第第頁Unit7Adaytoremember作文素材重點信息Whenlastsummervacation,lastweekend,afewdaysago,onJuly10th,onFridaymorning,inthemorning/afternoon/evening,earlyinthemorning,onthefirstday,atnightWhereinBeijing,inthemountains,onthebeach,inthemuseum,atthezoo,inthehotel,attheairport,onthetrain,atthestation,inthepark,bythelake,inthecountryside….WhomyclassmatesandIHowbyplane/train/bus/car/taxi/bike/ship,onfootWhatvisitedthePalaceMuseum,triedlocalfood,tookphotos,wentboating,didsomeshopping,wenttotheGreatWall,wenttotheSummerPalace,wentsightseeing,wenthiking,climbedamountain,watchedashow,tastedBeijingroastduck,wentcamping,rodeahorse,hadapicnicorganizedasightseeingtour組織觀光旅游；gatheredat聚集在waitedforthebus等車；startedourjourney開始我們的旅程sawancientartifacts/beautifulpaintings/dinosaurfossils看到古代文物/美麗畫作/恐龍化石；tooknotes記筆記；hadapicnic野餐playedfrisbee玩飛盤；tookphotosofthescenery拍風景照learnedhowelectricityworks學習電的工作原理sawarobotdance看機器人跳舞lookedthroughatelescopeatthestars用望遠鏡看星星walkedaroundthefort在古堡周圍走動【描述感受句型】1.

Ifeltreallyexcited/happy/amazedwhen…當……時，我感到非常興奮/開心/驚訝。2.

Itwasareallyfunandeducationalexperience.這是一次非常有趣和有教育意義的經歷。3.

Thefoodwasabsolutelydelicious!食物太美味了！4.

Ifeltsoexcitedandconnectedwithnature.我感到非常興奮，與大自然融為一體。5.

Itwaswonderfultosee…看到……真是太棒了。6.

Weenjoyedourselvesat…我們在……玩得很開心。范文AclasstriptoBeijing引出話題Lastsummervacation,myclassmatesandIwentonawonderfultriptoBeijing.Itwasareallyfunandeducationalexperienceforallofus.敘述具體活動Wewenttherebyplane.Theweatherwashotthere.Onthefirstday,wevisitedthePalaceMuseum.(1)_______________________________(它已有約600年的歷史).Intheafternoon,wetastedBeijingroastduckinarestaurant.Itwasdeliciousandwealllovedit!(2)_______________________________(第二天，我們早早起床去長城).Itisoneofthemostpopularplacesofinterestforvisitors.Wetooksomephotosthere.Onthemorningofthethirdday,wewenttotheSummerPalace.(3)_______________________________(我們在湖上劃船，玩得很開心).Intheafternoon,wedidsomeshoppingandboughtsomegifts.Atnight,wetooktheplanebacktoourhometown.表達感受Allinall,wehadafantastictimeinBeijing.WelearnedalotaboutChinesehistoryandculture,andwehadalotoffuntogether.Wecan’twaittogobackagainsomeday!ADaytoRememberItwassunnylastSaturday.WewentonaschooltriptoRedStarFarm.Wehadsomuchfunthere.Ittookusonehourtogettherebybus.Whenwegotthere,thefarmershowedusaroundthefarmfirst.Thereweremanygoats,cows,ducksandchickensonthefarm.Thefarmertoldussomethingabouttheseanimals'livinghabits.IwasinterestedintheanimalsbecauseIlovedthem.Thenwehelpedthefarmerfeedchickensandducks.Afterthat,thefarmertaughtushowtomilkacow.Itseemedeasy,butittookussometimetogetitright.Finally,wehelpedthefarmerpicksomeeggs.Itwastiringbutinteresting.OnethingIlearnttoday:Keepinganimalsisn'teasy.Itneedslotsofwork.Itmademethinkweshouldvaluethetimeandworkhardforabetterfuture.Itwasadaytoremember.AnUnforgettableDayLastSundayourclasswentonamountain—climbingtrip.Wemetattheschoolgateat6:30inthemorning.Afteraboutanhour'sbusride,wearrivedatthefootofthemountain.Thenwebegantoclimb.Atfirst,somestudentsfeltitwasalittleboring.Butsoonwefoundsomestrangestonesalongtheway.Wehadsomuchfuntogether.Thoughittookusalongtimetoreachthetop,noneofusfelttired.Wewereallamazedatthebeautifulscenery.Intheafternoon,wehadarestandwentbacktoschool.Climbingisagreatwaytogetclosetonature.Ican’twaittodoitagain.MytriptoavillageLastSaturday,Itookatriptoavillagenearmyhomewithmyparents.Theweathertherewassunnyandwarmthatday.Ittookusaboutanhourtodrivethere.Whenwegotthere,myfatherandIflewkitesatfirst.Mymothertooksomebeautifulpictures.Afterthat,wepickedsomefreshfruitonthefarmtogether.Thenwehadlunchinasmallbutcleanrestaurant.Thefoodtherewasverydelicious.Intheafternoon,wewentfishingforanhour.Wedidn’tgohomeuntilitwasdark.ItwasgreatfuntostayinthevillageandIwashappyaboutthistrip.I’mlookingforwardtotravellingthereagain.Unit8OnceUponaTime寫作積累一、主題分析本單元的寫作情境屬于“人與社會”主題范疇中“文學、藝術與體育”這一主題群，涉及子主題“中外影視、戲劇、音樂、舞蹈、繪畫、建筑等藝術形式中的文化價值和作品賞析，優秀的藝術家及其藝術成就”。常見的寫作任務是描述某個故事，或講述一個最愛的故事。體裁多為記敘文或郵件、演講稿等應用文。素材積累開頭句①Ireadalotofstories,butTheRaceBetweentheRabbitandtheTortoiseismyfavourite.②WeallknowthestoryofMaLiang.③Onceuponatime,therewasanoldmancalledYuGong.中間句①Thereweretwohighmountainsnearhishome.②Atfirst,therabbitraninfrontofthetortoise.③Beforeheenteredthehouse,hecheckedallaround.④Intheend,totherabbit'ssurprise,thetortoisewontherace.結尾句①Weshouldtrytosolvetheproblemanddon'tgiveup.②Welearnfromthestorythatweshouldbegoodtoothers.

③Fromthestory,Ilearnthatbykeepingontryinghard,wecansucceedindoingeverything.

[諺語積累]

①Afallintothepit,againinyourwit.吃一塹，長一智。

②Nosuccessinlifemerelyhappens.人生中的成功不是純粹偶然發生的。

三、范文剖析

同學們在生活中一定讀過許多有趣的小故事,那么你最喜歡的故事是哪一個呢?請以“MyFavouriteStory”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的英語短文來和大家分享一下吧。

審題指導

1.文體：記敘文

2.人稱：以第三人稱為主

3.時態：以一般過去時為主

4.寫作要點：寫作時敘述要有條理，時間、地點和人物等要素要全，注意表達時間先后順序的連接詞的使用。優秀范文MyFavouriteStoryIreadalotofstories,butTheRaceBetweentheRabbitandtheTortoiseismyfavourite.Onceuponatime,therewasarabbit.Helaughedattheshortlegsandslowspeedofatortoise.Sothetortoisewantedtohavearacewithhim.Therabbitthoughtthetortoisecouldn'twinandheagreed.Thentheystartedtherace.Atfirst,therabbitraninfrontofthetortoise.Butsoontherabbitfelttiredandfellasleepunderatree.Thetortoiseneverstoppedandkeptrunning.Intheend,totherabbit'ssurprise,thetortoisewontherace.

Fromthestory,Ilearnthatbykeepingontryinghard,wecansucceedindoingeverything.MyFavouritestory

I’mexcitedtosharemyfavouritestorywithyou—TheLittleHorseGoesAcrosstheRiver.

Longago,thelittlehorse’smotheraskedhimtotakeaheavybagofricetothemarket.Onthe