1、十、圖畫作文寫作十、圖畫作文寫作寫作指南寫作指南常用句型常用句型寫作實(shí)例寫作實(shí)例佳作向?qū)Ъ炎飨驅(qū)Х段捏w驗(yàn)范文體驗(yàn)寫作指南寫作指南 圖畫類書面表達(dá)要求考生從觀察入手圖畫類書面表達(dá)要求考生從觀察入手, ,通過對(duì)畫面意思的理解通過對(duì)畫面意思的理解, ,發(fā)揮發(fā)揮想象力想象力, ,按照一定的要求把圖畫內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確、生動(dòng)地加工成書面語言。按照一定的要求把圖畫內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確、生動(dòng)地加工成書面語言。針對(duì)此類題型針對(duì)此類題型, ,考生在寫作時(shí)可遵循以下步驟考生在寫作時(shí)可遵循以下步驟: :1.1.讀圖。要讀懂圖片讀圖。要讀懂圖片, ,聯(lián)想其背景聯(lián)想其背景, ,并了解其深層的含義。并了解其深層的含義。2.2.描圖。簡(jiǎn)要描述圖

2、畫的內(nèi)容描圖。簡(jiǎn)要描述圖畫的內(nèi)容, ,為下文做好鋪墊。為下文做好鋪墊。3.3.說理。要聯(lián)系現(xiàn)實(shí)說理。要聯(lián)系現(xiàn)實(shí), ,說清道理。針對(duì)圖片進(jìn)行聯(lián)想說清道理。針對(duì)圖片進(jìn)行聯(lián)想, ,挖掘圖中隱含的有挖掘圖中隱含的有 教育意義的內(nèi)容教育意義的內(nèi)容, ,聯(lián)系現(xiàn)實(shí)生活進(jìn)行說理聯(lián)系現(xiàn)實(shí)生活進(jìn)行說理, ,對(duì)人能夠起到激勵(lì)作用。此對(duì)人能夠起到激勵(lì)作用。此 部分是文章的重點(diǎn)部分是文章的重點(diǎn), ,切忌輕描淡寫。切忌輕描淡寫。4.4.升華。結(jié)尾要言簡(jiǎn)意賅升華。結(jié)尾要言簡(jiǎn)意賅, ,畫龍點(diǎn)睛畫龍點(diǎn)睛, ,起到升華的作用。起到升華的作用。5.5.錘煉語言。使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式錘煉語言。使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式, ,恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用連接詞語與

3、過渡句恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用連接詞語與過渡句, ,增加文增加文 章的得分點(diǎn)。章的得分點(diǎn)。常用句型常用句型In the picture,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a In the picture,we can see a boy in worn clothes,sitting at a shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it shabby wooden table with a pile of books on it.(2015.(2015福建福建) ) 在圖中在圖中, ,我們可以看到一個(gè)穿著破

4、舊衣服的男孩我們可以看到一個(gè)穿著破舊衣服的男孩, ,坐在一張破舊的木桌坐在一張破舊的木桌 子旁子旁, ,上面放著一堆書。上面放著一堆書。As is described in the picture.As is described in the picture.正如圖畫所描述的那樣正如圖畫所描述的那樣A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall A weak ray of light came in through a small hole in the wall and he was absorbed in his r

5、eading and he was absorbed in his reading.(2015.(2015福建福建) ) 一道微弱的光線穿過墻上的一個(gè)小洞一道微弱的光線穿過墻上的一個(gè)小洞, ,他在全神貫注地看書。他在全神貫注地看書。The moral of the story is: spare no effort to acquire The moral of the story is: spare no effort to acquire knowledge and never get discouraged easily no matter how knowledge and never

6、 get discouraged easily no matter how difficult the situation may be difficult the situation may be.(2015.(2015福建福建) ) 故事的寓意是故事的寓意是: :不遺余力地去獲取知識(shí)不遺余力地去獲取知識(shí), ,不管情況多么困難不管情況多么困難, ,也決不也決不 氣餒。氣餒。The picture indicates/conveys the meaning that.The picture indicates/conveys the meaning that. 這幅圖指出這幅圖指出/ /傳達(dá)傳

7、達(dá)The sight reminds me of something in my daily life.The sight reminds me of something in my daily life. 這個(gè)情景使我想起了我的日常生活中的一些事情。這個(gè)情景使我想起了我的日常生活中的一些事情。According to the picture above,we can see that.According to the picture above,we can see that. 通過上面的圖畫通過上面的圖畫, ,我們可以得知我們可以得知It is a common phenomenon in

8、 China that.It is a common phenomenon in China that. 在中國在中國是常見現(xiàn)象。是常見現(xiàn)象。寫作實(shí)例寫作實(shí)例 假如你叫李華假如你叫李華, ,是一名高中生。最近是一名高中生。最近, ,你將參加學(xué)校組織的英語作文你將參加學(xué)校組織的英語作文比賽。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面一幅漫畫寫一篇英語短文。內(nèi)容包括比賽。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面一幅漫畫寫一篇英語短文。內(nèi)容包括: : 1. 1.描述圖畫的內(nèi)容描述圖畫的內(nèi)容; ; 2. 2.揭示圖畫所反映的問題揭示圖畫所反映的問題; ; 3. 3.針對(duì)圖畫的內(nèi)容談?wù)勀愕目捶āａ槍?duì)圖畫的內(nèi)容談?wù)勀愕目捶āＷ⒁庾⒁? :詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100100左右。左

9、右。 佳作向?qū)Ъ炎飨驅(qū)?1. 1.文體信息文體信息 (1)(1)體裁體裁: :記敘文記敘文 (2)(2)時(shí)態(tài)時(shí)態(tài): :一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)一般現(xiàn)在時(shí) (3)(3)人稱人稱: :第三人稱為主第三人稱為主 2.2.思路點(diǎn)撥思路點(diǎn)撥 本題要求看圖說理本題要求看圖說理, ,所給圖畫反映的是目前家庭教育中存在的問題所給圖畫反映的是目前家庭教育中存在的問題, ,可以采用先敘述后議論的方式來寫。文章可分為三部分來寫可以采用先敘述后議論的方式來寫。文章可分為三部分來寫: : (1) (1)開頭開頭描述圖畫描述圖畫: :圖中女孩拒絕幫助母親干家務(wù)活圖中女孩拒絕幫助母親干家務(wù)活, ,甚至要求甚至要求洗碗一次洗碗一次5050

10、元。元。 (2)(2)發(fā)展發(fā)展揭示問題揭示問題: :許多青少年有如此表現(xiàn)許多青少年有如此表現(xiàn), ,他他( (她她) )們認(rèn)為學(xué)習(xí)們認(rèn)為學(xué)習(xí)是他是他( (她她) )們的義務(wù)們的義務(wù), ,而家務(wù)活是父母的事情。而家務(wù)活是父母的事情。 (3)(3)結(jié)尾結(jié)尾陳述自己的看法陳述自己的看法: :父母教育方式錯(cuò)誤父母教育方式錯(cuò)誤; ;應(yīng)當(dāng)幫助孩應(yīng)當(dāng)幫助孩子學(xué)習(xí)一些技能子學(xué)習(xí)一些技能; ;有利于融洽關(guān)系。有利于融洽關(guān)系。 3. 3.要點(diǎn)表達(dá)要點(diǎn)表達(dá) (1)(1)從圖中我們可以看到一個(gè)女孩拒絕幫助她母親干家務(wù)活從圖中我們可以看到一個(gè)女孩拒絕幫助她母親干家務(wù)活, ,甚至洗甚至洗碗一次索要碗一次索要5050元的費(fèi)用

11、。元的費(fèi)用。 From the picture we can see a girl refuses to help her From the picture we can see a girl refuses to help her mother with housework.She even charges 50 yuan for washing mother with housework.She even charges 50 yuan for washing dishes at a time.dishes at a time. =From the picture we can see a

12、 girl refuses to help her =From the picture we can see a girl refuses to help her mother with housework and even charges 50 yuan for washing mother with housework and even charges 50 yuan for washing dishes at a time.dishes at a time. (2) (2)他他( (她她) )們很少和父母分擔(dān)家務(wù)活。他們很少和父母分擔(dān)家務(wù)活。他( (她她) )們認(rèn)為努力學(xué)習(xí)功課們認(rèn)為努力

13、學(xué)習(xí)功課是他是他( (她她) )們的職責(zé)而家務(wù)活是父母的事。們的職責(zé)而家務(wù)活是父母的事。 They seldom share housework with their parents.They think They seldom share housework with their parents.They think their duty is to work hard at their lessons and housework their duty is to work hard at their lessons and housework belongs to their parent

14、s.belongs to their parents. =They seldom share housework with their parents because =They seldom share housework with their parents because they think it is their duty to work hard at their lessons and they think it is their duty to work hard at their lessons and housework belongs to their parents.h

15、ousework belongs to their parents. (3) (3)父母應(yīng)該要求孩子分擔(dān)家務(wù)而不是寵愛他父母應(yīng)該要求孩子分擔(dān)家務(wù)而不是寵愛他( (她她) )們們, ,因?yàn)樽黾覄?wù)活因?yàn)樽黾覄?wù)活是有益的。是有益的。 Parents should require their children to share housework Parents should require their children to share housework instead of spoiling them because doing housework is beneficial.instead o

16、f spoiling them because doing housework is beneficial. (4) (4)父母除了應(yīng)該幫他們培養(yǎng)責(zé)任感還要幫助孩子學(xué)習(xí)一些重要的技父母除了應(yīng)該幫他們培養(yǎng)責(zé)任感還要幫助孩子學(xué)習(xí)一些重要的技能能, ,如做飯和洗衣服。如做飯和洗衣服。 Parents should not only help their children develop a sense Parents should not only help their children develop a sense of responsibility but also assist them i

17、n learning some of responsibility but also assist them in learning some important skills,like cooking and washing.important skills,like cooking and washing. =Apart from helping them develop a sense of responsibility, =Apart from helping them develop a sense of responsibility,parents should also assi

18、st them in learning some important parents should also assist them in learning some important skills,like cooking and washing.skills,like cooking and washing.范文體驗(yàn)范文體驗(yàn) From the picture we can see a girl From the picture we can see a girl ( (拒絕幫助她的母拒絕幫助她的母親干家務(wù)活親干家務(wù)活) and even charges 50 yuan for washi

19、ng dishes at a time.) and even charges 50 yuan for washing dishes at a time. ( (她的行為她的行為) is really astonishing and it sets me ) is really astonishing and it sets me thinking deeply.thinking deeply. Many teenagers today act just like the girl.They seldom share Many teenagers today act just like the

20、girl.They seldom share housework with their parents because they think housework with their parents because they think ( (努力努力學(xué)習(xí)功課是他們的職責(zé)學(xué)習(xí)功課是他們的職責(zé)) and housework belongs to their parents.) and housework belongs to their parents. I think it is because parents educate their children in a I think it is

21、 because parents educate their children in a wrong way.Parents should require their children to share houseworkwrong way.Parents should require their children to share housework ( (而不是寵愛他們而不是寵愛他們) because doing housework is ) because doing housework is beneficial.beneficial. ( (除了幫他們培養(yǎng)責(zé)任感除了幫他們培養(yǎng)責(zé)任感),parents ),parents should also assist their childr