1、2016高考英語-短文改錯集訓（六）【專項突破】短文改錯假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同學寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（）,并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。Passage 1 As is well-known, grow up happily or healthily is very important for us.

2、 In order to achieving the goal, we must do several things. Firstly, we should have a positive attitude to life, which is in benefit to your health. Secondly, we must study hardly. It is time that we studied diligently. There is no doubt whether getting good results in the entrance exam is very impo

3、rtant for us students. Finally, we should do exercises every day. It is fact that good health is helpful to our study. Only when we are in good health can we do that what we want to do. Passage 2One cold evening during the holiday season, a little boy about six or seven was standing out in the front

4、 of a store window The little child has no shoes and his clothes were just rags A young woman passes by saw the little boy and could read the desire in his pale blue eyes She took the child by the hand and led him into the store There she bought her some new shoes and a complete suit of warmly cloth

5、ingThey came back outside into the street, so the woman told the child to come home and have a happy holiday The little boy looked her and asked how she was God She smiled and replied that she was just one of His childPassage 3It is five years now since I graduate from No. 3 High School. Last Saturd

6、ay, the class that I was on held a get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody and set a well time for all of us. We all enjoyed this precious day greatly, remember the time we spent together and the people they were familiar with. It wa

7、s a pity which some of us were not present as they had gone to abroad for further study, but they called back or sent greeting card from different places.Passage 4Dear Angela,I am so happy to learn you are coming to study in our school and stay at my home.My home is at No.58, Mingzu Street. A five-m

8、inutes walk from my home along Mingzu Street will lead you to a crossroads, when Mingzu Street meets Baohu Road. On the corner of the crossroads lie a shopping mall, where you can get everything you needed. Walking for about 300 meter along Baohu Road, youll see our school on right. There we will sp

9、end most of the daytime. In the end of Mingzu Street stands the new railway station, and that its easy for you to reach. As a bus stop is just next to my home, Bus No.23 will direct take you there.I cant wait to seeing you in China. Yours, Li HuPassage 5Dear Headmaster, I am writing to talk about th

10、e canteen of our school. There are only a few stand in the canteen, leading to lots of students have to line up for food. It is waste of time, isnt it? But at times the food is not fresh and does not taste deliciously. So its not surprising that some students chose to go to the street to buy junk fo

11、od which do harm to their health. Would you think about that how to improve it? I would appreciate you if you could take some measures. Hopefully, my opinion can be taken to account.Jack2016高考英語-短文改錯集訓（六）答案Passage 1As is well-known, grow up happily or healthily is very important for us. In order to

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