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本文總共25分，共分為5檔第五檔(21-25)理解準確,涵蓋全部要點。

能準確使用相應的語法結構和詞匯。有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使所完成的概要結構緊湊。

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本文總共25分，共分為5檔第五檔(21-25)4C原則3Step1.Readforthestyleandstructureofthepassage.Howtowriteasummary?

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awildfishrestaurantwasorderedtoshutdowninHarbin,northeastChina'sHeilongjiangProvince.Asaresult,theowneroftherestaurantfacedafineof500,000yuan.ChenYan,atouristfromChangzhou,eastChina’sJiangsuProvince,complainedonlineonFebruary12thathewasbeingovercharged10,000yuanforthreebigfishatalocalwildfishrestaurantinSongbeiDistrictofHarbin.Worsestill,heclaimedthathisfamilymemberswerebeatenandthreatenedbytherestaurantstaffwhenhequestionedthebillatthecheckout.Chen’scomplaintimmediatelyspreadonChina’ssocialmedia.Theinvestigationresultsbysomelocalgovernmentdepartmentsshowedthattherestauranthadnofault,sincetheyhadalreadytaggedtheprice,whichraiseddoubtamongnetizensagain.Furtherinvestigationshowedthatonetypeofthefishserved,Huso,wasnottherealwildspecies,butakindoffarmedfishatamuchlowerprice.Sincethepricesofthefishdidhaveviolatedtherightsofconsumers,therestaurantgotitsduepunishment.Meanwhile,relevantgovernmentdepartmentsthathavestoodbythesideoftherestaurantinthefirstplacewouldalso

beinvestigatedandpunished.Similarcasesoffraudulent(欺騙的)pricingatscenicspotshavealsobeenreportedelsewhereinChina.InOctober2015,forinstance,atouristwasoverchargedforacourseofshrimp(蝦)inthecoastalcityofQingdao,eastChina'sShandongProvince,whentherestaurantclaimedthequotedpriceof38yuanwasnotforthedish,butforeachshrimp!Authoritiessaythattheseillegalactionswillbeseverelypunished.Recently,awildfishres5NarrationWhen

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