1、2021/8/1412021/8/142: 提供一篇350詞以內(nèi)的材料，要求考生依據(jù)材料內(nèi)容、所給段落開頭語及所標(biāo)關(guān)鍵詞續(xù)寫一篇150詞左右的短文。（滿分25分）新高考考試說明2021/8/143評分原則本題總分為25分，分5個檔次給分第五檔第五檔(21-25)與所給短文融洽度高，與所提供各段落開頭語與所給短文融洽度高，與所提供各段落開頭語銜接合理。銜接合理。內(nèi)內(nèi)容豐富，容豐富，應(yīng)用了應(yīng)用了5個以上短文中標(biāo)出的關(guān)鍵個以上短文中標(biāo)出的關(guān)鍵詞語。詞語。所所使用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯豐富、準(zhǔn)確，使用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯豐富、準(zhǔn)確， 可能可能有些有些錯誤，但完全不影響意義表達(dá)。錯誤，但完全不影響意義表達(dá)。有效地使用

2、了語句間的連接成分，使所續(xù)寫短有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使所續(xù)寫短文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。2021/8/144兩個要弄明白的問題：l 原文原文有什么用？有什么用？l 續(xù)寫續(xù)寫要寫什么？要寫什么？原文原文理解理解續(xù)寫文續(xù)寫文模仿模仿素素材材2021/8/145素素材材情節(jié)情節(jié)基調(diào)基調(diào)核心核心矛盾矛盾故事故事框架框架語言語言設(shè)定設(shè)定潛伏潛伏信息信息2021/8/146高高融洽度融洽度 tone (情節(jié)基調(diào)情節(jié)基調(diào))language characteristics(語言特征語言特征)content (內(nèi)容內(nèi)容: plot development - “W & H”) 2021/8/147

3、1. tone (情節(jié)基調(diào)情節(jié)基調(diào)): ? A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. . funny a happy ending2021/8/1482. Language characteristics (語言特征語言特征) : ? A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. . .“It looks like youve got a problem,” Arthur said. “Im

4、afraid so. Im in a big hurry and I cant start my car.”Story narration (故事旁白故事旁白)Conversation-direct speech(直接引語直接引語): simple (簡單簡單)2021/8/1492. Language characteristics: vivid (生動生動) Now the air was filled with the sound of the alarm and the shouts of people running from all directions. .Arthur, sti

5、ll carrying the suitcase, turned to look at the bank and walked right into the young woman in front of him. .2021/8/1410one dayalong Park Avenue near the First National BankArthur & a young man Arthur helped a young man carry a suitcase but made himself a suspect of the bank robbery. 3. content

6、(內(nèi)容內(nèi)容: plot development - “W&H”) How will the story develop?When:Where:Who:What: How:One day, Arthur helped a young man carry a suitcase on Park Avenue near the First National Bank, but made himself a suspect of the bank robbery. 2021/8/1411Find out the key clues(線索) based on the beginnings:Para

7、1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!”Para2: The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur. _ is inside the suitcase?What2021/8/1412In a group predict how the story will develop:(tone: funny a happy ending)The underlined words: Park Avenue, the y

8、oung man, suitcases, in the back seat, loud noise of an alarm, the bank, robbery, the shouts, people, the bank thief money other things 2021/8/1413 箱子里箱子里所屬人所屬人Young man身身份份可能情節(jié)發(fā)展可能情節(jié)發(fā)展1Money the young manthief碰巧抓住搶劫犯（即結(jié)尾1）2not thief碰巧把剛從銀行取錢趕路的人當(dāng)劫犯，最后到警局傳來抓到劫犯消息3another manthief碰巧碰到一個剛偷了其他人錢的小偷，最后到

9、警局傳來抓到劫犯并找回銀行失錢的消息，最后在Arthur幫助下抓到另一個小偷4not thief路遇一個路人幫人搬運裝滿錢的行李箱，而Arthur錯把路人當(dāng)劫犯，最后澄清消除誤會5Other thingsthe young manthief錯把普通小偷當(dāng)劫犯，最后幫助抓到該小偷6not thief錯把路人當(dāng)劫犯（即結(jié)尾2）7another manthief碰巧碰到一個剛偷了其他人東西的小偷，最后到警局傳來抓到劫犯并找回銀行失錢的消息，最后在Arthur幫助下抓到另一個小偷8not thief路遇一個路人幫人搬運普通行李箱，而Arthur錯把路人當(dāng)劫犯，最后澄清消除誤會2021/8/1414As

10、 he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!” Arthur instantly realized that the young man might be the bank thief. So he ran faster. The moment he stopped a taxi, he jumped in with the suitcase and said to the driver. “Please hurry to the Police Station. The man shoutin

11、g behind is the bank thief.” The driver followed him and raced away.2021/8/1415 The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur directly went in and told the police what he happened to him. Obviously, the police had already learned about the robbery. As Arthur expected, they found a large

12、 sum of money inside after opening the suitcase. Then they asked Arthur to describe the young man. Later, with the help of Arthur, the police successfully caught the robber. Both the bank and the police thanked Arthur a lot. (151 words) 2021/8/1416 As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shout

13、ing behind, “Stop, stop!” Suddenly, realizing he himself might be misunderstood as the bank robber, Arthur ran faster until he stopped a taxi. He got into it with the suitcase and said to the driver in one breath: “The man shouting behind is the bank thief. Please hurry to the Police Station.” Follo

14、wing Arthur, the taxi raced away. 2021/8/1417 The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur rushed into the office. Just as he was describing what had happened near the bank on Park Avenue , Arthur heard a voice outside, “Help! Help!” To his surprise, it was the young man. He had follow

15、ed Arthur in another taxi. It turned out that inside the suitcases were just some clothes and the young man was innocent. Embarrassed, Arthur apologized to him, but the policemen thanked him anyway. (153 words) 2021/8/14182021/8/1419How to write a continuation?1.Read for basic information 2.Read for

16、 plot development clues3.Predict possible plot development4.Draft a continuation5.Check and copy your version-tone, language characteristics, content (“W&H”) - the beginning - the clues, the underlined words 2021/8/1420 Give comments on your deskmates continuation according to the criteria. Writ

17、e a continuation of about 150 words for Passage B using what we have learned in this class.Assignment:2021/8/14212021/8/14222021/8/1423The underlined words: Park Avenue, the young man, suitcases, in the back seat, loud noise of an alarm, the bank, robbery, the shouts, people, the bank thief Sort out the underlined words:Who: .Where: .What: .2021/8/1424 Language characteristics:simple (簡單簡單)vivid (生動生動)Polish and cohere (潤色銜接潤色銜接):discourse marks (銜接語銜接語)Content: include the underlined words ( 5)2021/8/1425Para.1: As he was running, Arthur h