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中文“Wow,

thesetreesaresotall!"William

shoutedexcitedly,whilewalkingwithhisclassmatesinaforestnearhisschool.Theywereonafieldtriptotheforestaspartofasciencelesson.William和他的同學(xué)們?cè)趯W(xué)校附近的森林里一邊走著一邊大喊：“哇，這些樹(shù)好高啊”。他們正在進(jìn)行一次科學(xué)課的實(shí)地考察。Overthere,theymet

theforester,Victor.（護(hù)林員后面還會(huì)出現(xiàn)的呦）WhenWilliamlearnedVictorlivedinasimplewoodenhousethere

foryears,he

laughedat

himwithhisfriends（現(xiàn)在笑得開(kāi)心，待會(huì)必哭...."真香定律"）.在那里，他們遇到了護(hù)林員Victor。當(dāng)William得知Vitor在那里的一座簡(jiǎn)單的木屋里住了多年時(shí)，他和朋友們一起嘲笑他。Then,theypassedbyanentrancetoacave.Williamwantedtoexploreinsidethecave,buthisteacherdidn'tallowit.

“I'llcomebackhere,(這不是灰太狼的臺(tái)詞么？？？)"hethought.Onthewaybacktoschool,he

rememberedtheexactlocationofthecave.（記住路線可能有幫助）然后，他們經(jīng)過(guò)一個(gè)洞穴的入口。William想要探索洞穴的內(nèi)部，但他的老師不允許。“我會(huì)回來(lái)的，”他想。在回學(xué)校的路上，他記住了洞穴的確切位置。Thenextday,Williamaskedhisfourfriendstothecavetogether.Theytoldtheirparentstheywouldgotothelibraryandreturnhomeintheevening.

Noneoftheteenagerstoldtheirparentsabouttheirplantovisitthecave.（以后要學(xué)會(huì)，出門(mén)要和家人說(shuō)一聲去哪？）第二天，William邀請(qǐng)他的四個(gè)朋友一起去洞穴。他們告訴父母他們要去圖書(shū)館，晚上回家。沒(méi)有一個(gè)青少年告訴他們的父母他們打算去訪問(wèn)洞穴。Whentheteenagersreachedthecave,they

lefttheirschoolbagsoutside

toreducetheburden(救援裝備，物資食物水源會(huì)不會(huì)也留在包里了？).Onebyone,theyenteredthecave.Justwhentheytookafewstepsinside,somerocksfromthecavewallfelland

blockedtheentrance.（電影里古墓探險(xiǎn)也是這樣的，進(jìn)去入口就封住了）當(dāng)青少年們到達(dá)洞穴時(shí)，他們把書(shū)包留在外面以減輕負(fù)擔(dān)。他們一個(gè)接一個(gè)地進(jìn)入洞穴。就在他們走進(jìn)去幾步的時(shí)候，洞壁上的一些巖石掉下來(lái)，堵住了入口。“Howarewegoingtogetoutnow?”oneoftheteenagersSarahshouted.Williamhadanideaandsaid,“Maybewecantrydiggingthroughthefallenrockswithourhandstoreachtheentrance.”Butrealizinggettingoutofthecaveonlybytheirhandswasimpossible,theyhadgreatfear.Thesunwasabouttogodown.Theteenagersstartedcallingforhelp,butnobodycouldhearthem.Theteenagerswerelosinghope.“我們現(xiàn)在怎么出去？”一個(gè)叫Sarah的青少年大喊。William有個(gè)想法，他說(shuō)：“也許我們可以試著用手挖掉那些落下的巖石，扒開(kāi)入口。”但是，他們發(fā)現(xiàn)徒手是無(wú)法出洞，他們非常害怕。太陽(yáng)快要下山了。青少年們開(kāi)始呼救，但是沒(méi)有人能聽(tīng)到他們。青少年們開(kāi)始失去希望。Victorhappenedtopassby

theentrancetothecave,and

fiveschoolbagscaughthisattention.

Healsoheardsomesoundscomingfrominsidethecave.“Who'sinthere?”Victorshouted.Victor恰好經(jīng)過(guò)洞穴的入口，五個(gè)書(shū)包引起了他的注意。他還聽(tīng)到了洞穴內(nèi)部傳來(lái)的一些聲音。“誰(shuí)在那里？”Victor大喊。“I'mWilliam!Wecamehereyesterdaywithourteacher!"Williamrepliedinstantly.“Helpus,please!Wearestuck!Sarahcan'tbreatheherebecauseoffear.”“我是William！我們昨天和老師一起來(lái)到這里的！"WIlliam立刻回答。“請(qǐng)幫幫我們！我們被困住了！Sarah因?yàn)榭謶侄伎鞜o(wú)法呼吸了。”續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段：“Okay,calmdown,children!”Victorsaid.“I'llhelpyougetout!”Victorimmediatelycalledthefirst-aidcenterandrushedhome.“好的，冷靜下來(lái)，孩子們！”Victor說(shuō)。“我會(huì)幫你們出去的！”Victory立即撥打了急救中心的電話，然后匆忙趕回家。續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段：Soon,theteenagerswalkedoutsidethecaveandtookadeepbreathinthefreshair.不久，青少年們走出了洞穴，深深地吸了一口新鮮空氣。故事梗概：William和他的同學(xué)們?cè)谝淮慰茖W(xué)課的實(shí)地考察中，遇到了護(hù)林員Victor并嘲笑了他。在森林中，他們發(fā)現(xiàn)了一個(gè)洞穴，但被老師禁止探索。William記住了洞穴的位置，并在第二天與他的四個(gè)朋友偷偷返回。他們進(jìn)入洞穴后，一些巖石從洞壁上落下，封閉了入口，困住了他們。Victor恰好經(jīng)過(guò)并注意到了他們的書(shū)包，聽(tīng)到了他們的求救聲。Victor成功地將他們從洞穴中救出。故事發(fā)展線：William和同學(xué)們的森林之旅，遇見(jiàn)維克托并嘲笑他→William記住洞穴位置→William和朋友們偷偷進(jìn)入洞穴并被困→Victor發(fā)現(xiàn)并救援可展開(kāi)的點(diǎn)：1.在此次經(jīng)歷后，William和他的朋友們可能會(huì)對(duì)Victor生活方式有新的認(rèn)識(shí)和尊重,并向他道歉，并向他學(xué)習(xí)關(guān)于森林和生存技能的知識(shí)。(理解與尊重)2.William等也會(huì)對(duì)自己的行為負(fù)責(zé)，并接受他們對(duì)父母和老師的欺騙的后果。(誠(chéng)實(shí))3.這個(gè)經(jīng)歷可能會(huì)讓W(xué)illiam等學(xué)會(huì)更加尊重大自然，并理解到冒險(xiǎn)行為可能帶來(lái)的危險(xiǎn)。(人與自然/自我)試水作文續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段：Victorimmediatelycalledthefirst-aidcenterandrushedhome.Hegatheredsomeflashlights,ashovel

andafirst-aidkit,knowingSarah

mightbeinjured.

Racingbacktothecave,hereassuredthepanickedteens:

"Staystrong.

I'vebroughtsomesuppliestohelpgetyouout."

Usingtheshovel,Victorworkedarduouslyto

removetheweighty,fallenrocks.

With

repeatedscoops

oftheshovel(

這里repeated是想和原文Victor住了木屋很多年做出對(duì)應(yīng)),

Williamandotherteenagerscould

feel

apoundingintheir

heads(腦中開(kāi)始感悟)yetalsoaslightsenseofreliefastheygotclosertofreedom.

Thefirst-aidteamarrivedandhelpedVictor.

Finally,afterwhatfeltlikeaneternity,thelastrockwasmoved.

續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段：Soon,theteenagerswalkedoutsidethecaveandtookadeepbreathinthefreshair.

Theirfaceswerestreakedwithdirtandreliefastheysawtheeveningsky.

Thegroupthankedthefirst-aidteam,andturnedtoVictor,lookingathimwithfacesfilledwithgratitude."Vitor,Weapologizeforthe

mockeryyesterday.Andwedowanttothankyou.

Yourlifestyleandexperiencereallymattered"their

voicechokedwith

newfoundrespect.

Therewasmoretolearnfromthishumbleforesterthantheyhadinitiallythought.

Underthesoft

illumination

ofthemoon,theymadetheirwayhome,recognizingthat

theiradventurehadturnedintoalessontheywouldcarrythroughlife.附：官方參考范文Victorimmediatelycalledthefirst-aidcenterandrushedhome.

Afteralittlewhile,Victorgotbacktotheentrancewithashovelandaflashlight."Hey!I'mback!"heshouted,assuringthekidsthathewouldrescuethem.Then,hebegandiggingthroughtherocksattheentrance.Itwasn'teasyforonemantodigthroughtherocks,buthewastryinghisbest.Meanwhile,WilliamandhisfriendstriedtostaycalmandtoldSarahnottoworry.Afewminuteslater,Williamandhisfriendscouldseetheflashlightshinethroughthecave'sentrance,whichmadethemexcited.Soon,theteenagerswalkedoutsidethecaveandtookadeepbreathinthefreshair.

Fortunately,Sarahfeltbetter.Justthen,medicalworkersarrivedandexaminedthechildrencarefullytomakesuretheywereOK.WilliamlookedatVictorwhowaswornoutandregrettedmakingfunofhimwhenthey