---用無靈主語句突破“困境”讀后續(xù)寫微技能訓(xùn)練Micro-skillsofcontinuationwritingLearningAims

Bytheendofthisclass,youwillbeableto:1.knowandmastertheusageofInanimatesubjects.2.understandandbeawareofthedifferencesbetweenChineseandEnglishexpressions.3.beabletojudge,appreciateandcreatetheexpressionswithinanimatesubjectsinwriting.Hello!Myfriends.Welcometotheexpedition,IamthecaptainShackleton.Doyoustillrememberthestory.Let’sreviewit.Review:Completethepassagewiththecorrectformsofthewordsabandonaboardassigncrewcupboardseizedsetoffsinkturn...downvoyageAftertheadvertisementinthenewspapercaughthiseye,adetermination

PerceBlackborowtojointheAntarcticexpedition（南極探險(xiǎn)）ledbySirErnestShackleton.Unfortunately,hisapplication_________________becausehewastooyoungandnotqualifiedenough.However,hemanagedtoget_______theEndurance

（忍耐號(hào)）withhisfriend'shelp.Hehidina__________,butwassoondiscoveredandbroughttoShackleton.Althoughthecaptainwasangry,he_________theboythejobofcookingforthe

.Their/encountereddifficulties,andtheEndurancebecametrappedintheice.BeforetheEndurancewascrushedand

intothesea,anorderto

shipwasissuedbyShackleton,andthecrewhadtocamponice.TheythensailedtoElephantIsland.Soonafterthat,aboatpartyselectedbyShackleton_________forSouthGeorgiaIslandtogethelp.seizedwasturneddownaboardcupboardassignedcrewvoyagesankabandonsetoff

Appreciate&Find1.Aftertheadvertisementinthenewspapercaughthiseye,adeterminationseizedPerceBlackborowtojointheAntarcticexpeditionledbySirErnestShackleton,undeterredbyanypotentialchallenges.2.Theirvoyageencountereddifficulties,andtheEndurancebecametrappedintheice.3.Soonafterthat,aboatpartyselectedbyShackletonsetoffforSouthGeorgiaIslandtogethelp.lifelessnounsanimateverbs無靈主語inanimatesubject

無靈主語句，是指用無生命的事物做主語，用人或社會(huì)團(tuán)體的行為或動(dòng)作做謂語，因此這類句子常帶有擬人化的修辭色彩。GuessingGame2.Everyminutecounts.3.Actionspeakslouderthanwords.4.

Fortuneknocksonceatleastateveryman'sdoor.

5.

Time

healsallwounds.

6.

Money

makesthemarego.

1.Constantdropping

wearsastone.水滴石穿。分秒必爭(zhēng)。行動(dòng)勝于雄辯。人人都有好運(yùn)的一天。時(shí)間能治愈一切創(chuàng)傷。有錢能使鬼推磨。MycrewarecampingonElephantIslandnow,andIhavetoleftthemtofindhelponSouthGeorgiaIsland.Theyarefacingextremelychallengingcircumstancesandmentalchallenges.Mission1Changethefollowingadjectivesintonounsandusethemasthesubject.Enter請(qǐng)?jiān)诖溯斎霕?biāo)題Changethefollowingadjectivesintonounsandusethemasthesubject.anxietypanicdespairhopelessnesshorrorhappinessguiltworryangerdepressionstresssadnessGap-filling當(dāng)船駛離時(shí)，擔(dān)憂籠罩了每一個(gè)人并使他們雙腿發(fā)軟。1.Whentheboatsailedaway,

coveredeveryoneandmadetheirlegsweak.worry/anxiety

Gap-filling他們虛弱的身體突然感覺更有力量了，在進(jìn)食的時(shí)候幸福傳遍全身，希望填滿了他們的內(nèi)心。2.Theirweakbodiessuddenlyfeltstronger,

spreadingthroughthemastheyenjoyedthemeal，and

（用無靈主語句）.happinesshopefilledtheirheartsGap-filling當(dāng)象島上的船員們看到沙克爾頓船長的船時(shí)，感激之情在他們心中涌起，驅(qū)散了數(shù)月以來的孤獨(dú)與絕望。3.

welledupin（涌入）thecrewonElephantIslandastheysawCaptainShackleton’sship,chasedawaymonthsoflonelinessanddespairGratitude/AppreciationCategory1：

情感狀態(tài)名詞作主語+謂語（突出人物心理描寫）

Summary1：主語是情感狀態(tài)類名詞，如

常見的謂語：happiness/joy/delight;excitement；gratitude,appreciation；fear,terror,fright,panic；puzzlement；satisfaction；eagerness；admiration；

；nervousness,anxiety；disappointment;depression；despair等。

wellupinsb（涌入);gripsb(緊抓),overwhelmsb，strikesb,hitsb,catchsb,surroundsb,comeoversb(支配，影響),creepoversb（不知不覺地產(chǎn)生）,sweepoversb,,takepossessionofsb等。Mission2Choosethecorrectanimateverbtofilleachmissingpart.EnterChooseanimateverbs(有靈謂語）withtheirproperforms.

slipbreakrevealswallowdriveThe

minutes

____________

by

quickly.時(shí)間一分一分地溜走了。The

bitter

weather

had

_________

everyone

indoors.由于天氣寒冷，大家都躲進(jìn)了室內(nèi)。ThecoldAntarcticnighthad

thehopesofthecrew.南極寒冷的黑夜吞噬了船員們的希望。4.Dawnfinally

,itspalelight

howserioustheirtroublewas.黎明終于破曉，那微弱的光線揭示了他們所處困境的嚴(yán)重程度。slippeddrivenbrokeswallowedrevealedCategory2：時(shí)間/地點(diǎn)/場(chǎng)景類名詞+謂語（烘托主題場(chǎng)景描寫）

Summary2：

主語是表示時(shí)間/地點(diǎn)/場(chǎng)景類名詞，如

___________________________________等常見的謂語：dusk黃昏；dawn黎明；night；cold；silenceswallow；drive；reveal；break；slip...Mission3Rewritethefollowingsentenceswithinanimatesubjects.EnterRewritethefollowingsentenceswithinanimatesubjects.1.Thecrewwasfilledwithdespairwhentheysawthedesertedisland.3.Whentheythoughtofgoinghome,theyhadthestrengthtoaccomplishthemission.2.ThecrewonElephantIslanddecidedtocatchseals（海豹）forfood,andthischangedtheirlives.Thesight

ofthedesertedislandfilledthemwithdespair.Thethoughtofgoinghomegavethemthestrengthtoaccomplishthemission.

ThedecisionofthecrewonElephantIslandtocatchsealsforfoodchangedtheirlives.Category3：行為動(dòng)作的名詞作主語+謂語（推動(dòng)情節(jié)發(fā)展）

Summary3：主語是行為動(dòng)作類名詞，如

常見的謂語：sight看到；thought想法,glance一瞥,look看到,idea想法,feeling感受,walk走路等。signal；shatter摧毀；overwhelm壓倒；strike打擊侵襲；arouse喚起；remind想起；fill...with充滿...；change改變；bring帶來等。戰(zhàn)戰(zhàn)挑挑

CHALLENGE1.Findoutinanimatesubjectsentencestructuresinthepassage.Lifefellintoaregularpattern.Stayingalivetookallourtimeandenergy.ElephantIslandofferednowater,forcingustofindotherwaystosurvive.Wefoundthatwecouldmelticefromtheoceananddrinkthewaterfromit.Buthowcouldwemakefire?TherewerenotreesgrowingonAntarcticaandnooil,sotheonlyfuelwecouldusewasanimalfat.Thisgaveoffoily,blacksmoke,butitstayedburningeveninstrongwinds.Fearofillnessfromchangingtemperatureskeptusinsidemostofthetime.Thesweatcouldfreezeveryquickly.Thesmokyairfromburninganimalfatattackedourbodies,makingussick.2.Completethesesentences.狂風(fēng)似乎都卷走了他們僅存希望的一小部分，只留下疑慮。(leavebehind留下)

_____

(無靈主語)seemedto

(有靈動(dòng)詞）asliceoftheirremaininghope,

(有靈動(dòng)詞）onlydoubt.2.由于沒有淡水供應(yīng)，他們不得不融化從冰凍海面上采集來的冰塊，這一過程十分累人，考驗(yàn)著他們的耐心與忍耐力。Withoutaccesstofreshwater,theywereforcedtomelticeharvestedfromthefrozensea,

(無靈主語)that

(有靈動(dòng)語)theirpatienceandendurance.carryawayatiringprocessleavingbehindtestedWildwinds3.刺骨的寒冷吞噬了他們，使他們舉步維艱。

(無靈主語)

(有靈動(dòng)詞）them,makingithardforthemtomoveforward.ThefreezingcoldAndthen,justwhen

(無靈主語)

(有靈動(dòng)詞）them，

hopeappearedonthehorizon.swallowed4.就在他們感到絕望之際，地平線上出現(xiàn)了希望的曙光。

despairseized2.用無靈主語句補(bǔ)充完整下列句子。Category1：

情感狀態(tài)名詞作主語+謂語（突出人物心理描寫）

Summary1：主語是情感狀態(tài)類名詞，如

常見的謂語：happiness/joy/delight;gratitude,appreciation；fear,terror,fright,panic；puzzlement；satisfaction；eagerness；admiration；

；nervousness,anxiety；disappointment;depression；despair等。

gripsb(緊抓)；wellupinsb（涌入);overwhelmsb，strikesb,hitsb,catchsb,surroundsb,comeoversb(支配，影響),creepoversb（不知不覺地產(chǎn)生）,sweepoversb,,takepossessionofsb等。Category2：Summary2：

主語是表示時(shí)間/地點(diǎn)/場(chǎng)景類名詞，如

常見的謂語：dusk黃昏；dawn黎明；night；cold；silenceswallow；reveal；break；drive；slip...時(shí)間/地點(diǎn)/場(chǎng)景類名詞+謂語（烘