透視五年上海高考英語(yǔ) 作文試題 （）,高考作文的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn),（內(nèi)容分，語(yǔ)言分，組織結(jié)構(gòu)分，共計(jì)分） 內(nèi)容要求： A檔 分 重點(diǎn)明確，內(nèi)容充實(shí) B檔 分 重點(diǎn)明確，內(nèi)容較充實(shí) C檔 分 重點(diǎn)明確，但內(nèi)容單薄 D檔 分 重點(diǎn)不明確，內(nèi)容松散 E 檔 分 嚴(yán)重離題,高考作文的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn), 語(yǔ)言要求： ） 語(yǔ)言表達(dá)正確，文字流暢（分） ） 語(yǔ)法，措詞等錯(cuò)誤，每處扣分，同一錯(cuò)誤不重復(fù)扣分 ） 單詞拼寫(xiě)，標(biāo)點(diǎn)，大小寫(xiě)等錯(cuò)誤，每處扣分，同一錯(cuò)誤不重復(fù)扣分 ） 每句扣分不超過(guò)分 ）語(yǔ)言分最多扣分,高考作文的評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn), 組織結(jié)構(gòu)要求： 凡內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言?xún)刹糠值梅殖^(guò)分，詞數(shù)超過(guò)個(gè)，并符合下列條件者可加分 ）凡全文的措詞，句子結(jié)構(gòu)，上下文連貫性等方面比較出色者，可酌情加分 ）凡內(nèi)容充實(shí)，語(yǔ)言正確，用詞貼切的優(yōu)秀作文，可加分 詞數(shù)要求：不足個(gè)酌情扣分，少于個(gè)，總分得分最多不超過(guò)分,記敘文的寫(xiě)作,Write an English composition about 100 to 120 words, according to the situation given in Chinese. 我最難忘的一課 具體說(shuō)明為何難忘 感想 （年上海高考題）,In my school life, I have attended many classes. But the most unforgettable lesson I have ever had is an English lesson when I was at Grade Two. It is the teachers way of teaching that I always remember. On the day, we took out our English books and waited for our English as usual. But to our surprise, she entered the classroom without the English book, but a radio and some paper instead. She gave out the paper and told us that we would learn an English song and she asked us fill in the blanks in the paper while we listened to the song. How wonderful! It was the first time that we had had such a text. We were very excited and listened to the song very carefully. What surprised us most was that we could memorize the words more quickly than ever before. I like the lesson. This new method of teaching makes it easy for us to learn English words. It can also develop our interest in English. I will never forget my lesson.,SIMILAR TOPICS,An unforgettable test An unforgettable person A happy journey Great changes on the campus/ in Shanghai/ in my neighbourhood A class meeting before graduation My favourite TV programs Growing pains,提示作文的寫(xiě)作,根據(jù)提示用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)出一段詞的短文 一些學(xué)生認(rèn)為學(xué)英語(yǔ)很重要 一些學(xué)生認(rèn)為不必學(xué)英語(yǔ) 我認(rèn)為（觀點(diǎn)，理由） （年上海高考題）,Peoples views on learning English vary from person to person. Some think in todays world we need to make frequent contacts with different people in different parts of the world, so it is absolutely necessary to learn English. Others consider English useless. They feel learning English is nothing but a burden. But I regard English as one of the most important subjects. Of all the subjects I like English best. There are several reasons why I like English best.,Firstly, English is one of the most widely used languages in the world. Nearly all information on the Internet and over half of the worlds technical materials are in English. Therefore, a good command of English will greatly benefit me in my work. Secondly, as the world becomes more and more globalized, we need to learn modern technology in order to catch up with developed countries. A solid foundation of English means chances and opportunities. In the competition for a well-paid job, the one who can speak fluent English has an advantage over those who cannot. For all these reasons we should not only learn English but master it in the shortest time possible.,SIMILAR TOPICS,Studying abroad Necessity for examinations My view on mixed-ability teaching Should a student own a mobile phone? Students doing part-time jobs? The advantages and disadvantages of private tutoring My view on school uniforms Students doing cosmetic surgery? My view on raising pets How to spend a weekend? The Teacher-student relationship Should private cars be encouraged in China?,看圖作文的寫(xiě)作,Write an English composition in over 120 words on the picture and instructions given (2002上海高考題）,Due to the one-child policy in China, most families have only one child and therefore this child is regarded as the treasure of the whole family. Both the parents and grandparents usually over-indulge the child. We can see in the picture, when a child is learning to ride bicycle, the parents and grandparents are sweating from running alongside the bike and are trying their best to protest the child; for fear that she should fall and hurt herself. We all know the greatest glory consists not in never falling, but in rising every time we fall. So I think, for the parents, they should be aware of the negative effect too much pampering has on their child. Under the parents protection, the children know only comfort and ease. If they dont learn how to live independently, how can they cope with the adversities which they will meet with in the future?,For the children, they should let their parents know that they have confidence in themselves and are able to exist in the competitive community without the constant watchful eye of an eager parent. The path to success is filled with various kinds of difficulties and obstacles. Only when we have learned to stand on our own two feet, can we survive in the 21st century.,SIMILAR TOPICS,A video game trap How to spend holidays Traffic rules are the friends of our lives 材料的來(lái)源：報(bào)紙，雜志,漫畫(huà)書(shū)上的comics,圖表作文的寫(xiě)作,根據(jù)所給圖表，簡(jiǎn)要描述某城市試題近年每百人受機(jī)用戶(hù)的增長(zhǎng)情況，并試分析其增長(zhǎng)的原因（年上海春考）,The chart above indicates that the number of mobile phones has increased in the city in recent years. Between 1995 and 1999 the number of mobile phone users increased by 10 percent each year. In 2001, the number almost doubled. It is predicated that the number will skyrocket in the years to come. The reason for the increase can be various. First a mobile phone is convenient for people especially business people. Because of its small size, light weight and portability, you neednt go to a phone booth to make a telephone call. One user says, “With a mobile phone, I can make a phone call to do business without worrying about time and space. This saves me time and trouble.,Besides, mobile phones are finding their way into ordinary families. Mobile phone lovers talk with their friends, family members whenever they like. Of course, there are some other people buying mobile phones merely to follow the fashion or show their position in society. Whatever reason it may be, I think the increase will continue into the future because they can make our life convenient and the world smaller.,SIMILAR TOPICS,1.請(qǐng)你談?wù)勣I車(chē)大量進(jìn)入家庭后，對(duì)家庭，環(huán)境，經(jīng)濟(jì)可能產(chǎn)生的影響（年高考試題） 大學(xué)入學(xué)人數(shù)三年遞增說(shuō)明的問(wèn)題及你的 感想 長(zhǎng)假期間人們不同的休閑方式及你的分析或建議,書(shū)信類(lèi)作文的寫(xiě)作,你的好友因?yàn)榧揖骋话阗I(mǎi)不起名牌而悶悶不樂(lè).給他寫(xiě)份信,談?wù)勀愕目捶ê徒ㄗh. 收信人:徐海青 寄信人:黃平 寫(xiě)信日期: 2003年6月8日 （年高考試題）,June 8,2003 Dear Xu Haiqing, You said in your letter that many of your classmates were wearing fashionable clothes, but you couldnt afford to buy the best brands. So you felt very depressed. There are different views on peoples wear. The following are my ideas about it. firstly, you shouldnt put too much emphasis on physical appearance. You must always remember the most important task for you today is to concentrate your attention on your studies. No matter what you wear, you will really look your best when you come out first in your examinations.,A famous saying goes, “Frugality is the mother of virtue.”