1、如何寫好高考書面表達 主題突出書寫工整行文流暢表達準確要點齊全書面表達對考生的能力考察書面表達對考生的能力考察高考全國英語新課標I卷-書面表達 (1)準確使用語法和詞匯準確使用語法和詞匯 語言的準確性是寫作中不可忽視的一個重要方面，因為它直接或問接地影響到信息的準確傳輸。應用語法結構和詞匯的應用語法結構和詞匯的準確程度準確程度是寫作部分評分標準中的一項重要內容。（2）使用一定的句型、詞）使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達自匯，清楚、連貫地表達自己的意思己的意思 任何一篇文章都需要有一個主題，作者應該圍繞該主題，借助一些句型、詞借助一些句型、詞組等的支持，清楚、連貫組等的支持，清楚、連貫地表

2、達自己的思想地表達自己的思想。 （一）評分原則1. 本題總分為25分，按5個檔次給分。2. 評分時，先根據文章的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調整檔次，最后給分。 3. 詞數少于80和多于120的，從總分中減去2分。4. 評分時應注意的主要內容為：內容要點、應用詞匯和語法結構的數量和準確性及上下文的連貫性。5. 拼寫與標點符號是語言準確性的一個方面。評分時應視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。 (二)評分標準第五檔(21-25分)完全完成了試題規定的任務，完全達到了預期的寫作目的（精彩迭出）第四檔(16-20分)：完全完成了試題規定的任務

3、，達到了預期的寫作目的（清清楚楚） 第三檔(11-15分)：基本完成了試題規定的任務，整體而言，基本達到了預期的寫作目的（馬馬虎虎 ） 第二檔(6-10分)：未恰當完成試題規定的任務，信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者（糊里糊涂） 第一檔(1-5分)：未完成試題規定的任務，信息未能傳達給讀者（一塌糊涂）評分范圍與要求評分范圍與要求：分五檔：分五檔第五檔：分：第五檔：分：完全完成了試題規定的任務；完全完成了試題規定的任務；覆蓋覆蓋所有的內容要點所有的內容要點；應用了較多的應用了較多的語法結構和詞匯語法結構和詞匯；語法結構或詞匯方面有些許錯誤，但為語法結構或詞匯方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力盡力使用較復雜結構和較

4、高級詞匯使用較復雜結構和較高級詞匯所致；所致；有效使用了語句間的有效使用了語句間的連接成分連接成分，使全文，使全文結構緊湊結構緊湊完全達到了預期寫作的目的完全達到了預期寫作的目的 福建英語閱卷評分標準內容要點定檔次語言結構分高低 句群連貫做微調2016高考全國英語新課標I卷書面表達評卷情況 0分卷：3.5%1檔：8.89% （1-5分檔）2檔：7.5% （6-10分檔）3檔：20.1% （11-15分檔）4檔：檔：40.8% （16-20分檔）分檔）5檔：11.9% （21-25分檔）2016高考全國英語新課標I卷書面表達抽樣調查得分情況 優秀率17.2%及格率53.7%全省平均分14.832

5、016高考全國英語新課標I卷書面表達 假定你是李華，暑假想去一家外貿公司兼職，已寫好申請和個人簡歷（resume）。給外教Mr Jenkins寫信，請她幫你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。注意：1. 次數100左右；2.可以適當增加細節，以使行文連貫。Dear Ms Jenkins,Yours,Li Hua 審審什什么么 審文體-應用文 審體裁-書信 審人稱-第一人稱 審時態- 現在時 2016高考全國英語新課標I卷 1. 認真審題 明確要求 明明確確什什么么 Who writes the letter to whom?I to Ms Jenkins Whats the purpos

6、e of the letter?For help 1. 認真審題 明確要求 Salutation Opening BodyComplimentary close-closing Signature Dear Ms Jenkins,Li Hua 書信框架 Opening -鳳頭-精彩亮麗Opening -Hello!/How are you?Body-豬肚-充實豐富Closing -豹尾-響亮有力Closing -Looking forward to your reply.2013高考全國英語新課標I卷書面表達 假定你是李華，請你給筆友Peter寫封信，告訴他你叔叔李明將去他所在城市開會，帶去他

7、想要的那幅中國畫，同時詢問他是否可以接機。信中還需說明： 李明：高個子，戴眼鏡 航班號：CA985 到達：8月6日上午11:30要點：1. 你叔叔去開會2. 他帶去了中國畫3. 是否可以幫忙接機4. 李明描述5. 航班號6. 到達時間2014高考全國英語新課標I卷書面表達 假定你是李華，計劃暑假間去英國學習英語，為期六周。下面的廣告引起了你的注意，請給該校寫封信，詢問有關情況（箭頭所指內容）要點：1. 計劃學習英語2. 廣告引起了你的注意3. 詢問有關情況（start dates、class size、hours per week、how much、type of accommodation）

8、2015高考全國英語新課標I卷書面表達 假定你是李華，你校英文報“外國文化”欄目擬刊登介紹美國節日風俗和中學生活動的短文。請給美國朋友彼得寫信約稿，要點如下： 欄目介紹； 稿件內容； 稿件長度：約400詞； 交稿日期：6月2日前。要點：1. 寫信目的2. 欄目介紹3. 稿件內容4. 稿件長度5. 交稿日期6. 到達時間 2013（接機）Dear Peter, How are you doing? Looking forward to your reply.2014（廣告）Dear Sir/Madam,2015（約稿）Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write

9、 an article for your schools English newspaper.2016（求助）Dear Ms Jenkins,Li HuaThe opening of a letter :Hows everything going?How are you?I hope everything is all right.How are you getting along these days? I miss you very much. Its a long time since I got you last letter. I am so sorry for not having

10、 written to you for such a long time. The Closing of a letter :Looking forward to your early reply,Hoping to hear from you soon,Hoping you are enjoying good health, Expecting to hear from you as soon as possible, Regretting the trouble I am causing you,Wishing you every success,With best regards, /B

11、est wishes,With best wishes for your success and happiness,With best regards to you and your family, I look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. I wish you good health and every success in your work, 2. 草擬提綱，寫出要點 1.the purpose of my writing2. want to do a part-time job3. finish my app

12、lication letter and resume 4. help me to revise my language and the format 1.I am writing for your help/I am writing to ask for your help.2.plan/would like/love to apply for a part-time job3.finish my application letter and resume4.help me to revise/change/improve the use of words and format表邏輯順序表邏輯

13、順序First, second , third then next finallyFor one thing for anotherOn one hand on the other handLast but not least常見的過渡關聯詞語常見的過渡關聯詞語附加附加,遞進遞進: also Whats morein additionfurthermoremoreover besides whats worse轉折轉折:buthowever on the contrarynevertheless while though otherwise因果因果:because (of)because (o

14、f)soso as a resultas a resultas a consequenceas a consequencethereforethereforethusthussince thanks to 表舉例表舉例,列舉列舉for examplefor examplefor instancefor instancesuch assuch astake take for example for exampleand so onand so on概括概括,歸納歸納 in a wordin a word in short in short on the wholeon the whole Gen

15、erally speakingGenerally speaking as far as I knowas far as I know in summaryin summary in conclusionin conclusion as I have shownas I have shown3. 圍繞要點，擴寫成文 I would love to apply for a part-time job in a foreign trade company. With the summer vacation approaching, I would love to apply for a part-t

16、ime job in a foreign company in my town (city), where (in which ) (I think)I can practice my spoken English./which (I think) can p r o v i d e m e w i t h m a n y opportunities/chances.3. 圍繞要點，擴寫成文 I am writing to ask for your help. I would love to apply for a part-time job in a foreign trade compan

17、y. I have finished my application letter and resume. Will you help me to correct them? 3. 圍繞要點，擴寫成文 I have just/already finished my application letter and resume. I have just/already finished my application letter and resume. However, this is the first time for me to write something like that, I am

18、not sure whether they are well written, especially the format. 3. 圍繞要點，擴寫成文 Will you help me to correct them? I know you are busy, but could you please help me to correct them?/could you please revise them for me?/could you please be kind enough to revise/improve them/make some changes? 3. 圍繞要點，擴寫成文

19、 I have emailed them to you. You can find them in the attachment. I have emailed you and you can find them in the attachment. good writingaccuratecoherentvariedconcise3. 圍繞要點，擴寫成文 讓閱卷者在辛苦的評卷中產生愉悅感4. 修正錯誤 認真謄寫 2016高考全國英語新課標I卷書面表達學生作品(滿分卷) (92 words) Im Li Hua. How are you doing lately? The summer hol

20、iday is coming. I want to go to a foreign company that offers a part-time job. As we all know, job-hunting is difficult to students. So writing a good application letter and resume is important. I have written the application letter and resume that is modified many times. However, there are still many problems. I hope you can help me check the information and format to see whether they are correct or not. Looking forward to your reply at your earliest co