1、Protect animals (保護動物) 1. 熟悉說明文的結構特點，提高寫作微技能。2. 學習讀寫結合型作文的寫作策略。3. 激發(fā)熱愛大自然的情懷，培養(yǎng)保護動物及環(huán)境的意識。Writing guidelines( (寫寫作方法指作方法指導導) )說明文的寫作線索：說明文的寫作線索： 說明文是以說明為主要表達方式，介紹事物的形狀、構造、性質、變化、類別、狀態(tài)、功能、成因、結果等特征的文章。它是一種應用性很強的文體，說明的目的是讓讀者有所知，給讀者提供知識，使之了解客觀世界，掌握解決問題的方法。 寫說明文必須注意事實正確，表達清晰，條理清楚，層次分明，語言簡練和用詞準確。2.讀寫結合型的寫作

2、 讀寫相結合類型的寫作，閱讀部分是為寫作任務服務的，閱讀的篇章與寫作的任務通常有許多的相關性。因此，要學會從以下的途徑分析：(1)首先要分析閱讀的主題。(2)分析文章的篇章結構，包括整篇文章的中心句/段、 支撐句/段，總結句/段，同時明晰作者使用的寫作 方法。(3)分析文本的語言特征，思考有哪些語言可以靈活遷 移至自己的寫作中，包括適切的詞塊、漂亮的句式 等。（ ）.的數(shù)量， （ ）一個.的象征， （ ）好運the number of, a symbol of , good luck名詞詞塊名詞詞塊: : Language boxLanguage box（語語言工具箱）言工具箱）be frie

3、ndly to be friendly to take action, take action, keep our world colorful, keep our world colorful, lose their home, lose their home, hunt them for.,hunt them for.,forbid killing animals, forbid killing animals, pass some lows, pass some lows,raise peoples awareness , raise peoples awareness , think

4、of ways to , think of ways to , share a comfortable earth with pandasshare a comfortable earth with pandas動詞詞塊動詞詞塊：Language boxLanguage box（語語言工具箱）言工具箱）（ ）采取行動， （ ）對.友好， （ ）提高人們的認識， （ ）想辦法，（ ）禁止殺害動物， （ ）與熊貓共享舒適地球， （ ）通過法律，（ ）失去他們的家園， （ ）保持世界多彩， （ ）為.獵殺他們（ ）處于極大的危險中，（ ）為了（ ）一方面，.另一方面，.，（ ）依我看來in grea

5、t danger, in order to,on the one hand,.on the other hand,.In my opinion介介詞詞塊詞詞塊：（2 2）PatternsPatterns（句型）（句型）As far as I know;As far as I know;Unfortunately,; Unfortunately,; For one thing,for another,.;For one thing,for another,.;In my opinion,.; In my opinion,.; Wd better; Wd better; Whats more,;W

6、hats more,; On the one hand,.on the other hand,. On the one hand,.on the other hand,.2. Extensive languages（拓展性（拓展性語語言）言）(1) A nations moral is great, can from the animal s attitude to see.India Mahatma Gandhi 一個國家的道德是否偉大，可以從其對動物的態(tài)度看出。印度圣雄甘地(2) A pair of animal cruelty, also will become the human cr

7、uelty.Thomas, equinox. 一個對動物殘忍的人，也會變得對人類殘忍。 湯瑪斯艾奎納 (3) No trading, no killing. 沒有買賣就沒有殺戮。(4) Actions speak louder than words. 事實勝于雄辯。What kind of animals do you like?Task 1 Read and finish the mind map.Wild animals in dangerThe kinds of animals in danger_Tibetan antelopes_ _ _ What do they look like

8、?_ _ _ _Golden monkeysGolden monkeysElephantsWolvesThey are medium-sized animals.Elephants are very big and strong. They are grey and have long trunks and tusks.Wolves are not very big. They have grey fur.They have golden-orange fur.Why are they in danger?Why are they in danger?Because their living

9、areas are used for farming. Also, people hunt them for their tusks7.Because they are killed for their wool.8.Because people are destroying the environment where they live.9.They are losing their living areas because people cut down forests.How many kinds of animals are mentioned in the passage?1. _T

10、ibetan antelopes usually live in groups of about2. _Golden monkeys feed on3. _The biggest animals on land are4. _Why are wolves losing their home?5. _ Task 2: Fill in the information. 4 20fruits and young leaves of bamboos. Elephants Because people cut down forests. .Task 1 審題 動物是人類的朋友，然而有些野生動物的處境卻非

11、常危險，請你請以“Animals need your help”為題寫一篇文章呼應人類保護野生動物。不少于80詞。 提示：1. 介紹一種你喜歡的野生動物（喜歡的原因，它們的處境等 )。2.針對如何保護野生動物提出建議（至少寫出兩條）。一般現(xiàn)在時一般現(xiàn)在時說明文說明文第一人稱第一人稱 體裁體裁:_ 人人稱稱:_ 時態(tài)時態(tài):_以以“ “Animals need your help”Animals need your help”為題為題1. 1. 介紹一種你喜歡的野生動物介紹一種你喜歡的野生動物2. 2. 分析他們處境的原因分析他們處境的原因3.3.提出保護野生動物的建議提出保護野生動物的建議beg

12、inningbeginningEndingEndingTask2 Structurize （列一列（列一列 ）BodyBodyTask 3 寫寫一寫寫: 寫寫初稿。_ Task 1: Self-check篇章方面：布局是否完整？邏輯是否合理？要點是否 齊全/豐富？ 句子方面：主謂是否一致？時態(tài)、語態(tài)是否正確？連 詞使用是否正確？句式是否多樣？是否用 到好詞、好句？ 詞語方面：代詞的主格、賓格等形式使用是否正確？ 名詞單復數(shù)是否準確？動詞搭配、動詞的 形式等是否正確？形容詞、副詞的使用是 否達意，與修飾的對象是否相符？ 細節(jié)方面：單詞拼寫、標點符號、大小寫等是否正確？Task 2: Peer-c

13、heck (同伴互改)注意使用修改字符注意使用修改字符： 優(yōu)優(yōu)美句子；漏美句子；漏詞詞；錯處錯處：；去掉；去掉；語語法法錯錯 誤誤 G ,G ,人人稱錯誤稱錯誤 P P，時態(tài)錯誤時態(tài)錯誤 T T 項目項目標準標準自我評價自我評價 同伴評價同伴評價 教師評價教師評價結構結構（3分）分）段落合理段落合理 （2 分）分）銜接自然銜接自然 (1分分)內容內容（8分）分）介紹你喜歡的野生動物（介紹你喜歡的野生動物（1分）分）分析他們的處境（分析他們的處境（2分）分）保護野生動物的建議（保護野生動物的建議（3分）分）拓展合理拓展合理 (1分分)語言語言（3分）分）詞匯豐富詞匯豐富 (1分分)句法正確句法正

14、確 ，語言優(yōu)美，語言優(yōu)美( 2分分)卷面卷面（1分）分）書寫工整（書寫工整（ 1分）分）Task 3 參參考范文 Animals need your help I like elephants best. Although they are big and strong, they are friendly to human. As far as I know ,they are very smart and they are symbols of good luck. Unfortunately, they are in great danger now. On the one hand,

15、they are losing their home because of farming, on the other hand, people hunt them for their ivory. The number of them is getting smaller and smaller. In my opinion, it is high time for us to take quick action to protect them. Firstly, the government should pass some lows to forbid killing animals.

16、Secondly, we dont buy anything made of the ivory. Because just as Yao Ming said, “No trading, no killing.” Whats more, we should raise peoples awareness to protect animals and our environment. Animals are our friends and part a of our environment. Help animals, help ourselves.全文還巧妙地使用時In my opinion, on the one hand,on the other hand,Whats more等句式和短語。本文結構完整，層次清晰。分段簡明扼要地了自己喜歡的動物以本文結構完整，層次清晰。分段簡明扼要地了自己喜歡的動物以及喜歡的原