讀后續寫2018高二上.溫州期末Wemovedonintothe

jungle--aforestwherelargenumbersoftalltreesandplantsgrowveryclosetogether.

OldMali

wentinfrontandIfollowedclosebehindhim.Westoppedforthe

night

aboutanhourbeforeitbegantoget

dark.

OldMalilitafire.Whenitwasbightheshowedmehowtomakeabedwithmoss（青苔，苔蘚）.

Itwassoftandcomfortable.

Mali,howdidyoulearntomakesuchabed?

Iasked.

I

learned

tomakebedslikethat,Malireplied,―bywatchingandlisteningtoothers.Thatistherealwaytolearnanything.診查2018高二上.溫州期末Willyouletmewatchyoualways?

IaskedOldMali.―Iwanttolearnallthethingsyouknowaboutthejungle.

Whenwehadfinishedoursupper,OldMaligotontohisbedandlaydown.Itwasnowcompletelydark.Inthefirelight,OldMaliseemedtobe

fastasleep

onhisbed.Isuddenlyfeltaloneandafraid.

Alldayinthejungle,whilewehadbeenwalking,Ihadheardnoisesofanimals.Nowtheyseemedtobemuchnearer.Thejunglewasnowawallofblacknessinthelightofthe

fire.2018高二上.溫州期末Ifeltfrightenedandsuddenlymymouthwentdry.Iwantedtoscream.Ifeltmymouthopeningwide,readytoscreamasloudaspossible.

ButIdidnot

scream.IsawOldMali'sfaceinthefirelight.Thismademefeelashamed.Iheldmyteethtightlytogethertostopmyselffromscreaming.Ilaydownandclosedmyeyes.AssoonasIclosedmyeyes.Iheardathousand

noises.Thewholejunglebecamealivewithanimalsmovingquietlyandcarefullyallaroundme.SuddenlyOldMalitookadeepbreathandmadeanoise.Iwashearingsomany

imaginary

noiseandtherealnoisemadebyOldMaligavemeaterriblefright.2018高二上.溫州期末

Iopenedmyeyesandjumpedoutofbed.Ipulledmyknifeoutandhelditabovemyhead.注意：1).所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右；2).應使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；3).續寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4).續寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞。Paragraph1

Iwasgoingtoseeiftherewasawildanimalbesidethefire.___________________________________________________

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OldMali'squietcalmvoicemademefeelbetter.___________________________________________________一、表達能力高考續寫的考查點1.從句2.It做形式主語3.非謂語……二、編故事的能力小說三要素：1.人物2.情節3.環境導學續寫五步法

1.讀故事；2.選出合適的5個詞；3.由P1、P2所給內容推理P1內容，列中文草稿；4.由P2所給內容推理P2內容，列中文草稿；5.在草稿中試著加入所畫單詞，并翻譯。1.讀故事

一句話概括文章講了什么讀不懂沒時間根據首尾段進行腦補續寫題目

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Iwasgoingtoseeiftherewasawildanimalbesidethefire._________________________________

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OldMali'squietcalmvoicemademefeelbetter.__________________________________

2.選詞要點人物

〉時間地點

〉名詞

〉形容詞noisefirejunglenightOldMali2.選詞要點

learneddarkimaginaryfastasleepscream3.起草P1,P2之間的內容有因必有果制造懸念該段內容為對P1的承上以及P2的啟下3.起草P1,P2之間的內容Iwasgoingtoseeiftherewasawildanimalbesidethefire.

_________________________________有因必有果制造懸念該段內容為對P1的承上以及P2的啟下OldMali’squietcalmvoicemademefeelbetter.P1段草稿小心翼翼地去火邊查看發現什么都沒有（制造懸念）叢林里傳來奇怪的聲音（制造懸念）夜太深，啥都看不清我很害怕，不敢去看了找老馬力幫忙4.起草P2之后的內容

OldMali’squietcalmvoicemademefeelbetter._________________________________有因必有果制造懸念結尾緊扣正能量4.起草P2之后的內容

OldMali’squietcalmvoicemademefeelbetter._________________________________有因必有果制造懸念結尾緊扣正能量下文得知老馬力很冷靜，故事可能就是虛驚一場P2段草稿

老馬力和我拿著手電走進叢林聲音奇怪地停止了（制造懸念）拿著手電找了找發現什么都沒有突然閃出一個小東西（制造懸念）原來是一只兔子突然明白為什么老馬力如此冷靜了5.在草稿中試著加入選定單詞

OldMalinightjunglefirenoiseP1段草稿-翻譯

小心翼翼地去火邊查看Iwenttothefireandcheckedwhethertherewassomething.發現什么都沒有（制造懸念）But,tomydisappointment,therewasnothingnearthefire.叢林里傳來奇怪的聲音（制造懸念）Suddenly,astrangenoisewhichcamefromthejungleappearedagain.夜太深，什么都看不清Itwaslateatnight,Icouldhardlyseewhatwasthere,butthenoisecontinued.我很害怕，不敢去看了

IwassoscaredthatIcouldnotcheckitalone.找老馬力幫忙SoIturnedtoOldMaliforhelp.P2段草稿-翻譯

老馬力和我拿著手電走進叢林OldMaliandItooktheflashtoapproachthejungle.聲音奇怪地停止了Thenoisestrangelystopped.拿著手電找了找Wecontinuedtosearchwiththeflash.發現什么都沒有Butnothingwasfound.突然閃出一個小東西（制造懸念）Suddenly,asmallthingappearedinoursight.原來是一只兔子Itwasacuterabbit.突然明白為什么老馬力如此冷靜了IthitmewhyOldMaliwassocalmallthetime.Therewasnowonderthatrichexperiencecanmakemanstrongandwise.Iwasgoingtoseeiftherewasawildanimalbesidethefire.Iwenttothefireandcheckedwhethertherewassomething.But,tomydisappointment,therewasnothingnearthefire.Suddenly,astrangenoisewhichcamefromthejungleappearedagain.Itwaslateatnight,Icouldhardlyseewhatwasthere,butthenoisecontinued.IwassoscaredthatIcouldnotcheckitalone.SoIturnedtoOldMaforhelp.OldMali’squietcalmvoicemademefeelbetter.OldMaliandItooktheflashtoapproachthejungle.Thenoisestrangelystopped.Wecontinuedtosearchwiththeflash.Butnothingwasfound.Suddenly,asmallthingappearedinoursight.Itwasacuterabbit.IthitmewhyOldMaliwassocalmallthetime.Therewasnowonderthatrichexperiencecanmakemanstrongandwise.

續寫五步法

1.讀故事；2.選出合適的5個詞；3.由P1、P2所給內容推理P1內容，列中文草稿；4.由P2所給內容推理P2內容，列中文草稿；5.在草稿中試著加入所畫單詞，并翻譯。Practicemakesperfect!

AVacationwithMyMotherIhadaninterestingchildhood.Itwasfilledwithsurprisesandamusements,allbecauseofmymother---loving,sweet,yetabsent-mindedandforgetful.OnestrangefamilytripwetookwhenIwaseleventellsalotabouther.MytwosetsofgrandparentslivedinColoradoandNorthDakota,andmyparentsdecidedtospendafewweeksdrivingtothosestatesandseeingallthesightsalongtheway.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached,David,myeight-year-oldbrother,andIunwillinglysaidgood-byetoallofourfriends.Whoknewifwe’deverseethemagain?Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived,andweloadedsuitcases,books,games,campingequipment,andatentintothecarandbravelydroveoff.Webravelydroveoffagaintwohourslaterafterwe’dreturnedhometogetthepurseandtraveler’schecksMomhadforgotten.展示DavidandIwerealwaysalittlenervouswhenusinggasstationbathroomsifMomwasdrivingwhileDadslept:“Youstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookout(放哨)whileIgo,andI’llstandoutsidethedoorandplaylookoutwhileyougo.”Ihadterriblepicturesinmymind:“Honey,wherearethekids?”“What?!Oh,Gosh…Ithoughttheywerebeingawfullyquiet.”Wewereneveractuallyleftbehindinastrangecity,butweweren’tabouttotakeanychances.Onthefourthorfifthnight,wehadtroublefindingahotelwithavacancy.Afterdr