CET-4寫作評分標準寫作分值占總分值的15%，閱卷標準分為五等：2分，5分，8分，11分，14分。2分（49.5）：條理不清，語言支離破碎或大部分句子有錯誤，且多為嚴重錯誤5分（58.5）：基本切題，表達不夠清楚，貫性差，有較多嚴重語言錯誤8分（72）:基本切題，有些地方表達思想不夠清楚，文字基本連貫，語言錯誤較多，其中一些是嚴重錯誤11分（85.5）：切題，表達清楚，意思連貫，有少量語言錯誤14分（100.5）：切題，表達清楚，文字通順，連貫性較好，基本無語言錯誤，僅有個別小錯CET-4作文高分技巧涵蓋所有提示的信息點段落清楚，層次清靈活使用過渡詞拼寫，語法正確句式多樣化6.書寫工整，字跡清Wecan'tignoretheinfluence.Onnoaccount/Bynomeanscanweignorethe正反論證型議論文：觀點對比型：2006.12許多人喜歡在除夕夜看春節晚會但有些人提出取消春節晚會我的看法2005.12名校校園正成為旅游新熱點校園是否對游客開放，人們看法不同3.我認為…2000.6很多人認為有必要舉行口語考試，理由是…2?也有人持不同意見...我的看法和打算寫作思路：?Parti弓I入部分(introduction):引入即將展開的話題，提供話題背景Part2觀點1：陳述觀點1的內容，其產生的原因或后果。Part3觀點2：陳述觀點2的內容，其產生的原因或后果。Part4我的觀點：陳述自己的觀點(或不同于觀點1、2的新觀點)，分析原因或優勢利弊說明型2011.6Onlineshopping現在網上購物已成為一種時尚網上購物有很多好處，但也有不少問題3.我的建議2009.6Freeadmissiontomuseum1.越來越多的博物館免費開放的目的是什么？也會帶來一些問題。3.你的看法2008.6Recreationalactivities1、娛樂活動多種多樣2、娛樂活動可能使人們受益，也可能有危害性3、作為大學生我的看法寫作思路：?Part1提出要議論的事物或觀點?Part2陳述這一事物的利與弊，或提出人們對該問題的兩種不同的看法?Part3歸納得出結論模板一：第一段：交代問題的背且景Thereisageneraldiscussion/debatethesedaysover…Thereisagrowingthesedaysforsbtodosth.Thisissue/problem/phenomenonhascaused/arousedwidepublicconcernovertherecentyears.Neverbeforeinhistoryhastheissueof.…beenmoreevidentthannow.Noissuehasreceivedmorepraiseandabusethan...Althoughpeopledliveshavebeendramaticallychangedoverthelastdecades,itmustadmittedthat,.?.isstilloneofthebiggestquestionswearefacingnowadays.第二段：說明一方面的觀點Whenitcomesto.,manypeopleinsist/believe/hold/claimthat..Theypointoutthefactthat...(Reason1),Theyalsoarguethat.(Reason2)第三段：說明另一方面的觀點However /nevertheless, otherpeople holddiametricallyopposedpointsofview/standonadifferentground/takea

differentattitude.Theymaintainthat???What'smore,theyfirmlymore,theyfirmlypointedoutthat...第四段：說明自己的立場A:one-side-d--AsfarasIamconcerned,theformer/latteropinionholdsmoreweight.For

onething,（論據1） Foranother,（論據2） Whenallthefactorsareexamined,wemayreasonablywemayreasonablycometotheconclusionthat Asforme/Formypart/Frommypointofview,Iagreewiththeopinionof.??forthefollowingreasons…AsfarasIamconcerned,theformer/latternotionispreferableinmanysenses.Asforme,Iamundoubtedlyinfavorofthe former/latterside/viewbecause???When consideringopinionsofbothsides,Iaminclinedtobeonthesideofthelatterview.Therearesomereasonsbehindmybelief.Firstofall,論據1.Next,論據2.Eventually,論據3.Insummary,總結觀點.Asacollegestudent,Iamsupposedto表決心.或Fromabove,wecanpredictthat預測.Thereissometruthinbotharguments.Tomymind,theadvantagesfaroutweighthedisadvantages(shortcomings,drawbacks).B:Balanced---Fromtheabovediscussion,Ihavetoadmitthattherearemeritstobothsidesoftheissue.However,Iwouldliketotakeamoreneutralposition.Ontheonehand,（針對觀點1立場或相關措施及建議）…;ontheotherhand,（針對觀點2立場或相關措施及建議）。模板二：Thereisnoconsensusamongthepeopleastotheviewof （主題）.Somepeopleholdtheideathat （觀點A）.Acaseinpointisthat （支持觀點A的例子）.Ontheotherhand,othersmayhaveaquitedifferentview.Accordingtothem, （觀點B）.Themosttypicalexampleisthat （支持觀點B的例子）.Weighingtheprosandconsofthesearguments,Iaminclinedtoagreewiththelatter.Admittedly,theformerpointofviewseemsreasonabletosomeextent,butthelatterismoreconvincing.NowadayspeopleNowadayspeoplemanyprefer（主題）becauseitplaysasignificantroleinourdailylife.Generally,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.First, （主題的優點1）.Besides,（主題的優點2）.Buteverythingcanbedividedintotwo.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthat(主題的缺點1).Tomakemattersworse, (主題的缺點Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsfaroutweighitsnegativeaspects.Whatevereffectsithas,onethingiscertain, （主題）itselfisneithergoodnorbad.Itistheusestowhichitisputthatdetermineitsvaluetooursociety.個人（該事物對人類個人有何好處）:細分為兩類:即tangible（看得見）的好處和intangible（看不見）的好處；tangible（看得見）的好處：與身體健康有關：Bytakingpartinginrecreationalactivities,youcanstrengthenyourbody.（remainfit,remainphysicallyhealthy,keepslim）Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonthatrecreationalactivities,singingsongsordancinginparticular,canhelptorelaxusbothmentallyandphysically.Chocolatescansatisfyhungerandhelpyougainnourishmentsnecessarytoyourbody.與工作有關。Aftertakingparinginrecreationalactivates,youwillproceedwithyourworkwithmuchhigherefficiency..Thatwillenableyoutoobtainawell-paidjob.與金錢，時間有關IfwecanceltheSpringFestivalGala,wewillsavealotofmoney,whichwecanspendonsomethingmoreimportant.Byworkingparttimeatsummer,wecanearnalotofmoneytofinanceoureducation.TheexistenceofvariousrecreationalactivitiescancontributealottothefinancialrevenueofthegovernmentWhatsmore,angible（看不見）的好處;改善心情，舒緩壓力Recreationalactivitiescanmakeyoufeelbetterandreleasethepressureofworkandstudy.Forthosewhoworkundergreatpressure,recreationalactivitiesaretheirbestwaytorelaxthemselves.Theywillfindthemselvesrefreshed,fullofvigourandenergy.交友Youmaymakenewfriendsthroughtheactivitiesorganizedbyourclubeveryweek，whichwillundoubtedlyenrichyourcollegelife.Recreationalactivitiesmayacquaintyouwithpersonsfromallwalksoflife.Bysodoing，youcansmoothoveryourrelationshipwithothers.開闊眼界，增長知識YoucanattendthelecturesgivenbysomefamousprofessorsinEnglishlearningsothatyourhorizonwillbefurtherbroadened.Somestudentsjustwanttoacquiremoreknowledgeandbroadentheirhorizon，sincetheinformationandknowledgelearnedinregularclassesisstillfarfromenough.Theyholdtheirviewforthereasonthatbydoingso，highschoolstudentsandtheirparentswillgainabetterknowledgeabouttheuniversitiestheywanttoapplywith.增加方便Theuseofprivatecarwillmakeourlifeeasierandmoreconvenient.認識社會，增長人際交往經驗Byworkingparttime，youcanhaveamuchcloserpictureoftherealsociety.Youcanalsoenhanceyourabilitytocomminutewithothers.提高成績，提高英語水平YouwillhavemoreopportunitiestopracticeyouroralEnglishbyparticipatinginEnglishCorner.YourEnglishwillbeimprovedaslongasyouworkhardenough.Yourvocabularycanbeenlarged.YouwillmakefewermistakesinyourwrittenEnglish.提高在未來求職中的競爭力Onthecontrary，otherstudentsselectelectiveswithaclearpurposeintheirmind，thatis，tolearnsomepracticalskills.Bydoingso，theycanmakethemselvesmorecompetitiveinfuturejob-huntingwhentheyaretograduate.增強信心Itwillhelpyourecoveryouconfidenceinyourself.Bydoingso，youwillrestoreyourself-confidence.I?增強責任感，增強愛心：Itwillrestore/strengthenyoursenseofresponsibility.Youwilllearntoshowconcernforothers.Ifwecansolvetheproblemsuccessfully，thewholesocietywillbecomemuchmoreharmonious.tangible（看得見）的壞處：與身體健康有關:Ifyoutaketoomuchchocolate,youwillbecomefat.Itwilldogreatharmtoyourhealth.Whatsworse,evenourhealthisthreatened.Thosewhofrequentlyuseprivatecararemostlikelytosufferfromhealthproblemsduetothelackofexercise.Youwillfeelprettytiredandexhaustedaftertakingtoomanyrecreationalactivities.Youwillfindyourhairfalloffandyoureyesightbecomemoreandmorepoor.影響工作。Ifyouindulgeyourselfinrecreationalactivates,youwillfindyourselffallingbehindinyourwork.Someofthemspendsomuchtimeonvideogamesthattheyignoretheirregularwork.c。浪費錢和時間Foronething,theyclaimthattheyearlyGalacoststoomuchmoneyonthepartofthegovernmentandthepeople.Iangible（看不見）的壞處；心情變糟，壓力變大Inthefast-pacedmodernsociety,mostofusliveundergreatpressureandstress.Theywillfindlifeissoboringandmeaningless.Theywillfindthepressureontheirshouldersbecomemoreandmoreintense.Itwillintensifythepressureontheirshoulders.人際關系變差Itisverydifficultforthemtomakefriendswithothers.Therearesomanyconflictsarisingbetweenthem.知識面過于狹窄Ifyouonlyfocusonyourbookswithoutchoosinganyelectivecourses,youcanhardlybroadenyourhorizonorenrichyourknowledge.生活不便Itissoinconvenienttoliveinthecountryside.人際交往經驗不足Ifyousimplysetyourmindonbookswithoutworkingparttime,youwillbecometoobookishtoknowwhattherealsocietyis.Youwillbecometooimmaturetoknowwhattherealsocietyis.Youwillbeverypoorincommunicatingwithothers.荒廢學業或工作Thosepeoplewhoareaddictedtosuchactivities,likevideogames,aremostlikelytofallbehindintheirworkorstudy.Someofthestudentsspendsomuchtimeonvideogamesthattheyignoretheirstudy.Theywillendupfailingtheirtests.未來求職中沒有競爭力Theywillbeputintoadisadvantageouspositioninfuturejob-huntingwhentheyaretograduate.喪失信心TheywilllosetheirconfidenceinthemselvesI.對什么上癮，無法自拔。Theyaretooaddictedtointernetgames.Theyareobsessedwithinternetgames.Theyindulgethemselvesininternetgames.J.宏觀上的壞處Ifwefailtoaddresstheproblemproperly,thewholesocietywillbeaffectedadversely.表達利弊的句型：Itisofgreatbenefittous./Itisbeneficialtous./Itbringsusalotofbenefits./Itdoesusalotofgood.Itdoesusmuchharm./Itisharmfultous./Itposesagreatthreatto...Although.contributesgreatlyto...theymayinevitablybringaboutmanynegativeimpacts.…isadouble-edgedsword./...cutsbothways（有利有弊）/hasbothfavorableandunfavorableaspects.Underfavorableconditions,ithelpseveryone;underunfavorableconditions,ithurtseveryone....'spromisemayexceeditsperil.Forallthedisadvantages,ithasitscompensatingadvantages.Astheproverbgoes:"everycoinhasitstwosides", isnoexception.俗語有云："萬事萬物都有兩面性。" 也不例外。Everythinghasagoodsideandabadside,and isnoexception.萬事萬物有其兩面性，而 也是如此。Thediscussionastowhetherthe...isablessingoracursearousesmostpeople'sinterests. 是好壞利弊問題引起了很多人的興趣。..playssuchanimportantrolethatitundeniablybecomesthebiggestconcernofthepresentworld. 尤為重要而引起當今社會的關注。Therecomesaquestion:isitablessingoracurse.問題是： 是福是禍?Thereisnodenyingthateverythinghasonemorefaceand...isnoexception.不可否認，每一件事物都有其兩面性，其實， 也不例外。Everythingintheworldhasitsowntwosides.Withoutexception,Ahasbothadvantagesanddisadvantages.Asweknow,...bringmanybenefitsandconveniencetopeople.眾所周知， 為我們的生活帶來很多好處。Therearenolessthanthreeadvantagesin..asrenderedbelow.如下所示， 至少有三種好處。Despitetheadvantages...has,somepeopleclaim,weshallnotlosesightofitsadverseeffectson...盡管 有些益處（優勢），有些人則認為，我們不能忽略了其對 的負面影響。

However,withtheadvanceofthehumancivilization,thereisanincreasingnumberofpeoplewhohaveraiseddoubtsaboutwhether...然而，隨著人類文明的進步，越來越多的人開始置疑是否Somepeopledeemitisadangeroussignalandcallforpublicawarenessofthenegativeeffectsithasbroughtabout.有些人認為這是一種危險的信號，因此需關注其給社會帶來的負面影響。Despiteitsmerits,italsobringssomeproblemstosolve.盡管其也有很多優點，不過，也給我們帶來一些問題。Butitsbrightsideshouldnotkeepusfromexaminingitsdarkside.但是，我們不能因為這些優點而忽略了其缺點。Fromthereasonspresentedabove,Ithinktheprosoutweighthecons.從以上原因可以看出，其優勢勝過劣勢（優點多于缺點）。AsfarasIamconcerned,itsdisadvantagesoutweighitsdisadvantages.我認為，其優勢勝于劣勢。銜接詞：1.1.first(ly),second(ly),third(ly);first(ly),second(ly),third(ly);Tobegin/startwith,afterthat/moreover,finally/lastly;Firstofall,next,then,eventually;Foronething.foranother..,lastofall;Whatcomesfirstisthat.Thencomes.;Inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,inthethirdplace2.因果becauseof,dueto,owingto,thanksto,asaresult,forthisreason,consequently,accordingly,thus,hence,therefore,inthisway3.比較和對比unlike,incontrast,onthecontrary,ononehand…；andontheotherhand,while,whereas,similarly,inthesameway,justas4.附加和遞進Inaddition,additionally,also,besides,furthermore,moreover,what，smore,notonly...butalso...,5.舉例forexample,forinstance,acaseinpoint,toillustrate,asanillustration, take.?.forexample6.讓步，轉折though,although,despite,inspiteof,regardlessof,eventhough,but,yet,however,nevertheless,otherwise,whereas7.表示關于,至于asregards,withregardto,concerning,asfor,intermsof8.表總結allinall,briefly,inbrief,altogether,toconclude,inconclusion,inshort,insummary,tosumup,tosummarize,onthewhole,insum,Wecandrawtheconclusionfromwhatwehavetalkedabout…Accordingtotheaboveanalysis,wecanarriveattheconclusionthat???參考范文：Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopic“StudyabroadorinChina?”Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:很多人認為有志向的學生應當到海外留學，理由是?也有人持不同意見?我的看法StudyAbroadorinChina?Thereisnoconsensusofopinionsamongpeopleastowhetherstudentsshouldstudyabroadornot.Somepeopleareoftheviewthattheyouthsshouldgooverseasforfurtherstudyifpossible,whileotherstakeanoppositestand,firmlybelievingthatitisofnonecessityforstudentstostudyinaforeigncountry.Thosepeoplewhomaintainthatitisgoodforstudentstogoabroadforfurtherstudyarguethatdiverseculturebackgroundcanbroadenstudents'horizon.Theyalsoclaimthatoverseasstudycanshapestudents'personalitybecausetheyareforcedtodealwithallkindsofdifficultiesbythemselves.Nevertheless,theotherpeoplewhocontendthatdomesticeducationisgoodenoughforstudentsarguethatoureducationalqualityhasbeengreatlyimprovedduringthepastdecade.Theyalsopointoutthatdomesticeducationisconvenientandeconomical.AsfarasIamconcerned,theformeropinionholdsmoreweight.Foronething,itcanstrengthenthelearners'abilitiestounderstandandcommunicatewithpeoplefromothercultures.Foranother,thedevelopedcountriesstillhavealotadvancedknowledgewhichisworthourstudy.Whenallthefactorsareexamined,wemayreasonablycometotheconclusionthatstudyingabroadisadvisable.FreeAdmissiontoMuseumsNowadays,anincreasingnumberofmuseumsareadmission-freetovisitorshomeandabroad.Thehiddenreasonbehindthisisnothardtoanalyzeasthere'sagrowingawarenessfortheauthoritiesregardingtheurgencyofpopularizationofculture,knowledgeandhistorywitheveryaveragepersoninoursociety.Onlywithfreeaccesstomuseums,canmostpeoplefullyenjoywhatmuseumscouldoffertothem.However,freeadmissiontomuseumsmightleadtosomesocialproblemsaswell.Themostobviousproblemisthatitmightgivemuseumsaveryheavyeconomicburdenwhichdirectlyhindersthesustainabledevelopmentoftheseorganizations.Asaresult,ourgovernmenthastoworkoutotherwaystocollectfundsfromdifferentchannels,whichmightbedifficulttooperateorcontrol.Ontheotherhand,freeadmissionattractstoomanyvisitors,someofwhichmightnotbewell-purposedanddosomeconsciousorunconsciousdamagetothevaluabletreasureswhichusedtobewell-preservedinthemuseums.Asauniversitystudent,Iaminfavorofthefree-admissionconduct.Yetitisproposedthatsomemeasuresshouldbetakentosolvethepotentialproblemscausedbyit.Forexample,museumscanmakesomeregulationstoguidethebehaviorofvisitorsorsetsome?closed'daysformuseumsforregularmaintenance.Freeadmissiontomuseumsbecomesalong-lastingphenomenonandhassustainabledevelopment.AdvantagesanddisadvantagesofprivatecarsWiththefantasticspurbothinindust