1、一，河南中招英語作文評分標準 書面表達，15分。考生應根據題目要求，采用適當的時態、語態、句式和詞語， 完整、準確地表達所要求的內容。分四檔評分。 第一檔：符合題目要求，內容完整，層次結構清晰，表達清楚，語言無誤。13-15分。 第二檔：基本符合題目要求，內容較完整，層次結構較清晰，表達較清楚，語言有少量錯誤。912分。 第三檔：部分內容符合題目要求，內容不夠完整，層次結構不夠清晰，表達不夠清楚，語言有較多錯誤。4-8分。 第四檔：不符合題目要求，整篇表達不清楚，或照抄、拼湊幾個詞語。0-3分。第1頁/共47頁1. 審題不清如有一年中考作文要求寫一項最喜歡的課外活動，有些考生將作文的主題定位為

2、“我最喜歡的活動”，偏離了“一項、課外活動”這一主題。依據作文的評分原則，若文章內容不切題，則不管語言如何規范、用詞如何準確，都會被判為三四類作文。中考英語作文常見問題分析第2頁/共47頁 2.拼寫問題 拼寫是考生應該具備的最起碼的基本功，但在考生的作文中卻經常能發現很多拼寫錯誤。有拼寫錯誤的作文肯定會被酌情扣分，一般來說兩個錯誤扣一分，而且有大量拼寫錯誤存在的作文不僅體現出語言基本功差，同時也直接影響內容的表達，通常會降低作文的檔次。第3頁/共47頁 3，語法問題 語法問題主要包括：名詞單復數, 動詞的時態與語態以及缺少動詞的情況, 形容詞和副詞的等級形式,代詞、介詞、數詞和冠詞的使用, 主

3、謂一致等等方面的錯誤。另外,還有諸多常見的固定句式的錯誤。經調查分析, 學生的語法錯誤主要是受母語的負遷移影響。第4頁/共47頁語法問題之 缺少動詞在漢語中沒有動詞的句子是允許的，但 英語中每個完整的句子都必須有動詞來構成 如：“我累了。”這個句子沒有動詞作謂語， 而用形容詞，但英語形容詞不能作謂語，一 定要加上be動詞，寫成：Im tired. 誤 I happy I can come to Beijing zoo. 正 I am happy I can come to Beijing zoo. 誤 The apples cheap. Ill take some. 正 The apples

4、are cheap. Ill take some.第5頁/共47頁語法問題之 代詞的誤用英語中代詞的形式很多，包括主格、賓格、物主代詞、反身代詞等。而漢語中沒有主格和賓格、形容詞性物主代詞和名次性物主代詞之分；此外漢語中很多時候不用物主代詞，而英語中物主代詞是不可省略的，代詞的誤用是考生最容易發生的錯誤誤 I mother and I went to the shop to buy a present for I father. 正 y mother and Iwent to the shop to buy a present for my father.第6頁/共47頁減少失分，重在夯實基礎

5、 通過前面對學生問題的分析，不難看出如果能學好英語這八類詞：名詞 、動詞 、形容詞、副詞、介詞、數詞、冠詞和連詞。能正確使用5種基本句型，兩種語態，這些初中階段要求掌握的基礎知識，作文失分一定會大大減少。第7頁/共47頁Head Beginning Body TailEnding第8頁/共47頁 BeginningBody Ending Concluding sentence 結論句Supporting sentence 支持句（例子、實事、數據或引文） topic sentence 主題句開門見山，緊扣主題總結觀點，發表己見，首尾呼應總分總第9頁/共47頁1. Cross-question(

6、審題)u Style (體裁）u Person（人稱）u Tense（時態）默讀題目弄清要求,抓取有效信息,并適當分析。第10頁/共47頁健康很重要。在學習和工作的壓力日趨增大的今天，會休息的人才會有健康的身體。人們是如何度過假期的呢？國際健康組織對此作了一次調查，右圖是他們此次的調查結果。根據你所得的信息，請為國際健康組織寫一篇完整的調查報告,并提倡大家進行假日休閑。牛刀小試Cross-question(審題)visit friends or parentstravelstay at homework第11頁/共47頁Style (體裁）：_Person（人稱）：_Tense（時態）: _調

7、查報告，記敘文第一人稱一般現在時1. Cross-question(審題)據實描寫：適當發揮：度假方式細節及提倡假日休閑第12頁/共47頁2. An outline drawing（概略圖）u List key points(列要點)u Arrange and Add (布局加首尾)第13頁/共47頁 如何度假調查報告倡議假日休閑根據關鍵詞及圖表用簡單的句子列出文章的要點。 List key pointsvisit friends or parentstravelstay at homework列要點時，內容、結構上不能有缺漏，如有漏點，扣分最多！第14頁/共47頁 List key poin

8、ts1.A lot of people travel. 2.Some people stay at home. 3.Some other people visit friends or parents. 4.A few people work.Enjoy your vacation.visit friends or parentstravelstay at homework第15頁/共47頁 How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. （the beginning） A lot of

9、people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. (the key points) Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）加(add)加首尾 總分總第16頁/共47頁3. Sentence Making and Beautifying word phrase sentence Beautifying內容和語言表達內容全面，表達有

10、新意或亮點第17頁/共47頁3. Sentence Making and Beautifying（美化） word phrase sentence Beautifying第18頁/共47頁 How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.(the beginning) A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work.

11、Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.(the ending) most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays.美(beautify)第19頁/共47頁方法一:善用意義相近的 高級詞匯，避免行文單調第20頁/共47頁Which is better?1我希望你能幫助我。A I hope you can help me. B Im looking forward to your help. 2 我不吃

12、垃圾食品。A I dont eat junk food. B I stay away from junk food.3 我們應該努力取得好成績。A We should work hard to get good grades.B Were supposed to try our best to get good grades.第21頁/共47頁 Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Some people stay at home. Some other people

13、visit friends or parents. A few people work. some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest.It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. A few people have to wor

14、k. It makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. A few people have to work. 第22頁/共47頁方法二 : 活用多種句型,避免重復和呆板,增加文采盡量使用自己熟悉的句型,以正確、通順為最基本要求第23頁/共47頁Which is better?1 雨下得很大，所以他沒趕上校車。A It rained heavily. So he didnt catch the school bus.B He missed the school bus because of the heavy rain.missedbecaus

15、e of 2 我們應該保護環境。A We should protect the environment.B Its our duty to protect the environment.第24頁/共47頁 Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. It makes them relaxed t

16、o visit friends or parents. A few people have to work. (the key points) Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）只會用功不玩耍，聰明孩子

17、也變傻Proverb（諺語）第25頁/共47頁方法三: 妙用引文和例子，旁征博引，豐富文章內容，增加說服力。第26頁/共47頁加諺語(Proverb)集中注意力于學習We should concentrate on our studies.As the saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies.第27頁/共47頁加諺語(Proverb)加入英語俱樂部是學習英語的好方法Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.As the s

18、aying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.第28頁/共47頁Enjoy some proverbs1.Practice makes perfect.2.Think twice before you do. 4.Do as the Romans do. 7.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. roads lead to Rome. 三思而后行。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。入鄉隨俗。早起的鳥兒有蟲吃。失敗是成功之

19、母。5.The early bird catches the worm.一天一個蘋果， 醫生遠離我。條條大路通羅馬。3.Where there is a will, there is a way.6.Failure is the mother of success.第29頁/共47頁青少年應盡我們所能保護環境拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth. For example, we can use recycled bags instead of plastic b

20、ags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy.加例子第30頁/共47頁4. Sentence connectionsentencespassageLinking words（連接詞）第31頁/共47頁連(connect) How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report.（the beginning） As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack

21、 a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation.People whorelax well work well. （the ending） Most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. It makes them relaxed to visit friends

22、or parents. A few people have to work. (the body)第32頁/共47頁連(connect) How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home,watching TV or su

23、rfing the Internet to have a good rest. And it also makes them relaxed to visit friends or parents. However, a few people have to work. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation.People Who relax well work well.第33頁/共47頁方法四:妙用關聯詞，使行文連貫流暢，使文章富有層次感。第

24、34頁/共47頁1.表示并列: and, as well as, not onlybut also bothand, neithernor， 2.表示遞進: besides, whats more 3.表示轉折: but, however, althoughthough, after all, anyway4.表示因果: because, since,for, so, therefore, as a result5.表示條件: if, unless第35頁/共47頁6.表示對比: instead, notbut, while, in the same way, on the one hando

25、n the other hand7.表示解釋: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words, to tell the truth8.表示順序: to begin with, first (of all), firstly, second(ly), finally, in the end； next,later, since then, from then on9.表示強調: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact10.表示結論: all in all, i

26、n a word,generally speaking, in short第36頁/共47頁 _ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _. We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled. ( )Its too late to invite any m

27、ore people. _, you know how Tim hates parties.A Besides B However C Still D InsteadThoughAlthoughinstead such asFirstNextFinallyAt lastA第37頁/共47頁5. CheckinguSpelling(拼寫)uTense(時態)uGrammer (語法)uHandwriting(書寫)uPunctuation marks(標點符號)通覽全文仔細檢查第38頁/共47頁1.名詞的單復數問題More and more students use the mobile phone. mobile phones2.數的不一致、時態不一致、代詞不一致以及主謂不一致等問題Some stud