專題十五短文改錯Correction1（2018課標全國I）Duringmylastwinterholiday,Iwenttocountrysidewithmyfathertovisitmygrandparents.Ifindabigchangethere.ThefirsttimeIwentthere,theywerelivinginasmallhousewithdogs,ducks,andanotheranimals.LastwinterwhenIwenthereagain,theyhadabigseparatehousetoraisedozensofchicken.Theyalsohadasmallpondwhichtheyraisedfish.Mygrandpasaidlastsummertheyearnedquitealotbysellthefish.Ifelthappilythattheirlifehadimproved.Attheendofourtrip,ItoldmyfatherthatIplannedtoreturnforeverytwoyears,butheagreed.士答案foundDuringmylastwinterholiday,Iwentto?Athecountrysidewithmyfathertovisitmygrandparents.I②f1ndabigchangethere.ThefirsttimeIwentthere,theywerelivinginafoundsmallhousewithdogs,ducks,and@anotheranimals.LastwinterwhenIwent④here-again,other theretheyhadabigseparatehousetoraisedozensof⑤ch1cken.Theyalsohadasmallpond⑥Ainchickenswh1chtheyraisedfish.Mygrandpasaidlastsummertheyearnedquitealotby⑦sel1thefish.Iwhere sellingfelt?happi1ythattheirlifehadimproved.Attheendofourtrip,ItoldmyfatherthatIplannedtohappyreturn⑨foreverytwoyears,⑩-butheagreed.and士解析①考查定冠詞。和爸爸去看望鄉下的爺爺奶奶,“鄉村”常用thecountryside。②考查動詞時態。根據第一句話的時間狀語Duringmylastwinterholiday可知,第二句的謂語動詞應該用一般過去時。原文中的find與時間狀語不符。③考查限定詞。句中animals是復數形式，所以修飾該名詞的限定詞應該用other(其他的)，因為other后接名詞復數。而原文中的another(又一;另一)后接名詞單數。④考查副詞。上文已經點明去鄉下爺爺奶奶家，所以去年冬天(lastwinter),作者應該是又去“那里(there)”了,而非原文中的“這里(here)”。⑤因為該詞前有dozensof（幾打;幾十個）來修飾，因此該詞要用名詞的復數形式chickens。chicken作不可數名詞時，意為“雞肉”;作可數名詞時，意為“小雞”。原文中把該詞當成不可數名詞用，與前面的dozensof（幾打;幾十個）矛盾。⑥考查定語從句關系詞。先行詞為asmallpond（一個小池塘）,代入定語從句后可知關系詞作地點狀語,所以應該用關系副詞where;關系副詞可以相當于“介詞+which”,所以根據定語從句的意思“他們在小池塘里養魚”可知，在which前加in,構成inwhich（二where）引導的定語從句。而原句中的which是關系代詞，可在定語從句中作主語、表語或賓語。⑦考查非謂語動詞。句意:我爺爺說去年夏天通過賣魚掙了很多錢。根據句意可知，此處應該用by+doingsth.來表示一種方式，而原文忽略了介詞by的存在。⑧考查形容詞。該詞前的felt用作系動詞時，后面要用形容詞作表語，因此需要把副詞happily改為形容詞happy。原文忽略了形容詞和副詞的區別，沒有注意到feel作為系動詞的用法。⑨考查固定短語。everytwoyears本身是固定短語,不用加介詞。⑩考查連詞。根據句意可知，作者計劃每兩年回鄉下一次「并且”父親同意了,應該是順承而不是轉折關系，原詞混淆了上下句的邏輯關系。Correction2（2018課標全國H）WhenIwaslittle,Friday,snightwasourfamilygamenight.Aftersupper,wewouldplaycardgamesofallsortinthesittingroom.Asthekid,Ilovedtowatchcartoons,butnomatterhowmanytimesIaskedtowatchingthem,myparentswouldnottoletme.Theywouldsaytousthatplayingcardgameswouldhelpmybrain.StillIunwillingtoplaythegamesforthemsometimes.Ididn,trealizehowrightmyparentsareuntilIenteredhighschool.ThegamesmyparentstaughtmewhereIwasachildturnedouttobeveryusefullaterinmylife.*答案WhenIwaslittle,①Fridaysnightwasourfamilygamenight.Aftersupper,wewouldplayFridaycardgamesofall②sort-inthesittingroom.As③thekid,Ilovedtowatchcartoons,butnosorts amatterhowmanytimesIaskedto④watchingthem,myparentswouldnot⑤toletme.Theywatchwouldsayto⑥-us-thatplayingcardgameswouldhelpmybrain.StillI?Awasunwillingtomeplaythegames⑧-f0^themsometimes.Ididn,trealizehowrightmyparents⑨-are-untilIwith wereenteredhighschool.Thegamesmyparentstaughtme?whereIwasachildturnedouttobewhenveryusefullaterinmylife.士解析①考查名詞作定語。此處意為“星期五晚上”，應該用Friday而不是表示所屬關系的Friday’s。所以要把Friday's改為Friday。②考查名詞。此處sort表示“種類”，是可數名詞,前面有all修飾,故要用sort的復數形式。所以要把sort改為sorts。③考查冠詞。句意:小時候，我喜歡看卡通片。根據語境可知，此處要用表示泛指的不定冠詞a,所以要把the改為a。④考查非謂語動詞。asktodosth.請求做某事,towatch是不定式，所以要把watching改為watch。⑤情態動詞后跟動詞原形，所以要把to去掉。⑥考查代詞。根據語境可知此處要把us改為me。⑦考查系動詞。句意:有時候我依然不愿意和他們一塊兒玩這類游戲。beunwillingtodosth.不愿意做某事。句子中作表語的形容詞unwilling前沒有系動詞，而本文的動詞時態均為一般過去時，所以要加was。⑧考查介詞。根據上題的解析可知，此處表示“和他們玩游戲”，即playthegameswiththem,所以要把for改為witho⑨考查動詞時態。本文的動詞時態均為一般過去時，所以要把are改為were。⑩考查時間狀語從句。根據語境可知此處應該用when引導時間狀語從句，所以要把where改為when。Correction3（2018課標全國HI）ItwasMondaymorning,andthewritingclasshadjustbegin.Everyonewassilent,waittoseewhowouldbecalledupontoreadhisandherparagraphaloud.Someofuswereconfidentandeagertakepartintheclassactivity;otherswerenervousandanxious.Ihaddonemyselfhomework,butIwasshy.Iwasafraidthattospeakinfrontofalargergroupofpeople.Atthatmoment,Irememberedthatmyfatheroncesaid,“Theclassroomisaplaceforlearningandthatincludelearningfromtextbooks,andmistakeaswell."Immediate,Iraisedmyhand.士答案ItwasMondaymorning,andthewritingclasshadjust①begin.Everyonewassilent,②begunwa1ttoseewhowouldbecalledupontoreadhis③andandherparagraphaloud.Someofuswaiting orwereconfidentandeager④Atotakepartintheclassactivity;otherswerenervousandanxious.Ihaddone⑤myse1fhomework,butIwasshy.Iwasafraid⑥thattospeakinfrontofa⑦1argermy/the largegroupofpeople.Atthatmoment,Irememberedthatmyfatheroncesaid,“Theclassroomisaplaceforlearningandthat⑧inc1udelearningfromtextbooks,and⑨m1stakeaswell.”?includes mistakes1mmed1ateImmediate,Iraisedmyhand.Immediately噂解析①考查動詞的時態。此處為過去完成時，過去完成時的結構為“had+過去分詞”，而begin的過去分詞為beguno②考查非謂語動詞。本句主干為Everyonewassilent,主系表結構完整，所以此處的wait應用非謂語動詞形式。everyone與wait之間為邏輯上的主動關系，因此用現在分詞waiting作伴隨狀語。③考查連詞。根據句意可知應該是讀他“或”她的段落。前后之間是選擇關系，原文中的and沒有選擇意義。④考查動詞不定式。beeagertodosth.渴望做某事。⑤考查代詞或冠詞。doone,shomework為固定短語，意為“做作業”,homework前應該加形容詞性物主代詞，原文中的myself是反身代詞。dothehomework也可表示“做作業”。⑥考查固定結構。beafraidtodosth.意為“不敢做某事”,that是多余的。⑦考查形容詞原級。原句中并沒有比較的含義，所以應該把比較級larger改為原級large,構成alargegroupofpeople”一大群人”。⑧考查時態和主謂一致。此處講的是客觀事實，應用一般現在時。主語that指代前面的動名詞learning,是單數概念,因此謂語動詞要用第三人稱單數形式。⑨考查名詞單復數。此處表示“學習包括從教科書中學習，也包括從錯誤中學習”o根據句意可知,“錯誤”應該不止一個,所以要用該詞的復數形式。mistake是可數名詞。⑩考查副詞。此處應該用副詞作狀語,來修飾后面的“Iraisedmyhand”。Correction4（2017課標全國I）Inthesummerholidayfollowingmyeighteenbirthday,Itookdrivinglessons.Istillrememberhowhardfirstdaywas.Beforegettingintothecar,IthoughtIhadlearnedtheinstructor,sorders,soonceIstartedthecar,mymindgoesblank.Iforgotwhathehadsaidtomealtogether.Theinstructorkeptrepeatingtheword,“Speedup!”“Slowdown!”“Turningleft!”IwassomuchnervousthatIcouldhardlytellwhichdirectionwasleft.Afewminuteslate,theinstructoraskedmetostopthecar.ItwasareliefandIcametoasuddenlystopjustinthemiddleontheroad.答案Inthesummerholidayfollowingmy①eighteenbirthday,Itookdrivinglessons.Istilleighteenthrememberhowhard②Athe/myfirstdaywas.Beforegettingintothecar,IthoughtIhadlearnedtheinstructor,sorders,③一so—onceIstartedthecar,mymind④-goesblank.Iforgotwhathebut/yet wenthadsaidtomealtogether.Theinstructorkeptrepeatingthe⑤w0rd,"Speedup!”“Slowwordsdown!”“@Turningleft!”Iwasso⑦muchnervousthatIcouldhardlytellwhichdirectionwasleft.TurnAfewminutes⑧-^ate-,theinstructoraskedmetostopthecar.ItwasareliefandIcametoa⑨latersuddenlystopjustinthemiddle⑩0ntheroad.sudden of士解析①考查數詞。此處表示“我的第18個生日”，故用序數詞。②考查冠詞或者代詞。序數詞前應該用定冠詞the;本句中也可用形容詞性物主代詞，表示“我（學開車）的第一天”。③考查連詞。上車之前,我認為自己已經了解了教練的指示，但是車一發動起來，我的頭腦就一片空白了。根據語境可知前后內容之間為轉折關系而非因果關系，故改為表示轉折關系的并列連詞but或者yet。④考查時態。根據上下文可知，作者是在回憶過去的事情，故用一般過去時。⑤考查名詞復數。由“Speedup!”“Slowdown!”可知此處用復數形式。⑥考查祈使句。此處表示教練發出的命令，應用祈使句，故改為動詞原形。⑦考查固定用法。此處為so…that…結構，為固定用法。so在句中修飾形容詞nervous,much多余，故刪除。⑧考查副詞。此處意為“幾分鐘之后”,later符合語境。⑨考查形容詞。此處修飾名詞stop,故用形容詞。⑩考查介詞。inthemiddleof…意為"在 中間”。Correction5（2017課標全國H）Mr.andMrs.Zhangallworkinourschool.Theylivefarfromtheschool,andittakesthemaboutahourandahalftogotoworkeveryday.Intheirsparetime,theyareinterestinginplantingvegetablesintheirgarden,thatisontherooftopoftheirhouse.Theyoftengetupearlierandwaterthevegetablestogether.Theyhavealsoboughtforsomegardeningtools.Beside,theyoftengetsomeusefulinformationsfromtheInternet.Whensummercame,theywillinvitetheirstudentspickthefreshvegetables!士答案Mr.andMrs.Zhang①-all-/allworkinourschool.Theylivefarfromtheschool,anditbothtakesthemabout②一a-hourandahalftogotoworkeveryday.Intheirsparetime,theyarean/one③interestingmplantingvegetablesintheirgarden,④thatisontherooftopoftheirhouse.Theyinterested whichoftengetup⑤earlierandwaterthevegetablestogether.Theyhavealsobought⑥forsomeearlygardeningtools.⑦Beside,theyoftengetsomeuseful⑧inf0rmati0nsfromtheInternet.WhenBesides informationsummer⑨came,theywillinvitetheirstudents⑩Atopickthefreshvegetables!comes士解析①本題考查代詞。由句子主語Mr.andMrs.Zhang可知代詞所指代的是兩者,故不可用表示三者或三者以上的代詞all;此處意為“兩者都”或直接跟謂語，故all改為both或去掉all。②本題考查不定冠詞或數詞。“一個半小時”的固定表達形式為an/onehourandahalf。③本題考查形容詞。beinterestedin“對 感興趣“為固定短語。④本題考查定語從句。分析句子結構可知，此處為定語從句，又由逗號可知此處為非限制性定語從句，故用which引導定語從句，而that只能引導限制性定語從句。⑤本題考查副詞。修飾動詞或動詞短語需用副詞，且此處沒有比較的含義，故用副詞的原級。⑥本題考查動詞。buy為及物動詞,其后直接跟賓語,故需去掉介詞for。⑦本題考查副詞。此處意為“除此之外”，故需用副詞besideso⑧本題考查名詞。information為不可數名詞，沒有復數形式。⑨本題考查動詞時態。由主句的一般將來時可知，時間狀語從句需用一般現在時。⑩本題考查非謂語動詞。由invitesb.todosth.“邀請某人做某事“可知在pick前需加to。Correction6（2017課標全國HI）WhenIlookatthispictureofmyself,Irealizeofhowfasttimeflies.Ihadgrownnotonlyphysically,andalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.Aboutonemonthafterthisphotowastook,Ienteredmysecondyearofhighschoolandbecomeanewmemberoftheschoolmusicclub.Aroundmeinpicturearethethingstheywereveryimportantinmylifeatthattime:carmagazinesandmusicalinstruments.Ienjoyedstudyingdifferencekindsofcarsandplanes,playingpopmusic,andcollectingthelatemusicalbums.Thispictureoftenbringsbacktomemanyhappymemoriesofyourhighschooldays.士答案WhenIlookatthispictureofmyself,Irealize①fhowfasttimeflies.I②-hadgrownnothaveonlyphysically,③andalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.Aboutonemonthafterthisphotowasbut④took,Ienteredmysecondyearofhighschooland⑤becomeanewmemberoftheschooltaken becamemusicclub.Aroundmein⑥Athe/thispicturearethethings⑦-they-wereveryimportantinthat/whichmylifeatthattime:carmagazinesandmusicalinstruments.Ienjoyedstudying?differencekindsdifferentofcarsandplanes,playingpopmusic,andcollectingthe⑨1atemusicalbums.Thispicturelatestoftenbringsbacktomemanyhappymemoriesof⑩yourhighschooldays.my士解析①考查動詞。realize表示“意識到”，是及物動詞，后接how引導的賓語從句,故介詞of多余，應刪除。②考查動詞的時態。時間狀語inthepastfewyears提示該句應使用現在完成時，故將had改為have。③考查固定搭配。notonly...butalso…意為"不但 而且 ”。④考查動詞的語態。take的過去式和過去分詞分別為took和taken,此處應用過去分詞taken。⑤考查動詞的時態。根據時間狀語Aboutonemonthafterthisphotowastaken可知，此句應使用一般過去時，且句中and連接兩個并歹列謂語，前后時態應保持一致，故將become改為became。⑥考查冠詞或限定詞。此處特指上文提到的照片，故應在picture前加定冠詞the或限定詞this。⑦考查定語從句。關系代詞that或which引導定語從句修飾先行詞thethings,且在從句中作主語。⑧考查形容詞。differentkindsof不同種類的。⑨考查形容詞。根據句意可知，此處表示“最新的音樂專輯，，，故應將late改為latest（最新的，最近的）;late作形容詞，意為“遲的，晚的”，不符合句意。⑩考查物主代詞。全文以第一人稱敘事,故此處your應改為my。Correction7（2016課標全國I）MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatIlive.Thoughnotverybig,buttherestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleevenhadtowaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessishonest.Everydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetablesorhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesaysthatheneverdreamsbecomingrichintheshortperiodoftime.Instead,hehopesthatourbusinesswillgrowsteady.答案Myuncleistheownerofarestaurantcloseto①thatIlive.Thoughnotverybig,②wherebuttherestaurantispopularinourarea.Itisalwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimes.Somepeopleeven③had-towaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohissuccessis④h0nest.have honestyEverydayhemakessurethatfreshvegetables⑤highqualityoilare⑥usingforcooking.and usedMyunclesaysthatheneverdreams⑦Aofbecomingrichin⑧theshortperiodoftime.Instead,ahehopesthat@ourbusinesswillgrow⑩steady.his steadily士解析①考查賓語從句。where引導賓語從句且在從句中作狀語。②考查連詞。though和but不能連用。though引導的讓步狀語從句是一個省略句，不能再省略，故只能去掉but。③考查動詞的時態。文章通篇敘述的是客觀事實，采用的是一般現在時,且句子的主語Somepeople為復數，故需將had改為have。④考查名詞作表語。賓語從句中的主語為名詞短語thekeytohissuccess,故從邏輯上看應該用名詞作表語，來解釋名詞短語的含義，即“什么是什么”結構。⑤考查并列連詞。此處表示并列關系，故用并列連詞and。⑥考查動詞的被動語態。主語freshvegetablesandhighqualityoil和use之間為被動關系，故需用被動語態。⑦考查介詞。從dreams后的動名詞becoming可知此處應加一個介詞of°dreamof…夢想 。⑧考查冠詞。inashortperiodoftime"在短時間內”。⑨考查形容詞性物主代詞。由句子的主語he可知，他希望他的（his）生意穩步增長。⑩考查副詞。此處用副詞作狀語修飾動詞growosteadily意為"（發展、增長等）穩步地，持續地”。Correction8（2016課標全國H）Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtododuringtheholiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestayathome,itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyourviewandgainknowledgeswecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplacesofinterestnearby.Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcostmany,yetwecanstilllearnalot.答案Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabout①howtododuringwhattheholiday.Wecan②chosebetweenstayingathomeand③takeatrip.Ifwestayathome,itchoose takingiscomfortable④butthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewilllearnlittleaboutand⑤Atheworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroaden⑥yourviewandgain?knowledgesour knowledgewecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwe⑧—can/cangotoplacesofinterestshouldnearby.I⑨thoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcost?many,yetwecanstilllearnalot.think much士解析①考查特殊疑問詞+不定式”。do后邊缺少賓語，故用what。②情態動詞后應該用動詞原形。③和staying^9U，故用taking④根據句意如果我們待在家里,舒服而且沒有必要花錢何知前后不是轉折關系,而是并列關系。⑤0^^前需要加定冠詞the⑥此處為我們能開闊我們的視野”故把your改為our。⑦knowledge是不可數名詞。⑧本題考查虛擬語氣。suggest建議”后的從句的謂語動詞應用“shoul動詞原形”，shou可以省略。⑨本句表示的是作者現在的看法而不是過去的看法。⑩此處表示不需要花費很多錢”故用much。Correction9(20課標全國田)Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothandworseyearsinmylife.Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakedeciyourself.However,myparentsdidn,tseemtothinksuch.Theyalwaystellmewhattodohowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmyparentscouldn,tunderstandmesoIhopedIcofreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwasindependentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleavihometocollege.Atlast,Iwillbeonmyown,butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturwheneverneedhelp.士答案Theteenage①yearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywerealsothyearsbestanc②w0rseyearsinmylife.QAtefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingandcouldmakeworstdecisionsb④yourse1f.However,myparentsdidn,tseemt@suhhinkTheyalway⑥^ellmyself so toldmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmyparentscouldn,tunderstandhopedIcouldbf)freelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwasindepende@wyr_strangefree wearingclothes.NowIamleavingh@eo-college.Atlast,Iwillbeonmyown,butIstillwantthavemyparentstoturntowhem)y^：Ineedhelp.10士解析①考查名詞。由from13to19可知year應改為years。②考查形容詞最高級。由并列連詞and前的thebest可知此處應用形容詞的最高級形式。③考查固定結構。atfirst“起初”為固定結構。④考查反身代詞。表示“我自己”用反身代詞myselfo⑤考查副詞。so在此處替代前邊出現的“Ikneweverythingandcouldmakedecisionsbymyself”。⑥考查動詞的時態。根據前后文語境可知應使用一般過去時，故需用該動詞的過去式told。⑦考查形容詞。befreefrom"從……釋放/解脫”為固定短語。⑧考查動名詞。by為介詞，其后應接動名詞。⑨考查固定結構。leave...for…“離開……去……”為固定結構。⑩考查代詞。whenever引導的時間狀語從句缺主語，由句意可知答案。Correction10（2016四川）ItisMother,sDaytoday.Thoughit,sawesternfestival,it,spopularinChinanow.Momhasafull-timejob,soshehastodomostofthehouseworks.Sheisagreatmother.BothDadorIplannedtodosomethingonMother,sDay.Wegetupearlyinthemorning.Dadcleanedthehouse,andthenwentonshopping.Whenhecameback,Ifoundabunchofflowersinherhand.IaskedMomtostayinthesittingroomandIcookedinkitchen.ThedisheswhatIcookedwereMom,sfavoritest.Atdinner,wesaidtoher,“HappyMother,sDay!”Momwasgratefulandmoving.士答案ItisMother'sDaytoday.Thoughit'sawesternfestival,it'spopularinChinanow.Momhasafull-timejob,①so-shehastodomostofthe②housew0rks.Sheisagreatbut houseworkmother.BothDad③-or-IplannedtodosomethingonMother,sDay.We④getupearlyintheand gotmorning.Dadcleanedthehouse,andthenwent⑤onshopping.Whenhecameback,Ifoundabunchofflowersin@—hand.IaskedMomtostayinthesittingroomandIcookedin?Athehiskitchen.Thedishes⑧一what―/whatIcookedwereMom,s⑨fav0ctest.Atdinner,wesaidtothat/which favoriteher,“HappyMother,sDay!”Momwasgratefuland⑩moving.moved11士解析①考查并列連詞。兩個分句之間為轉折關系，并非因果關系，故用but。句意:媽媽有一份全職工作,但是她還得承擔大部分家務活兒。②考查名詞。housework家務，為不可數名詞。③考查并列連詞。both…and…為固定搭配，意為“……和……都……”。④考查動詞時態。根據上下文以及inthemorning可知本句是在敘述過去的事情，故用一般過去時。⑤考查固定搭配。句意:爸爸打掃完房子，然后就去購物了。goshopping去購物。⑥考查物主代詞。根據句中的he可知此處為his。⑦考查冠詞。此處特指家里的廚房，故在kitchen前加定冠詞the。⑧考查定語從句。先行詞為thedishes,且定語從句中cooked后缺少賓語,故用關系代詞that/which引導定語從句，因其在從句中作賓語，故也可以省略關系代詞。⑨考查名詞。favorite最喜歡的事物。⑩考查形容詞。此處作表語，主語為Mom,故用moved（感動的）。moving感人的;動人的。Correction11WhenIwasaveryyoungchildren,myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellyearslate.Everytimehearrivedhomeatendoftheday,we,dgreetheratthedoor.Hewouldaskwhowewasandpretendnottoknowingus.Thenheandmymotherwouldhavehadadrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whiletheychat,myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptositinthetopofthefridge.Itwasbothexcitedandfrighteningtobeupthere!MysisterandIthoughthewassocoolforputtingusthere.*答案WhenIwasaveryyoung①children,myfathercreatedaregularpracticeIrememberwellchildyears②late-.Everytimehearrivedhomeat③Atheendoftheday,we,dgreet④her-atthelater himdoor.Hewouldaskwhowe⑤was-andpretendnotto@knowingus.Thenheandmymotherwere knowwouldhave⑦hadadrinkwhilesheprepareddinnerandtheywouldtalkabouthisdayandhers.Whilethey⑧chat,myfatherwouldliftmysisterandmeuptosit⑨山thetopofthefridge.chatted on12Itwasboth⑩excitedandfrighteningtobeupthere!MysisterandIthoughthewassocoolforexcitingputtingusthere.士解析①考查名詞單復數。句中主語是I,為單數，故應用child。②考查副詞。lateadj.遲到的，晚的;lateradv.后來,以后。③考查冠詞。attheendof...是固定短語，意為“在……結束的時候”，故填冠詞the。④考查代詞。此處指的是myfather,故應用him。⑤考查主謂一致。句中主語是we,為復數形式，故此處應該是were。⑥考查非謂語動詞。pretendnottodosth.假裝不做某事，所以應該用動詞原形know。⑦考查時態。根據上文everytime和句中would可知父母經常這么做,would后加上動詞原形，表示過去經常做某事。⑧考查時態。此句是時間狀語從句，講述的是父母過去的事情，故chat應改為過去式chatted。⑨考查介詞。onthetopof…為固定短語，意為“在……頂部，在……上面”，此處指在冰箱的頂部。⑩考查形容詞。此句主語是it,指孩子們被父親放在冰箱頂部這件事是令人興奮的,exciting常修飾事物，故用exciting。excited常用來修飾人。Correction12（2015課標全國I）WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.IthinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeincountryside.Theretheairiscleanorthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onthedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeaveryseriouslyproblem.Theairswebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.Muchrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundwaystoprotectyourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,we,lllivetoregretit.答案WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.I①thinkIwouldbehappythere.NowIamthoughtlivinginacity,butImissmyhomein②Athecountryside.Theretheairisclean③-o^theandmountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,④-on-thedevelopmentofindustrialization,theenvironmentwithhasbeenpolluted.Lotsofstudieshave⑤bee