1、如何寫好英語作文如何寫好英語作文華山中學華山中學 鄭銳It is known to us all that some students cheat in It is known to us all that some students cheat in examinations at school.examinations at school. As students ,we often take examinations at school, As students ,we often take examinations at school, but sometimes we have to

2、o many examinations which are but sometimes we have too many examinations which are too difficult for us. On the other hand, some of us are too difficult for us. On the other hand, some of us are lazy and donlazy and dont work hard at their lessons. So when t work hard at their lessons. So when taki

3、ng examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to taking examinations, they sometimes cheat in order to get better results to please their parents and teachersget better results to please their parents and teachersIn my opinion, it is wrong to cheat in examinations In my opinion, it is wrong to chea

4、t in examinations because it breaks the rules of schools. We students because it breaks the rules of schools. We students should be honest and try to get good results by studying should be honest and try to get good results by studying hard instead of cheating in exams. What s more, we hard instead

5、of cheating in exams. What s more, we should improve our study methods and get well prepared should improve our study methods and get well prepared for examinationsfor examinations 范文范文 My opinion on cheating in examination55555考場作文考場作文TIPSProblems in your compositionsProblems in your compositions王潔

6、王潔1.詞匯量與短語積累過少，很多句子不會表達。詞匯量與短語積累過少，很多句子不會表達。2.考試時間分配不合理，在寫作文時時間過少。考試時間分配不合理，在寫作文時時間過少。3.語法運用不靈活，作文多為簡單的句子。語法運用不靈活，作文多為簡單的句子。楊柳楊柳1. 邏輯性不強。邏輯性不強。2. 想表達的句子表達不出來。想表達的句子表達不出來。3. 遇到的陌生單詞不會遇到的陌生單詞不會王鴿王鴿1. 想用一些不同句式表達相同的意思卻無法想出來。想用一些不同句式表達相同的意思卻無法想出來。2. 某些句子有時不知如何表達。某些句子有時不知如何表達。Problems in your compositions

7、Problems in your compositions馬強馬強1、做前面題耗時太多，給作文留的時間不足、做前面題耗時太多，給作文留的時間不足 , 沒沒時間打草稿，只能想一句寫一句。時間打草稿，只能想一句寫一句。2、不會使用從句，不會將散句寫為整句、不會使用從句，不會將散句寫為整句3、有的單詞寫不出來、有的單詞寫不出來4、字不夠整齊、字不夠整齊張瑤張瑤1、每當寫作文時對于句式變化總結不清、每當寫作文時對于句式變化總結不清2、運用從句時總是表達錯誤、運用從句時總是表達錯誤3、對一些同義詞不是很了解、對一些同義詞不是很了解4、有時作文寫著寫著就跑題了、有時作文寫著寫著就跑題了Problems i

8、n your compositionsProblems in your compositions蘇一晴蘇一晴1、平常積累的詞匯量不少，寫作文的時候用不了好詞語、平常積累的詞匯量不少，寫作文的時候用不了好詞語2、許多句型沒記住，作文沒亮點、許多句型沒記住，作文沒亮點高根寶高根寶我覺得自己寫的是漢語式英語，不會使用英語句型，如：我覺得自己寫的是漢語式英語，不會使用英語句型，如：倒裝，并且沒有掌握新穎的英語單詞，所用單詞太普遍。倒裝，并且沒有掌握新穎的英語單詞，所用單詞太普遍。積累的詞匯量過少。積累的詞匯量過少。張成龍張成龍1、不會造句、不會造句2、某些單詞不會、某些單詞不會3、句型不會、句型不會4

9、、語法不會、語法不會1 1）主語）主語 + + 謂語動詞謂語動詞2 2）主語）主語 + + 謂語動詞謂語動詞 + + 表語表語3 3）主語）主語 + + 謂語動詞謂語動詞 + + 賓語賓語4 4）主語）主語 + + 謂語動詞謂語動詞 + + 賓語賓語 + + 賓補賓補 5 5）主語）主語 + + 謂語動詞謂語動詞 + + 間賓間賓 + + 直賓直賓請觀察請觀察: :（1 1）_+ _+ _是英語句子必不可少是英語句子必不可少的兩要素；的兩要素； （2 2）_在前在前,_,_在后在后 （3 3）_有人稱，數，時態和語態的變有人稱，數，時態和語態的變化。化。主語主語謂語謂語主語主語謂謂 語語謂謂

10、語語It is coldIt is cold todayIt is very cold todayIt is rather/so cold a dayWhat a cold day it is ! It is colder than it was yesterday Come to eat!Come to eat with me!Come to eat with me by the sea!If you are free, come to eat with me by the sea!Do you agree to come to eat with me by the sea? if you

11、are free, Hes swimming.Hes swimming in the river.Hes swimming in the river with Tim.Hes swimming in the river with Tim at the moment.I am a student.I , Maqiang, am a student.I , Maqiang, am a student,who is in Class One Grade three.I , Maqiang, am a student,who is in Class One Grade three,studying i

12、n Huashan Senior Middle School. Organization (組句成篇組句成篇) I often visit museums and computer rooms and draw pictures in my spare time. Since reducing the learning load, my life has become much more interesting. In the evening, I also have time to watch TV and read newspapers. In short, I am quite sati

13、sfied with my life now. I no longer stay up late; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 pm.Correct order: (1)(1) * *The girl is my classmate. The girl is my classmate. * *The girl won the first prize.The girl won the first prize.Join up sentence exercises The girl who won the first prize is my cl

14、assmate.Practice 1（2 2）* * I stayed at home this weekend. I stayed at home this weekend. * * I didnt go shopping with my I didnt go shopping with my friends.friends. Join up sentence exercises I stayed at home instead of going shopping with my friends this weekend.（3 3 ）* * Today is my birthday.Toda

15、y is my birthday. * * My friends gave me a lot of presents. My friends gave me a lot of presents. * * I received the University admission I received the University admission toadytoady * * How happy I am today ! How happy I am today ! Join up sentence exercises Today is my birthday and my friends ga

16、ve me a lot of presents. Whats more, I received the University admission toady. How happy I am !1.談到這個話題的時候，不同的人有不同的觀點。2. 該是我們采取措施解決這個問題的時候了。When it comes to the topic, different people have different opinions. It is high time that we took (should take) measures to solve the problem.1.正如這句俗話所說，“健康比財

17、富重要”。2.眾所周知，吸煙影響我們的健康。3.我堅信如果煙民有頑強的決心，他們絕對能夠戒煙。As the saying goes, “Health is more important than wealth.” Its known to all that smoking has a bad effect on our health. Im convinced that if smokers have strong determination, they can absolutely give up smoking. 1. As for me/As to me/As far as I am c

18、oncerned/ Personally , 2. To be honest (frank)/To tell the truth/ 3. Generally (frankly, strictly, honestly) speaking, 4. To my surprise（delight, joy, amazement, disappointment）, Besides, Also, In addition, Additionally, Furthermore, Moreover, Whats more, To make the matters worse, 展開展開轉折轉折Firstlysecondly(besides)thirdly(finFirstlysecondl