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1、托福寫作實例講解如何找獨立寫作的分論點 托??荚嚨内厔菔窃絹碓诫y了,托福寫作考試也是如此,那么如何應對托福寫作呢?下面就和大家分享托福寫作實例講解如何找獨立寫作的分論點,希望能夠幫助到大家,來欣賞一下吧。托福寫作實例講解如何找獨立寫作的分論點實例講解一題目一do you agree or disagree the following statement : leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader.題目二:some people have ambitious dreams and keep following the

2、m, but other people always focus on realistic goals and try to achieve them. which do you think is better?托福作文理由,忌諱的就是就事論事,不作任何擴展。當不作任何擴展的時候,也就是不做任何細化的時候,其實不慣是老托福還是新托福,一個尋找作文理由利器就是細化。所謂細化,就是不要拘泥于單純的題目。第一個題目,大家都覺得很空,“領導力”到底該怎么找理由,完全沒有頭緒。第二個題目,也是一樣的,“具有挑戰性的夢想”與“現實的目標”感覺遠不如老托福里面的“是否建立工廠”好想理由。但是如果我們對于領導

3、力進行舉例,我們自然而然的就會想到喬布斯,是一個超偉大的大企業家,喬布斯有什么過人的能力呢。1創新能力,否則不會有iphone與ipad; 2審美能力,否則mac的字體不會那么漂亮,iphone也不會那么完美;3堅韌不拔的能力,否則也不會建立皮克斯東山再起。再來想創新能力,我們可以通過旅游來獲得,什么可以通過學習來獲得,堅韌可以通過體育來獲得。到這,不也就找到了寫作的方向了么。再比如說現實的夢想,還是挑戰性的夢想,我們也可以進行舉例。現實的夢想:1去海南旅游;2考全班前5 ;3給父母買禮物。為什么要做這些事情呢?1去海南旅游,可以多游泳,鍛煉身體; 2考全班前5,可以激發自己的積極性,告訴自己

4、通過自己的努力可以實現; 3給父母買禮物,可以增進家庭成員的感情。這不就有很好的理由了么。實例講解二題目:do you agree or disagree with the following statement: people can solve important problems by themselves or with the help from their family members so theres no need for the government to help them.人們是否能不靠上級部門的關注,自己解決重要問題。首先舉個例子,到底什么算重要問題。買房難算是大問題

5、吧,要不是在國內買不起房,你為什么要出國呢。買房都涉及什么。1地點:父母可以幫你選; 2錢:父母可以幫你提供; 3電器和裝修:自己賺錢解決。當然,有些考友會覺得這樣的就太瑣碎了。其實很簡單,你可以再提煉嗎,這個題目,“地點”就可以提煉為前期準備;“錢”就可以提煉為“資金”;“電器和裝修”就可以提煉為“后期升級和維護”,這不就是3個理由出來了么。托福作文理由,切忌就事論事,其實只要我們大膽的進行舉例,然后需要的時候,再適當提煉,其實作文思路是非常好尋找的。前幾天給姑娘寫情書的時候,你也不能只寫我愛你,還一定要寫“不看你的眼,不看你的眉,看的時候心里跳,看過以后眼淚垂,不看你的眼,不看你的眉,不看

6、你也愛上你,忘了我是誰”這里的眼與眉不都是舉例么托福寫作:題庫范文附思路解析1. what have you learned about a country from watching its movies?films can tell us a lot about the country where they were made. what have you learned about a country from watching its movies? use specific examples and details to support your response.分析通過電影可以了

7、解一個國家的經濟、科技風俗、習慣歷史、文化價值觀念 相關題目:82、180范文one of the favorite pastimes of people today is watching movies. movies can teach us a great amount about the world, especially if we watch movies from another culture. when watching a foreign movie, we can learn about the landscape and scenery of the country,

8、the countrys ethics and customs, and its historical events.the world is a great and varied place, from the immense mountains of the himalayas to the deserts of america. by watching movies, one can gain insight as to what these beautiful places are like. for example, i recently watched a number of mo

9、vies filmed in america. i learned about the beautiful beaches of california, national parks such as yellowstone and niagara falls, as well as man-made wonders such as the statue of liberty, mount rushmore, and the golden gate bridge. watching foreign movies is an excellent way to deduce where one wa

10、nts to travel, if he/she has such an opportunity.watching movies also teaches us about a countrys ethics and customs. for example, while watching american movies, i learned that children do not show as much respect to their parents as we do here in china. in some cases, children were very disrespect

11、ful of their elders, and ignored their wishes outright. i was shocked by this behavior. to give another example, i also learned about table manners in america, which are quite different from the rules we follow in china.furthermore, one can learn about a countrys history by watching films. for insta

12、nce, there are many movies that have been made about the wars in america, such as gone with the wind. movies such as this show foreign viewers why america is the free and independent society that it is today. hence, watching foreign movies is an excellent way to learn about faraway lands. one can le

13、arn about the landscape of a place, about its culture, as well as its history. perhaps schools should consider watching foreign movies in classes to provoke interest from the students about such lands.托福寫作:題庫范文附思路解析1. study alone or with a group of students?some students prefer to study alone. other

14、s prefer to study with a group of students. which do you prefer? use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.分析可以采取it depends的策略,要看學什么科目。有的科目,自己有足夠的自學能力,就單獨學,可以進一步提高自己的學習能力;而有些剛剛入門的科目,往往需要別人的幫助,所以喜歡跟同學們一起學習。也可以采取先比較,后選擇的方法。自己學習:安靜;有效率;制定計劃更容易;提高自學能力;本質上,學習靠自己;但是有時自己可能解決不了問題;也可能使自己變得孤立與大

15、家一起學:可以向更優秀的學生求助;幫助別人解答問題也會使自己對問題的了解更深刻;與同學們保持良好的關系;但是也可能因為某些人浪費時間,缺乏效率范文each and every student has his/her own preference for study. some prefer to study alone, while others prefer to study with a group of students. both methods have their own relative merits.while alone, the focus of study can be

16、easily kept, with little distraction which always accompanies a group of students. and at the same time, while references are adequate, to study alone is not only possible but it is also helpful to cultivate the ability to solve problems, and furthermore enhance ones independence. moreover, by keepi

17、ng focus and developing independence, students become more and more competitive, which is often deemed as a necessary quality.when learning with a group, discussing and debating become possible, which usually develop a perfect environment to develop critical thinking skills, and where many problems

18、can even be solved unconsciously.while references are not easily accessible, and students knowledge varies from one to another, they can complement each other, and therefore save much time and energy. furthermore, learning with a group simultaneously cultivates students good sense of cooperation, wh

19、ich is usually considered as an essential virtue.as of me, my preference depends on what subject i am learning or the phase in which i am. different subjects may bring different choices. for example, if i was practicing piano, id better practice alone. if i was doing physical experiments, team work

20、is always needed. different phases also make choices different. suppose i was learning a foreign language. if i was practicing my basic pronunciation, id better learn by myself. for an adult learner, a tape recorder is fairly adequate. but if i were to practice my spoken skills, to study alone would

21、 be a poor choice. i should look for or create an opportunity to learn with a group, therefore learn more effectively.2. buy a house or a business?you have enough money to purchase either a house or a business. which would you choose to buy?give specific reasons to explain your choice.分析不要被enough所迷惑

22、了,這是一個很含混(highly ambiguous)的詞??梢圆扇t depends的策略,要看錢的數量是多少。10萬:買不了什么好房子,所以去做生意20萬:用5萬付首期(the first installment),用剩下的做生意50萬:買一棟30萬的房子,剩下的錢做生意100萬:買一棟50萬的房子,剩下的錢用來慢慢享受也可以直接選一個,然后說出理由。買房子:可以用來孝敬父母;可以讓全家享受;而且會增值;很少的風險。做生意:可以鍛煉能力;運營得好的話可以賺很多錢,能買更好的房子;但是風險很大。范文choosing whether to buy a house or a business

23、with saved money is a huge decision to make. there are many benefits to both of choices; however, i think that if i had enough money to buy one or the other, i would choose to buy a house.when one buys a business, he/she is required to spend long, hard hours to ensure that the business is a success.

24、 starting a business is no easy task, and statistics state that half of new businesses fail within the first year.if one buys a house instead of a business, there is nothing that can fail. a house sometimes requires repairs, but usually such repairs can be done on ones own schedule.a house is also a

25、n excellent investment. with the world population rising as quickly as it is, it is a very good idea to become a property owner. in the coming years, land will become more and more expensive, and therefore less attainable. also, if one buys a house, it is likely that he/she will be able to sell it at a reasonable profit in the future. providing for ones family is very important, and

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