1、 Summary writing(約30個詞概括(giku)概要(giyo):約30詞，少于25或多于40詞均扣2分 抄襲原文材料為無效要點；改變句式表達方式，并有適當(shdng)發揮，不認定為抄襲。第1頁/共54頁第一頁，共55頁。讀寫作文(zu wn)寫好summary 的意義 第一段是定調子，閱卷老師往往(wngwng)讀完第一段就已經打出基本分了。 -高考閱卷老師 相對于寫作的其他要求來說，這一部分較難寫，這一部分先讀后概括，而其他部分都是有中文提綱的。 -往屆實驗班考生 第2頁/共54頁第二頁，共55頁。What is a Summary? A summary is a short

2、 account giving the main points of something longer or detailed.第3頁/共54頁第三頁，共55頁。以約30個詞概括主要(zhyo)內容 A peacock was very unhappy with his ugly voice, and he spent most of his days complaining about it. “It is true that you cannot sing,” said the fox, “but look how beautiful you are!” “Oh, but what goo

3、d is all this beauty,” cried the bird, “with such an unpleasant voice!” “Listen,” said the fox, “each one owns something good. You have such beauty. The nightingale has his song; and the owl has his eyes. Even if you had a sweet voice, you would still complain about another thing. Why cant you just

4、be happy about what you have already got?”第4頁/共54頁第四頁，共55頁。人稱人稱(rnchng)時態時態 The story is about a peacock with beautiful feathers. The peacock always feels unhappy because of his unpleasant voice. The fox comforts him, adding that you should treasure what you have already got.feelscomfortsyouyou第5頁/共

5、54頁第五頁，共55頁。過多過多(u du)細節細節 In the article above, a peacock was always complaining about not having a sweet voice until the fox pointed out that he possessed a beautiful appearance. And the bird agreed with it. Finally, the fox argued that he should value what he had instead of complaining about what

6、 he didnt possess.53 words第6頁/共54頁第六頁，共55頁。直接直接(zhji)引語引語 A peacock was unhappy with his ugly voice. However, the fox reminded him, “No one is perfect, each one should be happy about what you have got.” - - - -第7頁/共54頁第七頁，共55頁。過早過早(u zo)表表達觀點達觀點 Each of us has strengths and weaknesses, such as a pea

7、cock. A peacock was upset about his voice, but ignored his own beauty. A fox told him that he should be content with what he had already got .-第8頁/共54頁第八頁，共55頁。 A peacock complained a lot about his ugly voice while actually he looked very beautiful. A fox advised him to be content with what he was b

8、lessed with.第9頁/共54頁第九頁，共55頁。dos and donts 1、注意人稱時態正確；2、不寫過多細節:實行精“兵”裁“員” 3、不用直接引語；4、不能過早表達觀點；5、不可完全(wnqun)照抄原文；6、不可加入自己的觀點；7. 思路清晰，巧用關聯詞增強文章的 連貫性。第10頁/共54頁第十頁，共55頁。Styles of passageNarration（記敘文記敘文）1 Argumentation(說明文說明文)2Exposition(議論文議論文)3圖文并茂的材料圖文并茂的材料4第11頁/共54頁第十一頁，共55頁。圖文并茂的材料圖文并茂的材料4第12頁/共54頁

9、第十二頁，共55頁。2015高考作文圖文并茂的材料圖文并茂的材料4第13頁/共54頁第十三頁，共55頁。1.1.記敘文記敘文寫作方法：串聯要素(yo s)法六個要素(yo s)：who; when; where; what; how; why某人做了某事, 結果如何？The passage mainly talks about.第14頁/共54頁第十四頁，共55頁。 This story is about a peacock who complained a lot about his ugly voice while actually he looked very beautiful. A

10、fox advised him to be content with what he was blessed with.第15頁/共54頁第十五頁，共55頁。 （1）對象、性質功用、利好 （2）問題、解決方法 （3）現象(xinxing)、原因、結果第16頁/共54頁第十六頁，共55頁。The topic-whatKoalas are unhappy and complainingThe reasons- whyTourists taking photosThe effects-how Being repeatedly awakenThe solutionsGovernment ban the

11、 practiceThe conclusionBe more kind to animals第17頁/共54頁第十七頁，共55頁。 koalas in wildlife parks that are repeatedly awaken from their deep sleep are unhappy and complaining for tourists taking photos. The author appeals to us to be more kind to animals.第18頁/共54頁第十八頁，共55頁。 Koalas in wildlife parks cant fa

12、ll asleep because tourists keep disturbing them. The government is considering making the tourists behavior illegal to protect the animals.第19頁/共54頁第十九頁，共55頁。PracticePassage A (2014年江蘇高考作文)第20頁/共54頁第二十頁，共55頁。板塊（次）重點1.1.概要（第一段-約30詞，少于25或多于40詞均扣2分） 1 1）英語詞匯被收錄于漢語詞典2 2）不同的人觀點不一2.2.發表自己的觀點（第二段-觀點鮮明，不能騎墻

13、） 1）自己的觀點（贊成或反對均可）2）理由2-3點（注：若寫4點則從總分中扣2分）3.結論（第三段） 結尾句（無此項扣1分） 第21頁/共54頁第二十一頁，共55頁。 Today, more and more English words find their way into the Chinese language. Even the Dictionary of Contemporary Chinese has included 239 English words. Some people support it while others do not.第22頁/共54頁第二十二頁，共55頁

14、。 WithEnglishwordsgettingpopularinbothmediaanddailylife,aChinesedictionaryhasincluded239ofthem,leavingthepublicdividedintotwoopposinggroups:“For”and“Against”第23頁/共54頁第二十三頁，共55頁。三要素：論點、論據、論證(lnzhng)。文章結構：總分結構、分總結構、 平行結構。第24頁/共54頁第二十四頁，共55頁。 Getting up early has been regard as a good habit since ancie

15、nt times. Many years ago, people thought that if we went to bed early and get up early, we would be energetic the whole day. So, getting up early is of great importance to us all. In fact, morning is the best time of a day. In the morning, the air is the freshest and people are usually in the best c

16、onditions. Many of us may have the experiences that we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morning than any other time of the day. If we do some morning exercise or only take a short walk in the morning, we can build our bodies and become much healthier. Also we will have enough

17、time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day if we get up early. However, if we get up late, we will probably have to do everything in a great hurry. Let us remember getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep it. If we stick to getting up early every day, we will

18、 certainly benefit a lot from it.第25頁/共54頁第二十五頁，共55頁。1. A strong statement of opinion. (the key idea):Getting up early /a good habit /of great importance 2. Support for the opinion (supporting sentences) a better memory a healthier body a better preparation for the day3. Conclusion/suggestions.a goo

19、d habit / benefit a lot 第26頁/共54頁第二十六頁，共55頁。 Getting up early in the morning is a good habit that will benefit us a lot. It enables us to have a better memory, healthier body and better preparation for the day.第27頁/共54頁第二十七頁，共55頁。 Teamwork is about people working together as a team. The idea has spr

20、ead from the world of sports to business. In the 21st century, as people and their work are becoming more technically advanced, working as a team makes it easier to get things done. Some things cannot be done by people working individually. More complex goals usually require that people work togethe

21、r. Anyone who has ever been to a job interview will almost certainly have been asked what teamwork means to them. This is because companies want people who are team players, who can get along with their colleagues and work together in a group. Because teamwork is required by many organizations today

22、, they will often organize team building events in an attempt to get people to work as a team than as individuals.Teamworkrequired by第28頁/共54頁第二十八頁，共55頁。There are seven important skills that one must learn in order to be a successful team player. They are as follows:Listening-listen and allow people

23、 to freely express their ideas.Questioning-ask questions and discuss the objectives of the team.Persuading-encourage people to exchange, defend ,and rethink their ideas.Respecting-treat others with respect and to support their ideas.Helping-help ones partners, this is the general theme of teamwork.S

24、haring-share ideas and resources with the team to create an environment of teamwork.Participating-all members of the team are encouraged to participate in the team.skills第29頁/共54頁第二十九頁，共55頁。 The passage states the importance of teamwork in business and that, in a more competitive world, people must

25、co-operate in order to achieve their goals. Besides, seven teamwork skills are also described.第30頁/共54頁第三十頁，共55頁。Q1：圖文并茂(t wn bn mo)的讀寫歸納要涉及圖嗎？審題看圖畫或圖表的作用(zuyng)漫畫通常可忽略圖表看作用(zuyng)，有時不可忽略第31頁/共54頁第三十一頁，共55頁。2015高考作文第32頁/共54頁第三十二頁，共55頁。第33頁/共54頁第三十三頁，共55頁。第34頁/共54頁第三十四頁，共55頁。第35頁/共54頁第三十五頁，共55頁。Think

26、：2015高考(o ko)的這幅圖在文字中體現了嗎？第36頁/共54頁第三十六頁，共55頁。Tip1多個并列語段只要找出其共性(gngxng) 主題， 為某一段落服務的插圖 可不涉及。 第37頁/共54頁第三十七頁，共55頁。Model 1: Topic + support The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not only affects our everyday life, but may alsothreaten peoples lives. The three selections presented above are typi

27、cal examples.(2015高考(o ko)范文）第38頁/共54頁第三十八頁，共55頁。觀察(gunch)一下圖文的關系蘇州2016第39頁/共54頁第三十九頁，共55頁。2015高考作文的翻版(fnbn) Cultural differences do exist in every corner of the world，where the same behavior often carries totally different meanings when we socialize with people. The three experiences of the author

28、are typical examples.第40頁/共54頁第四十頁，共55頁。 The panda is the most widely recognized symbol among foreigners to represent Chinese culture, followed by green tea and yin/yang, according to a survey conducted by the Beijing Institute of Culture Innovation and Communication. Researchers selected 18 symbols

29、 of Chinese culture, including Confucius（孔子(kn z)）, Beijing opera and Kung fu. “It is interesting to find that foreigners have a very different understanding of Chinese culture from us, ”said Yu Dan, a professor of Chinese culture at Beijing Normal University. The survey collected 2,047 questionaire

30、s from the United States, United Kingdom, France, Australia, Japan and South Korea. Respondents were asked to rate their understanding of Chinese culture on a five-point scale from excellent to poor. The results were indicated in the following chart.第41頁/共54頁第四十一頁，共55頁。第42頁/共54頁第四十二頁，共55頁。 讀寫讀寫先讀后寫

31、The panda is the most widely recognized symbol among foreigners to represent Chinese culture, followed by green tea and yin/yang, according to a survey conducted by the Beijing Institute of Culture Innovation and Communication. Researchers selected 18 symbols of Chinese culture, including Confucius（

32、孔子(kn z)）, Beijing opera and Kung fu.第43頁/共54頁第四十三頁，共55頁。“It is interesting to find that foreigners have a very different understanding of Chinese culture from us, ”said Yu Dan, a professor of Chinese culture at Beijing Normal University.第44頁/共54頁第四十四頁，共55頁。 The survey collected 2,047 questionaires

33、from the United States, United Kingdom, France, Australia, Japan and South Korea. Respondents were asked to rate their understanding of Chinese culture on a five-point scale from excellent to poor. The results were indicated in the following chart.第45頁/共54頁第四十五頁，共55頁。第46頁/共54頁第四十六頁，共55頁。Think：以上的三段文

34、字和圖之間是什么(shn me)關系？圖表中的內容在文章(wnzhng)中體現了嗎？要寫嗎？第47頁/共54頁第四十七頁，共55頁。第48頁/共54頁第四十八頁，共55頁。Model 2 point 1 +however + point 2 The box-office income of Chinese movies witnessed a constant increase from about 17 billion yuan in 2012 to over 40 billion in 2015. However, that increase slowed down in 2016.第49頁/共54頁第四十九頁，共55頁。Q2 summary如何(rh)踩點 抓住主題句中心詞理清邏輯關系不遺漏信息,但決不羅嗦有概括性思考(sko)，但決不畫蛇添足簡約(jinyu)而不簡