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一、閱讀下面段文,根據所給情節進行續寫,使之構成一個完整的故事。
Ipeeredovermygrandma’sshoulderasshesewedpiecesofclothtogether.ThetwopiecesbecameonefasterthanI’dimagined.Thecolors,however,lookeduglywhenputtogetherandnoneofthepatternsmatched.Allthepatches(補丁)onthisblanketseemedtodisagree.
“Grandma,that’stheugliest
quilt
(棉被)I’veeverseen.”
“Oh,sweetie,it’s
warm
and
beautiful,”saidGrandma,pointingtoapileofcrazypatternedshirtsandsuits.“Ican
take
theseoldclothesthatGrandpaandIwillneverwearagainandturnthemintosomethingusefuland
good.It’snotthequiltsappearancebutthe
love
thatsewsittogetherthatmakesitbeautiful.Thisquiltwillkeepyouwarmonacoldnightliketonight.AndIknowthatforafact.”Grandma
putherhandonmyshoulder,“Noteveryoneisasluckyasweare.Here,putonyourcoat.We’llgetasecondopinionabouthowuglymyquiltsare.”
Grandmafoldedafinishedquiltandtuckeditintoa
shoppingbag.Afterwards,wegotinthecaranddrovedowntown.Thewhitesnowturnedgrayeraswegottothecity.Eventually,Grandmapulledupatadarkalley(胡同)andwegotoutofthecar.Theterriblesmellofrottinggarbagemademefeelsickandpinchmynoseshut.Grandmatookmyhandandledmetothestreetlamp.Icouldseethesnowshimmering(發出微光)inthelight.
Grandmapaused.“There’susuallysomebodydownthisalley.It’squietandoutofthewind---agoodplacetostayoncoldnights.Anicewarmquiltmightmakeitevenbetter.”
Thedarkengulfed(吞沒)GrandmaandIaswesteppeddeepintothealley.Thepavementwascrackedandmissinginspots.Chickenbonesandstainedboxeslitteredtheirway.AndGrandma’sshoesmadealoudsoundwitheachstep.Feelingfrightened,IsqueezedGrandma’shand.Grandmasqueezedmyhandback.“It’sOK.”she
smiled.
“Who’sthere?”shoutedavoiceoutofthe
darkness.注意:1.所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右;2.續寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;“Ihaveanicewarmquilt,ifyouwant.”saidGrandma.
Backhome,Ifoundaworn-outquiltbyaccidentinacupboard.
分析■主題:愛心■人物:I,Grandma■情節:我看到奶奶縫制了一條帶有各種補丁的被子,認為這條被子非常的丑陋。但是,奶奶卻說被子的美不在于它的外表,而在于這條被子是用愛縫制的。之后,奶奶和作者一起來到城里破舊而又寒冷的胡同。......■呼應:與奶奶一起獻愛心,幫助困難的人范文“Ihaveanicewarmquilt,ifyouwant.”saidGrandma.
Silent,butsooncamethesoundofthefootstepsinthe
darkness,louderandlouder,towardsus.Abouttwometersaheadofusstoodashortthinoldmaninrags.HiddenbehindmyGrandma,Iknewallshedid!“Thequiltwasreallyforme?”askedhiminalowvoice.“Sure!”Grandmaopenedthe
shoppingbag
andpulledoutthecolorful
quilt.“A...thousand...thanks!”Icouldfeelthegratefultearsdownhischeeks.(76words)Backhome,Ifoundaworn-outquiltbyaccidentinacupboard.Curious,IwenttoGrandmafortheanswer,“Whyhaveyoukeptit?”Sheopenedhermouthasiftosaysomething,butchoked.Amomentofsilence,shesharedherbitterbut
warmstory.Alittlegirl,shecametothecityforalivingwithherparents,penniless.Thequiltwasa
love
fromakindman,helpingthemgothroughthecoldwinter.That’swhyshekeptsending
well
tothoseinneedyearsafteryears.Isurelywould,too!(83words)二、閱讀下面短文,根據所給情節進行續寫,使之構成一個完整的故事。
WhenIwasinthefirstgrade,
Mom
enteredmeinmyfirst
clown(小丑)contest.Theother
kids
mostlyhadstore-boughtcostumeswhilemyconsumewasmadebyMom.Ididn'thaveany
confidence
inmyself.
"Gouptothatclownemcee(主持人)andjokearoundwithhim,"Momtoldme.
Iwasn'tcrazyabouttheidea,butIapproachedLarrytheEmceeandasked,"Hey,BigFeet,wheredoyoushopforshoes?"
"AcostumestoreinKensington,"hesaidkindly.
Mom'strickworked.Iwonthe"bestpersonality"award,asmalltrophy(獎杯)withaphotoofmeandLarrystuckonthebackofit.
Wecontinuedto
improve
mycostume.Atacostumestore,Ifoundapairofcolorfulshoeswithwhiteleatherstarsoneachside.I
loved
themsomuchthatIworethemaseverydayshoes.Theotherkidsdidnot
respond
well.Theyevenwroteasongtolaughatme.
MomdefendedmyshoeswhenIcamehomecrying."Theotherkidsjustdon'trecognizestandoutthings,"shesaid.
IfIcouldnotclaimclosechildhoodfriendships,atleastIcouldboostmyselfupbywinningawards.Ienteredasecondcontestinthethirdgradeandwroteabout"whyIwanttobeaclownforadayatRinglingBrothers
Circus."Inthiscontest,theprizewasticketstothecircusforyourwholefamily.
MomandIwereinourcarwhentheannouncerreadmynameonair."Today'scontestwinnerisLauraSturza.Shewrote,'Youcanbe
unusual
atthecircus.Wheneveryonelaughsatyou,itfeelsgreat.Theaudiencelovesyouforbeinganoddball.That'swhyIwanttobeaclownforaday.'"
Momcalledmyteacherandrequestedhertosharethenewswiththeschool.Iwonderedhowmy
classmates
wouldtakeit."It'sgoingtobegreat,"Mompromised.
Thenextmorning,myschool'sheadteacherannouncedmysuccessoverthepublicaddresssystem.注意:
1.所續寫短文的詞數應為150左右;
2.續寫部分分為兩段,每段的開頭語已為你寫好;Paragraph1:Tocelebratemysuccess,Iworethecolorfulshoestoschoolagainthatday.
Paragraph2:
Astimewentby,Idevelopedamorerealisticviewofmymother'sbeliefthat"Icandoanything."
故事分析■Character:
Mom,I(LauraSturza),kids,theclownemcee,classmates,theteacher,myschool'sheadteacher■Theme:confidence■Content:
I:(GradeOne:noconfidence—>GradeThree:success—>...)
Mom:(trick—>defended—>
called/requested—>promised—>...)■Continuouswriting:success/view范文Tocelebratemysuccess,Iworethecolorfulshoestoschoolagainthatday.Confidence
wasapparentlyonmyface.NeverdidIfeelthatgood.Itwas
Momthatencouragedmeconstantlytocometothesuccess,whichreceivedlotsofcongratulationsfrommy
classmates
and
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