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專題06建議信建議信通常是寫給家人或朋友,對于對方在生活、工作、求學等過程中遇到的實際問題或困惑提供看法、指導或給予對方所需要的建議,或對于對方不明智的舉動進行勸勉、告誡或展開討論。建議信的寫作目的是提出建議或忠告,不是投訴信。觀點要合情合理,注意禮貌當先?!?024北京卷】假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你的外國好友Jim準備給其校報的AsiaToday欄目投稿。得知今年新中國成立75周年,他打算重點介紹中國的發展成就,發來郵件詢問你的建議。請你用英文給他回復,內容包括:(1)建議投稿內容;(2)就以上建議簡要說明理由。注意:(1)詞數100左右;(2)開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。DearJim,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJim,It’sgreattohearyou’replanningtowriteaboutChina’sachievementsontheoccasionofthe75thanniversaryofthefoundingofthiscountry.Hereareafewsuggestionsforyourarticle.Tobeginwith,talkaboutChina’seconomicgrowthandtechnologicaladvancements,whicharethehighlightsinthepastfewdecades.Then,projectsliketheBeltandRoadInitiativemakeagoodtopictodiscussbecauseitshowcasesChina’sdeterminationtobuildasharedfuturewiththeworld.Inaddition,youcanalsomentionChina’sroleinhelpingsolvingglobalissuessuchastheglobalwarming,offeringamorecomprehensiveview.Lookingforwardtoreadingyourarticle!Yours,LiHua【思路點撥】

①首段:a.介紹自己,不要羅嗦;b.說明目的,注意語氣。②主體:a.提出具體建議;b.首先肯定優點,再寫改進內容,否則會變成投訴信;c.經常進行交流,注意對方感受,時時提到你和我,否則容易跑題寫成議論文。③尾段:總結建議,注意禮貌,使對方易于接受。3.寫作流程圖說明寫信目的介紹詳情、說明原因提出建議希望采納、盼望回復【寫作模板】模板①Dear________,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto________________,andIwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestionshere.Inmyopinion,youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:________________(建議的內容).Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyour________________(祝愿).YoursSincerely,LiHua模板②Dear_______,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto_________________(引出對方需要建議的主題).Hereareafewsuggestion(引出作者的建議).First,Itisimportantto______________.Then,italsohelpsto___________.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato__________.Youcanalso___________.(可以根據要求用不同的句式提出建議,如下)Asto__________,Isuggest_____________(需要具體到某一方面).Inaddition,_________(其他的建議).I’msure______________(預測可能的結果,給對方以行為的信心和決心).Ihope____________(表達愿望)?!颈貍湓~匯】1.gve/offer

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sth.seriously 重視;認真對待【萬能句式】第一部分:說明寫信的目的套語:1.I'msorrytohearthatyouarehavingtroublefittinginyournewschool.Suchproblemsarequitenormal.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpful.很遺憾聽說你在適應新學校方面有困難。這樣的問題是很正常的。可能下面的建議會有一些幫助。2.IhavereceivedyourlettersayingyouplantoplayavisittoChinafortendaysnextmonth.

Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpfultoyou.我已經收到了你的來信。信上說你打算下個月來參觀中國十天??赡芟旅娴慕ㄗh對你是有幫助的。3.I'mwritingtoyoutopresentwhatIthinkonthefurtherimprovementofourhotelsoastoattractmoreclients(顧客).我給你寫信是想說明一下我對于進一步改善我們旅館的一些想法,以吸引更多顧客。4.

YouhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardtohowtolearnChinese,andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestionshere.你關于如何學習漢語詢問我的建議,那么我就在這里給出一些建議。5.I'mverygladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtofitinthenewschoollife.Hereareafewsuggestions.很高興收到你的來信,信上詢問我關于如何適應新的學校生活。下面是我的一些建議。6.I'mverygladtohavereceivedyoure-mail.NowI'mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowtolearnEnglishwellinhighschool.很高興收到你的電子郵件?,F在,關于如何在高中學好英語,我寫信給你一些建議。第二部分:介紹詳情、說明原因套語:(1)它將于下午兩點鐘開始,四點鐘結束,在此期間將會有十五位準備充分的參賽者發表演講。Itwillbeginat2:00pmandlasttwohours,duringwhichtime15well-preparedcontestantswilldelivertheirspeeches.(2)我們將會在上午八點出發,九點到達那里。Wewillstartat8:00amandarrivethereat9:00.(3)下午,我們會一起……Duringtheafternoon,we’ll...together.(4)記得帶上水和午餐。Remembertotakewaterandlunchwithyou.(5)順便說一下,你可以乘坐322路公交車,它會直接把你帶到俱樂部。Bytheway,youmaytakeBusNo.322anditwilltakeyoudirectlytotheclub.(6)我知道你的母語是英語,還是一名英語老師。我代表我們學校真誠地邀請你來比賽現場。IknowyouareanativespeakerofEnglishandanEnglishteacher,andI,onbehalfofourschool,sincerelyinviteyoutobepartofthecontest.(7)既然你如此渴望提高英語,這會是一個很好的機會。SinceyouaresoeagertoimproveyourEnglish,itwillprovetobeagreatchance.(8)我保證你在那里會過得很愉快。I’msurethatyouwillenjoyyourselfthere.第三部分:提出建議套語:我建議……I’dliketosuggestthat…MayIsuggestthat…?Inmyopinion…Iwouldliketomakearecommendationthat…Iamwritingtoadvise…IfIwereyou,Iwould…第四部分:希望采納建議,并表示謝意,盼望回復套語:1.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Remember:wherethereisawill,thereisaway(有志者事竟成).我希望這些建議會對你有用。記?。河兄菊呤戮钩?。2.Ihopethesesuggestionswillbeofusetoyou.Remember:

Themanwhohasmadeuphismindtowinwillneversay“impossible”(一個決心要成功的人從來不說“不可能”).我希望這些建議會對你有用。記住:一個決心要成功的人從來不說“不可能”。3.Bestwishes!(給你)最美好的祝愿!4.

Ihopethatmysuggestionsarehelpfulforyouanyway.

Iwouldbemorethanhappytoseeimprovement.無論如何,我希望這些建議對你有所幫助。我會非常高興看到情況改善。5.

Ibelievethatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoseriousaccount.

Whateveryoudecidetodo,goodluckwithyourstudies/work!我相信你會認真考慮我的建議。無論你決定做什么,祝你學習/工作好運。6.Isincerelyhopemyadvicewillbesomehelpforyou.IfthereismoreIcandotohelp,pleaseletmeknow.我真誠的希望我的建議對你有一些幫助。如果有更多我可以幫忙的,請告訴我。(2024·河南鄭州·模擬預測)假設你是鄭州外國語學校高三學生李華,臨近畢業,你們班的英語老師請每位同學給新高一學弟學妹寫封英文郵件,郵件內容包括:1.你的建議;2.你的祝愿。注意:1.詞數80左右;2.開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。Dearfellowstudents,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】Dearfellowstudents,Congratulationsonbecomingapartofourwonderfulschoolcommunity.AttherequestofourEnglishteacher,I’mreachingouttoofferyousomeadviceonnavigatingyourtimehere.First,treasureeverymomentspentwithyourteachersandclassmates.Yourtimeherewillpassquickly,soseizetheopportunitytoforgemeaningfulandlastingconnections.Secondly,letgoofyourpastachievementsorfailures.Instead,focusonthetasksathand.Itisthededicationandeffortyouinvestnowthatwillshapeyourfuture.Finally,explorewhattrulysparksyourpassion.TakeEnglishlearningforinstance.Whetherit’swatchingmoviesorreadingnovels,trytofindwhatgenuinelymotivatesyou.Wishingyouallafulfillingandrewardingjourneyaheadfilledwithjoy,growth,andsuccess.Yours,LiHuaWriting1(24-25高三上·重慶沙坪壩·開學考試)假設你是李華,你的英國好友Jack所在的學校計劃組織學生來重慶旅行,請你給他寫一封建議信。內容包括:(1)表示歡迎;(2)推薦景點(至少兩個);(3)注意事項。注意:(1)寫作詞數應為80左右;(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。DearJack,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJack,I’mthrilledtohearthatyourschoolisplanningatriptoChongqing!Iwholeheartedlywelcomeyoutomyhometown,whichisknownforitsuniqueculture,deliciousfood,andbreathtakinglandscapes.Isuggestedvisitingtwomust-seespots:HongyaCaveandCiqikouAncientTown.HongyaCaveoffersstunningviewsofthecity’sskylineandriver,especiallyatnightwhenit’sbeautifullylitup.CiqikouAncientTownprovidesaglimpseintoChongqing’srichhistoryandtraditionalculture,withitscharmingoldstreetsandlocalcrafts.What’smore,pleasenotethatChongqing’ssummercanbeveryhotandhumid.Makesuretostayhydrated,wearsunscreen,andcarryanumbrellaforbothsunandsuddenrain.Wishyouanamazingjourneyfilledwithwonderfulmemories.Enjoyyourtripandfeelfreetoreachoutifyouneedanymoreadviceorassistance.Yours,LiHua【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給英國好友Jack寫一封建議信,因為他所在的學校計劃組織學生來重慶旅行。【詳解】1.詞匯積累激動的:thrilled→excited建議:suggest→recommend充滿:befilledwith→befullof極好的:amazing→marvelous2.句式拓展同義句轉換原句:What’smore,pleasenotethatChongqing’ssummercanbeveryhotandhumid.Makesuretostayhydrated,wearsunscreen,andcarryanumbrellaforbothsunandsuddenrain.拓展句:SinceChongqing’ssummercanbeveryhotandhumid,makesuretostayhydrated,wearsunscreen,andcarryanumbrellaforbothsunandsuddenrain.【點睛】[高分句型1]I’mthrilledtohearthatyourschoolisplanningatriptoChongqing!(運用了that引導賓語從句)[高分句型2]Iwholeheartedlywelcomeyoutomyhometown,whichisknownforitsuniqueculture,deliciousfood,andbreathtakinglandscapes.(運用了which引導非限制性定語從句)Writing2(24-25高三上·山東濱州·開學考試)假定你是李華,你剛剛得知你的美國筆友Jim打算雇一個同學幫他完成期末論文。請你給他寫封信,指出他的錯誤并提出建議。注意:(1)寫作詞數應為80左右;(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。DearJim,Ihopeyou’redoingwell._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJim,Ihopeyou’redoingwell.Iheardthatyouareplanningtohireaclassmatetohelpyouwithyourfinaltermpaper,butIamafraidthat’simproper.Firstly,itgoesagainstacademicintegrity,whichcouldleadtoseriousconsequences.Secondly,itmaynothelpyoutrulyunderstandthesubjectanddevelopyourownskills.Asanalternativesolution,Isuggestseekinghelpactively.Youcanapproachyourteacherforguidance,consulrelevantbooksandresources,orevenjoinastudygrouptodiscussideasandimproveyourwritingskills.Onlyinthiswaycanyounotonlylearnthematerialbetter,butalsoenhanceyourabilitiesforfutureassignments.I’mconfidentthatyoucanfinishthispaperonyourownandmakehugeprogress!Yours,LiHua【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給美國筆友Jim寫封信,他打算雇一個同學幫他完成期末論文,要求信中指出他的錯誤并提出建議?!驹斀狻?.詞匯積累打算:planto→intendto不合適:improper→inappropriate導致:leadto→contributeto建議:suggest→recommend2.句式拓展同義句轉換原句:Firstly,itgoesagainstacademicintegrity,whichcouldleadtoseriousconsequences.拓展句:Firstly,itgoesagainstacademicintegritysothatitcouldleadtoseriousconsequences.【點睛】[高分句型1]Iheardthatyouareplanningtohireaclassmatetohelpyouwithyourfinaltermpaper,butIamafraidthat’simproper.(運用了that引導賓語從句)[高分句型2]Firstly,itgoesagainstacademicintegrity,whichcouldleadtoseriousconsequences.(運用了which引導非限制性定語從句)Writing3(24-25高三上·江蘇南京·開學考試)假定你是李華,最近收到好友Ben來信,信中說他因為使用人工智能完成翻譯作業而受到老師批評,請你寫一封回信,內容包括:你的寬慰;對使用人工智能完成作業的看法;3.你的建議。注意:1.寫作詞數應為80左右;2.請按如下格式在相應位置作答。DearBen,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearBen,I’msorrytolearnaboutyourcurrenttroubleregardingtheuseofAItoolsforyourassignment.IcanfullyrelatetoyoursituationasIoncefacedsimilartemptationstomanageheavyacademicworkloads.However,AIshouldneverreplaceourownintellectualefforts.Asascientistoncesaid,“Ourintelligenceiswhatmakesushuman,andAIisanextensionofthatquality.”WhileAIcanassistincertainareas,overrelianceonitunderminestheessenceoflearningandcompromiseacademicintegrity.Therefore,IsuggestyouimproveyourworkwithoutsolelydependingonAItoolsandhaveanopenconversationwithyourteacher,clarifyingyourintentionsanddemonstratingyourcommitmenttogenuinelearning.Learningisnotjustaboutcompletingtasksbutalsoabouttheprocessofacquiringknowledge.Wishyouallthebest.Yours,LiHua【導語】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生給因為使用人工智能完成作業而受到老師批評的好友Ben寫一封回信,表達你的寬慰、闡述對使用人工智能完成作業的看法并提出建議?!驹斀狻?.詞匯積累理解:relateto→understand代替;取代:replace→taketheplaceof因此:therefore→thus建議:suggest→advise2.句式拓展同義句轉換原句:However,AIshouldneverreplaceourownintellectualefforts.拓展句:However,itisourownintellectualeffortsthatAIshouldneverreplace.【點睛】【高分句型1】IcanfullyrelatetoyoursituationasIoncefacedsimilartemptationstomanageheavyacademicworkloads.(運用了as引導的原因狀語從句)【高分句型2】WhileAIcanassistincertainareas,overrelianceonitunderminestheessenceoflearningandcompromiseacademicintegrity.(運用了while引導的讓步狀語從句)Writing4(24-25高三上·福建廈門·開學考試)假定你是李華,在美國某博物館參觀時,發現博物館對一些中國文物(artifacts)的英文介紹有誤。請你就此向博物館寫一封信,內容包括:投訴問題并舉例說明;2.提出建議。注意:1.詞數80左右;2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。DearSirorMadam,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearSirorMadam,IamwritingtoexpressmyconcernregardingtheinaccuraciesfoundintheEnglishdescriptionsofsomeChineseartifactsatyourmuseum.Duringmyvisit,InoticedthattheexplanationforaTangDynastyvasewasnotonlymisleadingbutalsohistoricallyincorrect.Ikindlysuggestthatyourmuseumreviewandcorrectthesedescriptionstoensuretheyaccuratelyreflecttheculturalheritagetheyrepresent.ItwouldalsobebeneficialtocollaboratewithChineseculturalexpertsorinstitutionstoguaranteeauthenticityandrespectfortheartifacts.Thankyouforyourattentiontothismatter.Yourssincerely,LiHua【導語】本文是一篇應用文。這是一封寫給博物館的建議信,反映了博物館對中國文物英文介紹有誤的問題,并提出建議?!驹斀狻吭~匯積累表達:express→convey不準確:inaccuracies→imprecisions建議:suggest→propose合作:collaborate→cooperate句式拓展同義句改寫原句:IamwritingtoexpressmyconcernregardingtheinaccuraciesfoundintheEnglishdescriptionsofsomeChineseartifactsatyourmuseum.拓展句:IamwritingtoexpressmyconcernregardingtheinaccuracieswhichwerefoundintheEnglishdescriptionsofsomeChineseartifactsatyourmuseum.【點睛】【高分句型1】Duringmyvisit,InoticedthattheexplanationforaTangDynastyvasewasnotonlymisleadingbutalsohistoricallyincorrect.(使用了連接代詞that連接的賓語從句)【高分句型2】Ikindlysuggestthatyourmuseumreviewandcorrectthesedescriptionstoensuretheyaccuratelyreflecttheculturalheritagetheyrepresent.(使用了動詞不定式做目的狀語)Writing1【2023年北京卷】假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。你的英國好友Jim正在策劃一次以“綠色北京”為主題的社團活動,他發來郵件詢問你的建議。請你用英文給他回復,內容包括:(1)活動形式;(2)活動內容。注意:(1)詞數100左右;(2)開頭和結尾已給出,不計入總詞數。DearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJimHearingthatyouareplanningaclubactivitywiththethemeof“GreenBeijing”andneedmyhelp,Iamwritingtoofferyoumysuggestions.Ithinkyoucancarryoutthisactivityinaninteractiveandexperientialmanner,whichmeansstudentscanparticipateandhaveabetterunderstandingof“GreenBeijing”throughgettinginvolvedindifferentactivitiesbythemselves.Youcanshowcasegarbageclassificationonsite,planttreesandpublicizesharingeconomy,whichwillallfitintothethemeof“GreenBeijing”.Hopefully,youwillgetsomeinspirationfrommysuggestions.Wishyousuccess.Yours,LiHuaWriting2【2023?新高考I&II卷】假定你是李華,外教Ryan準備將學生隨機分為兩人一組,讓大家課后練習口語,你認為這樣分組存在問題。請你給外教寫一封郵件,內容包括;1.說明問題;2.提出建議注意:1.寫作詞數應為80個左右:2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。DearRyan,I’mLiHuafromClass3.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearRyan, I’mLiHuafromClass3.Ithinkit’snotagoodideatorandomlypairupstudentsforthespokenEnglishtrainingafterclass.Thereasonsareasfollows.Tobeginwith,randomlypairingupstudentsmayleadtounbalancedlanguageabilitieswithinthegroups.Thiscanhindertheprogressofstudentsasthemoreadvancedonemaydominatetheconversation,leavinglittleroomfortheotherstudentstoimprove.Besides,studentsmayfeeluncomfortableorlessmotivatedifpairedwithsomeonewhotheydon’tgetalongwithorhavedifficultycommunicatingwith.Mysuggestionistogroupstudentsbasedontheirlanguageabilitiesortoletstudentschoosetheirownpartners.Thisway,everyonecanfeelmorecomfortablepracticingandimprovingtheirspokenEnglishtogether.

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