Unit8WritingWorkshopASurveyReportPeriodIICompleteYourWritingPara.1IntroductionPara.4ConclusionPara.3NegativefindingsPara.2Positivefindingswhen,where,organizer,respondents(number,gender,age,profession,purpose,questionsasked)96%----felttheyneedveryfew4%----notnecessary;morethanhalf(51%-88%)----havedone4/5around90%triedrecyclewaste;morethantwothirds----cutbackontheuseofdisposablepackaging;themajority----cycledorwalkednotasmany----savewaterandenergy;justunder40%(38%)triedtosavewater;justoverhalf(51%)----triedtosaveenergybyreducingairconditioning/turningofflightsalmostall----understoodtheneedmostofthemtriedtocyclewaste,ride,walk,reducetheuseofdisposablepackaging;notasmanysavewaterandenergy;indicatestheresidentsneededtopaymoreattentiontowaterandenergysavingLastAugust,cityofficialsinterviewedabout500residentstofindoutpeople’sattitudestoprotectingtheenvironmentandwhatactionstheyhadtaken.Herearetheresults.Asthediagramshows,thepercentageofthosewho....isashighas....;veryfewfelt...;Morethanhalfofthosewhotookpartinthesurveyhad....;andmorethantwothirdshadtriedto,suchas...Also,themajorityofresidentshad...Unfortunately,notasmanywhotookparthad....Justunder40%triedtosavewaterwhen.....;JustoverhalftriedtoTosumup,itseemsthatalmostallwhotookpartunderstood...However,notasmanyThisindicatesthattheresidentsneededtopaymoreattentionto...Asthediagramshows,thepercentageofthosewhofeltthattheyneededtohelpprotecttheenvironmentisashighas96%.①

96%

Tosumup,itseemsthatalmostallwhotookpartunderstoodtheneedtohelptakecareoftheenvironment.⑩

Around90%(88%)hadtriedtorecyclewastesuchasglass,metalandpaper;④

88%Morethanhalfofthosewhotookpartinthesurveyhaddonefourofthefiveactivitiesinthepastmonth.③Mostofthemtriedtorecyclewaste,ridebikesorwalk,andreducetheuseofdisposablepackaging.?

Also,themajorityofresidentshadcycledorwalked.⑥74%Andmorethantwothirds(70%)hadtriedtocutbackontheuseofdisposablepackaging,suchasplastichoneybottles,andbutterandyoghurtcontainers.⑤70%Justoverhalf(51%)triedtosaveenergybyreducingtheuseofairconditioningorturningofflights.⑨51%Unfortunately,notasmanywhotookparthadtakenactiontosavewaterandenergyintheirhomes.⑦

However,notasmanyweresavingwaterandenergy.?Justunder40%(38%)triedtosavewaterwhentheywerewashingdishesortakingshowers.⑧

38%Veryfew(4%)feltitwasnotnecessary.②4%

1.優(yōu)點(diǎn)和不足各為一段；2.每段開始有總結(jié)句；3.最后一段有正反兩方面的總結(jié)。1.gettoknowthethesurveyreport’swritingprocedure;2.findaproperexpressionforeachnumber;3.practicehowtoorganizeasurveyreport;4.conpletethefirstdraftofyourwriting;5.evaluateasurveyreportaccortingtoitsstructure,quantityexpressionsandlogic.Attheendofthislesson,youwillbeableto:DiagramAnalysispurposeandquestionsPart01What’sthepurposeofthesurveyreport?Whatquestionsareasked?QuantityExpressionsPart02Findoutthenumbers&Useonesentencetodescribeeachnumber.numberdescriptionPositive/Negative96%

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numberdescriptionPositive/Negative96%Thepercentageofthosewho.....isashighas96%.P71%Themajorityof.......N70%Morethantwothirds/Themajorityof...P67%Morethantwothirds......P31%Justunderonethird(31%)/Justover30%/around30%P?/N?30%useJustunderonethird/around30%/notasmanyP?/N?30%hot

Justunderonethird/around30%/notasmanyP?/N?19%Justunder20%/aroundonefifth/notasmanyP?/N?Canwecombinesomenumberstogether?mostofthem/morethanhalfnotasmanywordbankforsharedbikesenvironmentairpollutionglobalwarmingvehiclesfossilfuellivealow-carbonlifecycletoschool/workridebikesonshortjourneyusemorepublictransport

sharedbikes/bikesharingconvenientcomfortablesaveenergyreducepollutionmakethe"last-miledistance"easyenjoythebenefitsofexercise/workoutavoid/easetrafficjamsapopularandhealthytransportationoptionmuchsaferofficialpollutionrecentlycauseparkingproblemscauseaccidentsontheroadtheftofbikessafety/safeaffectthecityimageandcausetrafficjamsDraftPart03Putthedescriptionsintherightorder&Addthebeginningandending.CheckforSpellingErrorsaccordingtoattitudebenefitconvenientenvironmentfirstgovernmentinawordinterviewlasttermliveslookatmorethantwothirdsonethirdmuchsaferofficialpollutionrecentlysafetysharedbikessuggestionsurveytakeactiontakemeasurestheirmajorconcernthoughttrafficRevisePart04Enrichyourworduse.sharedbikesusereportingverbs(表示援引觀點(diǎn)的動(dòng)詞)BrainstormingandResearch:HowDoYouExpresstheFollowingMeaningsSharedBikesUseReportingVerbs1.使用同源詞：bikesharing2.使用上義詞：transportationoption,vehicle3.使用下義詞：Mobike,Hellobike4.使用反義詞：privatecarsridetake/pickupabicyclecyclepedalrentabikerider/cyclistuser/nonusercustomermakeshortjourneyscoverthelastkilometerscantheQRCodeclaim,state,report,agree,complain,suggest,argue,note,admit,claim,recommend,reply,insiston,PeerEditingPart05Read&Answer1.Arethemainfactorsofasurveyreportclearlystatedinthefirstsentence?2.Arequantityexpressionsusedappropriately?3.Arepropergraphsusedtoreportfindings?4.Isaconclusionprovidedinthelastparagraph?5.Isasuggestionprovidedinthelastsentence?6.Isthereportlogicallyorganised?time,date,place,organizer,respondents’numberandidentity,questionsaskedandpurposeLinkingWords:unfortunately;meanwhile,therefore,tosumup...Underlinetheimpressivewords&expressions.Part06Read