2017年1月高考作文題：假設你是明啟中學的學生王磊，你的好友李宏今年暑假將赴英國參加為期兩個月的海外交流活動。如果選擇主辦方安排的住宿，他需要額外支付較高的費用。但他也可以通過為當地社區養老院提供每月三十小時的義工服務，獲得在養老院免費住宿的機會。李宏通過郵件向你征求意見，寫一封回信，內容須包括：1.你對此事的明確態度；2.你的理由。2017年1月高考作文題：假設你是明啟中學的學生王磊，你的好1I'mgladtohearthatyouhaveaccesstoparticipateinanoverseascommunicationactivityinBritainwhichwilllasttwomonths.Isuggestthatyoushouldchooseworkingasavolunteerthirtyhourseverymonthforthelocalcommunityaginghospitaltogainachancetostayinitforfree.Myreasonsareasfollows.

Notonlycanyouenhanceyoursocialexperiences,butalsoyoucanreduceyourcosts.Contrarytotheaccommodationarrangedbythehost,youcansavealotofmoney.Undoubtedly,thecostmusthavebeenhighifyouchooseit.Stayingintheaginghospital,thecontrastcouldn'tbegreater.Ononehand,onlybyworkingasavolunteercanyougainafreestay.Itsoundsgreat!Yourarrivalwilladdcolorstotheatmospherethere.Ontheotherhand,duringoursparetimewewillalsospendtimehelpingothersinoursocietyteachesustobeawarm-heartedperson.Yourarrivalwillalsoreducetheburdensthere.Asanoldsayinggoes,“wecangainboththingsatthesametime”,sowhynotchooseit?Ihopethatyouwilltakemyadvice,bestwishesthatyouwillhaveagoodtimethere,itisagoldenchancethatyouwillgaininsummervacation.Inshort,enjoyyourself.I'mgladtohearthaty2Whatmattersisnotwhereyoulivebuthowmuchyoucanlearninthistrip.Aboveall,youcankeepcompanywithsomenativeseniorcitizensherewhohaveahungerforalistenerandafriend.Youcanalsobeexposedtolocalculturewiththeirhelp.Whatmattersisnotwhereyou3Notonlycanyouimproveyourlanguageskills,whichisofvitalimportancetoyourstayinBritain,butalsoyoursocialabilitywillbeenhancedsothatyouarecapableofaddressingdifferentthings.Notonlywillyourexperiencethehappinesswhenhelpingtheagedbutalsoyoucanlistentotheseniorcitizenstalkingabouttheirlifefromwhichyoucangetadeepunderstandingofthecountry’scultureandpracticeandthatwillbenefityoualot.Notonlycanyouimproveyour4*審題假如你是啟明中學的王磊，你的學校最近準備引進一個機器人充當食堂服務員或者圖書管理員的工作，并在學校的貼吧上向同學們征求意見。你在貼吧上回復向學校提出意見。1.明確提出你的觀點；2.通過比較，說明你這樣選擇的理由。

（可從工作效率和服務范圍等作比較）（2018年1月高考）通過比較*審題假如你是啟明中學的王磊，你的學校最近準備引進一個機器人5*審題（2018年1月靜安一模）你是王華，臨近寒假，你的好朋友劉偉寫信向你咨詢他的寒假計劃。目前有三個備選方案，一.去美國某高中參加冬令營;二.應征某歷史博物館臨時講解員；三.提前學習下學期的高中課程。請給劉偉寫回信，談談你的看法。信中必須包括：1.你建議的方案；2.你如此建議的理由；3.你對于執行此方案的建議。*審題（2018年1月靜安一模）你是王華，臨近寒假，你的好6你叫Jenny，你的網友Peter（高一學生）即將面臨期末考試，近日，他就是否要請家教來幫他復習迎考發郵件向你求教，請給Peter回復一封電子郵件，郵件必須包括以下內容：1.結合你自身的學習經歷就是否要請家教表達你的觀點及理由；2.就復習迎考給出2條主要建議。

*審題（2015年1月黃浦一模）結合你自身的學習經歷你叫Jenny，你的網友Peter（高一學生）即將面臨期末考7AI技術迅猛發展，可見的未來就將有很多人會失業。作為高三學生你會因為AI的發展而改變你將要填寫的志愿嗎？請表明你的觀點，并陳述理由。*審題(2018年3月育才學程考）改變你將要填寫的志愿嗎建議:時間允許的話，圈出題目中

的重點提示，寫出outline，再動筆。AI技術迅猛發展，可見的未來就將有很多人會失業。作為高三學生8一.審題到位二.語言豐富各類從句、強調句、倒裝句、分詞…一.審題到位二.語言豐富各類從句、強調句、倒裝句、分詞…9*用好插入語Therearepeople,Iamsure,whowillsaythatthewateristoocold.Hiswords,tosomeextent,areright.Thequestion,frommypointofview,deservesthinkingover.4.Whathedidyesterdaywasdissatisfactory.1.Therearepeoplewhowillsaythatthewateristoocold.2.Hiswordsareright.3.Thequestiondeservesthinkingover.Whathedidyesterday,bynomeans,wassatisfactory.Thereislittle,ifany,hopeofwinning.5.Thereislittlehopeofwinning.*用好插入語Therearepeople,Iams10*用好副詞Obviously,comparingallthecandidates,Idaretosayheisthebestchoice.Tourism,frankly,maypromotethemutualunderstandingamongnations.2.Comparingallthecandidates,Idaretosayheisthebestchoice.1.Tourismmaypromotethemutualunderstandingamongnations.Mostresearchersbelievethat,intheory,mobilephonesareabsolutelysafe.intheoryabsolutely3.Technologicalchangeswillleadtounemploy-ment.Technologicalchangeswillinevitablyleadtounemployment.*用好副詞Obviously,comparingall11Isincerelyhopethatmysuggestionswillbeputintopractice,andamfullyconvincedthatthecoursewillfunctioneffectivelywithourjointefforts.Isincerelyhopethatmysugge12*用好否定1.Themayorisverysatisfiedinherwork.2.WhenIhearofthebird’ssong,Ialwaysthinkofthespringtime.Themayorisneverdissatisfiedinherwork.Ineverhearofthebird’ssongwithoutthinkingofthespringtime.3.Itispossibletomasteraforeignlanguagewithinashortperiodoftimeifyouuseagoodstudymethod.Itisnotimpossibletomasteraforeignlanguagewithinashortperiodoftimeifyouuseagoodstudymethod.*用好否定1.Themayorisverysati13*用好排比1.Frommyobservation,manypeopletodayspendtheirtimereceiving

moreandmore

education,working

moreandmorehours,andmaking

moreandmoremoney.2.Aleaderwhohasrespectforotherpeopleatalllevelsofanorganization,fortheworktheydo,andfortheirabilities,desiresandneeds,willfindthatrespectisreturned.*用好排比1.Frommyobservation,m143.Iaminfavorofequalrightsforwomen.Ithinkwomenshouldespeciallyhavetherighttocompetewithmenforjobsonequalterms．Theyshouldgetthesamepayasmenforthesamejob.Theyshouldalsohaveequalopportunitiesforpromotion.

Iaminfavorofequalrightsforwomen,especiallytherighttocompetewithmenforjobsonequalterms,therighttogetthesamepayasmenforthesamejob,andtherighttohaveequalopportunitiesforpromotion.

3.Iaminfavorofequalrigh15一.審題到位二.語言豐富三.示范有效一.審題到位二.語言豐富三.示范有效16目前，某某學校正在開展推選“校園形象大使”(imageambassadoroncampus)活動。假定你是該校的一名學生，請以書信的形式向校長推薦一位同學或者進行自薦，并結合具體事例闡明推薦的理由。目前，某某學校正在開展推選“校園形象大使”(imageam17

開頭段：1.Frommyperspective,themostsuitablepersonismyroommate,Sophia,whohasreallytaughtmewhattheword“excellence”means

.2.Hearingtheactivityofselectinganimageambassadoroncampus,I’dliketorecommendmyclassmate,Sophia,whoisourspiritualleader.

3.Frommyperspective,Jackissignificantlybetterthananyothercandidateinourschool.4.MyrecommendationisatopstudentinmyclassnamedJack,whoenjoysagoodreputationamongallthestudentsofourschool.

5.Itisessentialtochooseanimageambassadoroncampus,whoshouldbegoodatbothacademicanddailylifeskills.MystrongrecommendationisJack,whoisreallyaperfectfitforthistitle.Icanfindhisvariousgoodqualitiesandletmeshowyousome.6.Ifyouaskmewhohashelpedmemost,Ithinktheremaynot

beasecondalternative.NooneissuperiortoTominhelping

others.

18中間段：1.Hehassomanyadmirablepersonalqualitiesthat

thereisnobettersuitablepersonforthisgreat

honorinmyheart.

2.Asisknowntoall,theimageambassadoroncampusisthesymbolofthewholeschoolstudents.3.Therefore,it’snecessaryforhimorhertogetgoodmarksinbothstudyingandsports.

4.Anotherreason,whichisalsoveryimportant,isthathehascharmingappearanceandelegantbehavior.5.Torepresentourschool,theimageambassadorshouldhavethesequalities,whichareabsolutely

necessary.中間段：19具體事例：1.Moreover,itwasherwarmheartthathadleftmeadeepimpression.Therewasonceaclassmateofherswhohadtroubleingettingalongwithothers.Hewassofrustratedthatnearlytriedtocommitsuicide.Fortunately,thankstoSophia’scompanyandpatience,hewasinspiredtowalkoutofthedarkness.Hetoldmethatsheseemedtobeanangeltohimwhodelightedhiswholeworld.2.MyconfidenceisbasedonhispreviousexperienceofparticipatinginModelUnitedNations.RepresentingChina,Lingonceservedasanambassadortodiscussinternationalaffairs.“Ifirmlybelieve…”,withgesturesandcheerfulaccent,Ling’sspeechwassostimulatingandconvincingthateveryonepresentwasdeeplyshocked.Withsuchperfectperformance,Lingcanbecertainlyqualifiedfortheposition.

具體事例：203.Oneofhermostunforgettableexperiencesmaybealivingexampleaccountingformyrecommendation.Inspiteofherordinaryphysicalquality,shesignedupforthelongjumpinthesportsmeetingwithherearnesthearttoparticipateinthismeaningfulactivity.Unfortunately,atfirst,theresultwassopoorthatshecouldhardlybeontherank.Althoughthebadresultmadeherinlowspirits,insteadofgivingup,sheinsistedontrai