強化寫作（考研寫作評分標準最高檔③采用多種銜接，文字連貫，層次清晰寫作三要素考研圖畫寫作分析理解·話題商業(yè)、環(huán)保問題、溺愛、不孝敬老人、盲目追星、不悲觀··描述圖畫——闡釋意義——作出評論（舉例論證、應對措施·一、首①討·最近，當?shù)貓蠹埳系囊环藷崃业挠懻揜ecently,therearisesafiercediscussionaboutapictureinourlocal②現(xiàn)象發(fā)Thepastseveralyearshavewitnessedaphenomenonthatavarietyof…文章關鍵詞…h(huán)avebeengrowinglyprevalentandwidespreadinourmodernsociety. common\serioussocialproblem.Whatavividandthought-provokingpictureitisindescribingonecommon\serioussocialproblem.旨在aimtodo\aimatngItgoeswithoutsayingthatthepictureaimsatrevealingawidespreadandsevereprobleminChina,whicharousesindividuals’greatconcern.revealarouseone’sconcern=drawone’sattention=provokeone’s①漫畫②③Both二、描述圖畫岔路口之一一幅圖，描述由五個分句構成Asisvividlyandthought-provokingshowninthecaricature·諷刺地荒謬可笑地清晰地obviously\apparently\noticeably生動地吸引人地發(fā)人深省地thought-·致，選擇圖畫正中間的。20042009：anoceanof·2004：ontheracetrack\playground養(yǎng)老足球賽：onafootball愛心是一盞燈：ontheinthedarkness：inthemiddle\centerofthe·坐sit躺liestand走walk跑runswim現(xiàn)在分詞：最常見：raisingone’s最常見：dressedin…五分句法描述Asissymbolicallyandvividlyshowninthecaricatureabove,ontheracetrackrunsayoungathlete,rushingtotheend,dressedinat-shirtandapairofshorts,withsweatfloatinginthewind.Asisvividlyandthought-provokingshowninthecaricatureabove,onthegroundruntwodisabledmen,assistingeachother,dressedincleanandtidyclothes,withtwopairsofsticksbehindthem.…,onapileofstrawstandsahen,raisingherheadandpromisingthathereggsareasroundasnormalones,withtwoeggsbehindher.…,inthesunshinestandsanAmericangirl,raisingherheadandsmilinghappily,dressedinChinesetraditionalcostume,withapairofearrings,anecklaceanda三、描述圖畫岔路口之二①中文標題：圖畫上方\·Atthelower\upperpartofthepicture,wecansee\notice\observeseveralChinesecharacters,whichreadthat…·2004Atthelower\upperpartofthepicture,wecansee\notice\observeseveralChinesecharacters,whichreadthattheendisalsoanewbeginning.·2001：愛心是一盞燈，在越的地方越明Atthelower\upperpartofthepicture,wecansee\notice\observeseveralChinesecharacters,whichreadthatwherethereislove,thereishope.loveisalamp,andisbrighterinthedarkerplace.loveisalamp,beingbrighterinthedarker 邊緣、邊白處margin\marginal·Whatwecanseeonthemarginalpartofthepictureisashortpoem,whichmeansahortpom=amenindite\imply定性法\推理法①定性法使用主系表結構——主語+am\is\are+表語n.A是 AB（某種精神）對A（圖中主人公）的影響很大\·TheinfluenceofthespiritonAisTheinfluenceofthespiritontwodisabledmenisTheinfluenceofthespirit\ChinesecultureontheAmericangirlis推理法Awilldosth.\Awillnotdosth.（A=圖中主人公Thetwodisabledmenwillkeepwalkingalloverthe·1998Thiskindofbusinessmanwillnotsurviveinthemarket·Obviously,wecansafelydrawaconclusionfromthepicturementionedabovethat…draw=make\reach\comeAorB（人\物AB之間的關系（態(tài)度、表現(xiàn)Obviously,wecansafelydrawaconclusionfromthepicturementionedabovethattheAmericangirliscrazyabouttheChinesecostume.圖中事物：twosportsmen\twofootballObviously,wecansafelydrawaconclusionfromthepicturementionedabovethattwofootballplayersarenotconfidentenough.neitherofthetwofootballplayersisconfidentpicture——pictures\twopictures\apairofsit——satlie——laystand——stoodwalk——walkedrun——ranswim——onthecontrary\bycontrastunfortunay\tooursurprise簡Whatwecanfindoutinthesecondpictureisfindout=discover\disclose·2003副詞：話題\bothAsissatiricallyandappealinglyillustratedintheuppercartoon,inthegreenhousestoodadelicateflower,growingwithflourishandvigor(bloominginafullshape\openingcompley),protectedbytheshelter,withthestormoutside.Whatwecanfindoutinthesecondpictureisthattheflowerdiedimmedia介賓短語：withouttheTooursurprise,whatwecanfindoutinthesecondpictureisthattheflowerperishedimmediaywhenmovedoutoftheprotection.Thefirstpictureshowsthat…Whatwecanseeinthesecondpictureisthat…ThefirstpictureshowsthatanattractiveandhandsomemanwritesthenameofBeckham,aBritishsoccerstar,onhischeek.Whatwecanseeinthesecondpictureisthataplain-lookingyoungsterpays300YuantomakehishairstyleassameasBeckham’s.① 脆的,易碎的;嬌貴的\纖弱的,嬌弱的\精美的,雅致的\需要處理的; “美麗脆弱，爹地奉獻一生，三角戀愛復雜，弟弟里面提示”·Undoubtedly,theintentionofthedrawingistoreveal·Byexhibitingthepictureabove,theexaminer(作者)triestoconvey(傳達)themessagethat…將其中的詞引申（由物到人，由小見大國內(nèi)問題：inourmodern國際問題：allaround\overthea+very的替換詞+increasingnumberofin+very的替換詞+increasingnumbersSuchtwoyoungmenarecrazyaboutBeckhamyoungmenarecrazyaboutfamous·Nowadays,adramaticallyincreasingnumberofyoungmenarecrazyaboutpeopleinourmodernsociety,suchasexcellentathletes,popsingers,famousactorsandCurrently,aconsiderablygrowingamountofforeignfriendsarecrazyaboutChinesecultureallaroundteworld,includingChinesefoof,PekingOpera,handwritingandotherforms.拓展段落的四種方法：兩大（舉例子、找原因）兩小（反證法、列數(shù)字舉例OurdailyhasbeenfilledwithavarietyofIcanfindoutnobetterillustrationotherthanthefollowingtwo(themostvitalone).Takeasanexample,例一Likewise,例二….(simultaneously\inthesamemanner)、、、didnot…butto·2004Ourdailyhasbeenfilledwithavarietyofexamples.TakeYaoMing,thebasketballstar,asanexample,hedidnotsatisfywhathehaveachievedinChina,buttogotoAmericantocontinuehiscareer(NBAtoplayingbasketball).反證·Withthequickeningpaceofmodernlifeandtheincreasinglyfiercecompetitioninallaspectsofoursociety,…沒有……文章，一個人很難成功hardlycananyonesucceedinhiscareerorstudyingwithout+文章.Iftherewerewere\had\shouldWerethereno正面…，嚴重…(sb.wouldhardlydosth.).③若此趨勢繼續(xù)下去，嚴重·Werethistrendistocontinue,oursociety\environmentwouldsufferagreatdestructionbythattime.Withthequickeningpaceofmodernlifeandtheincreasinglyfiercecompetitioninalllinesofoursociety,hardlycananyoneachievesuccessinhiscareerorstuffywithoutperseverance(堅持不懈).(determination\akindofspirit\astrongbelief)列數(shù)·Asthestatisticsfrequentlyappearingonofficialnews·Accordingtotherecentsurveyconductedbyacertainnon-profitorganization,…·thenumberof…h(huán)asincreased\decreasedby…%(27.3%)untillastDecember.·2005：homelessold·1998：fake··燈：peoplehel·：peopleenjoyingChinese·溫室花朵：parentsindulging\spoilingtheir·2004：graduates\successful·追星：peopleadoringpop·不自信：unconfident\pessimisticpeoplepeoplehavingnotenoughconfidencepeoplebeingnotconfident·互助：peopleheleach·2009：peoplesurfing·文化火鍋：peoplelearningdifferent(fieldsofculturepeoplelearningEnglish·船上丟peopledestroying·灑了的酒：peoplewithpassive·養(yǎng)老足球賽：oldmennottakengoodcareoldmennotgettinggood找原·Severalfactorsmayleadto\beresponsiblefortheThephenomenonmayattributeto\resultfromseveralfactors,Thephenomenonmainlyresultsfromanoceanofreasons,+butIshallhereexploreonlyafewofthemostsignificantOnonehand,ontheother(hand),Foronething,foranother(thing),(1)原①金錢（正反Thosepeoplepossess\lackthefinancialabilitytodosth.(不定式作目的狀語Sb.dosth.duetothefactthattheyarecorruptedin(2)Numerouspeoplearetemptedby albenefitstodoTraditionaleducationsucceeds\failsintrainingsb.todoUnexampledly(史無前例的)fiercesocialcompetitionforcessb.todo⑥Ourmodernsocietyisshortofrigidlawsandregulationstrestrictthosewhodo·(1)Itgoeswithoutsayingthat文章canwidenourhorizonsandexertaprofoundinfluenceonour alitiesandlives.(2)如果沒它有，我們不能想象會發(fā)生什Obviously,文章isofgreatsignificancetousthatweretherenoit,wecannotimaginewhatwouldhappenintheworld.·(1)Itwillshowmoreprofoundandfar-reachingsignificancewiththepassageof②：越來越嚴重的Itwillshowincreasinglyseriousresultswiththepassageoftime.②：從長遠來看，這必然是構建和諧社會的絆腳Itmustbetheobstacleofestablishingaharmonioussocietyinthelong——到Tosolvethi