1、2022新高考衡水名師原創(chuàng)英語專題卷：專題十短文改錯(cuò)記敘類專練（90分鐘 100分）考點(diǎn)01：冠詞 3顆星考點(diǎn)02：代詞 3顆星考點(diǎn)03：介詞和介詞短語 2顆星考點(diǎn)04: 名詞 3顆星 考點(diǎn)05：主謂一致 5顆星考點(diǎn)06：形容詞和副詞 5顆星考點(diǎn)08：非謂語動(dòng)詞 5顆星考點(diǎn)09：動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài) 5顆星考點(diǎn)10：定語從句 3顆星考點(diǎn)11 名詞性從句 3顆星考點(diǎn)12 并列連詞 4顆星考點(diǎn)13 狀語從句 3顆星考點(diǎn)27短文改錯(cuò)記敘文專練 5顆星第I卷 短文改錯(cuò)（每題1分，共40分）一、假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。每

2、處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。Last Saturday, my brother Jeremy and I went to Pingyao that we decided to spend the weekend. At the train station, we noticed an old lady dragged a large suitcase.

3、She seemed be in trouble when we saw her standing on the bottom of the elevator. Getting closer, we realized that the elevator wasnt operating and that the passengers have to take the stairs. But with such a heavy luggage, the old lady werent able to get on the stairs. Jeremy and I went to the lady

4、hurried and we helped her carry the suitcase. The lady thanked me again and again. We felt quite warm. Helping someone in needs takes just a little effort but the reward can be rich and lasting.二、假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處.每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改.增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(),并在其下面寫出該加的

5、詞.刪除:把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉.修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞.2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分. Last year. my friend and l went to visit the Yellow Mountain We carried two backpacks, that turned out to be pretty heavier for the hike. I am not an experiencing hiker and those endless steps make me want to re

6、turn to the safe and comfortable ground. But my friend encouraged me great. Look, the top is coming closer and closer. We are almost there. I pulled me together and kept going. After three-hour exhausting hike to the top, but with wonderful sceneries on the way, we got to the top finally. For our pl

7、easure, we also found a hotel that looked very much inviting.三、假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除:把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉,修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。 Last term, an exchange student calling Jaco

8、b from the Great Britain came to our school. He really cares for Chinese culture. Jacob asked me to show himself around the city on weekends. I took him to many local place of interest and we also go to the theater to watch a show of Peking opera. He was so attracted by the performance as he decided

9、 to learn it. My father happened to know a master of Peking opera and introduced Jacob to him. Jacob was great honored to be one of his students. Put his heart into it, Jacob made a rapid progress. When he returned England, he gave a performance, for what he won much admiration from his classmates.四

10、、假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。When I was very young, I stayed at my hometown with my grandma. She was a diligent woman. She likes to gro

11、w vegetables or takes care of all the houseworks. Though my parents often ask her to quit the work, my grandma never listen. She takes that she does as her great joy. I understand her because I see her smile and satisfied with life. Several months before, my father bought for her a new smartphone. A

12、nd during the Spring Festival, I instructed her on how email and use the Internet. Aside from emailing, she thinks it feels greatly to talk to their grandchildren on WeChat.第II卷 語法填空（每題1.5分，共60分）一、閱讀下面短文，在空白處填入1個(gè)適當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~或括號(hào)內(nèi)單詞的正確形式。Like many young children, Vikas Jyani dreamed of 1 (be) a pilot as a bo

13、y. Living in a small village called Sarangpur in Hisar district, he did not let go of that dream and after years of struggle, 2 (succeed) in becoming a pilot.It was what he did after achieving his dream 3 would make headlines in the news.With his growing up, the elders in the village always encourag

14、ed him 4 (go) for his dreams. 5 turn, he promised that when he did become a pilot, he would take all of them together for a ride in a plane. And that was 6 (exact) what Vikas Jyani did when the time came. He arranged for plane 7 (ticket) for all the 22 elders over 70 years old in the village. The el

15、dest was 90 years old, and theyoungest was 72 years old, most of 8 had never been on a plane in their lives and never thought there was a 9 (possible) that they would take in the view from above the clouds.All the elders got to travel from New Delhi to Amritsar where they got to see the Golden Templ

16、e, Jallianwala Bagh and Wagah Border. Flying in a plane 10 (describe) as the best experience of their lives by many of the elders.二、閱讀下面材料, 在空白處填入適當(dāng)?shù)膬?nèi)容(1個(gè)單詞)或括號(hào)內(nèi)單詞的正確形式。An elderly carpenter was ready to retire. He told his employer of his plans _(leave) the house-building business to live _more leis

17、ure life with his wife. The contractor was sorry to see his good worker go and asked if he could build just one more house as a _(person) favor. The carpenter said yes, but over time _was easy to see that his heart was not in his work.When the carpenter finished the house, his employer handed the fr

18、ont-door key to the carpenter and said, “This is your house. . . my gift to you.” The carpenter was _(shock)! If he had only known he _(build) his own house, he would have done it all differently.So it is _us. We build our lives, a day at a time, often _(put) less than our best into the building. Th

19、en, with a shock we realize we have to live in the house we have built. If we could do it over, we would do it differently. But you cannot go back. Life is a do-it-yourself project. Your attitude and the _(choose) you make today help build the “house” you will live in tomorrow. Therefore, build _(wi

20、se)!三、閱讀下面材料,在空白處填入適當(dāng)?shù)膬?nèi)容(1個(gè)單詞)或括號(hào)內(nèi)單詞的正確形式。One morning, I was waiting at the bus stop, worried about (be) late for school. There were many people waiting at the bus stop, some of them looked very anxious and (disappoint). When the bus finally came, we all hurried on board. I got a place next the wind

21、ow, so I had a good view of the sidewalk. A boy on a bike (catch) my attention. He was riding beside the bus and waving his arms. I heard a passenger behind me shouting to the driver, but he refused (stop) until we reached the next stop. Still, the boy kept (ride). He was carrying something over his

22、 shoulder and shouting. Finally, when we came to the next stop, the boy ran up to the door of the bus. I heard an excited conversation. Then the driver stood up and asked,“anyone lose a suitcase at the last stop?” A woman on the bus shouted, “Oh dear! Its (I). ” She pushed her way to the driver and

23、took the suitcase thankfully. Everyone on the bus began talking about what the boy had done, and the crowd of strangers (sudden) became friendly to one another.四、閱讀下面短文，在空白處填入1個(gè)適當(dāng)?shù)膯卧~或括號(hào)內(nèi)單詞的正確形式。A reporter from Jiangsu Province went to Australia and some other_( country ) with his father for a 3-mont

24、h trip. His father spent most of his life_ ( work ) in the field. The son started the_ ( amaze ) trips with his father around the world because his father had cancer-a serious illness. The reporter wanted_ ( take ) his father to travel, hoping that his father can find his younger self in his last da

25、ys. They _ ( travel ) more than 13, 000 kilometers and took over 110,000 pictures on_ ( they ) trips to different countries. Well, a miracle happened during the “rebirth” trips. _their surprise, his father got better from illness and became more open-hearted. He even taught himself to play _violin,

26、and then_( gradual )he played it very well, _encouraged him a lot. Now he is expecting another trip to Africa. He is the most stylish dad ever.Time carves (雕刻) his face but youth flows in his blood. This is the real style.答案以及解析I、一、答案：Last Saturday, my brother Jeremy and I went to Pingyao we decided

27、 to spend the weekend. At the train station, we noticed an old lady a large suitcase. She seemed be in trouble when we saw her standing the bottom of the elevator. Getting closer, we realized that the elevator wasnt operating and that the passengers to take the stairs. But with such a heavy luggage,

28、 the old lady able to get on the stairs. Jeremy and I went to the lady and we helped her carry the suitcase. The lady thanked again and again. We felt quite warm. Helping someone in takes just a little effort but the reward can be rich and lasting.解析： 1that where考查定語從句的引導(dǎo)詞先行詞Pingyao是表達(dá)地點(diǎn)的名詞，引導(dǎo)詞在定語從句

29、中作狀語，應(yīng)用關(guān)系副詞where引導(dǎo)故將that改為where2dragged dragging考查非謂語動(dòng)詞notice注意到，其賓語an old lady與動(dòng)詞drag（拖、拽）之間為主動(dòng)關(guān)系，應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在分詞作賓語的補(bǔ)足語，故將dragged改為dragging3seem后加to考查不定式動(dòng)詞seem后面接動(dòng)詞不定式，此處需加不定式的標(biāo)志詞to故在seem后加to4on at考查介詞根據(jù)語境可知，老太太站在電梯的最底層，at the bottom of在底部，在最下面故將on改為at5have had考查時(shí)態(tài)本文整體時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí)，結(jié)合前后句時(shí)態(tài)，此處也用過去式故將have改為had6去掉

30、a考查冠詞luggage行李，不可數(shù)名詞，前面不可以加不定冠詞故去掉a7werent wasnt考查主謂一致主語the old lady為單數(shù)概念，謂語動(dòng)詞用第三人稱單數(shù)形式，故將werent改為wasnt8hurried hurriedly考查副詞此處修飾動(dòng)詞went，應(yīng)用副詞hurriedly（匆忙地）故將hurried改為hurriedly9me us考查代詞根據(jù)上文可知，Jeremy and I兩個(gè)人上前幫助太太，所以老太太感謝的是我們，作動(dòng)詞thanked的賓語，應(yīng)用賓格us故將me改為us10needs need考查短語in need在危難中、需要幫助的、在困難時(shí)，固定短語故將ne

31、eds改為need二、答案：Last year. my friend and l went to visit the Yellow Mountain We carried two backpacks, turned out to be pretty for the hike. I am not an hiker and those endless steps me want to return to the safe and comfortable ground. But my friend encouraged me . Look, the top is coming closer and

32、closer. We are almost there.I pulled together and kept going. After three-hour exhausting hike to the top, but with wonderful on the way, we got to the top finally. our pleasure, we also found a hotel that looked very much inviting.解析：1.that改成which考查定語從句本句是非限制性定語從句，which指代前邊整個(gè)句子的意思 2.heavier改成heavy考

33、查形容詞此處用形容詞做表語，heavy是形容詞重的 3.experiencing改成 experienced考查形容詞experienced是形容詞有經(jīng)驗(yàn)的我不是一個(gè)又經(jīng)驗(yàn)的爬山者 4.make改成made考查時(shí)態(tài)本文的敘述是過去時(shí)，所以用made 5.great改成greatly考查副詞此處是用副詞修飾動(dòng)詞encourage 6.me改成myself考查代詞我拖著自己跟上了他們，所以用myself 7.加 a考查冠詞三個(gè)小時(shí)的攀登，所以用不定冠詞a 8.sceneries改成scenery考查名詞scenery是不可數(shù)名詞，所以改成scenery 9.For 改成To考查固定短語To one

34、s pleasure令某人高興的是 10.去掉 much考查副詞very副詞修飾形容詞invitingmuch多余，much修飾名詞三、答案：答案： Last term，I hosted an exchange student Jacob from the Great Britain to our schoolHe really cares for Chinese cultureJacob asked me to show around the city on weekendsI took him to many local of interest and we also to the the

35、ater to watch a show of Peking OperaHe was so attracted by the performance he decided to learn itMy father happened to know a master of Peking Opera and introduced Jacob to himJacob was honored to be one of his students his heart into it，Jacob made a rapid progressWhen he returned England，he gave a

36、performance，for he won much admiration from his classmates解析： 1.第一句:calling改為called考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。名詞student與 call之間是被動(dòng)關(guān)系,故用called。2.第二句:himself改為him 考查代詞。 show sb. around意為 “帶某人四處轉(zhuǎn)轉(zhuǎn)”,故將himself改為him。3.第四句:place改為places考查名詞。many修飾可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式,故將place改為places。44. 第四句:go改為went考查時(shí)態(tài)。本文主要是以過去時(shí)態(tài)來敘述的,故將go改為過去式went。5.

37、第五句:as改為that考查狀語從句。so.that.“如此以至于”是固定句式,故將as改為that。6.第七句:great改為greatly考查副詞。修飾was honored用副詞形式greatly。7.第八句:Put改為Putting考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。句中邏輯主語是與動(dòng)詞put之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系,故用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語,將 Put改為 Putting。8. 第八句:刪除a考查冠詞。名詞progress是不可數(shù)名詞,故不需要冠詞,去掉a。9.第九句:returned 后面加 to 考查介詞。 return to somewhere 意 為“回到某地”,是固定短語。10.第九句:what改為which

38、考查定語從句。本句是定語從句, 先行詞為performance,引導(dǎo)詞在句中作for的賓語,故用 which引導(dǎo)。四、答案：When I was very young, I stayed at my hometown with my grandma. She a diligent woman. She likes to grow vegetables takes care of all the . Though my parents often ask her to quit the work, my grandma never . She takes that she does as her

39、 great joy. I understand her because I see her smile and satisfied with life. Several months , my father bought for her a new smartphone. And during the Spring Festival, I instructed her on how email and use the Internet. Aside from emailing, she thinks it feels to talk to grandchildren on WeChat.解析

40、：本文為記敘文。文中介紹了作者的奶奶辛勤操勞,笑對(duì)生活,她還學(xué)會(huì)了使用智能手機(jī)上網(wǎng)發(fā)郵件和使用微信跟孫輩們聊天。第1處,考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)上下文語境可知,本文用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。故將was改為is。第2處,考查并列連詞。根據(jù)上下文可知,此處為并列關(guān)系,故將or改為and。第3處,考查不可數(shù)名詞。housework為不可數(shù)名詞,故將houseworks改為housework。第4處,考查主謂一致。主語為第三人稱單數(shù),謂語用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài),故將listen改為listens。第5處,考查賓語從句。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,賓語從句中she doos缺少賓語成分,而that引導(dǎo)名詞性從句時(shí)無此功能,故將that改為wh

41、at。第6處,考查時(shí)間副詞用法。表示“從現(xiàn)在起若干時(shí)間以前”,常與動(dòng)詞一般過去式連用,用ago,故將before改為ago。第7處,考查動(dòng)詞短語搭配。buysb,sth.為固定說法,“為某人買”,buy后跟雙賓語結(jié)構(gòu),故介詞for多余,應(yīng)去掉。第8處,考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。此處應(yīng)用“疑問詞十不定式”結(jié)構(gòu)作賓語,故在how后加to。第9處,考查形容詞作表語。根據(jù)其前動(dòng)詞feel可知,此句為“主系表”結(jié)構(gòu),故應(yīng)用形容詞形式作表語,將greatly改為great。第10處,考查形容詞性物主代詞。根據(jù)上下文語義可知,此處是指“奶奶的孫子們”,故將their改為her。II、一、答案：1.being2.suc

42、ceeded3.that4. to go5.In6.exactly7.tickets8.whom9.possibility10.was described解析：1.考查非謂語動(dòng)詞。dream of doing sth意 為“夢(mèng)想做某事”。故填being。2.考查時(shí)態(tài)。分析句子可知，空處在句中是謂語動(dòng)詞，與did not并列，所以應(yīng)用過去式。故填 succeeded。3.考査強(qiáng)調(diào)句。分析句子可知，此句是強(qiáng)調(diào) 句“It was +強(qiáng)調(diào)部分+that.”。此處強(qiáng)調(diào)的部分是what he did after achieving his dream。故填 that。4.考查非謂語動(dòng)詞. encourag

43、e sb to do sth 是固定結(jié)構(gòu)，意為“鼓勵(lì)某人做某事”。故填to go。5.考查介詞 in turn為固定搭配，意為“反過來，相應(yīng)地”。故填I(lǐng)n。6.考查副討。分析句子可知，此處應(yīng)用 副詞作狀語。故填exactly。7.考查名詞的數(shù)。ticket是可數(shù)名詞，本句表示給22位老人買飛機(jī)票，所以應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。故填tickets.8.考査定語從句。分析句子可知，“most of 8 had never been on a plane in their lives and ”是定語從句，介詞of后用賓格，指人應(yīng)用whom。9.考查詞性轉(zhuǎn)換。由空前的a可知，空處應(yīng)用名詞。故填possibili

44、ty10.考査時(shí)態(tài)和語態(tài)。describe 主語Flying in a plane之間是動(dòng)賓關(guān)系,且敘述的是過去的事情，所以應(yīng)用般過去時(shí)的被動(dòng)語態(tài)。故填was described。二、答案：1. to leave2. a3. personal4. it5. shocked6. was building7. with8. putting9. choices10. wisely解析：1 to leave考查固定短語tell sb to do sth是固定短語告訴某人做某事，所以填to leave2 a考查固定短語live alife是固定短語過著樣的生活，所以填a3 personal 考查形容詞此

45、處用形容詞做定語修飾名詞favor，personal是形容詞私人的，個(gè)人的，所以聽personal4 it考查代詞此處是用代詞做形式主語，真正的主語是動(dòng)詞不定式to see ， 所以填it5 shocked考查形容詞此處是用形容詞做表語，shocked是形容詞感到震驚的，所以填shocked6 was building考查時(shí)態(tài)根據(jù)句意如果他知道他是在給自己建房子，他會(huì)做得完全不同，所以應(yīng)該用過去進(jìn)行時(shí)故填was building7 with考查固定句型 so it is with sb是固定句型也一樣，所以填with8 putting考查非謂語主句的主語we與put之間是主謂關(guān)系，所以用現(xiàn)在分詞在句中做狀語，所以填p