式，時(shí)態(tài)運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)，Nevertheless比較高級(jí)的銜接詞、還用了findit+adj+todosth形式賓語和不定式，體現(xiàn)了對(duì)語法的運(yùn)用自如。最近，我正在為高考緊張復(fù)習(xí)，遇到了一些問題導(dǎo)致無法集中精力學(xué)習(xí)。version1:Now,IambusyinpreparingfortheCollegeEntranceExamination.AndIhavedifficultiesinfocusingonmystudy.version2:Recently,IhavebeenengaginginmakingpreparationsfortheCollegeEntranceExamination,butIfinditquitehardtoconcentrateonmystudy.采用了engageindoingsth的高級(jí)短語采用了makepreparationsfor的動(dòng)詞名詞搭配的短語寫信目的我寫信想請(qǐng)您幫我一個(gè)忙。version1:I’mwritingthislettertoaskforyourhelp.version2:I’mwritingtothislettertoaskyoutogivemeahand/domeafavor.采用了givemeahand/domeafavor的動(dòng)詞名詞搭配的高級(jí)短語第二段：求助內(nèi)容寫具體需要幫助的事項(xiàng)Hopefullyyouwouldbesokindastogivemesomesuggestions/helponthefollowingproblems.Tobeginwith,（困難一）,whichhasannoyedmeforquitealongtime.Moreover,（困難二）,forpersonallyIlacktheverybasicexperienceonthismatter.Lastbutnotleast,whattroublesmemostis…注意高級(jí)銜接詞，使文章銜接自然緊湊且完整。首先：initially,firstandforemost,tobeginwith其次：additionally,furthermore,moreover,inaddition,what’smore最后：ultimately,eventually,lastbutnotleast必備常用且高級(jí)的句式句型：1.Ihavetrouble/difficultyindoingsth.2.Unfortunately,Ifinditextremelyhardformetodosth.3.Doingsthisanotherterribleheadacheforme.4.dosb.afavor/giveab.ahand5.askforhelp/seekforhelp6.encountersomeproblems7.befacedwithdifficulties8.beengagedindoingsth.9.makepreparationsforsth10.overcomethefearof…11.offersomeconstructiveguidance(提供一些有建設(shè)性的指導(dǎo))第三段：重申寫信目的+表達(dá)感激之情/期待回復(fù)面對(duì)以上提到的問題，我渴望得到你的幫助。你能給予我一些關(guān)于如何解決這些問題的建議嗎？version1:I’meagertogetyourhelpforthosequestions.Canyougivemesomeadviceonhowtodealwiththeseproblems?version2:Faced/Confrontedwiththeseproblemsmentionedabove,Iamanxioustogetyourhelp.Wouldyoupleaseoffermesomesuggestionsonhowtosolvetheseproblems?采用了Faced/Confronted固定搭配非謂語做狀語的高級(jí)寫法，mentionedabove此處為非謂語做后置定語，beanxiousto短語搭配使用希望能得到您善意且及時(shí)的幫助。期待您的回復(fù)。version1:IhopeIcangetyourkindandimmediatehelp.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.version2:Hopefullyyourkindandtimelyhelpwouldbeofferedtome.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.寫作演示一假定你是李華，你正在為高考緊張復(fù)習(xí)，但最近你遇到了一些問題導(dǎo)致無法集中精力學(xué)習(xí)。于是你給你校的外籍心理老師Kate寫一封求助信尋求幫助。要點(diǎn)如下：作業(yè)多，沒有時(shí)間運(yùn)動(dòng)；壓力大，難以入睡；希望得到Kate的幫助。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可是適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭語和結(jié)束語已經(jīng)寫好。第一段：自我介紹+寫信背景+寫信目的我叫李華，是一名高三學(xué)生。最近，我忙于復(fù)習(xí)高考，遇到了一些問題導(dǎo)致我難以集中學(xué)習(xí)。version1:I’mLiHuaandnowI’maSeniorthreestudent.Thesedays,I’mbusywithGaokao,butIhavesomeproblemswhichmakemeunabletofocusonmystudy.version2:I’mLiHua,aSeniorthreestudentatpresent.Recently,IhavebeenengaginginmakingpreparationsfortheCollegeEntranceExamination,butIfinditquitehardtoconcentrateonmystudy.第二段：簡述現(xiàn)狀version1:Theseproblemsmakemeunhappy.version2:I’mencounteringsomeproblemswhichtroublemealot.首先，我不得不花大量時(shí)間寫作業(yè)，導(dǎo)致我沒時(shí)間鍛煉。version1:First,Ihavetospendmuchtimetodomyhomework,soIhavenotimetotakeexercises.version2:Firstandforemost,I’mobligedtospendsomuchtimeonmyhomeworkthatIhardlyhavetimetotakeexercises.其次，父母和老師對(duì)我期望很高，我又不想讓他們失望，所以我壓力非常大。version1:What’smore,MyparentsandteachersexpectmetodowellinGaokaoandIdon’twantthemfeeldisappointed.So,Ifeelstresful.version2:Moreover,thehighexpectationfromtheteachersandmyparentsmakesmeextremelystressfulbecauseIdon’twanttoletthemdown.最后，最讓我煩惱的是每晚都睡不著。version1:Atlast,theworstthingisthatIcant’sleepwelleverynight.version2:Ultimately,whattroublesmemostisthatit’sdifficultformetofallasleepeverynight.第三段：重申寫信目的+期待回復(fù)對(duì)于以上問題，我渴望得到你的幫助。你能給予我一些關(guān)于如何解決這些問題的建議嗎？version1:I’meagertogetyourhelpforthosequestions.Canyougivemesomeadviceonhowtodealwiththeseproblems?version2:Facedwiththeseproblemsmentionedabove,Iamanxioustogetyourhelp.Wouldyoupleaseoffermesomesuggestionsonhowtosolvetheseproblems?DearProfessorKate,I’mLiHua,aSeniorthreestudentatpresent.Recently,IhavebeenengaginginmakingpreparationsfortheCollegeEntranceExamination,butIfinditquitehardtoconcentrateonmystudy.I’mencounteringsomeproblemswhichtroublemealot.Firstandforemost,I’mobligedtospendsomuchtimeonmyhomeworkthatIhardlyhavetimetotakeexercises.Moreover,thehighexpectationfromtheteachersandmyparentsmakesmeextremelystressfulbecauseIdon’twanttoletthemdown.Ultimately,whattroublesmemostisthatit’sdifficultformetofallasleepeverynight.Facedwiththeseproblemsmentionedabove,Iamanxioustogetyourhelp.Wouldyoupleaseoffermesomesuggestionsonhowtosolvetheseproblems?Yours,LiHua.寫作演示二調(diào)查顯?，中國?江江豚（finlessporpoise）受?類活動(dòng)影響?瀕臨臨滅絕，?前總數(shù)不?1000只。江豚的?存環(huán)境?分糟糕，航運(yùn)（shipping）、?法捕撈、?候變化、?污染等是導(dǎo)致江豚死亡的主要原因。假設(shè)你是李華，現(xiàn)請(qǐng)?英?給WWF（世界?然保護(hù)基?組織）寫?封信，請(qǐng)他們關(guān)注這?狀況并提供幫助。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：(1)說明寫信?的(2)簡述江豚現(xiàn)狀(3)希望WWF如何幫助（?如：資助江豚保護(hù)項(xiàng)?等）(4)表?感謝并期待回復(fù)注意：(1)詞數(shù)：100詞左右；(2)在答題卡上作答；(3)書信格式及開頭均已給出（不計(jì)?總詞數(shù)）。第一段：自我介紹+寫信背景+寫信目的要點(diǎn)1：我是李華，一名來自中國武漢的高中生。version1:I’mLiHua,ahighschoolstudentfromWuhan,China.version2:I’mLiHua,astudentcurrentlystudyinginahighschoolinWuhan,China.要點(diǎn)2：調(diào)查顯示，中國長江江豚的生存環(huán)境十分糟糕，瀕臨滅絕，我寫信是要引起您的注意并希望能緩解局勢(shì)。version1:Accordingtothesurvey,theFinlessPorpoise'slivingconditionisveryterrible.Theyaredyingout.So,Iamwritingthislettertocatchyourattentionandeasethesituation.version2:LearningfromthesurveythatFinlessPorpoise'slivingconditionissoterriblethattheyaredyingout,Iamwritingthislettertocaptureyourattentionandeasethesituation.第二段：簡述現(xiàn)狀+如何幫助要點(diǎn)3：由于缺乏人類保護(hù)，江豚的數(shù)量正變得越來越少，目前僅剩不到1000只。version1:Becauseoflackinghumanprotection,FinlessPorpoiseisbecomingfewerandfewer.Atpresent,thereonlyexistlessthan1000FinlessPorpoises.version2:Duetolackofhumanprotection,thenumberofFinlessPorpoiseisbecomingworryinglysmaller,onlylessthan1000leftcurrently.要點(diǎn)4:因此，現(xiàn)在應(yīng)該立即采取有效措施來改變這種狀況。version1:So,weshouldtakeeffectivemeasuresatoncetochangethissituation.version2:Therefore,it'shightimethatimmediateandeffectivemeasuresshouldbetakentoimprovethesituation.要點(diǎn)5：我希望世界自然基金會(huì)將通過資助一些旨在幫助江豚的計(jì)劃或就如何防止其滅絕制定一些規(guī)則，從而在保護(hù)它方面發(fā)揮重要作用。version1:IhopethatWWFwillsponsorsomeprogramswhichaimtohelpFinlessPorpoiseormakesomerulesonhowtopreventitfromdyingout.So,WWFcanpalyanimportantroleinprotectingit.version2:IamhopingthatWWFwillplayasignificantroleinprotectingitbyfundingsomeprogramsaimingtohelpingFinlessPorpoiseordrawingupsomerulesonhowtopreventitfromdyingout.第三段：重申寫信目的+盼望回復(fù)要點(diǎn)6：我呼吁你們認(rèn)真考慮我的請(qǐng)求。version1:Icallforyourseriousconsiderationonmyrequest.version2:Iappealtoyourseriousconsiderationonmyrequest.要點(diǎn)7：如果您能提供一些幫助，我將不勝感激。version1:Ifyoucanoffersomehelp,Iwillthankyouverymuch.version2:Iwouldappreciateitalotifyoucouldprovidesomeassistance.要點(diǎn)8：期待您的早日答復(fù)。version1:I’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.version2:I’mexpectingyourpromptreply.DearSirorMadam,【第一段】(自我介紹)I'mastudent