1、2020年英語中考話題寫作攻關-話題2-假期活動2020年英語中考話題寫作攻關-話題2-假期活動 分析杭州近10年中考真題可知，關于“假期活動”這一話題在2015年和2012年考查假期計劃，設題背景為2015年對比分析兩個城市5個方面的利弊，確定合適的暑假旅游目的地；2012年介紹個人暑期安排。結合全國近年中考真題可知，該話題通常還有以下命題角度：介紹假期活動/校園旅行、旅行感受及看法。命題探索 分析杭州近10年中考真題可知，關于“假期活動教材鏈接人教課本中涉及“假期活動”這個話題的單元有：教材鏈接人教課本中涉及“假期活動”這個話題的單元有： (2015杭州) 根據下表用英語寫一篇80詞左右的

2、短文。內容須包括：對下表中關于這兩個城市(City A和City B)的全部信息進行比較，分析利弊，確定其中一個城市作為你的暑假旅游目的地。 典例剖析審時態：要分析利弊，應用一般現在時。審人稱：自己要選擇一個城市作為旅游目的地，應用第一人稱。一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句 (2015杭州) 根據下表用英語寫一篇80詞左右 In my opinion, _ is the better place to spend my summer holiday. _一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句 In my opinion, _1. There is going to be a part

3、y on Saturday. I want to make Russian soup for it.2. My family are taking a trip to Wuhan at the end of this month to visit my aunt and uncle. 1角度介紹自己的假期計劃好 句 記 背一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句1. There is going to be a part1. 周末我想去看電影。 _2. 這月底我們將去北京參觀一些名勝古跡。_I want to go to the movies on weekends.We are taking

4、 a trip to Beijing to visit some places of interest at the end of this month.句 子 仿 寫 一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句1. 周末我想去看電影。 I want to go to t3. We went to Green Park. We went to Green Park. We climbed the mountains there and saw a lot of flowers.七(下)Unit 11 P634. I visited my grandparents in the countrysi

5、de. I visited my grandparents in the countryside. It was excellent.七 (下) Unit 11 P622角度介紹假期活動/校園旅行句 子 擴 寫 范 例 一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句3. We went to Green Park. 2角度介5. I fed the chickens with my grandpa. I fed the chickens with my grandpa. It was so much fun. 七 (下) Unit 11 P626. We visited the science mu

6、seum. We visited the science museum and it was really interesting. 七 (下) Unit 11 P65一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句5. I fed the chickens with my 3. I camped in the mountains with some friends.(擴寫具體活動)_4. There were too many people in the park.(擴寫結果)_ _ I camped in the mountains with some friends. We put up a t

7、ent and cooked outside.There were too many people in the park. So I couldnt really see or hear the guide.句 子 擴 寫 一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句3. I camped in the mountains w5. Our family often go to the countryside. (擴寫原因)_6. I often do some reading. (擴寫目的)_7. I like drawing pictures on weekends. (擴寫原因)_Our f

8、amily often go to the countryside. Its really a relaxing and peaceful place.I often do some reading in my free time to make myself knowledgeable.I like drawing pictures on weekends. It is not only interesting but also relaxing.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句5. Our family often go to the 7. I think todays schoo

9、l trip was terrible.七(下)Unit 11 P658. My school trip was great! We had so much fun！ 七(下)Unit 11 P659. All in all, it was an exciting day.七(下)Unit 11 P653角度旅行感受及看法教 材 好 句 記 背一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句7. I think todays school trip8. 我覺得這個地方值得再次來參觀，因為我們從中學到了很多。_9. 我們從這次旅行中獲得了太多的樂趣。_I think the place is worth

10、 visiting again because we have learnt a lot from it.We got so much fun from this trip.句 子 仿 寫 一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句8. 我覺得這個地方值得再次來參觀，因為我們從中學到了很多。練語段First of all, I want to _ (計劃1). Maybe these books will be helpful for my future study. Also, Im going to _(計劃2) at the weekend. Then, I want to spend m

11、ore time _(計劃3). Finally, I plan to _(計劃4) for exercise.介紹自己的假期計劃read some meaningful and good bookstake part in some social practice activitieshelping my parents do some houseworkgo to the park with my friends every morning or afternoon 語段練習1一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句練語段First of all, I want to _We will o

12、rganize a trip to _(目的地). Im really happy because _(理由). In the morning, we will _(活動1). In the afternoon, we will _(活動2). Im sure we will _(感受)介紹假期活動/校園旅行the nearby villagethis is my first time to go therefeed animalslearn to cook mealshave a good time 語段練習2一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句We will organize a tr

13、ip to _I had a wonderful holiday. I enjoyed swimming in the sea and I _(感受1). And I had something very specialsea food for lunch. _(感受2). It was really delicious. I really enjoyed myself there. _(感受3) . I wish I can go there again.旅行感受及看法felt like I was a fishI liked it very muchThe vacation was unf

14、orgettable 語段練習3一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句I had a wonderful holiday. I 成篇章In my opinion, City A is the better place to spend my summer holiday. Although the temperature there is higher, the hotel is not comfortable, even the food is less delicious than that in City B, I still choose City A. The most impor

15、tant reason is that I can have a lot of things to do there. I can enjoy more beautiful scenery and do more activities. Besides, it takes us only two hours to fly there，which saves us a lot of time. I hope the holiday will be an unforgettable experience.一階 審好題三階練語段&成篇章二階寫好句成篇章In my opinion, City A is

16、 th(2020原創)假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Mary的電子郵件。以下是郵件內容，請你閱讀后回復，詞數80左右。寫作練兵寫作練兵(2020原創)假定你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Mary的寫作練兵寫作練兵To:Li PingFrom： MaryDear Li Ping，How are you? Are there any trips in your school? Im really interested in it. Where did you go? How did you get there? What did you do there? Hope to hear from you

17、 soon.Love，Mary寫作練兵寫作練兵To:Li Ping寫作練兵寫作練兵To: MaryFrom：Li PingDear Mary，_ Yours， Li Ping寫作練兵寫作練兵To: Mary寫作練兵寫作練兵To: MaryFrom: Li PingDear Mary，_We once had a school trip to the Forest Park. We met at 8：00 am. at the school gate and rode the sharing bikes because its not far from our school. Its impor

18、tant to obey the traffic rules on the way there. We must park our bikes on each side of the gate after arriving there.寫作練兵寫作練兵To: MaryWe once had a 寫作練兵寫作練兵_ Yours， Li PingDuring the trip, we listened to a talk about the Forest Park and plants. It is helpful for us to know about plants. We were allo

19、wed to take notes and photos in the park. After that, we returned at 3：30 pm. by bus. 寫作練兵寫作練兵_巧用三大從句(1)狀語從句 在復合句中，修飾主句中的動詞、形容詞或副詞等的從句叫狀語從句。常見的狀語從句有：時間狀語從句、讓步狀語從句、條件狀語從句、原因狀語從句、目的狀語從句、結果狀語從句。巧用三大從句(1)狀語從句寫作技巧1. 時間狀語從句：while, when, since, before, after, until/till, as soon as. When I got to school, i

20、t was raining.2. 讓步狀語從句：though/although, even though/if, whatever, whenever Though/Although he was ill, he still came to school.巧用三大從句句式連接范例 寫作技巧1. 時間狀語從句：while, when, sin3. 條件狀語從句：if, unless, as long as If you come, we will be very happy.4. 原因狀語從句：because, since Lily stayed at home because it raine

21、d.5. 目的狀語從句：so that, in order that She worked hard so that she could make more money.6. 結果狀語從句：so.that., such.that. I was so worried that I wanted to give up.巧用三大從句3. 條件狀語從句：if, unless, as long 1. 她打掃完房間之后，就離開了。_2. 雖然外面天黑了，但我仍然在工作。_3. 他不會完成工作除非他努力工作。_She left after she cleaned the room.Although/Thou

22、gh it was dark outside, I was still working.He wont finish the work unless he works hard.即學即練巧用三大從句1. 她打掃完房間之后，就離開了。She left afte4. 我喜歡坐火車因為火車便宜。_5. 她站起來以便可以看清楚黑板。_6. 他是一個如此善良的男孩以至于我們都喜歡他。_I like taking the train because it is cheap. She stands up so that she can see the blackboard clearly.He is suc

23、h a kind boy that we all like him.巧用三大從句4. 我喜歡坐火車因為火車便宜。I like taking (2)賓語從句 賓語從句是主從復合句的一種。其從句部分在整個句子中作賓語，從句的語序必須是陳述句，即“連接詞主語謂語其他部分”。常見的連接詞有：that, if/whether, what, when, where, how, who等。巧用三大從句(2)賓語從句巧用三大從句寫作技巧1. “Its delicious.” She said. She said (that) it was delicious.2. Does Kate get up early

24、? Do you know? Do you know if / whether Kate gets up early?3. When did you come here? She asked me. She asked me when I came here.巧用三大從句句式連接范例 寫作技巧1. “Its delicious.” She s寫作技巧7. The students said, “The club is very funny.” _8. Does he go to school today? Do you know?_9. Who will give a speech tonight? She asks her teacher._The students said that the club was very