1、溫州市中考英語(yǔ)作文溫州市中考英語(yǔ)作文“六步法六步法” -溫州十四中溫州十四中 沈永銘沈永銘歡迎光臨永銘博客歡迎光臨永銘博客:http:/ Step1 仔細(xì)審題（體裁、段仔細(xì)審題（體裁、段落、人稱、主體時(shí)態(tài)）落、人稱、主體時(shí)態(tài)）Step2. 理清要點(diǎn)（缺一不可）理清要點(diǎn)（缺一不可）Step3. 譯寫(xiě)單句（句子結(jié)構(gòu)）譯寫(xiě)單句（句子結(jié)構(gòu)）Step4. 連句成篇（注意段落）連句成篇（注意段落）Step5. 檢查潤(rùn)色（連接詞、檢查潤(rùn)色（連接詞、從句）從句）Step6. 定稿謄寫(xiě)（卷面整潔）定稿謄寫(xiě)（卷面整潔）英語(yǔ)作文英語(yǔ)作文“六步法六步法”教學(xué)教學(xué)范例范例1 1題目：題目：Mr. Smith and M

2、r. Green used to be neighbors for years. One morning Mr. Smith called at Mr. Greens. The following is their conversation. S: Good morning.G: Good morning.S: I havent seen your son Tom for a long time. Has he made great achievements?G: Oh, I dont know if he is successful, but I know that he has drawn

3、 the governments attention and the police are searching for him. 分析：題目不難，但要完成兩件事分析：題目不難，但要完成兩件事情：情： 一是要把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚，要一是要把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)清楚，要傳神、達(dá)意；傳神、達(dá)意；二是要把直接引語(yǔ)轉(zhuǎn)換成間接引語(yǔ)。二是要把直接引語(yǔ)轉(zhuǎn)換成間接引語(yǔ)。 要求：要求：1、用間接引語(yǔ)描述如上、用間接引語(yǔ)描述如上 幽默幽默故故事事。人稱：第三人稱；時(shí)態(tài)：過(guò)。人稱：第三人稱；時(shí)態(tài)：過(guò)去時(shí)。去時(shí)。2、詞數(shù)為、詞數(shù)為80100。第一步：仔細(xì)審題第一步：仔細(xì)審題 情景提供的方式是對(duì)話，情景提供的方式是對(duì)話，題材是故事。內(nèi)容是

4、兩個(gè)鄰居題材是故事。內(nèi)容是兩個(gè)鄰居之間的一段幽默對(duì)話，涉及到之間的一段幽默對(duì)話，涉及到的詞匯有：的詞匯有：used to ，call on，hesitate，make achievements，etc, 涉及的句子有簡(jiǎn)單句、并涉及的句子有簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句、和復(fù)合句。詞數(shù)為列句、和復(fù)合句。詞數(shù)為80100。第二步：理清要點(diǎn)第二步：理清要點(diǎn) 本文是一篇記序文，發(fā)生的時(shí)間是一天下午，地點(diǎn)本文是一篇記序文，發(fā)生的時(shí)間是一天下午，地點(diǎn)是是Mr.Green家家,人物有人物有Mr.Smith和和Mr.Green，事件是談，事件是談?wù)撜揗r.Green的兒子，故事以的兒子，故事以Mr. Green一段幽默的話結(jié)

5、一段幽默的話結(jié)尾。所以，本文內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：尾。所以，本文內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下： 1、Mr. Smith和和Mr.Green是曾是多年的鄰居。是曾是多年的鄰居。 2、一天上午，、一天上午，Mr.Smith去去Mr.Green家拜訪。家拜訪。 3、他們互致問(wèn)候早上好。、他們互致問(wèn)候早上好。 4、Mr. Smith說(shuō)他已多年不見(jiàn)說(shuō)他已多年不見(jiàn)Mr.Green的兒子的兒子Tom了，相知到他是否已取得了很大的成就。了，相知到他是否已取得了很大的成就。 5、Mr.Smith躊躇了一會(huì)兒，說(shuō)不知道兒子是否取躊躇了一會(huì)兒，說(shuō)不知道兒子是否取得成就，但政府很重視他，警察也在全國(guó)各地找他。得成就，但政府很重視他，警察也在

6、全國(guó)各地找他。.第三步：譯寫(xiě)單句第三步：譯寫(xiě)單句:基本句子結(jié)構(gòu)基本句子結(jié)構(gòu)1.Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years.2.One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr.Green at his house.3.They said good morning to each other.4.Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years. He asked if he had made great

7、achievements.5.Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. He said he did not know if made any achievements. He said he knew that the government said that his son was very important. The police were after him everywhere in the country.第四步：連句成篇第四步：連句成篇 Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years

8、. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr.Green at his house.They said “good morning” to each other.Then Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years. He asked if Tom had made great achievements.Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. He said he did not know if Tom made any achieveme

9、nts. He said he only knew that the government said that his son was very important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.第五步：檢查潤(rùn)色Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr.Green at his house. First, they greeted each other ( sai

10、d “good morning” to each other),then they talked about Mr.Greens son, Tom. Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years and wondered (. He asked) if he had made great achievements.Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. Then he said he did not know if Tom made any achievements,

11、but he said he only knew that the government thought (said) that his son was “very” important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.第六步：定稿謄寫(xiě) Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr. Green at his house. First, they greeted eac

12、h other,then they talked about Mr.Greens son, Tom. Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years and wondered if he had made great achievements. Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. Then he said he did not know if Tom made any achievements, but he said he only knew that the go

13、vernment thought that his son was “very” important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.第六步：定稿謄寫(xiě) Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for Mr. Smith and Mr. Green used to be neighbors for many years. One morning, Mr.Smith called on Mr. Green many years. One morning, Mr.Smi

14、th called on Mr. Green at his house. First, they greeted each other,then they at his house. First, they greeted each other,then they talked about Mr.Greens son, Tom. Mr. Smith said talked about Mr.Greens son, Tom. Mr. Smith said that he had not seen Mr.Greens son, Tom for several that he had not see

15、n Mr.Greens son, Tom for several years and wondered if he had made great achievements. years and wondered if he had made great achievements. Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. Then he said he did Mr.Green hesitated for a moment. Then he said he did not know if Tom made any achievements, but he said he

16、 not know if Tom made any achievements, but he said he only knew that the government thoughtonly knew that the government thought that his son was that his son was “very” important, for the police were after him “very” important, for the police were after him everywhere in the country.everywhere in

17、the country.范例范例2 題目：根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)題目：根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇介紹香港的短文，字?jǐn)?shù)寫(xiě)一篇介紹香港的短文，字?jǐn)?shù)100字左右。字左右。 香港位于中國(guó)的東南部，面積香港位于中國(guó)的東南部，面積1045平方公里，人口平方公里，人口600多萬(wàn)，被多萬(wàn)，被稱為稱為“東方明珠東方明珠”。1842年鴉片年鴉片戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)后，當(dāng)時(shí)的中國(guó)政府被迫將戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)后，當(dāng)時(shí)的中國(guó)政府被迫將香港割讓給英國(guó)。香港割讓給英國(guó)。1997年她已回年她已回到祖國(guó)的懷抱，其前景會(huì)更美好。到祖國(guó)的懷抱，其前景會(huì)更美好。參考詞匯：明珠參考詞匯：明珠 pearl， 鴉片鴉片 opium。第一步：仔細(xì)審題第一步：仔細(xì)審題本文屬

18、說(shuō)明性文章。本文屬說(shuō)明性文章。第二步：理清要點(diǎn)第二步：理清要點(diǎn)1、香港的地理位置、面積和人口。、香港的地理位置、面積和人口。2、鴉片戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)后香港的處境。、鴉片戰(zhàn)爭(zhēng)后香港的處境。3、1997年她回到祖國(guó)的懷抱。年她回到祖國(guó)的懷抱。4、其前景會(huì)更美好。、其前景會(huì)更美好。第三步：譯寫(xiě)單句第三步：譯寫(xiě)單句1. Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. Her area is 1,045k. Her population is more than 6 million.2. She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opi

19、um War.3. In 1997, she returned to motherland.4. Her future is very beautiful.第四步：連句成篇第四步：連句成篇 Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. Her area is 1,045k and (. Her) population is more than 6 million. She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War.In 1997, she returned to motherland and (. H

20、er) future is very beautiful.第五步：檢查潤(rùn)色第五步：檢查潤(rùn)色1 Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of( Her area is)1,045k and (. Her) has a population of more than 6 million ( population is more than 6 million). She is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”. In 1842,She was given up to Britain

21、by the then Chinese government after the 1842 Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong lived a hard life . In 1997, she returned to motherland and the people of Hong Kong are and working hard to make her more beautiful. 第五步：檢查潤(rùn)色第五步：檢查潤(rùn)色1之后的文章之后的文章 Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an a

22、rea of1,045k and has a population of more than 6 million. She is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”. In 1842,She was given up to Britain by the then Chinese government after the 1842 Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong lived a hard life . In 1997, she returned to motherland and the people of H

23、ong Kong are working hard to make her more and more beautiful.第五步：檢查潤(rùn)色第五步：檢查潤(rùn)色2 Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of1,045k and has a population of more than 6 million and(. She) is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”. In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to give

24、up Hong Kong to Britain ( She was given up to Britain by the then Chinese government) after the Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong suffered a lot ( lived a hard life) . After the return of Hong Kong to China in 1997 ( In 1997, she returned to motherland and the people of Hong Kong are and), the

25、people of Hong Kong are united more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work hard ( will be working hard) to make her more beautiful. Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of1,045k and has a population of more than 6 million and is well-known as “the Pearl of

26、 the East”. In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to give up Hong Kong to Britain after the Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong suffered a lot . After the return of Hong Kong to China in 1997, the people of Hong Kong are united more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they wi

27、ll work hard to make her more beautiful.第五步：檢查潤(rùn)色第五步：檢查潤(rùn)色2之后的文章之后的文章第六步：定稿謄寫(xiě)第六步：定稿謄寫(xiě) Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of1,045k and has a population of more than 6 million and is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”. In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to give up

28、Hong Kong to Britain after the Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong suffered a lot . After the return of Hong Kong to China in 1997, the people of Hong Kong are united more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work hard to make her more beautiful. .第六步：定稿謄寫(xiě)第六步：定稿謄寫(xiě) Hong Kong li

29、es in the southeast of China. she has Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of1,045kan area of1,045k and has a population of more than and has a population of more than 6 million and is well-known as “the Pearl of the 6 million and is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”.East”.

30、In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to give up Hong Kong to Britain after the Opium War, give up Hong Kong to Britain after the Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong suffered a lot .and the people in Hong Kong suffered a lot . After the

31、 return of Hong Kong to China in 1997, After the return of Hong Kong to China in 1997, the people of Hong Kong are united more with the the people of Hong Kong are united more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work hard to m

32、ake her more beautifulhard to make her more beautiful. .Homework: 請(qǐng)以記者的身份請(qǐng)以記者的身份,根據(jù)案件登記卡所提供的根據(jù)案件登記卡所提供的情況，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇新聞報(bào)導(dǎo)稿。字?jǐn)?shù)：情況，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇新聞報(bào)導(dǎo)稿。字?jǐn)?shù)：100詞左右。詞左右。INFORMATION ABOUT THE CASETIME4:55 p.m. yesterday, just before the class time.PLACE bank in the Park StreetWEATHERraining hard ,little trafficHappens:

33、 Two young men with mask rushed in, threatened the clerk with gun,put the money in the bags,rushed out and droved away with about 20,000 dollars. Nobody was killed or wounded. The police are searching for the robbers.Possible version: Yesterday afternoon, a robbery happened in a bank in the Park Str

34、eet. According to the witnesses statements, it was five minutes to 5:00 pm, just before the closing time of the bank. And it was raining heavily, with little traffic on the road outside. Suddenly, two young men with masks rushed in and threatened the clerks with guns. Then they put the money in bags

35、,rushed out and droved away with about 20,000 dollars. All the things lasted for only a few minutes. fortunately, there was nobody killed or wounded in the robbery.The police are searching for the robbers, hoping whoever gets the connected information calls them up as soon as possible. Possible vers

36、ion: Yesterday afternoon, a robbery happened in a bank in the Park Street. According to the witnesses statements, it was five minutes to 5:00 pm, just before the closing time of the bank. And it was raining heavily, with little traffic on the road outside. Suddenly, two young men with masks rushed i

37、n and threatened the clerks with guns. Then they put the money in bags,rushed out and droved away with about 20,000 dollars. All the things lasted for only a few minutes. Fortunately, there was nobody killed or wounded in the robbery.The police are searching for the robbers, hoping whoever gets the

38、connected information calls them up as soon as possible. 溫州市中考英語(yǔ)試題作文特點(diǎn)1、以書(shū)信為主（04、05、06年）；2、書(shū)信以第一人稱（寫(xiě)信人）和第二人稱（收信人）為主；3、書(shū)信原則上分三段來(lái)寫(xiě)：第一段：寫(xiě)信的目的（自我交代+寫(xiě)新的目的：Id like to tell you something about.)第二段：正文（按照內(nèi)容點(diǎn)要求寫(xiě)）：First,Second,Third,At last第三段：聯(lián)系方式、要求和問(wèn)候By the way, youre welcome to .I live and my telephone nu

39、mber is. Please remember me to your Im waiting for your early reply./Im looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.2006年中考小作文Dear Ted, Please dont play computer games too late.Please go to bed and get up earlier.Please dont sleep in class. Yours, Mike2006年中考書(shū)面表達(dá)1、分三段寫(xiě)：想些什么（feel sorry）；

40、做些什么（改變?nèi)齻€(gè)壞習(xí)慣)；結(jié)果如何（become better）2、不能出現(xiàn)學(xué)校和姓名）3、用第一人稱為主， 也可以兼用第二人稱和第三人稱。2006年中考書(shū)面表達(dá)范文Dear Mike, Thank you very much for your letter and advice. I felt very sorry for what I had done before. Now Ive decided to change myself. I wont play computer games so late and get up earlier so that I can get to sc

41、hool on time. I will listen to teachers carefully so as to learn my lessons well and I wont sleep in class. If so, Im sure that I will become a good boy and I will be loved by my parents, my teachers and classmates. Thanks again! Yours, Ted 2006年浙江省杭州市中考題年浙江省杭州市中考題八、書(shū)面表達(dá)八、書(shū)面表達(dá) （共（共1題，計(jì)題，計(jì)15分）分） 假如你剛

42、去澳大利亞的一所高中讀書(shū)，在上第一節(jié)課時(shí)，你假如你剛?cè)グ拇罄麃喌囊凰咧凶x書(shū)，在上第一節(jié)課時(shí)，你填（打勾）了一張表格（見(jiàn)聽(tīng)力測(cè)試第二大題）。第二天上課填（打勾）了一張表格（見(jiàn)聽(tīng)力測(cè)試第二大題）。第二天上課時(shí)，老師要求每個(gè)學(xué)生根據(jù)自己在表上打勾的情況做一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單時(shí)，老師要求每個(gè)學(xué)生根據(jù)自己在表上打勾的情況做一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單的自我介紹。現(xiàn)在，請(qǐng)你把所做的介紹寫(xiě)下來(lái)。的自我介紹。現(xiàn)在，請(qǐng)你把所做的介紹寫(xiě)下來(lái)。注意事項(xiàng)：注意事項(xiàng)：1、開(kāi)頭部分已寫(xiě)好，只需接著寫(xiě)；、開(kāi)頭部分已寫(xiě)好，只需接著寫(xiě)；2、不要逐條翻、不要逐條翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加談?wù)撛掝}時(shí)經(jīng)常用到的華語(yǔ)，使所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容連貫；譯，可適當(dāng)增加談?wù)撛掝}時(shí)經(jīng)常用到的華語(yǔ)，使所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容連貫；3、所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括、所寫(xiě)內(nèi)容必須包括QUESTIONNAIRE上的主要內(nèi)容；上的主要內(nèi)容；4、詞數(shù)：、詞數(shù)：80個(gè)左右。個(gè)左右。A. Do you come from China?* Yes No B. How old are you?* Fift